Comprehension: Activity 1: First Impressions
Comprehension: Activity 1: First Impressions
Comprehension: Activity 1: First Impressions
The first impression of Mae of the Circle is very positive. She walks through the
campus of the company as she takes notices of all the beautiful and inspiring
decoration. ( the smallest detail had been carefully considered, shaped by the most
eloquent hands. ll. 3-4). She concludes by referring the vision of the company as an
utopia come true. She sees every aspect of the Circle as the best: the best people, the
best system and therefore the best place to work. In contrast to this utopia there is the
rest of America, which she describes as a developing world (ll. 89), where everything
is noise and struggle, failure and filth (ll.90-91)
Activity 2
Before TruYou the whole internet is described by Mae as a sloppy and network (ll. 26).
The new system is the best (l. 92): it is a simpler, more efficient and cleaner experience (ll. 77-
78). There was never something better. The rest of America and the world seems in
comparison a developing world, where everything is noise and struggle, failure and filth (ll. 89 -
91).
But there are some aspects of the Circle and its objectives that present a dystopian
light. Everything is now combined into one account and this identity cant be fake. There is
only one per person and the user must give his real name. This account and its human user is
now carried through every web you visit and it is very easy to track its every move. So
anonymity on the internet is gone. Many sites and it lawyers tried to fight for the right to be
anonymous online, but they failed. This can potentially be very problematic and controversial
respecting moral and ethic values.
Activity 4
Similarities Disparities
Both texts are in favor of Grundwald is concerned about the
information. Grundwald is happy problem with the loss of privacy, while
with the current state of the Mae is not at all. She wants privacy to
Internet, but Mae and the Circle disappear so that trolls, hate
want the Internet to be more comments can be avoided.
accessible and simpler, to be more
organized.
Both texts thank the convenience of
the Internet: They appreciate no
longer having the need of carring a
map or the simplicity of purchasing
something online.
Activity 5
If you pay attention to the style and structure of the text, you could find out that most
parts of the excerpt could serve as a script for a commercial or advertising campaign
promoting the Circle, its inventions and objectives.
From the beginning to the end you read no other than positive aspects about the
Circle, even aspects that are very controversial and you may have a different opinion. The
Circle is presented as a great company who makes the bests tools, the most dominant and
ubiquitous and free (ll. 47 - 48).
Then Mae explains us how the competition and its inferior ideas were rapidly
destroyed and how TruYou changed the internet for the better within a year: Though some
sites were resistant at first, and free-internet advocates shouted about the right to be
anonymous online, the TruYou wave was tidal and crushed all meaningful opposition
Edward Snowden was an employee of the CIA (Central Intelligence Agency) and the
NSA (National Security Agency), but he didnt last very long. As contractor he witnessed all the
privacy violations of the US citizens of the governments surveillance and he leaked in 2013
classified documents exposing NSAs PRISM.
The end of privacy, so that we could feel safe. But from now this is only going to get
worst.
Technology and with it the internet can be found every year in more things. That is
why we now call it Internet of Things. Thermostats, TVs, Refrigerators, lights, Surveillance
cameras, Amazon Echo, Home Pod, Google Home, Google Home mini, Google Home Max,
everything is now connected or will be in the near future. Everything now uploads information
to the cloud and it is stored in a server. But of course this server cant be accessed it is private.
Whether it is the government, a hacker or something in between, no one can access your
private information, right? Well, no. And even the Us intelligence chief, James Clapper, has
acknowledge it: In the future, intelligence services might use the [internet of things] for
identification, surveillance, monitoring, location tracking, and targeting for recruitment, or to
gain access to networks or user credentials. We are actually in the golden age of surveillance.,
Clapper said.
In conclusion we can say that the internet is getting to more and more things and the
information about us in the cloud is therefore progressively increasing. So it will be vital that
new policies are written, so that our information remains private and cant be easily and
legally accessed by the government. If the main goal of the government is us to feel safe, is
violating our privacy really the best way?