Language and Literature Assessment
Language and Literature Assessment
Language and Literature Assessment
Upper Secondary
Teacher Guide
ISBN 978-9980-9923-5-2
Acknowledgements
The Upper Secondary Language and Literature Teacher Guide was written,
edited and formatted by the Curriculum Development Division of the
Department of Education. The development of the teacher guide was
coordinated by Tracy Wilson.
Writers from schools, tertiary institutions and non-government organisations
across the country have contributed to the writing of this teacher guide
through specialist writing workshops and consultations. Quality assurance
groups and the English Subject Advisory Committee have also contributed to
the development of this teacher guide.
This document was developed with the support of the Australian
Government through the Education Capacity Building Program.
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Contents
Secretary’s message ...................................................................... iv
Introduction......................................................................................1
The outcomes approach ..................................................................2
Learning and teaching .....................................................................5
Language and Literature requirements ..........................................11
Assessing Language and Literature...............................................12
Learning activities and assessment tasks ......................................24
Recording and reporting ................................................................39
Resources .....................................................................................42
References ....................................................................................54
Glossary for Language and Literature............................................55
Glossary for assessment ...............................................................57
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Secretary’s message
This teacher guide is to be used by teachers when implementing the Upper
Secondary Language and Literature syllabus (Grades 11 and 12) throughout
Papua New Guinea. The Language and Literature syllabus identifies the
learning outcomes and content of the subject as well as assessment
requirements. The teacher guide gives practical ideas about ways of
implementing the syllabus: suggestions about what to teach, strategies for
facilitating teaching and learning, how to assess and suggested assessment
tasks.
A variety of suggested teaching and learning activities provides teachers
with ideas to motivate students to learn, and make learning relevant,
interesting and enjoyable. Teachers should relate learning in Language and
Literature to real people, issues and the local environment. Teaching using
meaningful contexts and ensuring students participate in appropriate
practical activities assists students to gain knowledge and understanding,
and demonstrate skills in Language and Literature. It is envisaged that by
the end of Grade 12 students are critical and discerning thinkers, and
productive individuals reaching their full potential.
Teachers are encouraged to integrate Language and Literature activities
with other subjects, where appropriate, so that students can see the
interrelationships between subjects and that the course they are studying
provides a holistic education and a pathway for the future.
I commend and approve the Language and Literature Teacher Guide for use
in all schools with Grades 11 and 12 students throughout Papua New
Guinea.
DR JOSEPH PAGELIO
Secretary for Education
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Introduction
The purpose of this teacher guide is to help you to implement the Language
and Literature syllabus. It is designed for students with a good command of
English and is largely literature based. The basic premise is that students’
language use develops through a study of literature, media studies and
associated activities.
The teacher guide supports the syllabus. The syllabus states the learning
outcomes for the subject and units, and outlines the content and skills that
students will learn, and the assessment requirements.
The teacher guide provides direction for you in using the outcomes approach
in your classroom. The outcomes approach requires you to consider the
assessment requirements early in your planning by explicitly stating these to
your students in the grade so that they know what to expect in the
assessments. Learning must be transparent and relevant to the needs of the
students.
This teacher guide provides examples of teaching and learning strategies. It
also provides detailed information on criterion referenced assessment with
samples of criteria marking guides, and the resources needed to teach
Language and Literature. There are samples of questions which reflect the
principles of critical literacy and sample assessment tasks. The section on
recording and reporting shows you how to record students’ marks and how
to report against the broad learning outcomes.
There is an emphasis on student-centred learning and activities, because
students learn better when they take part in their own learning through the
main strand activities, reading and viewing, speaking and listening and
writing. They learn to make meaning of texts that they read, view and
discuss.
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Outcomes-based approach
1 What is it that students
Evaluation and need to know and Outcomes
feedback be able to do?
Assessment
Content
Learning and
teaching activities
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Learning outcomes
The syllabus learning outcomes describe what students know and can do at
the end of Grade 12. The level of achievement of the learning outcome
should improve during the two years of Upper Secondary study, and it is at
the end of the study that students are given a summative assessment on the
level of achievement of the learning outcome.
The learning outcomes for Language and Literature are listed below.
General outcomes
The following outcomes are expected to drive the range of activities chosen
to achieve the subject specific outcomes detailed below. By the end of
Grade 12, students will be:
• proactive and self-directing
• effective communicators
• effective collaborators
• analysers and problem solvers
• ethical citizens.
Students can:
1. use conventions of the English language across a variety of genres for
different purposes and audiences
2. analyse language techniques, structures and conventions in order to
apply language purposely and effectively
3. compare and contrast a range of texts to identify themes,
characterisation, language use, literary styles and how these convey the
intent of the author
4. analyse and evaluate how texts (both oral and written) are culturally
constructed and can be manipulated to influence cultural perspectives
5. evaluate the techniques of media in influencing opinion on a range of
social and cultural issues
6. research and evaluate information from a range of sources
7. create imaginative and functional texts in a variety of literary, visual and
electronic forms and conventions.
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Listening
• play cassettes to students
• read aloud to students
• involve students in drama performances
• group discussions in class
• guest speakers
• interviews
• questioning
Speaking
• seminars and PowerPoint presentations
• dramatic performances
• class or group discussions
• impromptu speeches
• poetry recitals
• brainstorming
• sales pitch
• debates
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Thinking
Students develop critical and creative thinking skills through the discussions
involved around the issues raised in the diverse range of texts encountered.
Teamwork
Students develop collaborative skills through activities such as drama
productions, class discussions, interviews and debates and by reading other
literature involving problem-solving strategies.
Referencing
Students develop the ability to acknowledge sources of information through
quotes, footnotes and bibliographies according to the Harvard system of
referencing.
Developing a program
A teaching program outlines the nature and sequence of teaching and
learning necessary for students to demonstrate the achievement of the
learning outcomes. The content of the syllabus describes the learning
context and the knowledge required for the demonstration of each outcome.
The relevant learning outcomes for each unit or topic are stated at the
beginning of the unit and the requirements of the outcomes are elaborated.
Teachers must develop programs that include appropriate learning activities
to enable students to develop the knowledge and skills identified in the
outcome statements.
The content prescribed in the units indicates the breadth and depth with
which topics should be treated. The sequence of teaching is prescribed by
the sequence of content. The learning outcomes and assessment, however,
must be central to the planning of the teaching program.
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Planning
• Where appropriate, incorporate computer sessions as part of planned
learning experiences.
• Be aware that computers can be time-consuming and may require extra
teacher support at unexpected times.
• Consider methods of troubleshooting, such as having students with
computer expertise designated as computer assistants.
• Design activities that provide the opportunity for students to access,
compare and evaluate information from different sources.
• Check protocols, procedures and policies of your school and system
regarding the use of the internet.
Managing
• Ensure that all students have the opportunity to explore and familiarise
themselves with the technologies, navigation tools, e-mail facilities and
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Criterion-referenced assessment
Norm-referenced assessment
‘Norm-referenced assessment’ makes judgements on how well the student
did in relation to others who took the test. It is often used in conjunction with
a curve of ‘normal distribution’, which assumes that a few will do
exceptionally well and a few will do badly and the majority will peak in the
middle, normally judged as average.
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1. Use Language is clear, Clear, varied and Language is Language is only Language is
conventions of the varied and precise, precise language, generally clear sometimes clear rarely clear
English language concise and appropriate to the and coherent and coherent and coherent
across a variety of appropriate to the occasion, with no with only a few with some with many
genres for occasion, with no significant lapses significant degree of clarity lapses in
different purposes significant lapses in in grammar and lapses in and coherence grammar and
and audiences grammar and expression grammar and expression
expression, and expression with
precise use of wide inaccurate or
vocabulary and inappropriate
varied grammatical choice of
structures vocabulary
2. Analyse Excellent control of Good control of Control of Partial control of Partial control
language language for a range language for a language for a language with of language
techniques, of purposes and range of purposes range of limited and
structures and audiences and and audiences purposes and understanding expresses
conventions in expresses ideas with and expresses audiences and of purposes and ideas with
order to apply a high degree of ideas with clarity expresses ideas audiences and very little
language clarity and coherence and coherence with some expresses ideas clarity and
purposely and clarity and with little clarity coherence
effectively coherence and coherence
3. Compare and Responds to texts Responds critically Responds Responds to Understands
contrast a range critically with a high to texts with critically to texts texts with simple and
of texts to identify degree of insight and insight and with some occasional concrete
themes, justifies viewpoint justifies viewpoint insight and insight and ideas and
characterisation, through well- through justifies shows some paraphrases
language use, structured, logical structured, logical viewpoint capacity to parts of the
literary styles and argument and highly argument and through justify and tex
how these convey effective use of effective use of structured support
the intent of the textual references textual references argument and viewpoint
author some use of
textual
references
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Assessment of learning
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In Language and Literature the learning outcomes are assessed using the
range of assessment methods specified in the syllabus, in the table of
components, weightings and tasks.
In deciding what to assess, the starting point is ‘what do you want students
to do and/or learn?’ and following from this: ‘how will the students engage
with the material?’, which in turn leads to the design and development of
learning tasks and activities. It is crucial that at this point the assessment
tasks clearly link back to the learning outcomes and are appropriate for the
learning activities. The assessment can be used for formative and
summative purposes. Assessment can be represented as follows:
Learning
outcomes
Assessment Learning
activities activities
Once it is clear what needs to be assessed and why, then the form the
assessment will take needs to be determined. There are many types of
assessment tasks that can be implemented; the factors that will determine
choices include:
• the students—how many are there, what is expected of them, how long
will the assessment task take?
• the learning outcomes of the subject and how they might be best
achieved.
During the year you must set assessment tasks that ensure that all the
learning outcomes of the subject have been assessed internally. Each task
you set must include assessment criteria that provide clear guidelines to
students as to how, and to what extent, the achievement of the learning
outcomes may be demonstrated. Marking guides and assessment criteria
help you with the marking process and ensure that your assessment is
consistent across classes. It is important that marking guides and
assessment criteria are collectively developed.
Students must complete the assessment tasks set. Each task must provide
clear guidelines to students for how the task will be completed and how the
criteria will be applied. When you set a task, make sure that:
• the requirements of the task are made as clear as possible to the student
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Assessment methods
Tests
A ‘test’ is a formal and structured assessment of student achievement and
progress, which the teacher administers to the class. Tests are an important
aspect of the teaching and learning process if they are integrated into the
regular class routine and not treated merely as a summative strategy. Tests
allow students to monitor their progress and provide valuable information for
you in planning further teaching and learning activities.
Tests will assist student learning if they are clearly linked to the outcomes.
Evidence has shown that several short tests are more effective for student
progress than one long test. It is extremely important that tests are marked
and that students are given feedback on their performance.
There are many different types of tests. Tests should be designed to find out
what students know, and also to find out about the development of their
thinking processes and skills. Open questions provide more detailed
information about achievement than a question to which there is only one
answer.
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Assignments
‘Assignments’ are unsupervised pieces of work that often combine formative
and summative assessment tasks. They form a major component of
continuous assessment in which more than one assessment item is
completed within the term. Any of the methods of assessment can be set as
assignments, although restrictions in format, such as word limits and due
dates, are often put on the assessment task to make them more practical.
Investigation
An ‘investigation’ involves students in a study of an issue or a problem.
Teachers may guide students through their study of the issue; or individual
students, or groups of students, may choose and develop an issue in
consultation with the teacher. This assessment component emphasises the
student’s investigation of the issue in its context, by collecting, analysing,
and commenting on secondary data and information. Students should be
encouraged to consider and explore a variety of perspectives as they
develop and state their position on the issue. Students may present the
investigation for assessment in a variety of forms, including one or a
combination of the following: a written report, an oral presentation, a
website, linked documents, multimedia, a video or audio recording.
Portfolios
Portfolios provide evidence for judgments of student achievement in a range
of contexts. Portfolios contain a specific collection of student work or
evidence. This collection of work should provide a fair, valid and informative
picture of the student’s accomplishments.
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Computer-based tasks
Using computers to administer student assessment can provide flexibility in
the time, location or even the questions being asked of students. The most
common type of computer-based assessment is based on multiple-choice
questions, which can assist teachers to manage large volumes of marking
and feedback.
Using different assessment tasks is the way to make sure that students are
able to demonstrate the range of their abilities in different contexts. Each
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PowerPoint Spoofs
presentations
Photographs Storytelling
Portfolios Trial scenes: justifying
actions
Posters TV talk shows
Proposals
Protest letters
Questionnaires
Research papers
Poetry
Resumes
Critiques of TV
programs
Short stories
Soap opera parodies
Story illustrations
Travel brochure
Videotapes
Work products
Feedback
When you assess the task, remember that feedback will help the student
understand why he or she received the result and how to do better next time.
Feedback should be:
• constructive, so that students feel encouraged and motivated to improve
• timely, so that students can use it for subsequent learning
• prompt, so that students can remember what they did and thought at the
time
• focused on achievement, not effort. The work should be assessed, not
the student
• specific to the unit learning outcomes, so that assessment is clearly
linked to learning.
Types of feedback
Feedback can be:
• informal or indirect—such as verbal feedback in the classroom to the
whole class, or person to person
• formal or direct—in writing, such as checklists or written commentary to
individual students, in either written or verbal form
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Who assesses?
Teacher assessment
Assessment is a continuous process. You should:
• always ask questions that are relevant to the outcomes and content
• use frequent formative tests or quizzes
• check understanding of the previous lesson at the beginning of the next
lesson, through questions or a short quiz
• constantly mark or check the students’ written exercises, class tests,
homework activities and so on
• use appropriate assessment methods to assess the tasks.
Frequency of assessment
You should schedule the specified assessment tasks to fit in with the
teaching of the content of the unit that is being assessed. Some assessment
tasks might be programmed to be undertaken early in the unit, others at the
end of the unit. You should take care not to overload classes with
assessment tasks at the end of the term.
Moderation
To make sure that you are interpreting the performance standards correctly
when assessing your students, it is important to undertake Language and
Literature moderation of student work within your school and with teachers of
nearby schools.
To moderate student work, a common assessment task must be used and a
marking scheme developed so that all students complete the same task
under the same conditions, and all teachers use the same marking scheme.
Teachers can then compare (moderate) the students’ work and come to a
common understanding of the performance standards and the requirements
for a particular mark or level of achievement.
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Assess in class
Use class time to carry out and to assess tasks. Performances or art works,
marked by you or the students, enables instant developmental evaluation
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Grade 11 units
Suggested activities
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Suggested activities
Drama
• read a play based on a person or group’s journey or quest
• whole-class discussion on the specific features of drama (stage setting,
dialogue, acts, scenes) as well as the roles of plot and characterisation in
conveying the playwright’s intentions
• students take notes relating to these aspects of drama
• view a DVD or stage performance of the script studied in class
• discuss the ethics of the journey and characters’ behaviour in the play
• discuss how the play is both philosophical and entertaining and write a
personal response
• write paragraphs evaluating the characters’ motivations and actions
Film
• brainstorm and mind map everything students know about film genres;
for example, fantasy, horror, comedy, thriller
• take notes on filming techniques, such as movement, composition,
colour and lighting, graphics, special effects, editing and sound track
• students create a 5-frame storyboard, demonstrating a variety of shots
with brief notes about shot styles and sound effects, for a scenario such
as a marriage proposal, a rescue or the final moments of a sports event
• make a labelled collage of magazine pictures to demonstrate filming
techniques
• draw a table to compare differences between elements of a literary text,
which uses words, and those of film, which largely relies on visual impact
• research some of the world’s great film festivals, such as Cannes,
Venice or the Russian film festival; or the origins of the Oscars
• discuss and model de Bono’s ‘Six thinking hats’ approach to analysing
and divide class into groups for applying this approach to a film viewing
• view a film about a journey or quest
• group feedback, based on their ‘Six thinking hats’ perspectives
• discuss the director’s apparent intentions in making the film, and the
different perspectives that may be held by male or female, Western or
Eastern or indigenous cultures, young or old or in different times
• model the structure and language of critiques, which are different from
reviews because they require analysis and evaluation
Singsing
• students share legends, songs or dances about journeys or quests,
select one and perform an item
• discuss the ethics of the presented item (basis of the composition and/or
attire worn; its significance in the culture and tradition of the people)
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• Write an extra scene for the play you have read, projecting the
characters sometime into their future. It must be a realistic scene linked
to the theme of journeys or quests, and reflecting the characters’ core
personalities. Perform it and explain why you constructed it in this way.
• Write an analytical and evaluative essay based on a film about journeys
and quests.
Suggested activities
Novel
• read a novel that clearly indicates cultural features and cultural conflict
• discuss the way in which cultural aspects are presented in the novel and
note these down
• group discussions on how culture represented in the novel has been
influenced over time and evaluate these changes
• analyse the effectiveness of the literary style used in the novel
• group discussion of the ethics that the characters portray in the novel
• take notes and write paragraphs on various aspects of the novel
• hold a lesson or two on how to cite and quote in an essay
• model the structure and language of an analytical essay
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Suggested activities
Drama
• discuss the notion of culture and alternative definitions of culture such as
workplace culture, family culture, youth culture, sports cultures; define
and note down the elements that make up these cultures
• read a play that reflects cultural change
• view a DVD or stage performance of the script studied in class
• whole-class discussion on the nature of the conflict between the play’s
characters and the ethics of their behaviour
• write paragraphs evaluating the characters’ motivations and actions
• discuss and evaluate the impact of the language used in the play
• draw or create a diorama of the stage setting with a written explanation
of intentions
Film
• revise filming techniques
• revise de Bono’s ‘Six thinking hats’ approach in relation to film analysis
and divide students into analysis groups
• view a film from any time period, which involves cultural conflict
• group feedback based on their ‘Six hats’ perspectives and note taking
• discuss characterisation in more detail and the motivation and ethics of
the characters’ behaviour
• discuss the director’s apparent intentions in making the film; discuss the
different perspectives that may be held by male or female, Western or
Eastern or indigenous cultures, young or old or in different times
• model the structure and language of comparative essays
Singsing
• perform a traditional dance or song
• whole-class discussion on the specific features of the item performed
(traditional attire, colours used, painting of designs or tattoos)
• discuss the ethics of the presented item (who composed the song or
dance; its significance in the culture and tradition of the people) and write
a personal response
• discuss how culture should be preserved and debate why such culture
should be preserved
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Poetry
• discuss and take notes on the ways poets use figurative language
(metaphor, simile, personification, alliteration, assonance,
onomatopoeia) and other techniques, such as rhyme and rhythm, in
order to convey their ideas
• students read a selection of poetry that reflects cultural images or
behaviour
• students interpret the poems in their own words
• identify and analyse the messages conveyed in these poems and the
ways language is used to achieve this
• write down examples of the figurative language used and explain what
they mean, why the poet has used them, and evaluate their impact
• translate one of the poems into a visual image
• Select a scene from the play studied; rewrite and perform it in Tokples or
Tok Pisin to highlight the impact of the language used. Accompany this
with an explanation of the difference in impact between the English
version and the language chosen.
• Write a comparative essay to analyse the difference between film and
drama as vehicles for conveying cultural and philosophical messages.
• Collect a portfolio of three poems and, in the form of one extended
essay, write a combined personal response to each of these.
Grade 12 units
Suggested activities
Documentaries
• brainstorm students’ knowledge of biographical texts
• discuss and evaluate the appeal of biographies in contrast to fictional
films, and the wide range of texts that celebrate people’s achievements
• discuss the purpose of biographical texts, documentaries in particular.
Extend the discussion to ‘biodocs’ (‘biodoc’ is an expression used to
refer to a biographical documentary)
• list the features that make a good documentary. What else might help
make a good ‘biodoc’?
• view Taking Pictures, a documentary about documentary making in
Papua New Guinea, and note the difference between controlled and
uncontrolled documentary footage. What are the advantages of each?
• view at least one biographical documentary
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Biographies
• read aloud selected chapters in class
• spend a couple of lessons in the library or computer room researching
the subject of the autobiography or biography
• discuss the perspectives presented in the book and any ironies or
dramatic irony that may be present
• analyse ethical or philosophical issues touched on in the book and write
some related paragraphs
• compare and contrast the literary style of biographical writing with
fictional writing. Write some related paragraphs, considering purposes of
each text type
• discuss the book’s impact on different cultural groups
• view a DVD or documentary that may be based on the book
• revisit how to cite and quote in an essay
• model the structure and language of an analytical essay
Biographical drama
• read a play based on the life of a person of note
• view a stage production or DVD of the play if possible
• research the background of the play’s main character and compare it to
facts presented in the play. How much is fact and how much is fiction?
• discuss and analyse the play for evidence of the playwright’s bias
• analyse the characters’ motivations and ethics and make notes
• examine the features of a dramatic monologue (these may be found on
the internet)
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Autobiography
• read aloud selected chapters in class
• brainstorm students’ knowledge of the context in which the
autobiography takes place; consider settings of time and place
• spend a couple of lessons in the library or computer room researching
the subject of the autobiography or biography
• discuss the perspectives presented in the book and any ironies or
dramatic irony that may be present
• analyse ethical or philosophical issues touched on in the book and write
some related paragraphs
• compare and contrast the literary style of biographical writing with
fictional writing. Write some related paragraphs, considering purposes of
each text type
• discuss the book’s impact on different cultural groups
• view a DVD or documentary that may be based on the book
• model the structure and language of an analytical essay
Biographical film
This study focuses on how imagery and language has been used as a
vehicle for artistic expression, as well as to convey facts, and how that
expression is influenced by culture, time and viewer disposition. You should
try to link the texts in this unit together in some way.
• students will view, as a whole class, one film by a well-known director
• do a ‘Six thinking hats’ analysis of the film; draw up an overhead
transparency that outlines their conclusions
• analyse the ways in which the director develops the main theme(s) of the
film and projects his or her philosophy in the film through plot,
characterisation and filming techniques, as well as metaphors or symbols
and the language used in the script. Make notes of these
• students write some paragraphs about the motivations and ethics of the
main characters
• examine ways in which viewers are positioned through choice of
language and cinematography
• discuss how different viewers might have different perceptions of the film
• Write a short story based on the major point of interest or conflict in the
autobiography.
• An in-class extended writing test in the form of a film analysis.
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Reflective monologue
Prepare and present a monologue based on the novel you have read.
Assume the identity of one of the novel’s main characters and, speaking in
the first person, talk about your dreams and aspirations, preparations for
your quest, the trials and tribulations you faced and the outcomes of your
quest. What did you contribute to the greater good of humanity? Would all
groups of people on the planet support your quest? Why or why not?
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Analytical essay
You are to write a well-structured analytical essay on one of the following
topics, using evidence from the novel to support your views. Keep in mind
that Things Fall Apart is an important novel because it is written about Africa
by an African, and therefore is shaped by his cultural background.
Either
Achebe once said, ‘I would be quite satisfied if my novels did no more than teach my
(African) readers that their past—with all its imperfections—was not one long night of
savagery from which the Europeans, acting on God’s behalf, delivered them.’ To
what extent does Achebe succeed in doing this in his novel Things Fall Apart and
what other observations does he make about society and the individual through his
main characters?
or
One of Chinua Achebe’s purposes in writing Things Fall Apart was to ‘end Europe’s
imposition of a derogatory narrative upon Africa, a narrative designed to call African
humanity into question’. To what extent does Achebe succeed in presenting Africa in
a human and complex light through his portrayal of characters and traditional Igbo
society?
Biodocumentary storyboard
Research a famous person and create a storyboard for a documentary about
him or her. The storyboard must contain between 16 and 24 images with
accompanying instructions for the camera operator about action in the
scene, camera angles, length of shot, desired effect, lighting and
accompanying sound. The storyboard must be accompanied by a rationale
for your documentary (of about 650 words), which gives some idea of why
and how you are making this documentary, and a set of biographical details
that you intend to include in the documentary. The rationale should address
such questions as: Who is the intended audience for this documentary? How
have you constructed your view of the person through your selection of facts
and scenes and your manner of collecting them? Will all audiences hold the
same view of your subject? Why or why not?
Analytical essay
Write an analytical essay about the author’s purpose(s) in creating this text.
How did she or he represent certain characters, cultures and places in the
book and why? Discuss language use and literary style. Are we made to feel
sympathetic towards these people and places? Why or why not? Who would
be the target audience for this book? Would all groups of people have the
same reaction to the book? Why or why not?
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Analytical essay
You are to collect three to five magazine advertisements that have different
target audiences. In an essay, write an introduction about persuasion
techniques and then back this up with evidence from your advertisements.
Number each of your advertisements. In your essay, for each one, identify
the product and the intended target audience and discuss the techniques
used to persuade the reader to buy the product. Concentrate on such things
as the brand name, suggestions contained in the visual image, the slogans
and the extra information in small print. Discuss any promotional features
(famous people, competitions, free extras, and so on). Say how effective you
find each advertisement. Who would it appeal to and why?
Short story
Based on the input you have had in class, your task is to write a short story,
which provides a clear sense of characterisation and mood through
description and the use of poetic language, dialogue, narrative (action) or
thought patterns. Your short story should have no more than three
characters and the action should take place over a period of time no more
than three days. Beware of falling into a recount style of writing.
Transformation
You have just completed reading and discussing a novel. Working in groups,
you are to construct and perform a ‘This is your life’ show, based on a
character in the novel and other influential characters in his or her life. Your
presentation must clearly reveal how various people, places and events
have affected your chosen ‘subject’.
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NAME__________________________________________________
DATE DUE:_____________________________________________
MODE: Written
GENRE: Literary comparative analytical exposition
TIME ALLOWED: 2 weeks
LENGTH: 800 words
VALUE: 25%
CONDITIONS: Students will work on this in class and at home
AUDIENCE: The general public
THE TASK: Analytical essay
You are to write a well-structured analytical essay on the following topic. Keep in mind that this is an important
novel because it is written about Papua by a Papuan and therefore is shaped by his cultural background.
One of Vincent Eri’s purposes in writing The Crocodile was to portray an authentic image of Papuan life
and the impact of colonialism and war from an insider’s perspective. To what extent does Eri succeed in
presenting his own culture in a human and complex light through his portrayal of characters and
traditional society and the disruption caused by outside influence?
Thinking skills
Understanding of meaning and
purpose: responding correctly to task
including correct word length
Ability to respond critically and
analytically: amount of appropriate
supporting evidence from text
Writing skills
A command of the technical aspects of
language: spelling, grammar,
punctuation, vocabulary, syntax
Clarity and fluency: organisation of
ideas, topic sentences, cohesive ties
Control of appropriate medium:
paragraphing, layout; correct generic
format (introduction, body, conclusion)
Referencing skills
Effective use of research and
reference skills: integrating, citing,
quoting, referencing
This criteria sheet is a marking guide and should reflect the achievement level which is awarded. The overall
level will be awarded on the average lie of the ticks. Descriptors of each achievement level are as provided.
Plagiarism disclaimer
I certify that this essay is all my own work, with research sources acknowledged.
Signed:___________________________________________
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Thinking skills
Understanding of meaning, and purpose: you
presented the appropriate tasks and time asked for
Ability to respond critically and analytically: amount
and appropriate supporting evidence from texts
Speaking skills
A command of the technical aspects of language:
correct grammar, syntax, pronunciation, vocabulary
range
Clarity and fluency: organisation of ideas, topic
sentence, cohesive ties; audibility, diction and tone
Referencing skills
Effective use of research and reference skills; that is,
acknowledging sources
This criteria sheet is a marking guide and should reflect the achievement level which is awarded. The overall
level will be awarded on the average lie of the ticks. Descriptors of each achievement level are as provided.
Plagiarism disclaimer
I certify that this essay is all my own work, with research sources acknowledged.
Signed: _________________________________
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NAME__________________________DATE DUE:______________________
MODE: Spoken
GENRE: Literary: transactional and expository
TIME ALLOWED: 2 weeks preparation
LENGTH: 7 minutes per person
VALUE: 25%
CONDITIONS: Students will work on this both at home and in class
AUDIENCE: Peer group
THE TASK: Present a dramatic monologue
Assume the persona of one of the characters in the biographical play you have just read, and present a
dramatic monologue in which you justify your actions. You may present it in the form of a practised speech
in court or to another important person, a reflection, a telephone conversation, a prayer, rehearsing a
letter or memoir, or any other creative way you can think of. It is not a speech to the audience!
Accompany this monologue with a rationale. Why did you choose this character? What were you trying to
demonstrate through your performance? What did you want your audience to think of your character?
Relate this to the main themes in the play and what you thought were the playwright’s intentions. Submit
both monologue and rationale scripts on the day of performance.
Thinking skills
Understanding of meaning, purpose and
context: responding correctly to task and
time limit
Ability to respond critically and analytically
to texts: amount of and appropriate
reference to events from text
Imagination and originality: level of
perceptions
Speaking skills
A command of the technical aspects of
language: grammar, vocabulary, syntax
Clarity and fluency: organisation of ideas,
audibility, diction and tone
Control of appropriate medium: body
language and stage movement, use of
props and/or costumes
A distinctive and confident style: eye
contact, non-reliance on notes
This criteria sheet is a marking guide and should reflect the achievement level which is awarded. The
overall level will be awarded on the average lie of the ticks. Descriptors of each achievement level are as
distributed.
Plagiarism disclaimer
I certify that this monologue and rationale are all my own work.
Signed: _______________________________________
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Achievement levels
A very high achievement means overall that the student has an extensive
knowledge and understanding of the content and can readily apply this
knowledge. In addition, the student has achieved a very high level of
competence in the processes and skills and can apply these skills to new
situations.
A high achievement means overall that the student has a thorough
knowledge and understanding of the content and a high level of competence
in the processes and skills. In addition, the student is able to apply this
knowledge and these skills to most situations.
A satisfactory achievement means overall that the student has a sound
knowledge and understanding of the main areas of content and has
achieved an adequate level of competence in the processes and skills.
A low achievement means overall that the student has a basic knowledge
and some understanding of the content and has achieved a limited or very
limited level of competence in the processes and skills.
Below the minimum standard means that the student has provided
insufficient evidence to demonstrate achievement of the broad learning
outcomes.
Achievement level
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Sample format for recording assessment task results over two years
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Student name:
12.1 Storyboard 30
Analytical essay 40
Dramatic monologue 40
12.2 Short story 30
In-class writing test 30
12.3 Persuasive speech 40
Short story transformation 40
Memoir 50
Express herself using clear, varied and precise language, appropriate to the occasion, with no
significant lapses in grammar and expression
Use a good control of language for a range of purposes and audiences and express ideas with
clarity and coherence
Respond critically to texts with insight and justify viewpoint through structured, logical
argument and effective use of textual references
Demonstrate good appreciation of the cultural setting and perspectives relevant to the
assignment, where appropriate
Research and synthesise a range of material successfully and acknowledge sources
Demonstrate creativity and originality.
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Resources
Language and Literature becomes more interesting and meaningful when
you use a variety of resources and local materials in your teaching.
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• (if the resource is radio, film, video or television), introduce the program
by outlining the content. You might also set some questions to guide
listening or viewing. Follow up after using the resource, by discussing
and drawing appropriate conclusions.
Text by text
Write all you can about the relevant points in one text, then discuss Text 2,
comparing each point back to its equivalent in Text 1.
Point by point
Discuss a point from Text 1, then write a comparison of that point as it
appears in Text 2. Proceed to the second point in Text 1, then compare with
the same point in Text 2. Continue this way until all points of comparison
have been discussed.
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Draw up a table with two columns, one for each text. Jot down the relevant
points to be discussed from Text 1, then beside each write down the similar
idea or technique that appears in Text 2. A comparative essay can permit
some dissimilarities, so if Text 2 has a different idea or technique, say so.
However, remember that a comparative essay must mainly focus on the
similarities, not the contrasts.
Comparison
Both A and B … Just as A... so too B…
Like A, B… A is as … as B ….
Contrast
Unlike A, B … A is not as … as B…
Although A … B … A is … but B is …
Film studies
1
• Orientation lesson: a table distinguishing main elements of all Use personal
creative texts and the style (cinematic) and student
• Begin discussing and note taking on different filming techniques: knowledge of
movement, composition popular films
• More filming techniques: complete composition and discuss colour to draw upon
• More filming techniques: lighting, symbols for examples
• Sound effects, graphics and special effects
2
• Editing: begin 5-picture scenario storyboard with instructions on
composition and sound
• Complete storyboard and instructions
• Introduction to de Bono’s ‘6 thinking hats’ as an approach to
analysis. Allocate students to groups (hats). Explain feedback
expectations
• View film (preferably in a double lesson
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4 and
• Distribute task sheet. teacher discusses structure of essay and Internet
draws diagram of essay structure on board reviews
5
• Work on essay until end of Week 5
Filming techniques
Film doesn’t just happen. The director plans the shots very carefully in order
to create the impressions she or he wants to give. For example:
1. Composition
• High angle shots: make an object look important or domineering
• Low angle shots: make things look vulnerable or small, less important
• Forward or frontal shots of people approaching the camera. Suggests
openness and honesty or trust. It appears that the subject is aware of the
camera person or the person they are approaching
• Back shots suggest trickery or deceit, vulnerability and unawareness
• Close-ups (either extreme or ordinary) draw the viewer into the action or
into people’s emotions. Often used for shock value
• Medium shots focus on the whole person, object or group. They ‘carry’
the story
• Long shots are used to show the environment and to suggest how the
environment affects the people or things in it, or the situation of the
person(s) or objects within it
• Some suggested activities for high and low angle shots
− teacher sits on floor and asks students how their perceptions of the
teacher changes when students view them from above
− invite each student to stand on teacher’s desk (as in Dead Poets
Society!) to gain a different perspective of the class. Teacher to sit
amongst the students
− write a few lines about how different the view is ‘from the top’ and
how the teacher seemed from this view
• Group activity (3 people maximum)
− create a display (chart, butcher’s paper or the like) entitled: ‘Filming
techniques: Composition’. From magazines provided, find a picture to
match each of the shots mentioned. Stick them on your chart, label
them and write their purpose under each example.
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of summer and ‘hot’ lighting suggest a summery, happy feel; or harsh, hot
lighting with browns and yellows may suggest harsh, threatening conditions.
Heavy grey clouds and a humid, dripping wet season can suggest
oppression and impending doom. The yellows, browns and reds of autumn
and its soft mellow light may suggest life or lifecycles winding down. Winter,
with its white snow and bare, grey trees and grey, dull lighting, is often used
in association with death. Often colours may be used in different ways
according to cultural associations. Here are some from Western culture.
They may differ from your culture.
− White: may stand for purity or innocence
− Red: anger or passion or emotions or blood
− Blue: sadness, coolness, restfulness
− Green: creativity, envy
− Yellow: happiness
− Black: death, evil, doom
− Purple: royalty, riches, intellect
− Orange: earthiness, heat
• Possible activity: Teacher puts together a collection of pictures from
magazines, each with a different mood created by the lighting and
colour. Issue one to each student and ask them to write a paragraph
about what mood is being generated and why. Alternatively, students
could be asked to bring along a picture or some pictures to write about in
class. Extras could be distributed to students who forget to bring them.
3. Sound track
Soft or loud, fast or slow, sweet or threatening music also helps to create
pace and mood. It helps to heighten our emotions as we listen and/or watch
the images before our eyes. Natural sounds can also affect our emotions as
we watch. Compare the soothing sound of a bubbling stream with the
powerful roar of a waterfall, or leaves rustling in the breeze with the whistling
and wailing of a storm in progress. The sound of snapping twigs can
sometimes seem deadly.
• Possible activity: Play excerpts of music or other sounds to students and
ask them to write about what they felt or imagined while listening.
5. Editing
This is the selection and sequencing of footage by the director in order to
create the final product that we see upon the screen. Most of the footage
filmed ends up on the ‘cutting floor’, as they say.
A storyboard
Before shooting takes place, the director and his or her artists usually draw
hundreds of pictures with instructions on how they want scenes, costumes
and sets to look like and be filmed; this is the camera operator’s guide.
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Using the ‘Six hats’ approach with film: ‘Dances with Wolves’
• white hat: facts and plot of Dances with Wolves
Director: Kevin Costner
Made in: 1990; USA
Distributed by Orion Pictures
John Corban played by Kevin Costner
Stands with Fists played by Mary McDonnell
It is 1863 and the action opens during the American Civil War at Saint
David’s Field in Tennessee. John Corban (northern forces) defies death in a
reckless ride across enemy firing lines and becomes a decorated war hero.
He offers himself for frontier service and at Fort Hayes is relegated to a
forgotten post, Fort Sedgwick, by a drunken and vindictive superior officer.
At this fort, Corban is the only inhabitant and gradually befriends the Indians,
and a wolf, while awaiting the arrival of back-up troops. Over the course of a
year, Corban becomes one with the Sioux, who name him ‘Dances with
Wolves’. He learns their language and their ways, hunts buffalo with them,
helps them against their marauding Pawnee neighbours, and marries Stands
with Fists, herself a white captive who was raised by Indians. All this time he
awaits reinforcements and expects to become a liaison agent to bring about
understanding between the Indians and the soldiers. However, when
reinforcements arrive, they are brutal, anti-Indian, and have no desire for a
peaceful resolution. After capture, rough handling and escape, Dances with
Wolves makes his final personal choice and commits himself to the
welcoming Sioux. The film ends with a note that 13 years later the Sioux
surrendered themselves and their lands in Nebraska (the modern state
name), which marked the passing of the prairie frontier into history.
• red hat: emotions
Scenes that move our emotions and are designed to make us
sympathetic or antagonistic to characters and/or groups of people and
their ways; for example, we feel
− disgust when Corban is beaten up by his own colleagues for
establishing good relations with the Indians
− satisfaction when Corban chooses to make the Indian way of life his
own.
• green hat: themes and creativity
The theme shows clearly that the Sioux were a sensitive people and had
a complex and friendly culture, aside from defending themselves against
aggressors (the Pawnees and the whites). Ironically they appeared to be
much more civilised in their behaviour than the whites presented in this
film, apart from Corban. The theme is of tolerance versus intolerance.
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Introduction
The purpose of an introduction is to give your readers an indication of what
your essay will be about.
Refer to the wording of the question and make an objective statement (that
is, do not use first person—‘I’, ‘me’ ‘my’ and so on) about what you believe is
the case. Offer a few briefly stated, generalised reasons as to why you hold
this view.
You could state the intention of the essay (for example, ‘the intention of this
essay is to demonstrate the validity of the points put forward above’; or, ‘the
following argument or discussion is intended to prove the validity of these
points’.
The body
This is made up of a number of paragraphs. Create a paragraph or two for
each of the reasons you offer for holding your point of view. Tackle each
point in the order in which you mention them in the introduction.
The purpose of a paragraph is to carry your argument or discussion forward
and to supply evidence. Each paragraph must have a ‘topic’ or ‘introductory’
sentence. The purpose of a topic sentence is to indicate to the reader what
your paragraph will be about. It must contain a general point you are making
in favour of your argument or discussion.
Follow this topic sentence with examples from the text or other relevant
articles to support your view. Within your paragraph, you may include
quotations from texts with referencing footnotes to illustrate your point.
These must be presented following international conventions (ask your
teacher).
The last sentence of the paragraph should briefly summarise the main point
of the paragraph and fluently lead on to the next point.
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Conclusion
• Begin this paragraph with an appropriate language cue, which indicates
that your argument or discussion is at a close. For example:
‘In conclusion…’
‘It can be concluded that…’
‘To summarise…’
‘In summary…’
‘Ultimately it all comes down to...’
‘Therefore it is obvious that…’
• refer briefly to your main supporting points
• repeat the main point you are making in relation to the question or topic
you have chosen
• do not introduce new evidence into your conclusion
What is a report?
Researched reports or oral presentations are factual and are written for a
purpose. They are not simply a collection of stand-alone facts. The purpose
is for the facts to be examined and evaluated, some conclusions reached,
and recommendations made.
Layout of a report
A report will usually have at least six parts to it:
• a statement of purpose
• facts (that is, the bulk of the research)
• evaluation
• conclusion
• recommendations
• bibliography
Some reports contain a methodology section, which outlines the various
methods used to gather information, such as reading books or browsing the
internet (sources are listed in the bibliography), interviews, surveys,
observations, anecdotal evidence, photographing, testing and so on.
Writing style
Reports are written in an objective and factual style. They are formal
documents, which are the result of investigation. A report usually forms the
basis of further action by those who have commissioned the investigation
(such as parliamentarians, business leaders, judges or police, teachers,
parents, jealous spouses).
The different sections of a report are set out under subheadings. If the report
or research is being presented orally, these subheadings become ‘invisible’
and are not read out.
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Example
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Research
NAME: ___________________________________________________________
Your class That is, what have your English notes taught you about this topic?
notes -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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Library That is, what non-fiction or reference books did you use to gather this
research?
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World Wide That is, what websites did you visit in order to gather your information?
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Multimedia That is, what film, television, radio or other multimedia did you use to
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Drafting How many drafts did you do of this assignment (and have checked by your
teacher)? ___________
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Websites
<http:/www.cyber-prof.com/mdia 1194/Lesson-2/lesson2-principles2.htm>
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References
Facilitating and Monitoring Unit 2002, The State of Education in Papua New
Guinea, Papua New Guinea Department of Education, Waigani.
International Baccalaureate, http://www.humbleisd.net/education/scrapbook.
International Education Agency 1998, The English Curriculum, International
Education Agency of Papua New Guinea, Boroko.
Josephs, J. 2000, Education for All: Assessment 2000 Papua New Guinea
Country Report. Document presented in the Asia-Pacific Conference on
Education for All, Bangkok, Thailand.
Matane, P. 1986, A Philosophy of Education for Papua New Guinea,
Ministerial Committee Report, Papua New Guinea Ministry of Education,
Waigani.
Mayer, R 2004, ‘Should there be a three-strikes rule against pure discovery
learning? The case for guided methods of instruction’, American
Psychologist, vol 59, no. 1, pp. 14–19.
National Department of Education 1999, A National Plan for Education
2005–2014, Papua New Guinea Department of Education, Waigani.
National Department of Education 2002, National Assessment and
Reporting Policy, Papua New Guinea Department of Education, Waigani.
National Department of Education 2002, National Curriculum Statement,
Papua New Guinea Department of Education, Waigani.
New Zealand Ministry of Education 1991, English in the New Zealand
Curriculum, Wellington.
South African Department of Education 2003, National Curriculum Statement
Grades 10-12 (General) Languages, Republic of South Africa, South
Africa.
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Literary style This term encompasses all of the writer’s choices as to how to
convey his or her theme; in particular, the way language is
manipulated
Media Newspaper, books, film, radio, television
Metaphor A comparison of two unlike entities, without using comparatives such
as ‘like’, ‘as …. as’
Monologue One person talking or expressing their ideas
Onomatopoeia When the word describing an action echoes its sound
Orientation The introductory part of a text that establishes settings of time and
place, characters and their relationships
Paradox When two seemingly incongruous situations exist at the same time
Parody Outright and obvious mockery of a situation, person, system, event
Personification When human characteristics are attributed to an inanimate object
Perspective Point of view
Pitch How high or low your voice is
Plot The storyline
Position The stand you take in favour of or against something
Resolution The ending, or when a conflict is resolved
Rhythm Regular, repeated pattern of sound
Satire A subtle mockery of a situation, person, system, event; sarcasm;
biting wit
Script Written actions of a play or blueprint for a speech
Setting The time and place in which action occurs
Simile A comparison of two unlike entities using the words ‘like’, ‘as … as’
Styles Ways or manners of expressing ideas, writing or doing something
Symbol A representation of something else
Technique A particular way of doing something
Text Text is created when words and/or images are put together to
communicate a meaning. Text may be written, spoken, electronic,
visual
Tone Expression
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Account Account for: state reasons for, report on. Give an account of:
narrate a series of events or transactions
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Explain Relate cause and effect; make the relationships between things
evident; provide why and/or how
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