Developing story-writing skills with

Year 2 pupils using ICT

each term to the University to ensure that the pupils learned

The school
the skills they needed in order to focus in school on her
Located in a suburb of a major northern city, this Church literacy objectives.
aided first school provides schooling from reception to Year
4. By the age of five most children meet or exceed the
national expectations. By the end of Key Stage 1 pupils’
attainment is well above national standards in English,
mathematics, science, design and technology, information
technology and music. Planning is very detailed throughout
the school and is used very effectively to promoted focused
learning.

The teacher
This Year 2 teacher has been teaching at this school for eight
years, principally in Key Stage 1. She attributes her ICT
skills, which were non-existent until she joined the staff, to
the extremely patient IT coordinator and from working with
the children. She sees teaching as quite an isolated job and
values contact with other colleagues. She values her school
where:

" you can actually go to a colleague and talk about any The teacher working with a group of pupils at the University to

problems that you’ve got or share good practice or, just teach particular skills. The arrangement of the seats and
computers is not ideal for primary pupils.
knock ideas about."

This teacher is very reflective and analytical about her

While very positive about using ICT in the curriculum she
practice. She is always questioning what she does and
states that:
looking for ways to improve her teaching. She was very
"If I haven’t organised and planned for using the computer positive about having members of the project team in her
I don’t switch it on." classroom. As mentioned previously she sees teaching as a
rather isolated profession and welcomed the opportunity to
She is also eager to point out the benefits she derives from talk through her lessons with team members.
using ICT for record keeping, planning and classroom
"It has been really nice having someone in the classroom
management. When using ICT in the curriculum she looks
taking a genuine interest in what is going on."
for imaginative ways to link with other areas of the
curriculum, always making sure ICT is not taught in
isolation. However, she is conscious of the fact that ICT skills The pupils
must be taught and is very specific in targeting the skills she This class of year two pupils were achieving well above
wants the children to concentrate on while working at the national average in both English and ICT. Many of the
computer. Her usual approach when introducing new ICT children have access to computers at home. The teacher
skills to the class is to begin with a whole class lesson. As wanted a project that would improve their collaborative
part of the project the teacher was able to bring her class story writing and would stretch their ICT skills.

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The children were familiar with the painting program but

they had never created slideshows. In this respect the
teacher wanted to use the program to improve their ICT
skills and allow their work to be vie wed by a wider
audience. This was to help the children be aware of the
difference between spoken and written language and to make
use of more formal elements in written language. The
integrated program the children used for editing and refining
their stories was not used to extend their ICT skills. For this
part of the project the teacher wanted the children to focus
on improving their story writing and not on the technology.

The children worked in groups of two or three, drafting a

Three of the pupils from the class with their stories. storyboard on paper first. Once their initial story was down
on paper they used the painting package to create each page,
When working on ICT activities the class usually work in first painting the picture then adding their text. The separate
mixed ability groups of two or three. The children work well pages were then saved in a directory the children had
together in these groups supporting each other with the task created. Once they had completed their paintings they linked
at hand. the pages together in a slideshow adding sounds, spoken
text, and a transition between pages. When the children
The children are confident both in using a variety of learned that their slideshows were to be shown to a wider
computer programs and in file management, being able to audience than just their classmates many wanted to add a
save and retrieve their work with ease. title page with credits.

The aim of the project

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both in pastels and on the computer. The teacher wanted to
build on this ICT work in the story writing process. In
addition, as the class had recently received a new computer
with which both the teacher and class were unfamiliar, the
teacher hoped both she and the pupils would gain a better
Starting the story in KidPix.
understanding of how to manage their computer work more
effectively.
All the children completed the slideshow task with
enthusiasm and minimum support working from a simple
The teacher’s choices helpsheet prepared by the teacher. Once the slideshows had
The teacher chose to use two programs, one a painting been completed they were viewed by the whole class, other
program which also has the facility to make slideshows children in the school and to suitably impressed parents.
(KidPix / Brøderbund Software) the other an integrated
package (Claris Works/ Claris Corporation) both of which the
children were accustomed to using. The teacher chose not to
use the painting facilities within the integrated software at
this stage because of the children’s skills in using KidPix.

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sentences using capital letters and full stops accurately. For

others it was improved use of particular elements such as
improving the narrative or setting through the use of
adjectives and descriptive language. The teacher found the
printouts useful as they made her focus on what had been
written.

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(ClarisWorks- Mac/PC) which showed their original picture
and text on the top half of the screen, while the bottom of
the screen allowed space for word processing. A classroom
helper wordprocessed the children’s text mirroring the Final draft showing both the original work
original. This was so that the pupils could use their skills and the completed version.
with a program with which they were familiar, but did not
have to spend time re-typing their work. This was because of After discussion with the teacher the children returned to
the limitations of the painting program in which text is their work using the word processor to edit and improve
‘painted’ onto the screen. Once written the text becomes part their stories focusing on the comments the teacher had made
of the picture and it cannot be edited. However the teacher about their writing. Once completed their work was printed
chose this approach at this stage of the project so that she out and made into booklet form.
could get the best out of the children’s familiarity with the
painting program and so that she would not have to teach Results from the testing
them how to use the painting facilities within the integrated
The teacher did not wish to exclude any pupils from the ICT
software. In addition the painting program has some features
work. As a result, all students participated in a writing test
which were either not available in the integrated software
before the project began. The pupils were then retested at
(such as some of the tool functions) or which were easier for
the end of the term’s work showing considerable gains in
the pupils to use (such as the slide show). When she
their writing scores. Similar progress was made by pupils in
developed this approach the following year with a different
the autumn term.
class of pupils she chose to use the integrated software and
the painting options within the program.
While is not possible to attribute these gains solely to their
use of ICT the results do suggest that carefully planned and
The teacher wanted the children to write more sustained
thought through ICT activities with clear learning objectives
stories and develop aspects of key story elements such as the
can play a part in improving pupils’ writing ability.
narrative structure or characterisation. These pages were
then printed out, original pictures and text in the top half,
Although the main focus of the activities had been on
word processed text in the bottom. The teacher examined
improving children’s collaborative writing the teacher also
each group’s work then instructed the groups on the
sought to enhance their IT capability. An assessment of the
particular areas for improvement she wanted them to
work produced indicated that these particular children were
concentrate on. For some pupils it was writing in clear
working well above the national expectations.

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thinking ahead to the numeracy hour and can see

Developing this approach
opportunities to use the program in a similar manner.
Although the teacher was very pleased with the progress the
summer term pupils had made in their writing she decided Features of ICT
to modify the approach with her new Year 2 class in the
autumn term. As this new class was rather less adept at When the children were creating their slideshows they were
using ICT she decided against using both KidPix with its making use of the capacity and range function of ICT. In
slideshow option and ClarisWorks. She felt repeating the particular they were using a range of forms to present
same activities with this class would require too much information including images, sound and speech.
emphasis on the ICT skills.
Provisionality, the function of ICT which allows changes to
Instead she decided to use only the writing frame with some be made easily and alternatives to be explored readily,
modifications. The upper half of the page was used by the permitted the children to edit and refine their work in their
pupils directly to paint their pictures on, while the bottom writing frames. In their slideshow creations this feature of
half was used for word processing. As a whole class lesson ICT allowed them to experiment with different sound and
the teacher demonstrated the basic functions of the painting transition effects.
program. The children were then given time to become
familiar with the painting program before starting the Summary
writing activity. In groups of two the children drafted a The teacher was able to make effective use of ICT to impr ove
storyboard on paper then began working at the computer pupil’s collaborative writing. She felt the pupils in the
using the modified writing frame. Having already become summer term benefited from having a wider audience for
familiar with the painting program the children were able to their work on slideshows and would have adopted a similar
work independently at the computer making use of a simple approach in the autumn term if her new pupils had
helpsheet the teacher had prepared. As with the previous possessed higher levels of ICT skills.
class, the children printed their first draft, received feedback
from the teacher then completed their final versions. The ICT activities were designed to encourage the children
to focus on their writing when drafting and redrafting their
Future plans work. The teacher used the painting program to teach them
During the project, while improving her own ICT skills, the specific ICT skills and to encourage creativity in their
teacher came to appreciate the flexibility the integrated illustrations as part of her teaching of the IT curriculum. She
program offered her. With the introduction of the literacy felt that this encouraged the pupils to develop their stories
hour she started to use the program to create active and use more descriptive language which was part of her
worksheets and templates for one group of children to use specific literacy teaching for the term. She enjoys teaching in
within the 20 minute group work session. this way and likes to develop activities which link together
in a meaningful way for pupils.
"I've been making work at home. I've got a computer that's
the same as the computer at school, so obviously that makes "The focus of the project was on the literacy. However it
it easier, so I've been taking whatever the phonic aspect of was teaching the skills and the use of a painting package to
the literacy hour has been, and also some grammatical stimulate their imagination when it came to illustrating
points as well, and making a little programme of work for their story. So because they'd got the skills to be able to
the children to be able to complete on the computer within paint and produce a picture, I think it developed their
that 20 minutes, if that is what has been appropriate for actual writing skills. It gave them much more of a purpose
their particular day." and it motivated them to keep going and to want to
improve and refine their story."
She sees these activities as very useful and feels she can
really tailor them to each group’s needs. Given the structure She feels she has come to appreciate that you do not
of the literacy hour she feels she is much more focused on necessarily need to make use of overly sophisticated software
what she wants to achieve with the computer. She is to use ICT successfully in her teaching.

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Further reading
Deadman, G. (1997) An analysis of pupils’ reflective writing
within a hypermedia framework. Journal of Computer
Assisted Learning, Vol 13, p. 16-5

Collins, J., Hammond, M. and Wellington J. Teaching and

Learning with Multimedia London: Routledge

(The case studies in Chapter 5 and issues in Chapter 6 are

particularly relevant to using multimedia in primary
schools.)

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