Greetings Formal: This Is To Invite You To Join Us For..
Greetings Formal: This Is To Invite You To Join Us For..
Greetings Formal: This Is To Invite You To Join Us For..
Formal
Informal
Hi Dennis,
Hello Claire,
Dear Mum,
(note: salutations are followed by a (,) comma, exception: ’To whom it may concern:’)
Formal
Formal
Could you please let me know if you can attend … / if you are available for a
meeting on 12th December?
I would appreciate it if you could please send me a brochure/ if you could please
reply within two days.
Could you possibly arrange a meeting with the Logistics Manager?
I would also like to know if there are any swimming pools in your area.
Please let me know how much the tickets cost.
Informal
I was wondering if you could come and see me sometime next week.
Would you mind coming early to help me clear up the place?
Do you think you could call Jerry for me?
Can you call me/ get back to me asap? (as soon as possible)
OFFERING HELP / GIVING INFORMATION
Formal
We are happy to let you know that your article has been selected for publication.
I am glad to inform you that we will be holding our annual conference in Brussels
on 20 September 2014.
We regret to inform you that the show has been cancelled due to bad weather
conditions.
We are willing to arrange another meeting with the CEO.
We would be glad to send you another statement if necessary.
Please do let me know if I can be of further assistance.
Should you need any further information/assistance, please do not hesitate to
contact us.
Informal
Formal
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with… / to complain about…
I regret to say that I was not completely satisfied with the room you provided us.
We regret to inform you that your payment is considerably overdue.
I would like to receive a full refund and compensation for the damages.
I am interested to hear how your company can compensate us for the distress we
suffered.
Informal
Formal
Formal
Formal
Formal
Love,
Thanks,
Take care,
Yours,
Best regards, (semi-formal, also BR)
Most of us in the business world use emails as the main, and in some cases the only,
means of written communication. For many students studying Business English and
practising their business email writing skills is an important part of their course.
While most of us are happy to write informal emails to friends that might have
grammatical mistakes in them, the same is not true when writing to colleagues and
clients with whom we want to make a good impression.
So, how can you ensure that your email writing skills are up to standard? Here are
some general tips I’d like to share with you:
1. Subject Line
Always have a subject line that summarises briefly and clearly the contents of the
message (example: Re: Summary of Our Meeting with ABC Suppliers).
2. Simplified Sentences
Don’t make your email look overcrowded by trying to use too many technical terms or
long words. It is good to use complex and compound-complex sentences, but ensure
that they are easy to understand.
The most common mistake that many of our students make is to translate directly from
their own language. This can often lead to confusing sentences. A popular rule that you
could adapt is to use the KISS Test – Keep It Short and Simple.
Is it a colleague, a client or your boss? Should the email be informal or formal? Most
business emails these days have a neutral tone. Note the difference between Informal
and Formal:
Some emails to colleagues can be informal if you have a long working relationship and
know them well. This is the style that is closest to speech, so there are often everyday
words and conversational expressions that can be used. For instance, ‘Don’t
forget’, ‘Catch you later’, ‘Cheers’.
The reader may also accept or overlook minor grammatical errors in informal emails.
However, if the email is going to a client or senior colleague, bad grammar and an over-
friendly writing style will most probably not be acceptable.
While these can be tolerated in informal emails, they are very important in business
emails as they are an important part of the image you create. Give yourself time to edit
what you’ve written before you push that Send button.
In today’s busy world, it’s very easy to send out many emails without checking them
thoroughly: as an English learner, you should make a conscious effort to double check
before sending.
Consider these:
By adjusting your tone, you are more likely to get a positive response from your reader.
6. Be positive!
Look at these words: helpful, good question, agreed, together, useful, I will do my best,
mutual, opportunity.
Now look at these: busy, crisis, failure, forget it, I can’t, it’s impossible, waste, hard.
The words you use show your attitude to life, so choose your words wisely.
7. Get feedback
Try and get some feedback on the emails that you write. This could be from your English
Teacher or someone you know whose English is at a good level.
Study the English in any emails you receive. If it is a well-written email, look carefully at
some of the language used. Start your own phrase book by collecting a bank of phrases
from what you hear or read all around you; they may be useful in the future.