Final Draft
Final Draft
Wrt - 102
Newport beach
Everyone has a place where they go to release all the pressure and worries of life. There
is always that one spot that can resolve all my problems and troubles in times of stress. For me,
the beach is the cure to most of my problems. While I am there, all of my obligations are
As I walk into the sand I can feel the soft smooth sand beneath my feet. I can feel the
breeze hitting my face and making my hair go back and forth. I close my eyes,viewing the rays
of the sun on a sunny day . I am comforted by the sounds of the ocean and the waves coming my
way as I approach the water. I can hear the pounding of the waves putting down all of my
worries. I look up into the blue sky and see the perfection of life.
As I stand in the middle of nowhere I can see everything around me and hear the
children building sand castles along the ocean's edge. To my right I hear mostly everyone around
me laughing and enjoying their time with family and friends. When I turn to glance at the water
I can see a humongous wave coming my way. I run as fast as I can toward the end of the water
where I can feel sans before the waves hits me and get me soaking wet . I can see how the sun is
slowly going down and its getting dark. It it honestly my favorite part of the day when im at the
beach.
I love the feeling of being alone at night walking around barefoot and thinking about my
problems and having the feeling that everything is going to end up being okay. The sound of the
water splashing and the silence around me makes me feel comfortable and feel relevied from all
my problems. It is a space where I enjoy being at with my loved one or even alone it helps me in
many various ways. Now that I am relaxed, I close my eyes and inhale and exhale just to make
In conclusion to my beach experience, I feel comfortable to visit and enjoy the beach.
Although not everyone agrees with my points, its my personal opinion. I love being able to have
some time to myself and think about life. Its amazing how nature can leave you with less stress
and make you feel like a new person living a good life.