Rhetorical Analysis Essay
Rhetorical Analysis Essay
Jamal Robinson
Mr. Yerkes
English 9
In 2014, the Nobel peace prize was awarded to Malala Yousafzai for speaking
out against taliban and fighting for equality. After receiving the award, she gave a
speech not only to accept the prize but to also convince the audience to support her on
having more schools and less wars. She gets her points through by connecting with the
audience, explaining things from a historical sense, and having the audience feel
In the first section of the speech, Malala’s goal was to get the audience to
connect with her, giving her a reason to be listened to. One way she did this was by
relating to the audience by telling them about her siblings. When she was stating all of
the different
ways she had been described as in that point in time, her last one was an annoying
bossy sister. This showed that even a nobel peace winner who survived getting shot at
by the taliban and still fought for rights was just like many other people who were just
bossy older siblings. Another way she had tried to connect with the audience was to talk
about her education. She was just like many others who had a decent learning
experience and a normal school with other kids who wore uniforms and were excited to
read and write. She then used this connection to explain how many schools were
The middle of Malala’s speech was where she convinced the audience by getting
the audience to sympathise with her and many other girls who were being affected by
the small amount of schools and large amount of terrorism. Between the 32nd and 38th
paragraph she had said that though she is just one person, she is representing 66
million girls including her sisters who were getting threatened, kidnapped, and even
killed just for wanting to go to school. To give the audience a better understanding, she
also talked about a very close friend of hers. This friend had dreamed to be a doctor but
couldn't because at the age of 12 she was forced to get married and at 14 she had a
baby. Her main point was the reason her friend couldn't become a doctor and fulfill her
history. In paragraph 54 Malala talked about how 15 years prior, the world leaders set
global goals and halved the amount of kids out of schools. She then noted that their
focus was only on primary education which is why they did not reach everyone. In
paragraph 60 she used the moon landing as an example. She said “We live in the
modern age and we believe nothing is impossible. We have reached the moon 45 years
ago and maybe will soon land on mars. Then, in this 21st century, we must be able to
In conclusion, Malala very well deserved her noble peace award and had not just
thanked the audience, but convinced them to help her go further. She did that by having
should all support her in putting an end to inequality and putting in more schools!