Module English Writing
Module English Writing
T H E E N G L I S H PA N I T I A S T. M I C H A E L S I N S T I T U T I O N , I P O H .
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LEARN TO WRITE
EFFECTIVE WRITING PRACTICES
FOR LOWER SECONDARY STUDENTS
PREFACE
This module is divided into three main sections, namely Short Writing
Practices, Extended Writing Practices and Error Identification
Practices. The purpose of this module is to provide practices for
lower secondary students who are preparing for the Form 3
Assessment(PT3). We have also included a section for remedial
writing.
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SHORT WRITING TASK
PRACTICE 1
I am sorry to tell you that I cannot visit you during the coming holidays as
we have planned. My grandmother passed away suddenly yesterday. According to
the Chinese custom, I have to observe a period of mourning. Therefore, it is not
appropriate for me to visit you.
Please forgive me if I have caused you a lot of trouble in preparing for my
visit.
From,
May Hwa
You received the following postcard from a friend in Singapore. In about 100 words, write a message
of sympathy to your friend. Use the notes below to help you.
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PRACTICE 2
You received the above message from a friend in Seremban. In about 100 words, write a
reply to Syazana. Use the notes below to help you.
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PRACTICE 3
I saw your name and address in the pen-pal column of the Asia Youth
Magazine. I would like to be your pen-pal.
I like to swim and play tennis. My hobbies are reading and corresponding with
pen-pals. I have pen-pals in India, China and Japan. If you decide to write to me, you
will be my first Malaysian pen-pal.
Sheena
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PRACTICE 4
Mother : Did you know its Grandpas birthday next week? Why dont you write to
him?
Mother : No. Just send our love to him and Grandma. Ask him how Grandmas leg is.
In about 100 words, write a message to your grandfather. Use the notes below to help you.
wish him a happy birthday
tell him about your brothers job
mention any other interesting news or incident concerning your family.
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PRACTICE 5
You have just spent a week at your aunts house in PulauLangkawi. You had a
wonderful time. Your aunt and uncle brought you to the Underwater World and other
sights. You also tried out various restaurants and went shopping.
You wish to write to your aunt and uncle. In about 100 words, write a letter to them. Use the
notes below to help you.
thank them for letting you stay with them
and taking you to all the places
Your mother asks your aunt and uncle to visit your family
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PRACTICE 6
You received the following invitation card from your friend from another state.
You are unable to attend the party. In about 100 words, write a reply to Rose. Use the notes
below to help you.
wish her a happy birthday
decline her kind invitation
state your reasons for doing so
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PRACTICE 7
The picture below shows the various types of fruits
Based on the picture given, write a speech on the benefits of eating fruits.
In your speech:
name the various types of fruits
explain the benefits of eating fruits
make sure your speech is not less than words.
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PRACTICE 8
You have just received a postcard from your best friend. In about 100 words, write a short
email as a reply to his postcard. Use the notes below to help you.
Your teacher conducted a survey on the types of reading materials preferred by your class.
He asked for your opinion on why the majority of the students prefer to read magazines. In
about 100 words, write a short opinion on it. Use the notes below to help you.
Give one reason why many students prefer to read magazine
Give one example of a magazine that you like to read
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PRACTICE 10
Day : Monday
Date : 18th
th March 2014
You are interested to join the audition. However, you are unable to attend the audition. In
about 100 words, write a note to the teacher, explaining about your situation and requesting
for a chance to audition at another time. Use the notes below to help you.
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PRACTICE 11
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shoes. Fashionable sacrifice your comfort Able to withstand
sports footwear that is for the sake of being extreme conditions yet
sure to turn heads fancy and fashionable. very reasonably priced.
wherever you go. Come get your own pair
of 5ive Ten now.
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Discounts up to 30
percents
Special rebates for
students.
15 free gifts for each
purchase of a
Macbook Air
Discounts on the
purchase of
extended warranty
One year
complimentary
service of Microsoft
Office 365
You have been dreaming of owning a Macbook Air and it is now on sale. In about 100 words,
write a note to your father, persuading him to buy it for you. Use the notes below to help you.
Tell him about the sale
Give reasons why you need a Macbook Air
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PRACTICE 13
Dearest son,
Grandfathers 60th birthday is approaching on this coming 25th of April 2014.
Please remember to book a ticket home. Let me know if you have any idea on the types of
birthday presents that I should buy for him.
Till then, take care and bye!
Father
You are unable to return home on the 25th of April 2014. In about 100 words, write a suitable
reply to the above message. Use the notes below to help you.
explain why you would not be able to return home
suggest a suitable birthday present for grandfather
ask father to convey your birthday wish to grandfather
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Dearest friend,
Congratulations on your wedding. I am so excited for you. However, I
would not be able to attend your wedding ceremony as I need to look after my son who is still
receiving his medical treatment at Assunta Hospital.
Hope to hear more from you about your wedding. Bye!
PnAsiah
You would really like your best friend, PnAsiah to attend your wedding ceremony. In about
100 words, write a message to your best friend. Use the notes below to help you.
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Dear students,
As you are approaching your examinations, I would like to send my best greetings to you. I hope
that you will perform with utmost dedication. Good luck and we hope you come out with flying
colours.
Mr Tan
You are one of the students who received the above message from your class teacher, Mr
Tan. In about 100 words, write a message to your teacher. Use the notes below to help you:
thank him for all his hard work in teaching you
make a request for a final extra class and explain why
tell your teacher what you have done in preparation for the coming exams.
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PRACTICE 16
Sharon: I think the pair of shoes shes wearing looks really nice.
Melissa: You wouldnt be saying that if you knew how much it cost. Just because it is
imported, people end up paying a bomb for such shoes.
Sharon: Well, they might be expensive but you must remember that the quality is good.
I wouldnt mind paying RM150 for a pair of good shoes.
Melissa: I think its totally unnecessary to pay so much for a pair of imported shoes.
Made-in-Malaysia products are just as good and best of all, they dont cost so much.
Sharon: I suppose you have your own opinion but I still feel imported products are
better.
Whom do you agree with? In about 100 words, write your response. Use the notes below to
help you.
You are the President of The English Language Society in your school. The society advisor
has requested that you give a speech on The Importance of the English Language during
the school assembly. In about 100 words, write the speech. Use the notes below to help
you.
greet your audience
give reasons why it is important to excel in this language
thank the audience
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Whom do you agree with? In about 100 words, write your response. Use the notes below
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PRACTICE 19
Asri is from LahadDatu. He is a new student at your school. Write an e-mail to welcome him
in about 100 words. Use the notes below to help you.
Welcome him
Tell him about your school
Tell him that you are organizing a party for him
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PRACTICE 20
12 April 2014
Dear Sunil,
Im having some problems with my studies. Im quite worried
as the examination is just around the corner. Do you have
any tips or advice that could help me to study effectively? I
really appreciate it.
Jerry
You are Sunils friend. He has written to you to ask for advice. In about 100 words, write a
message to Sunil. Use the notes below to help you.
Use short notes
Study consistently
Practise
Get help from teachers
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PRACTICE 21
Read the advertisement below.
Pacific Supermarket
MID-YEAR SALE!!!!!
9 JUNE TILL 9 JULY
DISCOUNTS UP TO 70% FREE
Footwear, luggage, sports equipment, PARKINGG
clothes and electrical equipment.
You saw the advertisement above and you would like to invite your sister to go shopping with
her.
In about 100 words, write a message to your sister. Use the notes below to help you.
Invite her to go with you
Give reasons
Tell her what you would like to buy
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PRACTICE 22
Read the postcard below and answer the question that follows.
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TIMETABLE
8.00 - BREAKFAST
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PRACTICE 24
You will be home late as you have to attend a hockey practice after school. In about 100
words, write a message to your mother informing her that you will be home late. Use the
notes below to help you.
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Hi Nisha,
Where have you been? All of us were wondering where you were when you did not
come for lunch yesterday. I hope everything is fine with you.
Razien
You receive this text message from your mobile phone while you are on holiday in Langkawi.
In about 100 words, write a postcard to your friend. Use the notes below to help you.
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PRACTICE 26
You saw this advertisement on your way home. In about 100 words,Write a message to your
father persuading him to stay at the hotel during the school holiday Use the notes below to
help you.
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PRACTICE 27
KAYS CAFE
Come and enjoy our mouth-watering
Fresh delicacies Tea for two
from as low
as RM10.00!
cakes ,cup Open daily
From 11.00 a.m
cakes 10.00 pm
cookies,
pies, pizzas
The new caf in town Write a message to your friend inviting her to go the caf for tea. Use
the notes below to help you.
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PRACTICE 28
CREATIVE PUBLICATIONS
e-mailto [email protected]
You saw this advertisement in the newspaper. . In about 100 words, Write a message to your
sister asking her to send in her story. Use the notes below to help you.
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Situation Vacant
An established company is looking for a young man or woman to work as a filing clerk.
Requirements: PMR with credits in Mathematics and English. Previous working experience is
not necessary as training will be provided. Candidates must be fluent in English and Bahasa
Malaysia and must be willing to get along with others. Interested parties should write to:
The Personnel Manager,
ACE Electrical Company Sdn. Bhd,
1-2A, Shah Alam Industrial Estate,
43000 Shah Alam.
You have just completed your PMR examination and are interested in getting a job. Based on
the information given in the advertisement above, write a letter of application for the job in
about 100 words.
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PRACTICE 30
Whom do you agree with? In about 100 words, write your response. Use the notes below to
help you.
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PRACTICE 31
FashaSandha
Age : 23
Family background : eldest in a family of two sisters
Education : primary and secondary schooling in SekolahRendah and
SekolahMenengah Convent Pantai respectively. Degree in
Mass Communications from University of Boston in the United
States.
Shows hosted : game shows, talk shows and shows related to music
Hobbies : horse-riding, swimming and travelling
Advice to aspiring tv personalities : Believe in yourself and never let anyone
discourage you
You are the president of the Communications Club in your school. You have been asked to
write a short article about FashaSandha, an ex-student who is a popular television
personality today. In about 100 words, write out the article. You may include any other
relevant information.
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PRACTICE 33
Dear .,
You might be surprised to receive this mail from me. My friend, Shamir,
gave me your name. I am sure you know Shamir from Facebook. First, let me
introduce myself. My name is Ann Hugo. I am fifteen years old. I live in London.
Shamir said you may be able to help me out. I am planning to visit your
hometown with my family at the end of this year.
I was hoping that you could tell me something about your hometown. Then I
wont feel so lost when I am there.
Please do reply. I hope we can be friends. Thank you.
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Your friend, Dani, is worried about her achievement for the English subject. She asked for
your help.In about 100 words, write an e-mail to her.Use the notes below to help you.
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PRACTICE 35
Last week you had a fever. You were vomiting and feeling very weak. Then you
were admitted into the hospital for four days. During your stay, your friend, Ning,
visited you every day and helped you with your homework. Now you have just
been discharged and you are recovering at home.
In about 100 words, write a note to Ning to thank her and to show your appreciation.
Use the notes below to help you.
Thank her for visiting you
Thank her for helping you with your homework
Invite her to your house for dinner.
Hello Ning,
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PRACTICE 36
The topic for your essay must be based on the theme of saving
theenvironment. It must be between 200 to 300 words.
All essays must be typed in ARIAL (FONT 12) on A4-sized paper.
In about 100 words, write a message to PuanSharminRais to inform her that you
will be taking part in the essay-writing competition. Include the notes below in your
message.
Inform her of your name and class
The title of your essay
Ask for her suggestion in searching for information for your essay.
Arrange for a time to see PuanSharmin
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EXTENDED WRITING
PRACTICE 1
The picture below shows a family having a picnic. Based on the picture given, write
an essay on the picnic.
In your essay:
describe the picnic area
describe the activities carried out during the picnic
make sure your essay is between 150 to 200 words
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PRACTICE 2
Your parents had organized a party to celebrate your birthday. Based on the picture
given, write an essay on your birthday party.
In your essay:
describe who your parents invited to the birthday party
describe the activities carried out during the birthday party
make sure your essay is between 150 to 200 words
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PRACTICE 3
You and your friends were on your way home when you saw an old lady trying to
cross a busy road. Based on the picture given, write an essay on what you and your
friends did to help the old lady.
In your essay:
describe the old lady
describe the traffic at the scene of the incident
make sure your essay is between 150 to 200 words
[30 marks]
PRACTICE 4
Based on the picture given, write an essay on what you and your friends did to help
the people who were hit by a hurricane.
In your essay:
describe the scene of the hurricane
describe what you did to help the victims
make sure your essay is between 150 to 200 words
[30 marks]
PRACTICE 5
The English Language Society of your school had carried out a survey on the
activities carried out by the students in their pastime. Based on the pie chart below,
write a report of the students pastime activities.
In your essay:
describe the types of activities carried out
give reasons for the choice of activities
make sure your essay is between 150 to 200 words
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PRACTICE 6
Your family went to Paradise Island for a few days. Based on the picture given, write
a recount on what you and your family did at the island.
In your essay:
describe the island
describe what you did during your stay at the island
make sure your essay is between 150 to 200 words
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PRACTICE 7
The picture below shows what you did last weekend with your family members.
Based on the picture given, write a description about how you spent your time with
them.
In your description :
give details of what you and your family did
suggest ways to foster a closer relationship among family members
make sure your description is between 150 to 200 words.
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PRACTICE 8
The picture below shows an incident of a robbery which you witnessed when you
went shopping with your mother.Based on the picture given write a recount of the
incident.
In your recount:
give details of the incident
recommend ways to prevent a robbery
make sure your recount is between 150 to 200 words
PRACTICE 9
The picture below shows your sisters 10th birthday party celebration. Based on the
picture given write a story about how you celebrated the birthday party
In your recount:
give details of the event
give reasons why we should celebrate birthdays
make sure your recount is between 150 to 200 words
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PRACTICE 10
The picture below shows you and your friends going for a camping trip organized by
the school Scouts Club. Based on the picture given, write a report of your camping
trip.
In your report:
give details of the trip
discuss the benefits of co-curricular activities
make sure your report is between 150 to 200 words
PRACTICE 11
The pictures below show students who are preparing for an examination.
Write an article on how to cope with examination stress.
In your article:
give details of the problems faced by students while preparing for an
examination
suggest ways to cope with examination stress
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make sure your article is between 150 to 200 words
Practice 12
The picture below shows a scene in a clinic. Based on the picture given, write
a description on what is happening in the picture.
In your description:
describe what is happening in the picture
discuss ways to keep healthy
make sure your description is between 150 to 200 words
Practice 13
The picture below shows your family spending time together. Based on the
picture given, write a diary entry what you and your family members did on
that day.
In your description:
give details of the activities
suggest ways to spend quality time with your family members.
Make sure your description is between 150 to 200 words
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Practice 14
In your recount:
give details of the event
discuss benefits of this activity
suggest other activities to raise funds for the school
Make sure your recount is between 150 to 200 words
Practice 15
The picture below shows a usual scene in a park. Based on the picture given,
describe what is happening in the picture.
In your description:
give details on what is happening in the picture
provide examples of other types of activities that people could do in a
park
make sure your recount is between 150 to 200 words
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Practice 16
The advertisement below shows several courses offered by a university
college. Based on the advertisement, write a letter of enquiry regarding one of
the courses offered.
In your letter:
choose one academic course that you are interested in
enquire on the minimum requirements in applying for the course
make sure your letter is between 150 to 200 words
Practice 17
In your essay:
describe the scene in detail
give the advantages of taking part in sports
make sure your essay is between 150 t0 200 words
Practice 18
Your village was affected by floods. You helped to evacuate the villagers
and their belongings.
Based on the picture given, write a recount of the event.
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In your recount:
give details of the event
suggest ways to help the flood victims
make sure your recount is between 150 to 200 words
Practice 19
The picture below shows the scene of the Cleanliness Campaign held in your
school. You took part in the campaign. As the President of the Nature Club of
the school, you want to write a report to the school Principal.
Based on the picture given, write a report on how the campaign was carried
out.
In
your report:
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Practice 20
The picture below shows the Scouts, one of the uniformed units found in most
schools in Malaysia. Based on the picture given, write an essay, stating your opinion
on the benefits of joining the clubs and societies.
Practice 1
Number the sentences below in the correct sequence to form the reminder.
Then write the reminder into your exercise book.
SENTENCES
It will be safer than walking alone.
However, you must remember that the weather is quite warm and you may
get dehydrated.
Do not play when crossing the road.
I know you will be going to Kuala Lumpur on 30 May 2014.
Next, always walk in a group.
Take care. Have a good time!
Accidents can happen anywhere, anytime!
I hope that you will enjoy yourself.
Finally, you must always be careful on the road.
So it is better to bring enough bottled water.
Then you do not need to spend your pocket money to buy bottled drinks.
GRAND SALE!
Practice 2
clothing and footwear at a discount of 30-50%
gifts and lucky draws for purchase of RM100 and above
all food items at a discount of 10% (not including fresh food)
GAYA SUPERMARKET
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NO. 3, JALAN BESAR, 41300 KLANG
Your brother, Ali, who is studying in a residential school, wants to go to the sale. He
wants you to help him ask permission from Mother. In about 100 words, write a
message to your mother. Use the notes below to help you.
tell your Mum what Ali wants to do
give reasons why Ali should to go to the sale
tell your Mum not to worry
Dear Mum,
There is a (1) in the Gaya (2) near Alis school. He wants to (3) to the sale
because he (4) to buy some things. He wants a (5) for his test papers. He also (6)
a pair of (7) for participating in the school track events. The supermarket is offering a
discount of (8) for shoes. (9) he can save some money in this way.
Dont (10) about Ali going shopping, Mum. He can look (11) himself. Anyway, he will
not (12) much as he is very careful with his money. He wont even buy himself an
(13). Let him (14) to (15) on his own two feet! We should not pamper him too much!
Fill in the blanksto complete the message. Use the words below to help
Siti you.
Practice 3
Your brother, Ali, who is studying in a residential school, wants to go to the sale.
Now, in about 100 words, write an e-mail to Ali telling him that Mum has allowed him
to go shopping. Use the notes below to help you.
Dear Ali,
Siti
Practice 4
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EVENT : The National Day Celebrations
VENUE : Larkin Stadium, Johor Bahru
GUEST OF HONOUR : The Sultan and Sultanah of Johor
PROGRAMME :
8.00 a.m Arrival of Very Important People and Guest OfHonour
8.30 a.m Singing of the national anthem
Chief Ministers speech
Performances begin
Traditional dances
March past by uniformed bodies
Float parade
Concert by top artists
You have attended the event. In about 100 words, write a description of the event to
your cousin.
Use the notes below to help you.
place, time and the guest of honours
tentative of the programme
your personal view of the event
Dear __________________
The ________________________________Celebrations was held at the
________________ in ____________________________.The celebration started at
_____________ with the arrival of
_____________________________________________. The guest of honour for the
day was ________________________________________________.
The celebration started of with the singing of
________________________________. It is followed by the
____________________________________. After that, the performances began.
There was a variety of _________________________________ like the zapin,
ribbon dance and the classical Indian dance performed by the school
children in beautiful costumes.
The celebration continued with a ________________________________by
____________________ such as the soldiers, the Red Crescent Society and
school bands. The highlight was the ___________________________________.
Everyone was fascinated by the beautifully decorated floats. The crowd
cheered as the floats went past. The final performance was by the
____________________________ in Malaysia.
In conclusion, I felt very excited and proud to see the celebration
and performances. The audience were very patriotic and I feegrateful for
being a Malaysian.
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EXTENDED WRITING GUIDED PRACTICES
GUIDED PRACTICE 1
The picture below shows your school concert which was held last Sunday. Based on
the picture given, write a recount of the event.
In your recount:
give details of the event
give the benefits of participating in school activities.
make sure your recount is between 150 to 200 words
All of us enjoyed the concert very much. Our teachers were surprised that there
were so many talented students in our school. We hope to stage another show at the
end of the third term before the school closes.
The audience enjoyed our play tremendously, judging from the loud applause as
the curtains dropped. The Malay dance performed by the Form Two girls was very
beautiful. The dancers wore Malay costume and had roses in their hair. They looked
graceful and charming in their green 'sarongs' and white 'kebayas' as they danced to
the accompaniment of Malay music.
As a conclusion, I believe there are many benefits for students who participate
their school activities. It helps to develop students talents and potential. Thus,
students become a better person. On the other hand, it also helps to raise the self
esteem of a student.
Last Sunday ourheld school concert . All the classes took part in it. My class put
up a play called 'The Magic Flute'. I can still remember how excited we were when
we tried on our colourfulcostumes. We spent a lot of time on rehearsals.
Besides these items, the School Choir sang Malay and English songs. Form One
girls, too, contributed an item. It was a ribbon dance, using long, colourful ribbons.
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GUIDED PRACTICE 2
Recently you have attended a talk on ways to stay healthy given by a doctor. Based
on the illustration below, you are asked to give a speech on ways to stay healthy.
In your speech :
provide information on ways to stay healthy
give advice on the importance of being healthy
make sure your speech is between 150 to 200 words
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Practice 1
The text below is about The Woodpecker, a common bird in Malaysia.
Question 1 -10 are based on the text. The first and last lines are correct. For the
remaining lines, there is onegrammatical error in each line.
Underline the error and write the correct word in the space provided. An example
has been given. The correct word must not change the meaning ofthe sentence.
There are no spelling errors in this text.
with four bright colours red, yellow, white but green. This e.g. and
and a few other countries. The woodpecker uses its long, strong 2.______
beak to pecks at trees. This is how the woodpecker earned its 3.______
name. The woodpecker makes holes in the trees to look of insects 4.______
and sometimes to build its nest. Apart than small insects, it also 5.______
eats fruits, berries and nuts, and drinks the sap of some tree. 6.______
Sugarcane juice are one of its food; the woodpecker can cause a 7.______
climbers. It uses its strong and hooked claws to cling to the side of 9.______
the trees during pecking holes in it. Dead coconut trees are useful 10._____
to start a family.
Practice 2
who doesnt reads the newspapers cannot keep in touch with the e.g. read
as around the world. A newspaper do not cost much. For less 2.______
than RM2, the reader gets a lot of information. There are a column 3.______
improve our spelling and widen our vocabulary. Thus, through 10._____
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Practice 3
picked it up and slipped it into him pocket. Just then a little boy 1.______
came running towards him and asked, Uncle, have you saw a 2.______
The dishonest men thought to himself. If I tell the truth, I will not 4.______
get to keep a money. I might as well tell a lie and keep the 5.______
money for myself. Maybe I will goes to a restaurant later and have 6.______
a good lunch. The dishonest man looked in the boys face. The 7.______
boy looked very worried. His eyes kept searching, hoping to found 8.______
the money. The dishonest man pretended to fell sorry for the boy, 9.______
only twenty ringgit. The boy replied, The money is a fake note!!
Practice 4
The text below is about how I was all alone in the house one day
Question 1 -10 are based on the text. The first and last lines are correct. For the
remaining lines, there is onegrammatical error in each line.
Underline the error and write the correct word in the space provided. An example
has been given. The correct word must not change the meaning ofthe sentence.
There are no spelling errors in this text.
was reading a book, I heard a noise. I look out the window. e.g. looked
tried to opened the gate with a tool of some kind. Immediately my 2.______
I remembered that my neighbour had gone out. They was no one 5.______
in the house. I called a police instead. I told Inspector Jaya about 6.______
the thief. He said that he would send some man over. A few 7.______
minute later, the police arrived and arrested the man. The man 8.______
had taken to the police station. When my neighbours learnt about 9.______
the incident, they thanked me. We should always be well and 10._____
caringneighbours.
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Practice 5
Dear Sir,
and ours English teacher, Mr. Adam. We would strictly follow any 8.______
rules stated and we assures you of our good behaviour. I certainly 9.______
hope you will grant us the permission. Please reply at soon as 10._____
Questions 1 10 are based on the text. The first and last lines are correct. For the
remaining lines, there is one grammatical error in each line.
Underline the error and write the correct word in the space provided. An example has been
given. The correct word must not change the meaning of the sentence. There are no
spelling errors in this text.
Dear Kailun,
Work hard and manage your times well and I am sure you will pass e.g. time
the PMR examination with flying colours. Here is some useful tips. 1._____________
Pay attention to the teacher when they are teaching- this is 2._____________
amount of time you give to each topic will depended on the length 6._____________
PRACTICE 7
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Sheila Daud is in Form Three. She is sitting for her PMR
examination in the end of the year. She is studying very hard. She
e.g. at
wants to made sure she gets good grades for her examination and
1._____________
make her parents proud about her. After completing secondary school,
2._____________
Sheila planning to go to the university to further her studies. However,
3._____________
her parents is farmers and they do not earn a lot of money. They also
4._____________
have to support Sheila brothers and sisters through school. So Sheila
5._____________
hopes to win a scholarship so that she will be able to study to the
6._____________
university. I am going to make it to the university, no matter what
7._____________
happened, she says. I will work hard at my studies and try to get the
8._____________
best results she possibly can. Then I will apply for a scholarship. If I
9._____________
dont getting a scholarship, I will get a job, save through enough
10.___________
money and then pay my own way through university.
PRACTICE 8
bodies, MrMuniandy was able to lift loads of about 150 kilograms. In 1._____________
fact, many man who are much younger than he is cannot do that. 2._____________
MrMuniandy uses his strong body to help his to earn a living.
3._____________
People hire him to load and unload good from their lorries to the
4._____________
shops. Every morning, he waits with another like him at JalanRodget
5._____________
for contractors, who require his services, to hiring him. He works from
6._____________
8a.m. to 5p.m. unloading sacks of goods from the lorries and earn $24
7._____________
a day. At the end of the day, he felt very tired and sometimes he has
8._____________
backaches. However, he seldom complaints. I have been doing this
9._____________
job since I was in my twenties. Its the only job I know. I am thankful
10.___________
that I still have such a strong body and can continue work despite my
age.
PRACTICE 9
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tender age of seven. It must have been a rather frightened experience 2._____________
for the young boy at first. However, he obeyed him father and made 3._____________
up his mind to do his best there. He studied at England for several 4._____________
also learnt to face challenges and not to give up when he have 6._____________
problems. 7._____________
After spending some year in England, he returned to Malaya
8._____________
and continue his education at the Malay College Kuala Kangsar. He
9._____________
completed his secondary education there. He then returned from
10.___________
Johor in 1911 to serve the state government.
PRACTICE 10
morning. Pak Hamid couldnt wait to get home to some breakfast and 3._____________
but what? He dismissed the idea of someone burnt rubbish. He smelt 6._____________
the air again. Yes. It was definitely everything burning. He looked 7._____________
around. He walked further about and there it was! Smoke was coming 8._____________
out from the back of a bungalow. Fire! Fire! shout Pak Hamid, 9._____________
sounding the alarm. He ran to the house. The gate is locked. He 10.___________
climbed over the gate and banged on the door. No one answered.
PRACTICE 11
father had a new job. I was nine year old when we moved to 7._____________
TelukIntan. It affected my life great. At the start, it was not easy for me 8._____________
at all. I was new to the place but I had no friends. However, I soon 9._____________
PRACTICE 12
possible way for the length of ones lives. It is not necessary to work 5._____________
exercising. 8._____________
The health benefits of exercise has been recognized for
9._____________
centuries. As early as 600 BC, an Indian physician use exercise to
10.___________
treat diabetes. In most recent times, exercise has been used to help
treat and prevent heart disease, high blood pressure, arthritis and
depression.
PRACTICE 13
and textiles are available here. Batu Caves is holy limestone caves. 9._____________
Thousands of Hindus make religious trips to these caves every year. 10.___________
PRACTICE 14
His name is Azlan, but most of us call him Kecil because of his
tiny body. He is just above 1 metre tall. Him hair looks like coconut
e.g. His
husk. I loves his sparkling eyes. They show a lot of life. When he
1._____________
laughs, his mouth opens wide, showing a set of uneven tooth. His two
2._____________
front teeth are especially larger. We like to laugh at his teeth but he
3._____________
does not get angry- that is what makes him so likeable. A shirts that
4._____________
he wears are much very large for him. According to Azlan, large shirts
5._____________
make him look fatter. Azlan is a smart boy. He is usually the first to
6._____________
answer the teachers questions. Whenever we play Scrabble with him,
7._____________
he always came out the winner. However, he is not selfish about his
8._____________
knowledge and intelligence. He helps us with our homeworks but in
9._____________
return he will ask for a sweet. He always finishes his work at time and
he is also teachers pet. Azlan is truly a nice boy. I am glad to be his 10.___________
friend.
PRACTICE 15
There were fifty of us in the camp. We were divide into 5 teams. One
e.g. divided
of the most memorable game that we played was filling up a pail with
1._____________
water through methods other that using containers like a bottle, a
2._____________
bucket or a bowl. You can imagine our reaction when we are told
3._____________
about the rule. There were five team consisting of ten members each.
4._____________
The source of water was the small stream located about 100 metres
5._____________
away. At the word Go!, each member ran as fast that he could to the
6._____________
stream. Most of us used only our palms. Many did not bring out even
7._____________
a drop of water by the time they reached the pail. The most creative
8._____________
ones used their shirts and one boy even used his cap! There was
9._____________
many laughter and noise as each member of the team return to the
10.___________
pail. I shall never forget the fun we had on that particular day.
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