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Children’s Literature in Education, Vol. 36, No.

3, September 2005 (Ó 2005)


DOI: 10.1007/s10583-005-5972-1

Ruth Gilbert is senior


lecturer in English at
Ruth Gilbert
University College, Win-
chester, England. She
has published on gender
and sexuality in early
modern literature. Re-
cent research has fo-
cused on memory and
identity in contempo-
Watching the Detectives: Mark
rary British Jewish fic-
tion. This article stems
Haddon’s The Curious Incident
from an ongoing interest
in teenage and ‘‘cross-
over’’ fiction and crea-
of the Dog in the Night-Time
tive writing. She is cur-
rently writing a novel for
and Kevin Brooks’ Martyn Pig
teenagers.

Mark Haddon’s The Curious Incident of the Dog in the Night-Time


was the cross-over publishing sensation of 2003. It has been the
subject of widespread critical and commercial acclaim and has won
prestigious UK prizes including the Whitbread Book of the Year and
the Guardian’s Children’s Fiction Prize. It is still enjoying consid-
erable commercial success in the best-seller lists. This essay reads
Haddon’s novel alongside Kevin Brooks’ Martyn Pig (2002), winner
of the Branford Boase Award and short-listed for the Clip Carnegie
Medal. Brooks’ hero, Martyn has a troubled teenage life, and like
Haddon’s Christopher, he turns to detective fiction in order to shape
his own experience. The essay develops the idea that ‘‘every life is in
search of a narrative’’ (Richard Kearney, On Stories, p. 4) and
argues that detective fiction, in particular, provides structures that
allow Brooks’ and Haddon’s first person narrators to make sense of
their confusing worlds.
KEY WORDS: Mark Haddon; Kevin Brooks; The Curious Incident; Martyn Pig; cross-
over fiction; detective fiction.

Christopher Boone is fifteen. He lives with his father in a confusing


and chaotic world. He is a fan of murder mystery and especially ad-
mires the hero of Conan Doyle’s classic stories: ‘‘I like Sherlock
Holmes and I think that if I were a proper detective he is the kind of
detective I would be’’ (p. 92). When Christopher finds his neighbour’s
dog stabbed to death with a garden fork he stumbles into a real-life
murder mystery complete with unexpected complications and a series
of unanswered questions. Christopher writes the story of that mystery

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Haddon, The Curious as a first person narrative in Mark Haddon’s The Curious Incident of
Incident of the Dog in the Dog in the Night-Time (2003).
the Night-Time
Martyn Pig is fourteen. Like Christopher he lives with his father in a
confusing and chaotic world. Like Christopher, he too is a fan of
detective fiction. In fact, he copes with his difficult life by immersing
himself in the genre: ‘‘Murder mysteries, crime novels, whodunits,
thrillers, detective stories, call them what you like, I love them’’
(p. 25). When Martyn accidentally kills his father he, like Christopher,
finds himself inhabiting a real-life murder mystery. And he too writes
Brooks, Martyn Pig his own story as a first person narrative in Kevin Brooks’ Martyn Pig
(2002).

In the following discussion I want to draw out the similarities between


the two narratives to demonstrate the ways in which fiction, and
detective fiction in particular, provides a means for both Christopher
and Martyn to make sense of their experience. Detective fiction, a
literary genre that offers solutions as well as crimes, resolution as well
as uncertainty, brings order to what both boys perceive to be the
fundamentally disordered world around them. In their close identifi-
cations with the detective motif, and especially the detective hero,
both Christopher and Martyn are able to draw from the power of
stories to negotiate a path through their painful and uncertain ado-
lescent experiences.

Kearney, On Stories Richard Kearney has argued that the human condition is marked by a
‘‘search for narrative’’ as we seek ‘‘to introduce some kind of concord
into the every day discord and dispersal we find about us’’ (p. 4).
Christopher and Martyn experience more ‘‘discord and dispersal’’ than
most. Both, in some respects, exist outside conventional social norms.
Martyn has to endure a fraught domestic life that is dominated by his
alcoholic and abusive father. Christopher has to cope with his expe-
rience of Asperger’s Syndrome (a form of autism that is not directly
named by Haddon but is nevertheless clearly evident within the
narrative).1

But despite their seemingly atypical experiences, both Christopher


and Martyn’s stories are in many ways also typical ‘‘rites of passage’’
novels, in which the adolescent hero (usually a boy) embarks upon a
symbolic journey towards adulthood.2 A standard characteristic of this
Hartley, The Go genre (ranging from L.P.Hartley’s classic The Go-Between to Michael
Between Frayn’s more recent Spies) is that the teenage boy is not in full pos-
Frayn, Spies
session of his own story. The narrative is then nearly always one of
isolation, misunderstanding, investigation. In order to understand his
own narrative the teenage hero must piece together the clues that lie
scattered around him and eventually develop a fuller and more mature
Watching the Detectives 243

picture. Or, to put it another way, these are detective stories in which
the teenage boy discovers who he is and who he might become.
Christopher and Martyn’s stories show that detective fiction can be
about more than murdered dogs, dead parents and spiralling decep-
tion. They are stories about identity.

‘‘It is a Puzzle’’: Christopher in The Curious Incident of the Dog


in the Night-Time
The Curious Incident and Martyn Pig are both concerned with
metafictional issues of reading and writing detective fiction. In par-
ticular, both Christopher and Martyn show an interest in the detective
persona (especially Sherlock Holmes and Inspector Morse) more than,
say, the crime itself or the processes of police investigation. The
detective figure in these texts is a kind of hero and one who provides a
significant and meaningful point of identification for both teenage
protagonists. This identification with the detective allows both Martyn
and Christopher to construct their stories within the clearly defined
parameters of genre fiction.

Hühn, ‘‘The Detective as Peter Hühn has argued that the classic detective genre creates a con-
Reader: Narrativity and test between the criminal and the detective as they both struggle to
Reading Concepts in
Detective Fiction’’ possess meaning in the narrative. The criminal ‘‘writes’’ the crime and
the detective must ‘‘read’’ the signs left behind (clues) correctly in
order to solve the mystery and restore order. Christopher constructs
his narrative with himself in the role of both detective and storyteller,
interpreting or ‘‘reading’’ the traces of another’s crime or story. In the
detective fiction mode he charts the trail of clues left by the criminal
and in the course of his investigation finds out (indirectly) who killed
Wellington, the murdered poodle at the centre of the mystery. But he
also discovers that there is another story to be read. His own. By the
end of his narrative he has found his voice as a writer as well as a
reader of his own story.

Detective fiction offers Christopher a way to understand and to frame


Dove, The Reader and his own story because, as George Dove has argued, in a convention-
the Detective Story alized literary form like detective fiction ‘‘there is a genuine corre-
spondence between the rules of a game and the restraints upon the
author’s selection and handling of his or her narrative material’’
(p. 40). Christopher responds to this emphasis on structure. He lives
by a meticulously detailed timetable that covers his every waking
moment and activity. He likes the kind of systematized thinking rep-
resented by computer games, maths and detective stories. Whereas
most novels make Christopher ‘‘feel shaky and scared...because they
are lies about things which didn’t happen’’ (p. 24), detective fiction
satisfies his desire for order. He explains that, ‘‘In a murder mystery
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novel someone has to work out who the murderer is and then catch
them. It is a puzzle. If it is a good puzzle you can sometimes work out
the answer before the end of the book’’ (p. 15). In its classic form then
(Christopher’s favourite) this highly stylized genre provides the reader
with the stimulation of being presented with a riddle combined with
the reassurance of knowing that there will always be a solution. In
detective fiction, if not life, Christopher can understand the rules of a
game.

Detective fiction thereby supports Christopher’s desire for a highly


delineated existence. In writing his detective story he attempts to read
and shape the apparent random nature of the world around him.
Ambiguity of any kind upsets him. He orders his world by dividing
days into good and black depending on the number of red cars or
yellow cars he sees in a row (red are good, yellow are bad). When
challenged about this by the school psychologist, Christopher an-
swers:

I said I liked things to be in a nice order. And one way of being in a nice order was
to be logical. Especially if those things were numbers or an argument. But there
were other ways of putting things in a nice order. And that was why I had Good
Days and Black Days. (p. 31)

He concludes that although his rigorous and seemingly eccentric rules


about food, colours and tightly ordered routine appear illogical, ‘‘in life
you have to take lots of decisions’’ and that options can be over-
whelming without rules (however arbitrary) to eliminate the uncer-
tainty of infinite choice (p. 106).

So rules that can be worked out are the logical solution to living in the
midst of chaos and Christopher, like his hero Sherlock Holmes, privi-
leges relentless logic over imprecise intuition:

Mr Jeavons said that I liked maths because it was safe. He said I liked maths
because it meant solving problems, and these problems were difficult and
interesting, but there was always a straightforward solution at the end. And what
he meant was that maths wasn’t like life because in life there are no straight-
forward answers at the end. I know he meant this because this is what he said
(p. 78).

But Christopher also understands that even in maths, intuition can get
in the way of logic. He draws from the ‘‘Monty Hall’’ problem as an
example of how logic can be used to provide the correct answer to a
seemingly obvious maths problem. The solution to this problem is, as
Christopher demonstrates at length, profoundly counterintuitive:
‘‘And this shows that intuition can sometimes get things wrong. And
intuition is what people use in life to make decisions. But logic can
help you work out the right answer’’ (p. 82). In this respect, his
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identification with the ruthlessly logical Holmes both forms and vali-
Conan Doyle, The Sign dates Christopher’s sense of self. As Holmes declares in The Sign of
of Four Four, ‘‘I never guess. It is a shocking habit – destructive to the logical
faculty’’(p. 14). In this way, Christopher, like Holmes, asserts the po-
sitive value of logic. What might have been perceived as a lack or
limitation is thereby rewritten as an alternative and superior way of
seeing the world.

I would argue that one of the reasons that The Curious Incident has
enjoyed such popular and critical success is that Christopher’s As-
perger’s Syndrome always positions him at a distance from that which
appears obvious. This creates both comic moments (how to under-
stand a raised eyebrow) and emotionally charged scenes (when
Raine, ‘‘A Martian Sends Christopher rejects his father). Like the alien observer in Craig Raine’s
a Postcard Home’’ poem ‘‘A Martian Sends a Postcard Home’’, Christopher’s emotional
dislocation means that he can describe the world around him with
remarkable and sometimes startling perception. Both Christopher and
the Martian make a different sense of the world, taking the seemingly
random signs and clues presented by human life and shaping them
into a new narrative. So Christopher can provide a surprisingly full
picture of Mr Jeavons by describing the ‘‘approximately 60 tiny cir-
cular holes in each of his brown shoes’’ (p. 5), in the way that the
Martian demonstrates an astute understanding of the human condition
when it construes a bathroom as being ‘‘a punishment room’’, a place
of human suffering and isolation in which ‘‘everyone’s pain has a
different smell’’.

The ability to perceive with such apparently offbeat observation is


what makes the classic detective hero so successful. As Hühn points
out, ‘‘he is predominantly defined by his cold detachment from all
human concerns, the clarity of his analytic intellect, and his interest in
the truth-finding process for its own sake’’ (p. 460). He (and in its
classic form the detective is nearly always a ‘‘he’’) is usually an alien of
one sort or another who observes the situation of the crime with a
fresh vision. In identifying with Holmes, a supreme example of alien
intelligence, Christopher finds a way of connecting his experience to a
literary and cultural hero. Through Holmes, Christopher can see that
he is not as his classmate’s brother calls him, ‘‘a spazzer’’ (p. 33). He is,
Conan Doyle, A Scandal like Holmes, in possession of exceptional abilities. As Holmes says to
in Bohemia the prosaic Watson in A Scandal in Bohemia, ‘‘You see but you do
not observe. The distinction is clear’’ (pp. 11–12). Christopher ad-
mires Holmes for exactly this quality:

‘He is very intelligent and he solves the mystery and he says


The world is full of obvious things which nobody by any chance ever observes.
But he notices them, like I do (p. 92).’
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However, Holmes’ eccentricity, precision and detachment are plea-


surable fictions. They provide a fantasy of identification for Christo-
pher, but seeing the things that others do not observe is, in reality,
exhausting and burdensome. He notices everything around him in
hyper-detail; so, for example, not a field of cows, but ‘‘19 cows in the
field, 15 of which are black and white and 4 of which are brown and
white’’ (p. 175).

Haddon also allows the reader to see that Christopher’s reading and
writing of his own story is only partial and the author shows the limits
and often painful consequences of Christopher’s lack of intuitive
connection, for him and those around him. When faced with new and
frightening situations, Christopher’s mind goes into overload and his
identification with the cool logic of Holmes becomes both more ur-
gent and more poignant. In distress, he seeks a model in his hero:
‘‘And then I thought that I had to be like Sherlock Holmes and I had to
detach my mind at will to a remarkable degree so that I did not
notice how much it was hurting in my head.’’(p. 164). These moments
are important. They demonstrate how embedded the figure of Holmes
is in Christopher’s consciousness. He needs this fictional character in
order to make sense of his life and tell his story. But even this deeply
embedded identification has its limits. The world is not just a series of
puzzles to be solved by his prodigious powers of logic.

In writing his own detective story, Christopher encounters the mud-


dled irresolution of life rather than the satisfying structures of art. As
Rhys, Smile Please Jean Rhys has put it, ‘‘Art has a pattern. Life has none’’ (p. 10). When
he expresses doubts about the validity of his story to his teacher,
Siobhan, the exchange sums up the tension between form and form-
lessness that characterises the detective genre and Christopher’s
everyday world:

I said that it wasn’t a proper book because it didn’t have a proper ending because
I never found out who killed Wellington so the murderer was still At Large.
And she said that was like life, and not all murders were solved and not all
murderers were caught (p. 67).

Christopher does finally solve the mystery of who killed Wellington. As


Conan Doyle, Silver in Conan Doyle’s Silver Blaze the answer had to be that he was
Blaze murdered by someone he knew. Holmes points out to the plodding
police Inspector in the tale that the answer to the puzzle is in the
overlooked detail:

‘‘Is there any other point to which you would wish to draw my attention?’’
‘‘To the curious incident of the dog in the night-time.’’
‘‘The dog did nothing in the night-time.’’
‘‘That was the curious incident,’’ remarked Sherlock Holmes (p. 28).
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For Holmes the conclusion is logical: the dog didn’t bark so it follows
that a stranger did not murder it.

Christopher, like Holmes, exercises his intellect to make sense of


Conan Doyle, The seemingly disordered events. He quotes from The Hound of the Bas-
Hound of the kervilles: ‘‘[Holmes’] mind...was busy in endeavouring to frame
Baskervilles
some scheme into which all these strange and apparently discon-
nected episodes could be fitted. And that is what I am trying to do by
writing this book’’ (p. 92). He eventually discovers that his father
stabbed the dog with a garden fork, that his mother is not as he has
been told, dead, but living in London with their neighbour’s husband.
But Christopher does not ever fully understand why. The complex
emotions of his parents and the pain that they experience remain a
mystery. Holmes solves a puzzle and achieves closure but Christo-
pher’s (re)solution is an ongoing negotiation with the baffling business
of life.

‘‘Things don’t just Happen’’ Martyn in Martyn Pig


Christopher identifies with the enigmatic Holmes and aspires towards
closure but Martyn Pig is a different type of detective. He too is a fan
of Sherlock Holmes but he also identifies closely with the melancholy
late-twentieth century detective, Inspector Morse, a detective who
can be seen to combine the classic role of the intelligent outsider
with the more self-doubting aspects of postmodern heroism. Martyn,
unlike Christopher, is also drawn to the jagged realism that charac-
terizes the twentieth-century American detective story. For Martyn,
Chandler’s detective Marlowe is the quintessential hard-boiled private
eye. He is:

Cool, tough, bitter and funny. A man of honour. Mean streets. Mean villains. Mean
city. Bad girls, good girls, crazy girls. Good cops, bad cops. Snappy dialogue.
Blackmail, murder, mystery and suspense. And a plot with more twists than a
snake with bellyache (p. 26).

Martyn shows a perfect understanding of the genre, and while he is


often a hapless, helpless figure himself, he adopts many of Marlowe’s
‘‘cool, tough, bitter and funny’’ traits in his own narrative persona.
And, in his summary of the hard-boiled form, he also anticipates, in
practically all respects, the key elements of the story he is about to tell.
Like Christopher, Martyn constructs himself as a murder mystery
writer early on in the book. When Alex, the complicated older girl
from down the road asks what he wants to be when he grows up,
Martyn says Ôthe first thing that came into my head. ‘‘I want to be a
writer. I’m going to write a murder mystery’’’ (p. 29).
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The story of Martyn Pig takes place in a week leading up to Christmas


and each chapter chronicles the events and thoughts of one day. It
soon becomes clear that Martyn’s lot is to keep chaos, represented by
his drunken father, at bay. As Martyn shapes his experience into a
narrative (‘‘this - what I’m going to tell you about – it all happened just
over a year ago’’ (p. 9)), he creates a sense of order from a
confusing and disturbing chain of events. Martyn has a dual role in the
narrative. He is both criminal and detective. Part of the story hinges on
the way in which he covertly disposes of his father’s body and be-
comes involved in a plan to make fraudulent financial gain from his
father’s death. So, as the criminal ‘‘writing’’ the crime, he has to
disguise the clues and evade detection. In this respect he is successful.
The crime he writes cannot be sufficiently decoded. The police find
too many confusing threads and loose ends. But the story is not en-
tirely in Martyn’s control. Other characters also generate strands of
deception and he must, in the role of detective, read the clues they
leave behind in order to fully make sense of his own story. So he is
both writer and reader, trying not only to obscure his own crime but
also to detect the responsibility of others in shaping his story. What
makes Martyn different from Christopher is that he understands this
duality and knows that his narrative is a strategy for coping with life’s
ambivalence.

Detective fiction provides Martyn with a structure to shape his


otherwise chaotic and depressing life. Like Christopher, he frames his
story in metafictional terms by connecting it to the über-detective,
Sherlock Holmes: ‘‘Things don’t just happen, they have reasons. And
the reasons have reasons....Which is why, in a funny kind of way, it
was The Complete Illustrated Sherlock Holmes that killed my dad’’
(p. 24). We see here a curious and engaging logic at play from the
outset as Brooks suggests why Martyn, like Christopher, is predisposed
towards the style and methods of detective fiction.

Although Martyn does not have Christopher’s Asperger’s Syndrome


there are some telling similarities between the characters. Martyn’s
aversion to the mess that symbolises his father’s disordered and
destructive existence is resonant of Christopher’s obsessive desire for
order: ‘‘I couldn’t stand it. All that jumble and dirt, it made me so I
couldn’t think straight. I need to see clean surfaces, flat and unclut-
tered. I need to see the true shape of things’’ (p. 155). Martyn, like
Christopher, feels the world around him to be a confusing, intense and
potentially threatening place. The description of Martyn’s experience
of Christmas shopping in the opening chapter suggests that Christo-
pher’s extreme sensitivities to external stimuli are not only charac-
teristic of autistic conditions. Perhaps one of the reasons that
Christopher’s character is so affecting is that these responses resonate
Watching the Detectives 249

with many people. When Martyn works his way through the crowds
and finds himself staring into a pile of cheap toys in ‘‘The Bargain Bin’’,
he is overwhelmed by the ‘‘horrible tinny Christmas musak’’. His
feeling of discomfort and disorientation becomes unbearable:

A great swirling mess of sound searing its way into my head. I tried to ignore it,
but it just seemed to get louder and louder. And it was hot in there, too. It was
boiling. There was no air. I couldn’t breathe. The sound was paralysing – chat-
tering machine guns, talking animals, wailing police car sirens, dee-dur dee-dur
dee-dur, parents shouting at their kids, whacking them on the arm, the kids
screaming and crying, the constant beep beep beep of the tills, the music. It was
like something out of a nightmare.
I had to get out (p. 15).

The tone of this passage is strikingly similar to the episode in The


Curious Incident when Christopher travels on the London Under-
ground:

And then more people came into the little station and it became fuller and then
the roaring began again and I closed my eyes and sweated and felt sick and felt
the feeling like a balloon inside my chest and it was so big I found it hard to
breathe (p. 217).

Both teenagers exist in a similarly isolated and sense-saturated condi-


tion. But perhaps what each invokes is the more general experience of
adolescent (and indeed adult) isolation in the urban and suburban
contexts of the twenty-first century. What is missing in both these
descriptions of unremitting sensation is any sense of shaping narrative.
Noises, sights, smells, feelings, are all experienced as random, jumbled
and meaningless. Martyn and Christopher both realise the power of
story to bring order and shape to this violently fragmented world.

Martyn describes how he first picked up The Complete Illustrated


Sherlock Holmes when he was ill in bed, aged around ten, because ‘‘I
got so bored...staring at the walls, listening to the sound of Dad
clomping around in a drunken daze’’ (p. 25). It is from this moment
that he develops his passion for the genre: ‘‘It was brilliant. I couldn’t
put it down. I loved it...I was hooked’’ (p. 25). Sherlock Holmes has
helped him to drown out the immediate clamour of his unruly father
and, by the time that he kills his father, detective fiction is thoroughly
embedded in Martyn’s consciousness. It indirectly precipitates the
accident that leads to his father’s death and also gives Martyn a way in
which to respond.

The fatal incident results from a seemingly mundane domestic irritation


about television. Martyn explains that he had wanted to watch Inspector
Morse, seeking a reassuring world of ‘‘twisting plots, red herrings,
strange vicars, spooky murders and good old Morse always getting it
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right in the end’’ (p. 34). But that evening he clashes with his father,
whose constant interruptions eventually drive him to breaking point.

All I was trying to do was watch Inspector Morse on the television. Is that too
much to ask? (p. 33).
He just wouldn’t stop. On and on and on. I couldn’t concentrate. I couldn’t hear
what was going on. I was losing the plot (p. 34).
All I could hear was Dad’s crazy braying in my ear: ‘‘Lew-is! Lew-is! Lew-is! Lew-is!
Lew-is! Lew-‘‘[Morse’s sometimes pedestrian Sergeant]
‘‘SHUT UP!’’ (p. 35).

Finally, Martyn can take no more. He loses the plot in every sense. He
can’t hear Morse explaining the crucial key to the mystery. He pushes his
father, who falls, hits his head and dies. So Martyn’s overarching narrative
of events makes a kind of sense. If he had never been given The Complete
Illustrated Sherlock Holmes for his birthday he would never have
developed a love for murder mysteries, never have wanted to watch
Inspector Morse in peace and never have accidentally killed his father.

But, as in The Curious Incident, the detective motif is more than just a
narrative device. In times of stress Christopher, despite his general
lack of empathy, thinks of Watson’s response to fear in Doyle’s fiction:
‘‘I saw father’s mobile phone...and I felt my skin...cold under my
clothes like Doctor Watson in The Sign of Four’’ (p. 167). Similarly,
Martyn absorbs a sense of Morse’s presence at a deep level. In fact, he
sees his world through the lens of detective fiction in general and
Morse in particular, noticing, for example, that ‘‘The sky was dull and
silver-grey. The colour of Inspector Morse’s hair’’ (p. 56).

As the story unfolds it becomes apparent that Martyn can only cope
with the horror of his situation by living his experience as if it were a
fiction. He looks at his dead father’s body and scenes drawn from
television drama inform his response:

An image suddenly flashes into my mind – one of those chalk outlines that
detectives draw around the murder victim’s body. It amused me, for some reason,
and I let out a short strangled laugh (p. 39).

When he dreams that he is being interrogated in a stereotypical police


interview room, complete with naked light bulb and twin cassette
tapes whirring in the background, Martyn further constructs his
experience as a slippage into fiction. Both Inspector Morse and Sher-
lock Holmes are interviewing him and the distinction between fantasy
and reality becomes increasingly confused as Morse’s interrogation
focuses on what Martyn was doing when his father died:

‘‘Watching television.’’
‘‘Watching what?’’
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‘‘Watching you!’’
‘‘Lew-is!’’ (p. 47).

Like Christopher, who when he is held in a police cell wonders, ‘‘how


I would escape if I was in a story’’ (p. 17), Martyn experiences events
as if they are fictions. When Alex asks him how they will get his dead
father’s body into the car he thinks: ‘‘It was a good question. The sort
of question a good mystery writer ought to have an answer to. I didn’t
have a clue’’ (p. 118). He can only think the problem through by
wondering ‘‘how would it be done in a story?’’ (p. 118).

As Martyn attempts to understand his role in his own story, the struc-
turing principles of detective fiction begin to overwhelm the narrative
of his life and he struggles to re-define the boundaries between fiction
and life. He discovers that Alex has betrayed him. She has murdered her
boyfriend, the unattractive blackmailer Dean, and double-crossed
Martyn. Martyn realises that his dependence on detective fiction has
failed to prepare him for this uncomfortable reality:

No I thought. It’s not real. Severed brake lines. Not in real life. That’s the kind of
thing that only happens in books (p. 186).
I should have known. I would have known if it was a story, a murder mystery, I
would have spotted the clues (p. 189).

Finally Martyn understands that his life cannot be fully absorbed into
the generic structures of classic detective fiction. As in Christopher’s
story, the mystery is solved but uncertainty remains.

It’s never so complicated in books. Well, it is, but in different ways. Complica-
tions in stories are simple complications. Clues, plots, twists and turns. Compli-
cated but solvable. But these complications, real complications, these were all
blurred together, all mixed up (p. 199).

When Martyn is actually in a police interview room being interrogated


about his father’s death, it is nothing like his dream. Instead it’s ‘‘just a
room, an ordinary-looking office room’’ (p. 200).

At the end of the book he is living with his Aunty Jean (a maudlin
drunk) in a semi-detached house on the better side of town. He has
evaded police enquiries into his role in his father’s death. He has had
his first experiences of death, romantic desire and betrayal. And he still
reads detective fiction. When Aunty Jean encourages him ‘‘to get a
decent hobby.... You can’t spend all day lying on your bed reading
detective books’’, he wonders, ‘‘Why not?’’ (p. 212). But he has be-
come a knowing reader. He knows that stories can hold power as well
as pleasure. Like Christopher, Martyn is now a writer as well as a
reader of detective fiction. He recognises that in telling his own story
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he can also change it. When, in the epilogue, Martyn receives a letter
from Alex urging him to ‘‘hurry up and write that murder mystery...I’m
sure you can think up a story’’ (p. 220), the reader knows, of course,
that he already has.

Christopher’s story ends with his optimistic assessment of his own


future. His father has bought him a dog. He has passed his Maths A
level, he is preparing to take A level Further Maths and Physics. He
plans to go to university and to get a first class honours degree. He is
confident about his future because he has constructed his identity in a
narrative:

And I know I can do this because I went to London on my own, and because I
solved the mystery of Who Killed Wellington? And I found my mother and I was
brave and I wrote a book and that means I can do anything (p. 268).

Whereas Martyn, with characteristic poststructuralist scepticism, rea-


lises that there are still loose ends and uncertainties in his narrative,
Christopher presents a far more positive view. Here perhaps is the key
difference between the two narratives. Christopher is drawn to the
nineteenth-century classic detective genre characterised by Holmes.
Martyn inhabits the twenty-first century world of relativism and doubt:
a world in which detectives and readers always question notions of
truth and reality.

Williams, Critical As Linda Williams has put it, ‘‘we are all born into stories’’ (p. 1). In
Desire: Psychoanalysis one way this means that we enter a world with pre-existing language,
and the Literary Subject
relationships, ideologies, codes. We enter a story that is already run-
ning. But, in another way, we are born into stories because this is how
we make sense of ourselves. We are always, to an extent, narrativizing
ourselves in an effort to construct our identities. In the characters of
Christopher and Martyn, Mark Haddon and Kevin Brooks present two
memorable illustrations of the complex relationship between narrative
and identity. In telling their stories Christopher and Martyn find out
more about who they are and the world that they inhabit. But these are
not just coming-of-age stories. They remind their readers that we all
read and write our own stories as we try to make sense of our infinitely
muddled lives.

Notes
1. For a useful discussion of Haddon’s use of a teenage narrator with Asper-
ger’s Syndrome in relation to other texts that use this device see Bill
Greenwell, ‘‘The Curious Incidence of Novels about Asperger’s Syndrome’’,
Children’s Literature in Education, 2004, 35, 271–284.
Watching the Detectives 253

2. Bill Greenwell makes the point that The Curious Incident can also be read
as a suburban comedy’’, a ‘‘comic rite of passage in the same vein as Sue
Townsend’s Adrian Mole, aged 133/4’’ (p. 282).

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