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"Derek's Plan": By:David García

Matt becomes obsessed with trying to prevent a school shooting being planned by a boy named Derek. After failing to find Derek to stop his plans, Matt has a mental breakdown and decides to carry out the shooting himself. The story ends with Matt being committed to a mental hospital as he is diagnosed with schizophrenia.

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"Derek's Plan": By:David García

Matt becomes obsessed with trying to prevent a school shooting being planned by a boy named Derek. After failing to find Derek to stop his plans, Matt has a mental breakdown and decides to carry out the shooting himself. The story ends with Matt being committed to a mental hospital as he is diagnosed with schizophrenia.

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“Derek’s Plan”

By:DAVID GARCÍA

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1. Int/Day/Matt’s House/Bedroom
Matt is getting ready for school, he is dressing up for school,
preparing all the things he is needed for his classes.

Mother (from the kitchen): honey! Breakfast is ready.

Matt: COMING!!!!

2. Int/Day/Matt’s House/kitchen

Matt and his family are eating Breakfast together before going
to school.
Mother: how did you sleep last night?
Matt:great mom!
Sister:well
Mother: look, here is your lunch, grab it, and go, we're getting
late.

3.Int/Day/school/Hall

Matt is walking to his classroom elusive, remembering the time


he tried to read his sister’s mind. The shot focus on the face
of Matt.

4.Int/Day/Matt’s room

Matt is talking with her sister, she is being an asshole,


looking Matt with a bad face.
Matt: What happened?

Sister:Nothing…

Matt: tell me!

Sister: you are too young to understand.

Matt: please, tell me, maybe I can help.

Sister: Nooo, you don’t, I don’t want to talk about it.

Matt is trying reading her mind. The scene finished with a close
up to his sister’s head.

5.INT/Night/Dark place/Matt’s sisters head


there are a lot of abstract ideas he can’t understand, he is
scared, he saw a face that he didn’t know about her sister,
screams and weird sounds embrace all the room.

6.INT/Day/School/Classroom

Matt is thoughtful in class, not paying attention, thinking


about any thing, People in the surrounding screaming and
playing, the teacher trying to do class. The bell rang, Matt
took his backpack, and went outside the classroom, his life look
like a constant.

7.INT/Day/school/hall

He was walking to his locker, open it, to some books put them in
the backpack, and leave.

8.INT/Day/School/Classroom

Matt is thoughtful in class, not paying attention, thinking


about any thing, People in the surrounding screaming and
playing, the teacher trying to do class. The bell rang, Matt
took his backpack, and went outside the classroom, his life look
like a constant.

9.INT/Day/school/hall

He was walking to his locker, open it, to some books put them in
the backpack, and leave.

10.INT/Day/School/Classroom

Matt is thoughtful in class, not paying attention, thinking


about any thing, People in the surrounding screaming and
playing, the teacher trying to do class. The bell rang, Matt
took his backpack, and went outside the classroom, his life look
like a constant.

11.INT/Day/school/hall

He was walking to his locker, open it, to some books put them in
the backpack, and leave.

12.INT/Day/school/Hall

Matt was walking through the hall, and he felt a really weird
vibe, he look to the side and found a weird guy that he had
never seen before, he felt very weird, something inside him
changed, he knew something happened to him. He thought if it was
a good idea to ask him what happened to him, he got near him and
asked.

Matt: Hello, What’s your name?

Guy: Derek

Matt: everything okay?

Derek: not your problem bro

He stormed out and runaway.Matt was really confused and try to


stop him, but it was a failed attempt.

13.Int/Night/Matt’s house/Matt’s room

Matt was laid in bed, thinking of what happened today, he felt


weird, he knew something bad was happening, he consider using
his power, but rapidly change hs mind, he was to scared to use
them.

14.Int/day/school/hall

The next day(Wednesday) Matt saw the guy again, he rapidly run
to him.

Matt: Hey, man

Derek: okay, goodbye

Matt: don’t go, please, I only want to talk with you

Matt: I know something is wrong, you can tell me what it is

Derek:I need to go now…

Matt:no wait

15. Ext/day/school

Matt saw Derek again, he tried to approach him, but he notice


and run away.

16. Ext/day/school
Matt was trying to find Derek through all the school, he asked
people if they have seen it, and they responded that they didn’t
know who Derek was.

17.Int/Night/Matt’s Room

Matt what thoughtful about the vibe he was feeling, he couldn’t


understand what was happening, but he knew something was wrong,
but he couldn’t find what it was.

18.Int/Day/school

Matt, past the entire day trying to find Derek an he found it in


the bathroom.

Matt: Man, why are you here?

Derek: YOU DON’T CARE, GO AWAY

Matt didn’t resist, he read his mind, a close up to Dereks head.

19.Int/Day/derek’s head

Matt was inside Derek’s head, he was stunned, he saw clearly a


room full of graphics of the school, guns, pictures etc, and a
corner full of guns and ammo, Derek was planning an school
shooting, in the board in front of him a date was written
“Friday”.
20.Int/Day/school

Matt and Derek in the bathroom

Matt:now I know, so a school shooting

Derek: if you say something I would kill everyone of your


family,I know were you live, is that simple, you shut up.

Matt, past the entire day trying to find Derek an he found it in


the bathroom.

21.Int/Day/school/Hall

Matt was pretty nervous, he looked disgusting, he didn’t sleep,


and he was very stressed, he looked like a monster, we walked
through all the school asking for Derek, to convince him to not
do the school shooting, nevertheless anyone knew Derek. He asked
different groups of people in the hall.

Matt: Have You see Derek?

Group 1: No man, how’s that?

Matt:Hey guys have you seen Derek?


Group 2: he’s not in this school man, you look like a crazy man

22.Int/Day/school/bathroom

Matt was in the bathroom, looking into the mirror, he barely


recognize himself, he was like a monster, he hadn’t sleep, his
hair was a mess, and we couldn’t stop thinking about the school
shooting. He put some water on his face, and kept looking.

23. Int/Day/school

Matt kept looking, and he was very stressed, he was a total


monster, he didn’t hear anybody, he had a goal, but he couldn’t
find him, he grab his backpack and leave school.

24.Int/night/Matt’s home/Kitchen

Matt was eating like an animal, he looked metal, he didn’t talk


to anybody, he was thinking about the school shooting that was
going to happen the next day, and he couldn’t stop him. He tried
to read Derek’s mind to see where he was, but he only saw black.

25. Int/night/Matt’s home/Room

He was unable to sleep, he was felling sick and crazy, he had


completely lost it. He thought he couldn’t go to school for the
school shooting, it was too much for him, he felt responsable.

26.Int/day/Matt’s home/ room

Matt stand up of his bed, his mother was entering to the room

Matt: Im not feeling well, may I skip school today

Mother: okay, but you need to catch up.


Mother: im leaving now, take care.
Mother leave his room, and he was alone, he change his t-shirt,
grab a backpack, fill it up with guns and ammo, and head to
school.

27.Int/Day/Mental Hospital/Room

Matt was at the stretcher tied up and with an straightjacket, in


front of him was his crying mother and a doctor

Doctor: He is schizophrenic, he invented a guy and blame him for


the idea of the school shooting, but all along it was his idea,
he has to be intern here until new advice.

Mother (crying): MY BOYYY!!!!

END

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