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Cademic Writing Sample Task 1.69JGJHB

The document contains a graph showing electricity demand in England during winter and summer days, and a pie chart showing how electricity is used in an average English home. The graph shows that winter demand peaks at 2100 and is lowest at 400, staying constant from 1200-2100, while summer peaks at 1300 and bottoms at 900, staying constant from 1550-2000. The pie chart indicates that 52.5% of home electricity is used for heating, 17.5% for appliances like ovens and washing machines, 15% for lighting and entertainment, and 15% for other small appliances.

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Cademic Writing Sample Task 1.69JGJHB

The document contains a graph showing electricity demand in England during winter and summer days, and a pie chart showing how electricity is used in an average English home. The graph shows that winter demand peaks at 2100 and is lowest at 400, staying constant from 1200-2100, while summer peaks at 1300 and bottoms at 900, staying constant from 1550-2000. The pie chart indicates that 52.5% of home electricity is used for heating, 17.5% for appliances like ovens and washing machines, 15% for lighting and entertainment, and 15% for other small appliances.

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cademic Writing Sample Task 1 #69

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The graph below shows the demand for electricity in England during typical days in winter and summer. The
pie chart shows how electricity is used in an average English home.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where
relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

Model answer

The Demand for electricity in England during typical days in winter and summer is illustrated in the graph. The use of
electricity in an average English home is shown in the pie chart. From the graph it is generally obvious that the
demand is in its maximum around 2100 in winter times and in its minimum around 400 being almost constant between
1200 and 2100 in winter times. During summer times on the other hand the demand reaches its top point around 1300
and the bottom point around 900 being almost constant between 1550 and 2000.

In wither times the curve gradually increases to reach 40000 units of electricity by 3 oclock in the morning. This is
followed by gradual decline to its lowest limit of 30000 units at 9 oclock. A gradual rise is obvious again to reach a
stationary level between 3 oclock and 9 oclock of about 40000 units again. Then there is a sharp rise in the next hour
to reach its maximum before collapsing again to a lower level by the end of the day.
In summer time the curve gradually decrease to reach its lower limit around 9 oclock of a bit more that 10000 units. A
gradual increase is noticed to reach its top of 20000 after which a stationary phase is obvious between 3 oclock and
10 oclock at night of about 15000 units.

The pie chart on the other hand shows that 52.5% of the electricity is used for heating rooms and water. 17.5% is
consumed for ovens kettles and washing machines 15% is used in lighting TV and radio and finally 15% is consumed
in the sue of vacuum cleaners food mixtures and electric tools.

(285 words)

This answer would probably exceed Band 6

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