The Use of Picture-Guessing Game in Implementing Team-Pair-Solo Technique To Improve The Students' Ability To Write Descriptive Text
The Use of Picture-Guessing Game in Implementing Team-Pair-Solo Technique To Improve The Students' Ability To Write Descriptive Text
The Use of Picture-Guessing Game in Implementing Team-Pair-Solo Technique To Improve The Students' Ability To Write Descriptive Text
a final project
in English
by
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ENGLISH DEPARTMENT
FACULTY OF LANGUAGES AND ARTS
SEMARANG STATE UNIVERSITY
2013
APPROVAL
Board of Examiners
1. Chairman
Dr. Abdurrachman Faridi, M. Pd.
NIP. 195301121990021001
2. Secretary
Rini Susanti Wulandari, S. S., M. Hum.
NIP. 197406252000032001
3. First Examiner
Drs. Amir Sisbiyanto, M. Hum.
NIP. 195407281983031002
Approved by:
The Dean of the Faculty of Languages and Arts
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PERNYATAAN
Dengan demikian, walaupun tim penguji dan pembimbing skripsi/final project ini
membubuhkan tanda tangan sebagai tanda keabsahan, seluruh isi karya ilmiah ini
tetap menjadi tanggung jawab saya sendiri. Jika ditemukan pelanggaran yang
berhubungan dengan skripsi/final project yang saya hasilkan, saya bersedia
menerima konsekuensinya.
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MOTTO AND DEDICATION
To:
Allah SWT
My beloved parents
My beloved brother
My best-ever friends and Mayda friends
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PREFACE
First and foremost, I would like to praise Allah SWT the Almighty for the
blessing and mercy, the health and the power given to me, and the prophet
Muhammad SAW for bringing His tenet to us, so I could complete my final
project.
I specially thank to my father, Drs. Slamet, mother, Mrs. Murtini and brother,
Nahl, who always support, advise, and pray for me in every step of completing
this project. I thank to all my friends at English Department and Kos Mayda as
well as my best friends, Abibah, Meta and Nana, who have supported and helped
me overcome my difficulties.
The last but not the least, I realized that this final project is still far from being
perfect. Thus, any suggestion is expected for better result. Hopefully, this final
project will be beneficial for readers, especially for English teachers and people
who work at educational field.
The writer
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ABSTRACT
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TABLE OF CONTENTS
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Preface ........................................................................................................... v
Abstract .......................................................................................................... vi
CHAPTER
1. INTRODUCTION ................................................................................ 1
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2.2.2.3 Teaching Writing.................................................................................. 15
3.5.4 Tests..................................................................................................... 35
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3.6.2 Pre-Assessment. ................................................................................... 36
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4.1.4 Reflection. ......................................................................................... .. 57
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LIST OF TABLES
Table Page
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LIST OF FIGURES
Figure Page
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LIST OF APPENDICES
Appendix Page
15. Letter of Research Permission/Surat Izin Penelitian Bukti Penelitian ......... 119
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CHAPTER I
INTRODUCTION
This chapter presents the introduction of the study. It contains six sub chapters.
They are background of the study, reasons for choosing the topic, research
questions, purposes of the study, significance of the study, and outline of the
report.
English is now one of the main subjects taught in schools because of its
technology, culture age, and also the relationship between countries in the world.
the most difficult skill to be mastered because of its complexity. Paul (2003:96) in
Hapsari (2011:2) says that writing is generally as the most difficult of the four
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word choice, punctuation, and so on. Moreover, English teaching and learning in
schools is taught through text. Genre of text then becomes the pilot in all parts of
English teaching and learning, including teaching and learning writing which has
to consider with the aspects of all genres. They are grammar, generic structure,
curriculum, the researcher‟s observation shows that most of students she taught
when she was doing Field Practice Program or PPL at SMA Negeri 1 Subah had
and so on. For example, a student produced I call her is Nana instead of I call her,
Nana. Another student produced The tipe are button, qwerty, touch screen instead
of The types are button, qwerty and touch screen, and many others. Some students
also made report text instead of descriptive text. In addition, the average of them
have not achieved the standard score criteria or KKM. These problems were also
faced by the tenth grade students where she did observation for the fulfillment of
final assignment of Language Teaching Theories subject. These facts indicate that
itself is an action--a process of discovering and organizing your ideas, put them on
paper and reshaping and revising them. In English language education, writing is
be guided to compose a good text. It means that in composing a text students have
to compose a text which is based on its genre and pay attention to the aspects of
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writing. In this case, teachers need to use a technique or the combination of some
and help students understand in learning the materials. Many types of game are
available as media in teaching learning process. They are guessing games, picture
kind of guessing games which requires students to logically guess what the picture
is. In this case, pictures help students understand the situation and memorize
vocabulary.
process because they can help each other to solve problems faced. Many teachers
problem in learning. The fact that most of students are reluctant to ask their
teacher when they find any difficulty in their learning process becomes the reason
for using cooperative learning. Cooperative learning then offers many techniques
of group working to facilitate students solve their problems with their friends.
effective way to teaching writing because it guides students to work as a team first,
then as a partner, and the outcome of the result produced by individual. Finally,
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each of students has his or her own responsibility to learn and understand the
material.
Teaching writing is not an easy task for teacher although writing has been
taught from the primary educational level. The status of English as foreign
school students. Therefore, a teacher needs to find a good way in teaching writing.
Dealing with the whole explanation above, a study entitled the Use of
the Students’ Ability to Write Descriptive Text was conducted at SMA Negeri 1
Subah. It would focus on writing descriptive text as the skill to be mastered. The
reason is because most of the tenth grade students in this school have difficulty in
writing descriptive text. Whereas, it has been given at the lower educational level.
team-pair-solo technique to teach writing descriptive text, and then the students‟
Descriptive text is one of text types learned. Although descriptive text has been
taught in the lower educational level, there are a lot of students in senior high
Second, the success of teaching learning process can depend on media and
Third, teachers can use such a good way that their students can understand
As the reasons for choosing the topic, there are some questions come up in
Based on the problems which come up above, there are some purposes of
Dealing with the purposes which would like to be achieved, this study is expected
Indonesia.
technique hopefully can help students improve their ability to write descriptive
The report of this study consists of five chapters. Every chapter has several sub
study, reasons for choosing the topic, research questions, purposes of the study,
present study.
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subject of the study, roles of the study, type of data, instruments for collecting
Chapter IV presents result and discussion. This part gives research activity,
This chapter presents review of related literature. It is divided into three sub
study. Empirical studies and reference review from the books related to the topic
will be discussed in this chapter. The further descriptions are as the followings.
Some researchers had conducted some studies of the use of media to enhance
students‟ ability in English, some of them related to writing. A final project made by
Medina Rahma (2012) entitled the Use of Pictures as Media to Improve Students’
Guided Writing Ability shows that the students had a progress in learning guided
writing because the average of post-test (71.80) was higher than the pre-test
(58.50). The result of a final project made by Daud Jiwandono (2012) entitled
Improve the Students’ Ability in Writing Descriptive Texts shows that the mean
score of the control group on the pre-test was 71.21, while on the post-test was
86.29. Whereas, the mean score of the experimental group was 71.12, while on
the post-test was 89.91. The result of the t-test (1.83) was higher than t-table
(1.67). It means that there was significant difference between the students taught
using animated GIF and those not. In addition, a journal of language teaching and
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research made by Deguang Zhu (2012) entitled Using Games to Improve Students’
Communicative Ability also shows that from the analysis done, teaching and
improve students‟ communicative ability than the traditional one. From the
studies above, it can be concluded that the use of media can help students
understand the materials taught by their teacher, and for teachers, media can help
Other studies of the use of cooperative learning and its techniques were
also held. A journal of English language teaching made by Luu Trong Tuan (2010)
entitled Infusing Cooperative Learning into An EFL Classroom shows the result
that the course evaluations were positive and most of students (89.19%) in the
experimental group made strong statements about how much cooperative learning
improved their understanding of the course material. There is a final project made
Comprehension. In this study, the researcher finds out that the t-value (7.43) was
higher than t-table (2.03). It means that there was a significant difference between
the students taught using team-pair-solo and those not. Moreover, a final project
writing hortatory exposition text. Based on these studies, there are many
Furthermore, some studies talking about writing had been also conducted.
Descriptive Writing Made by the Tenth Grade Students of SMAN 1 Sukorejo. The
result shows that she found seven grammatical errors in production verb group,
arrangement between subject and verb, the use of article, the use of preposition,
pluralization, the use of pronoun, and the use of conjunction. This study is
Students’ Writing Errors in Different Text Types: the Interference of the First
Language which shows that EFL students made writing errors and L1 interference
surely existed.
Iranian EFL Learners’ Writing Ability shows that the results of statistics
confirmed hypotheses 1 and 2 and shows that both groups performed significantly
better in their post-tests, and therefore, it can be indicated that both of instructions
addition, a journal of theory and practice in language studies made by Luu Trong
findings demonstrate that a genre-based approach based on the three phases of the
From all the studies above, it can be concluded that there are many ways
As the basis of doing this study, some theories which are closely related to the
topic of the study are presented in this session. The theories will support the
People use language to express their feelings, ideas, thoughts and convey
messages to others.
something. Kimble et. al. (1963:133) quoted by Brown (2000:7) state that learning
language and the other who helps him or her gain more information about the
language.
In this part, the general concept of writing will be discussed. The discussion will
explained as follows.
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means of the writing process, the product is generated. Sokolik in Nunan (2003:88)
states:
generating and organizing ideas which are presented in the form of sentences or
It has been stated that writing is also a way to produce language. It means that
grammar, functions and and lexis used can increase. It means that our knowledge
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good writing.
the type of paragraph that is being writen. The types of ordering are the
paragraph, the sentences must hold together; that is the movement from one
sentence to the next must be logical and smooth as stated by Oshima and Hogue
paragraph has cohesion when all the supporting sentences “stick together” in their
support of the topic senteces. In connecting sentences to each other, we need what
The third is unity. Boardman (2002:44) also states a paragraph has unity
when all the supporting sentences relate to the topic sentence. By fulfilling unity,
readers will understand that the paragraph just discusses about one topic.
that completeness of a paragraph can be achieved when all the major supporting
sentences fully explain the topic sentence, and all the minor supporting sentences
As one of the four language skills, writing like the other skills, is taught in schools
the realization, therefore, teaching writing is not so easy as just asking students to
oriented not only to the product, but also to the process of writing. Harmer
(2004:5-6) explains that writing is a recursive process. It means that in the process
of planning, drafting, revising and editing, we will often re-plan, re-draft and re-
edit before we get the product of writing. It deals with Meyer‟s opinion (2005:2-3)
that:
which give opportunities for students to learn specific writing skills, notably the
includes the process of re-plan, re-draft and re-edit. The expectation is that
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students will be able to produce the final products of writing which are
adult. Broadly speaking, teaching senior high school students is like teaching
teens because students at this educational level have ages between fifteen and
eighteen. According to Brown (2001:91-92), teens are they whose ages range
between twelve and eighteen. They are in between childhood and adulthood. At
the age, students begin to recognize something abstract and be able to use logical
capabilities.
Dealing with the explanation above, teaching writing in senior high school
is certainly harder than the lower level. The writing materials in senior high
school are more complicated although they have been taught at the lower level
which are more develop. In addition, writing is considered as the most difficult
skill to be mastered. Regarding the fact, teachers have to consider how they treat
their students in teaching writing. They need to use a teaching way which covers
senior high school students‟ need related to both the materials and the treatment.
When we talk about writing, it cannot be separated from the term „text‟. Many
events or knowledges are informed through texts. Mark and Kathy Anderson
(1997:1) simply state that a text is created when words are put together to
communicate meaning.
states “texts have a structure, they are orderly arrangements of words, clauses and
meanings”.
to readers.
There are many types of text within text itself. They are called genre. Gerot and
Wignell (1994:17) states that a genre can be defined as “a culturally specific text-
type which results from using language (written or spoken) to (help) accomplish
(1988:216) in Paltridge (1997:42). They argue that the notion of genre offers an
They are spoof, recount, report, analytical exposition, news item, anecdote,
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and reviews.
From the explanation above, there are a lot of genres in written language
and every genre has their social function. Then, descriptive text is chosen as a
genre of text to be discussed for carrying out of the study. The further explanation
senses, so it tells how something looks, feels, smells, tastes and/or sounds. It is in
line with Meyers (2005:60) who says that “a description of a scene allows your
Gerot and Wignell (1994:208) also define “descriptive text is a text which
has social function to describe a particular person, place, or thing”. In the context
of writing, every text has structure to compose it. Furthermore, Gerot and Wignell
There are also lexicogrammatical features of descriptive text. They are (1)
focus on specific participants; (2) use of simple present tense; (3) use of
attributive and identifyng process; and (4) frequent use of ephitets and classifiers
in nominal groups
Based on the theories above, we can conclude that descriptive text is a text
which describes something or someone so that the readers can look, feel, smells,
or taste what is told. To be like that, in writing descriptive text, writers need to
In the teaching and learning process, teachers may use media as tools to help them
teach the lesson to students. Gerlach and Ely (1980:241) state that “media are any
acquire knowledge, skills, and attitudes”. Meanwhile, Brown (1977:23) says that
media are tools or physical things used by teacher to facilitate the instructions so
Based on the definitions above, it can be concuded that media are any
process. Various media are available around us. For example, we can use pictures,
relia, and so on to teach the part of body. These kinds of media help students to
visually memorize the name and the function of the particular part.
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Gerlach and Ely (1980:297) further classify media in some categories: (1)
smaller than the thing represents; (2) audio recording which is in the form of
magnetic tape, disc, motion picture and soundtrack, which is the reproduction of
actual event or soundtrack; (3) motion picture which is a coloured or black and
white moving image generated from live action or graphic representation; (4)
television which includes all types of audio video electronic distribution system
which eventually appears on its monitor; and (5) real things, simulation and model,
that is all people, events, objects, and demonstration of real things are constructed
From the categories above, teachers can choose any kind of media which
choosing it. In order to facilitate teachers, Brown (1980:76) gives six principles of
selecting approriate media for teaching. They are summarized as follows: (1)
content, that is the media should have significant relation with the lesson; (2)
purpose, that is the media should contribute and facilitate the teaching and
learning process; (3) price, that is teachers should consider that the cost of media
is in accordance with the educational result regarded from its use; (4)
circumstance, that is teachers should consider how students‟ condition where they
teach in order to know whether or not the media would effectively function in the
environment; (5) learner‟s verification, that is teachers need to ensure that the
media have been tested to certain students; and (6) validation, that is teachers
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must consider whether there are data confirming that students learn accurately
above in order to get a better result of the teaching and learning process. In this
simulation and model. The next then will be explained about game and picture-
guessing game.
When doing teaching, teachers sometimes use games as media in delivering the
with rules, a goal and an element of fun”. Another definition says that
Games are a vital part of a teacher‟s equipment, not only for language
practice they provide, but also for the therapeutic effect they have. They
can be used at any stage of a class to provide an amusing and challenging
respite from other classroom activity and are especially useful at the end of
along day to send students away feeling cheerful about their English class.
(Harmer, 1991:101)
In addition, Phillips (1997:85) in quoting Al Zaabi (2007) states that
enjoyable and rewarding. Playing games in the classroom develops the ability to
delivering material in the teaching and learning process in order to get students‟
There are many types of game. One of them is guessing game. According to
in riddles or charades). Klippel (1984:31) states that the basic role of guessing
game is very simple. One person knows something that the other one wants to
find out. He further states “as the person guessing has a real urge to find out
something, guessing games are true communication situations and as such are
very important for foreign language learning. They are generally liked by students
of all ages because they combine language practice with fun and excitement".
From these, guessing game can be used in every level of age. In doing the
game, people sometimes make variation of it. Klippel argues “variation is a vital
ingredient of good games. You can try changing the rules of familiar games or
doing things in a different order, and you will find that one game idea can be the
variation of many kinds of guessing games. In this game, picture becomes the
thing to be guessed. This game requires students to logically guess what the
is explained as the followings: (1) the teacher gives explanation about picture-
guessing game; (2) the teacher gives a general clue before showing the first part of
the picture.; (3) the teacher continues the next clues, while showing the parts of
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the picture, until the picture is guessed.; (4) to guess the picture, each team has to
send a representative by raising his or her hand; and then (5) When the picture is
learning process.
techniques, more directive to students about how to work together in groups (than
together in group (pair or team) in order to accomplish their work. At the end of
the learning process, every individual is responsible for the result of learning.
2.2.5.1 Team-Pair-Solo
Some of them can be used in teaching writing. Those are roundtable, roundrobin,
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discussed further.
They are team, pair and finally solo. As a technique which started with teamwork,
It is the process by which different student come to know, trust, and respect their
In the first step of this technique, the students are usually asked to solve a
problem that is beyond the ability of the lower achieving students. After
each of them has successfully completed the goal, they break into pairs
and the partners each in turn do a problem like the one that was solved as a
team. Finally, each individual performs the similar problem alone,
applying what they learned first as a team and then during pair work. The
students, who initially could not solve the problem alone, now can. (Kagan,
2009: 4.7-8)
Team-pair-solo has some advantages. They are to develop social skill, to
acquiring social skill, the students become more polite, cooperative, respectful,
responsible, and able to resolve conflicts and to control their impulses (Kagan,
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2009:6.14). In other words, the students help, teach, and tutor each other. Using
this technique pools the students‟ knowledge or skill. If anyone on the team
knows how to do the problem, that skill gets transferred to the other teammates
during the first step of this technique (Kagan, 2009:12.6). The last but not the
which make students be able to tackle their problems in learning process in order
When doing a study for certain purposes, we cannot be separated from the use of
research method. In this case, there are many kinds of research method available
to support our study. In today‟s educational field, we often hear many people
choose action research in doing their study. The purpose of action research is to
develop new skills or new approaches and to solve problems with direct
period, many experts give contribution in developing action research. The next is
some definitions and more information about action research proposed by some
experts.
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study problems scientifically (our italics) so that they can evaluate, improve and
steer decision, making and practice. According to Carr and Kemmis (1986) as
justice of their own practices, and the situations in which those practices carried
out. Kemmis and Mc Taggart (1992:10) in Hartoyo (2011:87) also argue that to
do action research is to plan, act, observe and reflect more carefully, more
systematically, and more rigorously than one usually does in everyday life. Burns
improving the quality of action within it, involving the collaboration and co-
defines:
to gather information about the ways that their particular schools operates, how
they teach, and how well their students learn. The information is gathered with the
student outcomes.
From the definitions above, what is meant by action research in this study
classroom setting in order to improve their practice and student outcomes in the
teaching and learning process. As a systematic inquiry, action research has some
phases which have to be done. The phases are implemented in a cycle. They are
Therefore, through action research, teachers can plan what and how they
teach, then implement it to improve students‟ ability. During acting, they observe
their students‟ reaction toward the teaching and learning process, and then reflect
it to know how well the action is done and improves students‟ ability.
skills so that students are able to communicate and express in English at certain
informational, dan epistemic. For senior high school, students are expected to
are expected to be able to comprehend and produce several texts in the form of
(BSNP, 2006:126). In this study, the researcher focuses on descriptive text which
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is specially taught in the second semester of tenth grade. In making syllabus and
lesson plan as part of instruments for teaching, the researcher regards the
12. expressing the meaning of short functional text and simple essays in the form
of narrative, descriptive and news item in the context of daily life and to access
knowledge and 12.2. accurately, fluently, and acceptably, expressing the meaning
and the rethorical steps in simple essays in the context of daily life and to access
text. Then, she would investigate the improvement of the students‟ ability to write
descriptive text.
the study. The concept of action research used is proposed by Mills (2000). The
reason is that action research offers a systematic way of doing the action which
helps to improve not only teacher‟s practice or action in the classroom but also
student outcomes. It starts with planning, acting, observing, and then reflecting.
All those steps are implemented in what is called by cycle. Two cycles were
conducted in this study. The researcher took a class of the tenth grade students of
SMAN 1 Subah. The further explanation about the implementaion of this study
METHODS OF INVESTIGATION
This chapter presents the methods of investigation. It deals with seven subchapters.
They are subject of the study, roles of the researcher, type of data, instruments for
Classroom Action Research was done as the method of conducting this study. It
was because the research was done by doing some activities in a cycle to solve
problems emerge in the classroom so that both teacher practices and student
In the classroom, teachers often find some problems such as the students‟
difficulty in certain part of the lesson which cannot be achieved as the target
expected. In this case, teachers usually use classroom action research to improve
their practice in teaching and overcome the problems emerge. Regarding the fact,
this kind of action research was used to describe the use of picture-guessing game
improvement by doing the action. In this study, the researcher studied the students‟
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The researcher conducted two cyles in this study. Kemmis and Mc taggart
(1992) state that each cycle consisted of four phases which cover planning, acting,
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The study was conducted in SMA Negeri 1 Subah. There are eight classes of
grade ten in this school. The subject of this study was class X 8. The reason was
that the average of the students‟ achievement was the lowest among the other
The roles of the researcher in this study were a teacher, a data collector, and a data
analyzer. The researcher taught the materials to the students and collected the data
The type of data was qualitative data and quantitative data. The qualitative data
were obtained from observation sheet, questionnaire and interview, which were
In conducting this study, the data which supported the research findings were
collected through some instruments. The followings were the instruments for
classroom were observed while the teaching and learning process took place.
Observation checklist was used to obtain the data which described the
responses toward the learning media; and (3) students‟ responses toward team-
pair-solo technique. Each number has some items which were observed. Teacher‟s
performance was also observed during the action in order to help her do reflection
to the next action.The whole format of the observation was presented in appendix
3.5.2 Questionnaire
and learning process of writing descriptive text was obtained from the students.
The questionnaire made was based on five criteria from Heaton (1975) as
follows: (1) students‟ interest, (2) the relevance of the technique, (3) students‟
achievement, (4) the advantages of the technique, and (5) the sustainability of the
technique. The format of the questionnaire was close-ended question. There were
ten questions. The whole format of the observation was presented in appendix 5.
QUESTIONNAIRE
Answer the following question by giving a crosscheck (v).
3.5.3 Interview
Interview is mostly used in qualitative research. In this study, it was used to get
some information which was obtained from the English teacher after doing the
cycles. It contained five open-ended questions related to the teaching and learning
the classroom. The interview was also used to support the result of observation
The followings are some questions to be asked after doing the teaching and
learning process using picture-guessing game in team-pair-solo.
No. Questions Answers
1. What is your opinion about the
students‟ enthusiasm in teaching
writing using picture-guessing
game in implementing team-
pair-solo technique?
2. What do you think about the
students‟ participation in the
teaching and learning process using
picture-guessing game in
implementing team-pair-solo
technique?
3. And so on.
3.5.4 Tests
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study, the purpose of using test as an instrument was to support the qualitative
data in pointing out the improvement of the students‟ ability to write descriptive
addition to the other instruments, the test was one of the indicators of improving
the students‟ ability. The test was in the form of composition which was analyzed
by writing rubric. The writing rubric was presented by Boardman and Frydenberg
(2002:180). The test was administered at the end of each cycle. There were two
tests conducted after pre-assessment. They were cycle one test and cycle two test.
The results of each test indicated whether or not the students‟ ability improved.
The form of the them could be seen in appendix 7, 8, and 9. The following was
Pre-Assessment
Instruction
Make a descriptive text with your own words in 40 minutes. The topic is „My
Favourite Character‟. Pay attention to the generic structure of it.
In this action research, two cycles were conducted to collect the data. Each cycle
consisted of four phases: planning, acting, observing and reflecting. Before doing
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the cycles, lesson plan which contained the material taught was prepared. The
3.6.1 Pre-observation
In this activity, the researcher obtained the data about the students‟ ability to write
descriptive text by asking the English teacher. The result of pre-observation was
3.6.2 Pre-Assessment
purpose was to measure the students‟ ability to write descriptive text and identify
the students‟ difficulty in each aspect of writing before doing the action. In this
kind of assessment, the students were asked to compose a descriptive text. Each
student had to write the text in 40 minutes. The topic was about My Favourite
As having been explained, every cycle consisted of four phases. The followings
a. Planning
For the cycle one, a plan was made as the first step before doing the action. The
(2) The teacher prepared the media, that was picture-guessing game.
(3) The teacher prepared observation checklist to obtain the data needed.
b. Acting
Acting was the next step done in this cycle after planning. The action was
described as follows:
(1) The teacher greeted the students and checked the attendance list.
(3) The teacher gave building knowledge of the field by conducting picture-
guessing game.
(4) The teacher asked the students to guess based on the clues given.
(5) The teacher asked the students to move to a group of two or pair.
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(6) The teacher gave instruction to the students to list as much as information
(7) The teacher asked the students to write the information in the form of
complete sentences.
(8) The teacher asked the students to make a descriptive text as a first draft
(12) The teacher and the students made a conclusion of the lesson.
c. Observing
In this cycle, what was observed is all items in observation checklist. It included
responses toward the learning media, and students‟ responses toward team-pair-
solo technique. It was done while the teacher was doing the action.
d. Reflecting
The students‟ result of the teaching and learning process and the use of picture-
session, the result of cycle one test was analyzed and scored.
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Cycle one test was conducted after the action in cycle one. Through this test, the
improvement of the students‟ ability to write descriptive text was known. It could
be seen if the cycle one test result increased from the pre-assessment result. In this
test, the teacher gave every student a worksheet to do the test. Each student wrote
a final draft of descriptive text they previously made as first draft. Individually,
they had to a compose a text with the topic Charlie Chaplin. They were given 40
Cycle two was conducted with similar activities in cycle one after finding out the
weakness of cycle one. In other words, it aimed to solve the problem emerging in
cycle one. In addition, it also gave opportunities for the students to learn more
spent much time and made uncontrolled noise. Second, the way the students wrote
the text related to generic structure and grammar, especially simple present tense,
and punctuation had not been as expected yet. Third, in solo, there were several
students who did not focus on their own work. The last was about the teacher
instruction which was quite complicated. The sentences used were too long to be
understood.
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implemented in the action was revised. First, the teacher divided the group and
gave each group label. Second, the number of picture-guessing game was added to
help the students aware of simple present sentences and facilitate them more
knowledge how to write descriptive text related to the generic structure of the text.
So, the text they produced would be readable and interesting. Third, when the
students worked as individual (solo), their seats were arranged by giving space
among them. The last but not the least was the teacher simplified the instructions
in order to make the students understand about what they should do.
was hoped that the action would be conducted better and the student outcomes
also improved.
Cycle two test was conducted at the end of cycle two. As the cycle one test, the
could be seen if the cycle two test result increased from the cycle one test result.
In this test, the teacher gave every student a worksheet to do the test. Each student
wrote a final draft of descriptive text they previously made as first draft in cycle
two. Individually, they had to a compose a text with the topic Jeng Kelin. Jeng
Kelin itself is a funny and unique character played by Nycta Gina, a host of
3.6.7 Observation
Observation was conducted during the action in each cycle. There were two kinds
During the teaching and learning process, the items stated in the observation
3.6.8 Questionnaire
After all cycles were done, questionnaire was given to each student in order to get
the students‟ response. The students had to fill ten questions related to the use of
gave ten minutes so that the students could answer the whole questions and
submitted it. Before that, the teacher explained about team-pair-solo. It was the
3.6.9 Interview
Interview was also conducted after questionnaire had been administered. Through
interview, some information about the teaching and learning activities was
obtained from the English teacher. Some questions were asked to the teacher to
After obtaining the data needed, they were analyzed. The analysis was conducted
After the data from observation sheets of two cycle were obtained, the researcher
did the analysis of them. Each item of the observation checklist of two cycles was
described. After all items were described, the conclusion of the observation result
was drawn in order to know how the students‟ response when they were taught to
solo technique.
Based on the conclusion, it was expected that the observation result could
technique to teach writing descriptive text and to help the students improve their
Questionnaire was analyzed to find out the opinion about the students‟ interest,
the relevance, the advantages, the students‟ achievement and the sustainability
toward the action. There were ten items of questionnaire that described the
criteria. First, the analysis began with calculating the percentage of each item. It
was known how many percentage the students who answered Yes or No. After all
items were calculated, the data obtained were described. Then, the conclusion was
At the end, the conclusion was expected to be able to explain that there
was good result of the five criteria. So, it could support the result of observation in
the previous.
The result of teacher‟s interview was firstly transcribed. Then, the data from each
question were explained to find out the English teacher‟ opinion about the
implementation of the action. After all data explained, the conclusion of them was
Based on the conclusion, it was expected that the result of interview could
technique in the teaching and learning process. At the end, it gave contribution in
supporting the results of the other two instruments to answer the first research
question.
The result of tests was analyzed by doing analytical scoring. The analytic scale
appendix 10. There were five components to be measured. They were content,
organization, grammar or structure, word choice and mechanics. The total score
After all scores were obtained, they were categorized based on Harris‟
follows:
After collecting the the data, the next step was analyzing them. The test
achievement was analyzed by finding the mean score of each test. To know
whether or not there was improvement, the researcher saw the mean score of each
test whether or not the score achieved KKM (Kriteria Ketuntasan Minimal) or the
standard score criteria of 70.00. The formula of calculating the mean was shown
as follows:
Mean = ∑x
observation, questionnaire, and interview while the quantitative data from tests of
cycle one and cycle two would be reported by doing informal statistical
calculation.
CHAPTER IV
This chapter presents result and discussion. It includes research activity, analysis
Classroom Action Research had been conducted in five meetings at SMA Negeri
students. Firstly, pre-assessment was conducted on April 10, 2013 in order to plan
the action of cycle one. Then, she continued the study by doing the action. She did
two cycles. Each cycle consisted of two meetings. The first meeting of cycle one
was on April 13, 2013. The second meeting was on April 24, 2013. Cycle two was
conducted on April 27 and May 1, 2013. These four meetings were the
implementation of the action of cycle one and two. The schedule was described as
follows:
Cycle 1 Cycle 2
Pre-
Date (2013) First Second First Second
Assessment
Meeting Meeting Meeting Meeting
April 10
April 13
April 24
April 27
May 1
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described as follows.
4.1.1 Planning
As the first phase of this research, planning was done. Initially, pre-observation
was interviewed, and the students‟ products of writing were asked. Then, pre-
assessment was done for planning in cycle one. The purpose was to measure the
students‟ ability in writing descriptive text and identify the students‟ difficulty of
each aspect of writing before doing the action. At that time, how well the students‟
08.30. It was followed by 34 students. In this activity, each student was asked to
pre-assessment, the students were given worksheet. They were also given the
explanation about what they should do in this activity. Each student did the test
individually. They wrote texts as the teacher instruction. After analyzing the
students‟ work, the result was unsatisfactory because the students‟ average score
did not achieve the standard score criteria which the school set up. The mastery of
action of cycle one was made. First, lesson plan was prepared based on school-
based curriculum. Second, observation checklist for the observer was also
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process. In the class, the supporting tools such as LCD and camera were also
prepared.
In cycle two, the researcher did the similar activities, but minor revision in
planning was done to conduct better action. Furthermore, the study was continued
4.1.2 Action
The researcher conducted two cycles in her study. The implementation of the
4.1.2.1 Cycle 1
pre-assessment, the researcher began to do cycle one. In cycle one, the action was
done in two meetings on April 13 and April 24, 2013. The first meeting was that
the researcher began the action. The second meeting was that she continued the
action and administered the cycle one test. These two meetings were
This meeting was conducted on April 13, 2013. As the beginning of the lesson,
the teacher opened the activity by greeting the students. She checked the
attendance list. In fact, there were 36 students who joined the lesson.
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The teacher began the main activity of the teaching and learning process.
There were three stages in this activity. They were exploration, elaboration and
confirmation. First was exploration. In this stage, the material of the previous
meeting was reviewed. The teacher did question and answer. The students‟
knowledge was explored by asking them what descriptive text is. Two students, A
and B, raised their hands. After the teacher pointed one of them, the student A
answered that descriptive text is a text that describes someone or something. Then,
another one was pointed before the conclusion about the definition of descriptive
text was given. The student B then answered that descriptive text is made to
describe a person or a thing. From their answers, the teacher conveyed that
In the next activity, the teacher explained what they were going to do in
this lesson. She told that they would do picture-guessing game. The purpose of the
game itself was to give building knowledge of the field related to the lesson to the
students. Before that, the students were asked to make a group of six as a team.
They chose the members of the team by themselves, so they took much time in
this activity. Then, the rules of the game were explained. At first, they did not
understand how they did the game. Consequently, the instructions were repeated
When everything was ready, the game was started. First, the teacher asked
Are you ready, guys? to the students to check the students‟ readiness. Second, she
gave the general clue about the picture. The clue was He is a man. Each clue was
read twice. At that time, there was not any student who tried to guess. They
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waited for the next clue together with a cut of picture appeared. Then, the teacher
gave the second clue. It was He wears a hat. When a part of picture was seen,
there was not also any student who raised their hands. The game was continued by
giving the next clue. It was He has a mustache. There was discussion from some
teams. When the next part of the picture appeared, some students in their teams
seemed having the answer but they were not sure to guess. So, they waited for the
fourth clue. When the clue He likes wearing a bowtie, was given, there was a
student who guessed the picture. Unfortunately, he did not raise his hand. It made
the condition little uncontrolled because almost all students spoke to guess
Finally, the fifth clue was given. It was He always brings a stick wherever
he goes. After the clue was read and the next part of the picture was showed, some
students as the representative of their team raised their hands to guess the picture.
The teacher pointed the fastest one who had right to guess. The student pointed
correctly answered the picture. He guessed that the picture was Charlie Chaplin. It
The second stage was elaboration. In this stage, the students firstly moved
to a group of two. Like making a group of six, they slowly chose their partner, so
it also took time. In pair, the students had to discuss the information they got
about Charlie Chaplin with his or her partner as much as possible. Each of them in
group had to write the information in the form of complete sentences. Some
groups actively discussed about it. After they wrote the information on paper, the
next activity of this stage was that the students conducted solo activity. They were
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asked to practice making a draft of descriptive text based on the information got.
They were asked to do it individually. However, there were several students who
It was the last activity in this meeting because the time was almost over.
The last stage of the main activity would be continued in the next meeting. Finally,
The second meeting was conducted on April 24, 2013. The teacher opened the
meeting by greeting the students and checked the attendance list. There were 35
students who attended the class. Like the previous meeting, the objective of the
lesson was stated before beginning it. The agendas of the second meeting were
continuing the action of the first meeting and conducting the cycle one test.
To begin the last stage of the main activity of the action, that was
confirmation, the drafts of descriptive text about Charlie Chaplin were shared to
the students. After each student had received their work, the teacher gave
explanation what to do. Next, the students were asked to read their work. First,
some volunteers were asked to read in front of the class. There were only two girls
who were willing to do it. They were Sandyarti and Mita. Then, they read their
first drafts in turn. Afterwards, three students were pointed. They are Dicky, Isna,
and Setya. They also read their drafts in turn. After all were finished, the students
were asked to give applause to all their friends who had read in front of the class.
As the last activity of this stage, the students were invited to give assessment to
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whose draft was the best. Almost all students agreed that Sandyarti‟s was the best
at that time. Then, the teacher and the students gave applause to Sandyarti.
Next, the cycle one test was administered. The teacher shared worksheet to
do the test. After receiving the worksheet, the students were asked to read the
instructions stated on worksheet first before doing the test. Then, the test was
exactly started at 09.55. Individually, the students had to write a descriptive text
about Charlie Chaplin based on the draft they had met. They could develop and
edit their draft so that they produced good descriptive texts. The students were
also asked to pay attention to the structure of the text. They were given 40 minutes
to do the test. The purpose of the test was to know the improvement of the
desk. It was the end of cycle one. Before leaving the class, she greeted the
Cycle two was also conducted in two meetings on April 27 and on May 1, 2013.
In cycle two, the researcher did minor revision. It was because the action of cycle
one was effective. The students had improvement seen from the test result as one
of the indicators whether or not the students‟ ability improved. Their average
score of the cycle one test was 71.68 which had exceeded the standard score of
70.00. However, the researcher had to conduct cycle two by doing revision on the
implementation of the action of cycle two so that the action could be more
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descriptive text. It was also expected that time consuming would be more
effective.
one. The weaknesses were about grouping which took long time, the way the
students wrote the text related to generic structure and grammar, the students‟
weaknesses found, the plan which was implemented in the action of this cycle was
This meeting was conducted on April 27, 2013. It began at 09.30. Before that, the
teacher prepared LCD which would be used to conduct the game. When the bell
rang and the students were ready to study, the teacher greeted the students. She
checked the attendance list. There were 35 students who joined the lesson. The
last activity of this opening session was telling the objective of the lesson.
In the main activity, the teacher did three stages like in cycle one. The first
recalled. The teacher asked some questions. The students answered the questions.
After finishing the question and answer session, the students were asked to make a
group of six. At this time, the teacher decided to divide the members of the group
and gave each team a label started from number one to number six. The purpose
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was to eliminate consuming much time in the process of grouping and also avoid
uncontrolled noise. The rules of the game were explained. Actually, the rules were
the same as the ones in cycle one. But, simpler sentences were used in conveying
the instructions.
In this action, the teacher provided three pictures. They were the picture of
game about Micheal Jackson, group two was correctly guessed it because of the
fourth clue. Then, the game was continued with the second picture about Si unyil.
After the third clue was read, the representative of group five became the fastest
one who raised his hand. So, he was given a chance to guess it. The teacher asked
Who is he?. He answered Unyil. She repeated to ask Who is he? with the slower
tone. Then, he said He is Unyil. It was intended to make the students realize about
Next, the students were asked to restate and add more characteristics of Si
Unyil after observing the whole picture. Enthusiastically, they answered. But,
some students were pointed to answer in complete sentences. When it was enough,
the students were asked what the generic structure of descriptive text was. Almost
all students answered that the generic structure of descriptive text was
description was orally given based on the characteristics of Si Unyil which had
been identified in the previous. Afterwards, a student was asked to repeat making
identification and description by writing it on the whiteboard. The next step was
After finishing the parts above, the teacher continued with the last game.
Like the previous, the students‟ readiness was asked first. The game was started
with a general clue. It was She is a woman. There was not any student who tried
to guess. Then, the second clue was read while she showed a part of the picture.
The clue was Her hair was short. There was not anyone who answered. She asked
Do you want the next clue?. The students enthusiastically answered Yes, Miss.
The game was continued by reading the clue with the next part of the picture
appeared. The clue was She likes wearing a pink flower dress. There was not also
any student who guessed. Then, the fourth clue She always brings a bag was read.
In this time, some teams began to have active discussion, but there was not any
student who guessed. Finally, group six could guess that the picture was Jeng
Kelin after the clue She has small lips and pink orbs on her cheek was read and
The next stage was elaboration. Like in cycle one, the students were asked
to move to a group of two. They worked in pair to collect the information about
Jeng Kelin. Then, each student had to write the information on paper though they
descriptive text about Jeng Kelin, they arranged their seats by giving space among
their seats. It was intended to make them more focus on doing their work and not
The confirmation was conducted in the second meeting because the time
was almost over. As the last activity in this first meeting of cycle two, the teacher
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and the students together summarized the lesson. Then, the teacher greeted the
This meeting was conducted on May 1, 2013. It began at 08.30. She greeted the
students to began the lesson and checked the attendance list. She also told the
objective of the lesson. In this meeting, the teacher continued the action of cycle
two. The last stage of the main activities, that was confirmation, was conducted.
The activities were actually similar with the cycle one activities. The students
were asked to read their work in front of the class. When it was finished, the cycle
Initially, the students were asked to arrange their seats. They had to give
space among their seats. The purpose was to make them more focus on doing the
test. Then, the worksheets to do the test were shared. The students had to write a
descriptive text about Jeng Kelin based on their previous draft individually. They
were given 40 minutes to do the test. After they were finished, they submitted
their work.
The next activity was answering questionnaire. The students had to answer
pair-solo technique to teach writing descriptive text. After all questionnaires were
submitted, the students were invited to summarize the lesson that they had studied.
This was the end of cycle two. To close the lesson, the teacher greeted the
students.
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4.1.3 Observation
The observation was done during the action of two cycles. The observer was
the class began. During the teaching and learning process, she observed the
students‟ behaviour, the students‟ response toward the learning media, the
4.1.4 Reflection
After conducted the teaching and learning process, the teacher evaluated the
implementation of the action and analyzed the instruments used to obtain the data
needed. When it was found some problems related to the implementation of the
action, the students‟ response during teaching and learning process, or the
unsatisfactory result of the tests, revision of planning of the next cycle was done
4.2 Analysis
The observation was done while the action of each cycle was being conducted. At
that time, the students‟ performance and the teacher‟s performance were observed.
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In classroom observation sheet, there were twenty items which described the
students‟ behavior during the teaching and learning process, the students‟
response toward the learning media, and the students‟ response toward team-pair-
in cycle one indicated that the teacher missed doing some points written in the
checklist. First, the teacher forgot to communicate the objective of the lesson and
summarize the lesson at the end of activity. Second, the teacher instructions were
not clear and specific. Third, the teacher less praised their students toward their
work. These points were the matter in order to revise the plan of the next action in
cycle two. Therefore, the result of teacher observation checklist in cycle two
indicated that the teacher had better performance in the teaching process.
Furthermore, the analysis of classroom observation checklist in cycle one and two
When doing the action of cycle one, the students‟ reaction and responses were
observed during the teaching and learning process. The result was to describe
the whole students in the class paid attention to the teacher‟s explanation. It was
categorized as medium.
Item number 2 showed that only few students gave comment or question
Item number 3 showed that almost (or) a half of the whole students paid
Item number 4 explained that almost (or) a half of the whole students did
the assignments appropriate with the teacher instruction. It indicated that the
Item number 5 showed that only few students motivated each other. It was
categorized as low.
Item number 7 explained that almost all students seriously observed the
Item number 8 explained that all students were interested in trying to guess
the picture by focusing on the clue given. The category was high.
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Item number 9 showed that there were several students who actively
discussed with their friends to guess the picture. The category was medium.
four groups raised their hands to guess the picture. The category was medium.
toward the learning media (picture-guessing game). The average of the students‟
Item number 11 explained that almost (or) a half of the whole students
were enthusiastic in making a group of six in less than three minutes. The
Item number 12 showed that in team, almost (or) the whole students
helped each other finish the task. The cateory was medium.
and analyzed every cut of the picture. The category was high.
Item number 14 explained that almost (or) a half of all students in the class
actively discussed to guess the picture in team. The category was medium.
Item number 15 explained that almost (or) a half of the whole students
enthusiastically made a group of two or pair group in less than one minute. It
Item number 16 showed that almost (or) a half of all students were
Item number 17 gave the result that almost (or) a half of the groups which
Item number 18 showed that there were several students who helped each
other to collect the information got. So, the category was medium.
Item number 19 was that all students individually made descriptive text at
Item number 20 as the last item gave the result that almost (or) a half of
the whole students focused on doing their work. The category was medium.
students‟ response toward team-pair-solo technique. The results showed that the
The reason was that the things observed gave the positive results as discussed
above. It was regarded from the three categories, those were high, medium, and
low. There were 4 items or 20% which were categorized as high, 11 items or 55%
which were categorized as medium, and 5 items or 25% which were categorized
as low. In short, overall the students‟ response was good when they joined
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technique.
The observation was also conducted in cycle two. The students were observed
during the action. The description of observation result was presented as follows:
Item number 1 showed that almost all students paid attention to the
Item number 2 gave the result that almost (or) a half of the whole students
Item number 3 showed that almost all students paid attention to and did the
Item number 4 explained that almost (or) a half of the whole students did
the assignments appropriate with the teacher instruction. It indicated that the
In item number 5, there were several students who motivated each other.
Item number 6 explained that almost all students enjoyed playing picture-
described that almost all items to be observed showed better results from cycle
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one. There were the improvement of the students‟ behavior to be better during the
Item number 7 gave the same result of cycle one that almost all students
Item number 8 showed that that all students were interested in trying to
guess the picture by focusing on the clue given. The category was high.
Item number 9 was the same as the result in cycle one that there were
several students who actively discussed with their friends to guess the picture. The
raised their hands to guess the picture. The category became high.
toward the learning media (picture-guessing game). The average of the students‟
Item number 11 gave the result was that all students were enthusiastic in
making a group of six in less than three minutes. The category was high.
Item number 12 showed the same result that in team, almost (or) the whole
students helped each other finish the task. The category was medium.
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Item number 13 had the same as the result of cycle one that cooperatively
almost all students observed and analyzed every cut of the picture. The category
was high.
group of two or pair group in less then one minute. So, the category became high.
The same result was shown in item number 16 that almost (or) a half of all
students were involved in discussion of pair group. So, the category was medium.
Item number 17 gave the same result of cycle one that almost (or) a half of
the groups which the members shared ideas. The category was medium.
Meanwhile, item number 18 showed that there were many students who
helped each other to collect the information got. The category became high.
Item number 19 was that all students individually made descriptive text at
The last but not the least, item number 20 was that almost all students
pair-solo technique. It could be seen that almost all items showed the impovement.
Every step of the technique was well implemented based on the results.
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Based on the result above, there was improvement of the students reaction
and response in cycle two. Most of the students had better response toward the use
writing descriptive text than in cycle one. Seen from the categories, there were 12
items or 60% which were categorized as high, and 8 items or 40% which were
concluded that the students‟ response were getting better in the action of cycle
two. They enjoyed and were also enthusiastic in joining the lesson. So, they
followed the teacher instruction well. At the end, they produced better descriptive
texts.
diagram:
70% 60%
60% 55%
50% 40%
40%
25% Observation I
30% 20%
20% Observation II
10% 0%
0%
Low Medium High
From the diagram above, it described that the students‟ response during
teaching and learning process using the game and the technique was good in the
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action of cycle one. It was getting better when the action of cycle two was
text.
The questionnaire was administered at the end of meeting on May 1, 2013. The
purpose of questionnaire was to get the information related to the use of picture-
learning process of writing descriptive text from the students. The students were
questions represented the five criteria. They were students‟ interest, the relevance
of the technique, students‟ achievement, the advantages of the technique, and the
sustainibility of the technique. There were 35 students who joined this session and
34 students‟ works which were taken for analysis. Moreover, the detail result of
Question number 1 was Are you happy when you joined teaching writing
technique?. All students or 34 students answered Yes. The percentage was 100%.
writing descriptive text?. All students or 34 students also answered Yes. The
students who answered Yes. Only one student or 2.94% of the students who
answered No.
implementing team-pair-solo help you write descriptive text well and correctly?.
There were 28 students or 82.35% of the students who answered Yes. Meanwhile,
Question number 6 was Are you motivated to learn during the teaching
and learning process?. In this question, all students or 34 students answered Yes.
teaching and learning process?. In this question, there were 31 students or 91.18%
of the students answered Yes whereas only 3 students or 8.82% of the students
answered No.
descriptive text?. 33 students or 97.06% of the students answered Yes. And only
descriptive text?. There were 33 students or 97.06% of the students who answered
Yes whereas only one student or 2.94% of the students who answered No.
Question number 10 was In your opinion, is there any advantage you got
which was described by question number 1 and 6, the relevance which was
question number 7 and 8, and the advantage which was described by question
number 9 and 10 were good. It was because the average of the question result of
each question indicated that more than 50% of the students answered Yes or gave
teach writing descriptive text, so the students were motivated in joining the lesson.
Interview was done after all cycles were finished. The purpose was to get the
solo technique from the English teacher. There were five questions. The interview
From the first question What is your opinion about the students’
enthusiasm was very good. It could be seen from their attention to the game until
From the second question What is your opinion about the students’
participation in every step done was also good. They did almost all instructions
From the third question What is your opinion about the use of picture-
descriptive text?, she said that this technique could be used to teach writing
descriptive text because it facilitated the students to write the text. It gave sources
and a way in composing the text. In group, they could also help each other collect
ideas. Finally, they remained to make the text by individual to measure their own
ability.
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From the fourth question What is your opinion about the way to teach the
she said that it was quite good. There was improvement from cycle one to cycle
pair-solo technique.
From the last question What difficulty do you find in the teaching and
technique?, she said that in solo, the students were rather difficult to really focus
on doing their work without asking their friend. It was necessary to give extra
interview supported the observation and questionnaire results about the game and
team-pair-solo technique was good to teach writing descriptive text. It also helped
the students improve their ability to write descriptive text. In this study, the
improvement could be seen by regarding the test results which were presented in
writing descriptive text. The weaknesses were regarded not only from the score
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but also from the students‟ mastery of the aspects of writing. They were used to
plan the action in cycle one. The result of this test showed that the mean score was
unsatisfactory. The mean score of pre-assessment was 61.14, in which the highest
score was 77 and the lowest score was 38. The detail result of pre-assessment
Pre-Assessment
8.80%
Poor
20.60%
Poor to Fair
Fair to Good
70.60%
Good to Excellent
Here is the table that shows the students‟ level achievement in each aspect
of writing:
Word
No. Content Organozation Grammar Mechanics
Choice
1. Execptional
2. Very good 5 1 1
3. Average 19 21 16 14 14
4. Needs work 10 12 17 20 20
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Total 34 34 34 34 34
From diagram 4.2, there were not the students‟ scores which were in good
the rest was in the other classification. Regarding to Boardman and Frydenberg
Analytical Scale (2002, 180), it could be seen that almost all students had
difficulties in each aspect. More or less a half of them in need work level in all
aspects. The rest was in average level and very few of them were in good level.
Moreover, the mean score had not achieved the standard score which the school
set up. It was that the students had to get minimum score 70.00 to be considered
From the data in appendix 11 and the explanation above, it could be said
that the students‟ ability to write descriptive text was lack. This result was the
matter in order to make a plan for conducting the action in cycle one. They were
given not only more knowledge related to the text, but also media and technique
to facilitate them in understanding how to write descriptive text well and correctly.
Later, the action was expected to overcome or reduce the students‟ difficulties in
each aspect above so that the students could improve their ability to write
descriptive text.
Cycle one test was administered in the second meeting on April 24, 2013. There
were 34 students‟ work which were scored. In this test, each student wrote a
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descriptive text about Charlie Chaplin. The students were given 40 minutes to do
the test. From the calculation, the mean score of this test was 71.68, in which the
highest score was 83 and the lowest score was 46. The detail result of cycle one
test could be seen in appendix 12. The distribution of the students‟ cycle one test
Poor
Poor to Fair
Fair to Good
Good to Excellent
85.29%
The following table shows the students‟ level achievement in each aspect
of writing:
Word
No. Content Organization Grammar Mechanics
Choice
1. Execptional
2. Very good 18 13 6 3 4
3. Average 11 18 23 25 19
4. Needs work 5 3 5 6 11
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Total 34 34 34 34 34
The researcher did the analysis of cycle one test after cycle one was done.
As stated above, the mean score of cycle one test was 71.68. The score increased
8.33 from the mean score of pre-assessment. From the diagram 4.3, it could be
seen that the students‟ scores became better than the pre-assessment scores. Based
on the result of cycle one test, the students‟ scores in fair to good reached 85.29%
From the table 4.3, it could be seen that the students‟ achievement in all
need work level and most of the rest in average level. Nevertheless, almost all of
tended to forget the identification and directly wrote the description. In grammar,
as most of foreign students did, they were lack of attention in tenses used, that
was present tense, and other grammar errors. In mechanics, most of students did
not pay attention to punctuation. They also made error in spelling. Therefore, the
researcher conducted cycle two. Some steps in cycle two were revised. The focus
mechanics as discussed above. The researcher added more games in cycle two in
order to facilitate the students improve their ability to write descriptive text.
Cycle two test was conducted in the last meeting on May 1, 2013. There were 34
students‟ work analyzed. Each student wrote a descriptive text about Jeng Kelin.
The students were given 40 minutes to do the test. From the calculation, the
average score of the test result was 79.15, in which the highest score was 88 and
the lowest score was 54. The detail result of cycle two test could be seen in
appendix 13. The following diagram described the distribution of the students‟
Poor
41.18% Poor to Fair
55,88% Fair to Good
Good to Excellent
Here is the table that shows the students‟ level achievement in each aspect
of writing:
Word
No. Content Organozation Grammar Mechanics
Choice
1. Execptional
2. Very good 24 25 25 19 18
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3. Average 10 8 8 14 13
4. Needs work 1 1 1 3
Total 34 34 34 34 34
In cycle two test, the researcher also did the analysis of the data obtained.
As stated above, the mean score of cycle two test was 79.14. There was the
improvement from cycle one test. It increased 7.47 point from cycle one test.
Diagram 4.2 showed that the students‟ score in good to excellent classification
was 55.88%. 41.18% was in fair to good classification. The rest of 2.94% was in
poor to fair classification. The result indicated that almost all students‟ scores
significantly increased. More than a half of the students were at very good level in
all aspects. It indicated that the problems faced in cycle one about organization,
grammar and mechanics could be overcome. They organized their writing well by
giving the identification before the description. They also used correct grammar
and spelling verbs used so that they could produced better writing.
From the explanation of the analysis above, it could be concluded that the
students‟ ability to write descriptive text improved from cycle one to cycle two. It
was regarded from the mean score obtained and the students‟ achievement in each
aspect of writing.
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Briefly, the students‟ improvement seen from the mean score of all tests
79.15
80 71.68
70 61.14
60
50
40
30
20
10
0
Pre-Assessment Cycle One Test Cycle Two Test
The mean score of tests
Based on the diagram above, it could be seen that the chart which
technique during teaching learning process improved the students‟ ability to write
descriptive text.
4.3 Discussion
This research was firstly started by doing pre-observation in order to know the
students‟ ability to write descriptive text from the English teacher. Then, the
researcher did pre-assessment to measure how well the students wrote descriptive
text at that time. The results indicated that most of the students had problem in
writing, especially in content, organization of the text, grammar, word choice and
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unsatisfactory.
From the result above, a plan was made to conduct the use of picture-
students‟ ability to write the text could improve. To know how picture-guessing
interview and test were used as instruments to obtain the data needed. They were
discussed as follows:
questions in the statement of problems were answered. First, the analysis result of
observation result, the students‟ behavior during the teaching and learning process,
the students‟ response toward picture-guessing game, and the students‟ response
checklist of two actions, the students had good interest and enthusiam in learning
process of the action of cycle one and became better in the action of cycle two
because of the revision done. From the questionnaire result, it was also found that
the students were motivated in learning writing descriptive text using picture-
guessing game in team-pair-solo technique. The game and the technique helped
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them in the process of writing descriptive text. Moreover, the interview result
which was obtained from the English teacher strengthened the observation and
questionnaire results that the students were enthusiastic and participated the
beacuse by implementing the game as a part of the technique during the teaching
and learning process, the students gave positive response in each activity done.
They were motivated to join the lesson. Finally, it helped them to write
The analysis result of the tests showed that the students‟ ability to write
descriptive text improved. From the mean score of each test, there was significant
improvement. The students‟ average score, which had not reached the minimum
score in pre-assessment at the beginning, achieved more than the standard score in
cycle one and improved again in cycle two. From the students„ achievement in
mechanics, which were the problems faced by most of the students, became better
and better. So, at the end of cycle two, they produced their writing better than
before they joinned teaching writing using the game and the technique. Therefore,
it could be said that the teaching and learning process using picture-guessing
descriptive text based on the analysis result of test as a distinct indicator of the
improvement.
As many previous studies conducted, there were also some obstacles the
solo technique to teach writing. First was about the time management and students‟
readiness in learning process. It was because this way had never been done by the
English teacher to teach the students yet. They had to adapt to it. They needed to
characteritic of senior high school students which was active tended to be noisy.
Second, related to the technique, that was team-pair-solo, the teacher need to give
more attention when conducting solo step. The students tended not to focus on
their work. They were rather difficult to move to work as individual after they did
two activities in group, those were team and pair. However, these obstacles could
be overcome so that the teaching and learning process remained to take place as
expected.
CHAPTER V
This chapter presented conclusion and suggestion based on the study which had
5.1 Conclusion
Regarding to the statement of the problem and the result of the analysis and
discussion in the previous chapter, there are some conclusions which can be
good to teach writing descriptive text. In cycle one, the teacher used the picture of
Charlie Chaplin to deliver the game to teach the students descriptive text whereas
she used the picture of Michael Jackson, Si Unyil and Jeng Kelin in cycle two.
understand the material well, so the students can produce better descriptive texts
than before at the end of the lesson. The students gave positive response by
showing their interest, enthusiasm and motivation during the action. It was known
technique can improve the students‟ ability to write descriptive text. It was shown
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that the results of the tests as one of the indicators of the improvement gave
71.68 in cycle one test and 79.15 in cycle two test. Moreover, the improvement is
5.2 Suggestion
to improve the students‟ ability to write descriptive text had been done. Some
technique to teach writing has to be prepared well because using both the game
and the technique means that there will be many steps which have to be done. The
media and the clear instructions for every step need to be prepared in order to
make students understand what to do and make the time more effective.
Second, because descriptive text is not only taught in senior high school
level, but also in other school levels, the English teacher can use picture-guessing
for teaching, especially writing, or use it to teach the other kinds of text type with
variation.
The last but not the least was that this research finding can give
information or knowledge for readers and become reference for other researchers.
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Appendix 1
STUDENTS’ CODE
Appendix 2
LESSON PLAN
Subject : English
Class/Semester :X/2
Cycle : Writing
A. Competence Standard
12. Writing
Expressing the meaning of short functional text and simple essays in the form
of narrative, descriptive and news item in the context of daily life and to
access knowledge
B. Basic Competence
12.2. Writing
C. Indicator
1. Comprehending the parts of speech such as adjective and verb (present
tense).
2. Expressing simple sentences used in descriptive text.
3. Producing descriptive text.
D. Learning Objective
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1. Students are able to comprehend the parts of speech such as adjective and
verb (present tense).
2. Students are able to express simple sentences used in descriptive text.
3. Students are able to write descriptive text.
E. Learning Material
Descriptive text
Picture-guessing game about Charlie Chaplin
F. Methods/Technique
Cooperative Learning: Team-pair-solo
G. Learning Activities
Cycle One
Learning Time
Activities
Activity Allocation
Opening - The teacher greets the students. 10‟
- The teacher checks the attendance list.
- The teacher tells the learning objective.
Core Structural Individual
Face-to-Face
Assignment Assignment
Exploration - The teacher 75‟
asks the
previous
material.
- The teacher
explains about
picture-
guessing game
and its rule.
- The teacher
asks the
students to
make a group of
six.
- The teacher
conducts
picture-
guessing game
as building
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knowledge of
the field.
- The teacher
Elaboration asks the
students to
guess based on
the clues given.
- The teacher
asks the
students to
make a group of
two or in pair.
- The teacher
gives
instruction to
the students to
list as much as
information in
pair after doing
picture-
guessing game. - The
- The teacher teacher
asks the asks the
students to students
discuss and to make
write the a
information in descripti
the form of ve text
complete from the
Confirmation sentences. informat
ion
collected
by
individu
al.
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- The teacher
asks some
students to read
their work.
- The teacher
gives reward.
- The teacher
asks the
students to
submit their
work.
Closing - The teacher summarizes the today‟s lesson 5‟
together with the students.
- The teacher asks the students whether there
is a question about the material.
- The teacher informs the learning plan for the
next meeting.
- The teacher greets the students.
H. Learning Sources
- Power Point slides
- Internet
- Dictionary
- Worksheet
I. Assessment
- Written: Cycle one test
- Observing students‟ activities
Teacher
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CHARLIE CHAPLIN
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Who
is he?
LESSON PLAN
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Subject : English
Class/Semester :X/2
Cycle : Writing
J. Competence Standard
12. Writing
Expressing the meaning of short functional text and simple essays in the form
of narrative, descriptive and news item in the context of daily life and to
access knowledge
K. Basic Competence
12.2. Writing
L. Indicator
1. Comprehending the parts of speech such as adjective and verb (present
tense).
2. Expressing simple sentences used in descriptive text.
3. Producing descriptive text.
M. Learning Objective
1. Students are able to comprehend the parts of speech such as adjective and
verb (present tense).
2. Students are able to express simple sentences used in descriptive text.
3. Students are able to write descriptive text.
N. Learning Material
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Descriptive text
Picture-guessing game about Michael Jackson, Unyil, Jeng Kelin
O. Methods/Technique
Cooperative Learning: Team-pair-solo
P. Learning Activities
Cycle Two
Time
Learning
Activities Allocat
Activity
ion
Opening - The teacher greets the students. 10‟
- The teacher checks the attendance list.
- The teacher tells the learning objective.
Core Structural Individual
Face-to-Face
Assignment Assignment
Exploration - The teacher asks 75‟
the previous
material.
- The teacher
explains about
picture-guessing
game and its rule.
- The teacher asks
the students to
make a group of
six.
- The teacher
conducts picture-
guessing game
with three pictures
as building
knowledge of the
field.
- The teacher asks
the students to
guess based on the
clues given.
Q. Learning Sources
- Power Point slides
- Internet
- Dictionary
- Worksheet
R. Assessment
- Written: Cycle two test
- Observing students‟ activities
Teacher
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Who is
he?
SI UNYIL
Who is
he?
JENG KELIN
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Who is
she?
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Cycle :
Observer :
in the Classroom
Appendix 4
TEACHER OBSERVATION CHECKLIST
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Cycle :
Day and Date :
Observer :
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QUESTIONNAIRE
Name :
Number/Class :
technique?
descriptive text?
descriptive text?
team-pair-solo technique? *
process?
descriptive text?
10. According to your opinion, is there any advantage you get when
Comment:
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Appendix 6
INTERVIEW SHEET
in implementing team-pair-solo
technique?
team-pair-solo technique?
of picture-guessing game in
implementing team-pair-solo
text?
team-pair-solo technique?
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picture-guessing game in
implementing team-pair-solo
technique?
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Appendix 7
PRE-ASSESSMENT
Instruction
Make a descriptive text with your own words in 40 minutes. The topic is „My Favourite
Character‟. Pay attention to the generic structure of it.
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Appendix 10
Appendix 11
PRE-ASSESSMENT SCORES X 8
ASPECTS
NO. NAME TOTAL
C O G WC M
1 S1 0 0 0 0 0 0
2 S2 10 10 9 6 3 38
3 S3 13 12 10 6 4 45
4 S4 14 14 13 6 4 51
5 S5 19 18 17 11 5 70
6 S6 17 17 17 7 6 64
7 S7 17 18 18 10 7 70
8 S8 13 14 13 6 3 49
9 S9 20 17 15 10 4 66
10 S10 17 17 17 8 4 63
11 S11 17 16 17 6 3 59
12 S12 17 17 15 10 4 63
13 S13 20 20 19 11 7 77
14 S14 19 18 17 10 7 71
15 S15 0 0 0 0 0 0
16 S16 19 19 17 10 6 71
17 S17 17 17 14 7 6 61
18 S18 17 17 13 7 3 57
19 S19 17 19 17 10 6 69
20 S20 16 16 14 7 5 58
21 S21 19 17 17 10 6 69
22 S22 17 17 17 8 3 62
23 S23 17 17 16 7 6 63
24 S24 20 19 19 10 7 75
25 S25 0 0 0 0 0 0
26 S26 17 17 14 7 4 59
27 S27 16 17 17 8 3 61
28 S28 17 15 15 8 4 59
29 S29 20 17 17 10 7 71
30 S30 17 13 13 9 6 58
31 S31 18 18 18 10 7 71
32 S32 0 0 0 0 0 0
33 S33 20 18 20 10 7 74
34 S34 15 14 13 7 3 52
35 S35 14 12 12 7 4 49
36 S36 10 12 10 6 3 41
37 S37 17 17 17 10 4 65
38 S38 14 15 10 6 3 48
TOTAL 2079
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Appendix 12
ASPECTS
NO. NAME TOTAL
C O G WC M
1 S1 0 0 0 0 0 0
2 S2 13 10 12 7 4 46
3 S3 17 17 16 10 6 66
4 S4 16 17 17 10 5 65
5 S5 20 18 19 11 8 76
6 S6 20 19 19 11 7 76
7 S7 20 20 20 11 8 79
8 S8 17 16 16 8 4 61
9 S9 20 20 18 11 5 74
10 S10 19 19 18 11 7 74
11 S11 17 18 18 12 6 71
12 S12 20 19 19 10 7 75
13 S13 21 21 21 12 8 83
14 S14 20 20 18 12 8 78
15 S15 0 0 0 0 0 0
16 S16 20 20 19 11 7 77
17 S17 19 20 18 10 6 73
18 S18 17 18 17 10 4 66
19 S19 20 20 17 11 7 75
20 S20 15 16 14 7 5 57
21 S21 20 19 19 11 7 76
22 S22 20 19 18 11 5 73
23 S23 20 20 19 10 7 76
24 S24 20 20 20 11 7 78
25 S25 0 0 0 0 0 0
26 S26 17 17 17 9 5 65
27 S27 20 17 20 10 6 73
28 S28 19 20 19 10 6 74
29 S29 19 20 19 11 7 76
30 S30 20 20 19 11 7 77
31 S31 21 21 20 12 7 81
32 S32 0 0 0 0 0 0
33 S33 21 20 21 12 7 81
34 S34 16 17 17 9 5 64
35 S35 17 17 17 10 5 66
36 S36 15 17 15 8 4 59
37 S37 20 19 18 11 7 75
38 S38 18 18 17 11 7 71
TOTAL 2437
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Appendix 13
ASPECTS
NO. NAME TOTAL
C O G WC M
1 S1 0 0 0 0 0 0
2 S2 17 17 17 10 5 66
3 S3 17 17 17 10 6 67
4 S4 19 19 20 10 6 74
5 S5 21 21 20 11 8 79
6 S6 21 21 21 12 8 83
7 S7 21 21 22 12 9 85
8 S8 17 14 13 6 4 54
9 S9 22 21 21 12 8 84
10 S10 20 21 22 12 8 83
11 S11 21 19 20 12 7 80
12 S12 19 19 18 11 7 74
13 S13 21 21 22 13 9 86
14 S14 22 21 22 12 8 85
15 S15 0 0 0 0 0 0
16 S16 19 21 20 12 8 80
17 S17 20 21 20 11 7 79
18 S18 20 20 19 11 5 75
19 S19 22 21 21 12 8 84
20 S20 19 20 20 12 8 79
21 S21 21 21 21 12 8 83
22 S22 22 20 21 12 7 82
23 S23 21 21 22 11 8 83
24 S24 22 22 22 13 9 88
25 S25 0 0 0 0 0 0
26 S26 21 20 20 11 7 79
27 S27 22 19 21 12 8 82
28 S28 19 21 20 10 7 77
29 S29 22 21 22 12 8 85
30 S30 22 21 21 12 6 82
31 S31 22 21 21 12 8 84
32 S32 0 0 0 0 0 0
33 S33 22 22 22 12 9 87
34 S34 19 20 19 11 6 75
35 S35 19 18 18 10 7 72
36 S36 20 19 19 10 7 75
37 S37 21 21 21 12 8 83
38 S38 20 20 19 11 7 77
TOTAL 2691