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C. H. Knoblauch and Lil Brannon
Writing as Learning
Through the Curriculum
C. H. Knoblauch is an associate professor of English at the State University of New York in Albany
He is coauthor of The Writing Process: Discovery and Control (Houghton-Mifflin, second edition
and has completed a new book on eighteenth-century theories of the composing process.
Lil Brannon is an assistant professor of English and English Education and the associate director of
the Expository Writing Program at New York University. She is coauthor of Writers Writing
(Boynton/Cook). Knoblauch and Brannon are now collaborating on a book about rhetorical theor
and the teaching of writing (Boynton/Cook, forthcoming).
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1. David Hamilton has discussed the limitation in allowing English departments to retain to
exclusive a control, actual or spiritual, over the teaching and use of writing across the disciplines
See "Interdisciplinary Writing," College English, 41 (1980), 780-96.
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Writing as Learning Through the Curriculum 467
the history teacher, as one example, can use it to assist the learning of
history-by inviting students to employ it as a probe or heuristic for conceiving
the relationships among facts and ideas that we designate as a knowledge of
history. At the same time the history teacher need not "correct" writing at all,
since the concern is less for formal propriety in this context than for the making
of new meanings. Over time we might expect students' writing to "improve" as
a result of efforts to learn by composing. But the improvement is a desirable
by-product, not an immediate goal, of sustained writing, just as physical coordi-
nation may improve, accidentally as it were, in the process of playing a sport.
The special expertise of the composition teacher is properly subordinate here to
that of the historian, whose emphasis is legitimately on intellectual penetration of
the subject. By using writing to assist that penetration, the teacher also coinci-
dentally strengthens both the motive and the capacity to write elsewhere.
The trouble is, many teachers preserve notions about the nature of knowledge
and learning which limit their ability to recognize the heuristic value of composi-
tion. Instructors both in English and other fields often assume that knowledge is
a stable and bounded artifact, a collection of information, a set of facts and ideas
to be delivered to students through lectures and course readings. The goal of
instruction is to "cover" a subject by enumerating its relevant data. The teacher
as knower recalls the body of facts and conveys it to students, learners, who
passively receive and store it, perhaps for later retrieval in term papers or
examinations. "Learning" means receiving information; "knowing" is the con-
dition of having retained it, which can be measured by students' ability to report
it in writing at a teacher's discretion. Teaching means turning learners into
knowers by passing on to them the substance of knowledge.
These assumptions are venerable and deep-seated-and wrong. A more plaus-
ible argument, substantiated over three hundred years of insight and research,2 is
that knowing is an activity, not a condition or state, that knowledge implies the
making of connections, not an inert body of information, that both teachers and
students are learners, that discourse manifests and realizes the power to learn,
and that teaching entails creating incentives and contexts for learning, not a re-
porting of data. Specifically, learning is the process of an individual mind making
meaning from the materials of its experience. As George Kelly has described the
process in A Theory of Personality knowledge is comprised of patterns of rela-
tionships endlessly evolving through accretion, disintegration, and reconstruc-
tion. Learning consists in the assertion of those relationships while knowing is
the consciousness of a pattern of relationships that enables learning to take
place. One way to facilitate students' learning about a subject is to have them
write, because learning and articulating are inseparable activities. Writing ena-
bles new knowledge because it involves precisely that active effort to state rela-
2. For the beginnings of this important shift in focus, see C. H. Knoblauch, "Modern Composi-
tion Theory and the Rhetorical Tradition," Freshman English News (Fall, 1980), pp. 3-4, 11-17. For
contemporary views of the relationship of learning and composing, see Jerome Bruner, Toward a
Theory of Instruction (Cambridge, Mass.: Belknap Press, 1967); George A. Kelly, A Theory of Per-
sonality (New York: Norton, 1963); James Britton, Language and Learning (New York: Penguin,
1970); and Ann E. Berthoff, The Making of Meaning (Montclair, N.J.: Boynton/Cook, 1981).
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tionships which is at the heart of learning.3 Composing always entails the searc
for connections: its nature is to compel the writer to undertake that search. I
involves the sustained effort to select and order ideas as patterns of connectio
and thereby to generate creative insights through developing form. It is the sha
thinking takes when constrained by laws of syntax, logic, and rhetoric. To insis
only on its technical propriety is to underestimate its power as a heuristic and
therefore its value in the classroom. Conversely, to accentuate the role of com
posing in discovering new knowledge is to show students why their writing ma
ters, therefore to increase their motivation to write, and therefore, ultimately,
increase the likelihood of improvement because they have become more aware
of the purpose and value of making meaning.
Most advocates of writing across the curriculum would surely agree with all o
this. But theoretical awareness notwithstanding, teaching practices too often en
up paying mere lip service to writing as learning while exaggerating a concern f
formal and technical correctness. The authors of Writing in the Arts and Sci-
ences (Elaine Maimon, Gerald Belcher, Gail W. Hearn, Barbara F. Nodine, an
Finbarr W. O'Connor), for example, mention the heuristic potential of compos
ing, speaking on p. xii of the use of writing as "a way to learn." Yet the
emphasis is finally on prose decorum, the belief that writing is "a form of soci
behavior," that students must "learn to control the common conventional fea-
tures of the written code: spelling, punctuation, conformity to standard Engl
usage." Writing to learn is subtly displaced by an extensive discussion of h
learning is to be acceptably displayed. "When you use this book," the autho
admit, "you will still be teaching composition, not introductory courses in the
disciplines, and you will be able to exemplify principles of good writing from
much broader range of material" (p. xii). One might question whether or not a
composition course is really the best vehicle for encouraging writing across th
disciplines, precisely because its focus is likely to be on formal shells rather tha
on modes of thinking and learning in different domains. But the more immedia
point is that, whatever the authors' commitment to writing as learning, their
preoccupation with "models" of acceptable verbal behavior attracts attention to
writing chiefly as a species of social etiquette, thereby allowing teachers who ar
less informed than they are to retain their traditional concern for what Ann
Berthoff has called "muffin tins" for discourse. To be sure, an awareness of
generic constraints facilitates effective professional communication. But there is
little gain in showing students how to write like professionals before they have
discovered any good reason to write at all or before they have developed the
capacity to think well about their subjects. A competent, motivated writer can
quickly master the constraints of a lab report or a case study. The pedagogical
priority, therefore, ought to be to develop that competent, motivated writer-by
first encouraging writing for the sake of learning.
Unlike the authors of Writing in the Arts and Sciences, Anne J. Herrington,
another advocate of cross-disciplinary writing, argues explicitly for incorporating
3. This is the connection Janet Emig establishes in "Writing as a Mode of Learning," College
Composition and Communication, 28 (1977), 124.
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Writing as Learning Through the Curriculum 469
4. See James Britton, T. Burgess, N. Martin, A. McLeod, and H. Rosen, The Development of
Writng Abilities, 11-18 (London: Macmillan Education, 1975).
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students to spend the first ten minutes of class writing freely about the readin
assigned the previous night, perhaps relating it to earlier lectures or to so
question the teacher raises. Then suppose that these students traded their stat
ments among themselves, read each other's writing, wrote responses to that
writing for five more minutes, reflecting upon its meaning for them or offeri
counter-arguments, and then returned the statements for inclusion in course
notebooks. At the end of this procedure, and because of it, students would ha
achieved a level of intellectual engagement with the materials of the course
probably well in advance of what we usually see at the start of a class. Now
suppose that midway through a lecture, at a critical juncture of argument or after
describing an especially complex idea, the instructor stopped and asked students
to write for five more minutes, representing for themselves the substance of the
teacher's point. Then suppose the teacher asked a few students to read their
statements aloud, using the readings as a basis for some class discussion. Again,
the level of intellectual commitment and penetration is likely to improve, simply
because writing forces any mind to confront new experience, make connections
with other experience, and discover some personal coherence.
These exercises are valuable because they keep students writing while em-
phasizing a demonstrable motive to write. They are also valuable because of
their evident relevance to an instructor's own goals in a course, enabling a richer
learning experience for students without increasing the teacher's workload or
forcing the teacher to learn (or pretend to) an alien expertise. Any writing which
allows for open connection-making and intellectual dialogue can be useful for
encouraging thought and learning. A journal or notebook, for example, which a
teacher might review once or twice in a semester, is probably more useful than a
term paper because it allows students more freedom to explore the ideas of a
discipline from a personal vantage point, and therefore greater opportunity to
learn without the anxiety of anticipating formal expectations that are made to
seem more important than the search for meaning. A notebook can become the
vehicle of a mind's progress toward understanding a subject. It is also the record
of that progress, which a teacher can view and respond to in order to encourage
additional learning.
By notebook or "journal" we do not mean the private writing that is often
recommended chiefly as an invention procedure prior to composing a more for-
mal discourse, a kind of writing that can be coherent or not, readable or not, as
the writer chooses. Instead we mean writing that tests various possibilities of
connection and coherence in an orderly, penetrating way, writing intended to be
read by a supportive teacher whose role is not to evaluate what is said but only
to respond to it, raising questions about it in order to facilitate more writing,
more connection-making. It is also, somewhat like free writing, a mode of com-
posing that allows maximum flexibility to pursue connections as they occur to
the writer without the overriding concern in more public discourses for adhering
to intellectual and formal limits arising from choices already made. As the au-
thors of a 1976 report of the London Schools Council Project observed, in this
kind of composing the writer "feels free to jump from facts to speculation to
personal anecdote to emotional outburst and none of it will be taken down and
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Writing as Learning Through the Curriculum 471
5. Nancy Martin, Pat D'Arcy, Bryan Newton, Robert Parker, Writing and Learning Across the
Curriculum, 11-16 (London: Schools Council Publications, 1976), p. 23.
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Observations like these continue over a period of several days, revealing the
child's growing interest in and awareness of the behaviors she is witnessing. The
researchers offer some samples of teacher response intended to sharpen the
child's awareness of her assumptions, for instance, the connection she is making
between animal behavior and what she regards as typical human behavior. How
can we be sure, for example, that such facial movements as twitching noses have
anything to do with the way rabbits behave toward each other? Whether the
child's connection is plausible or not, a teacher might use her interest in the
rabbits' behavior to stimulate additional concern for the ways people behave. To
what extent do human beings rely on facial expression when they communicate
feelings? What are some examples? How has the human ability to use language
given us an advantage over other animals? (pp. 76-77). Such questions can lead
to more writing, and more learning, by drawing the student into ever deepening
dialogue. They engage the subject from the student's standpoint, thereby en-
abling additional connection-making in terms of the student's own interests and
abilities while also encouraging growth in understanding of the subject.
Here is an excerpt from the journal of a graduate student in a course on con-
temporary rhetorical theory. Members of the class had been discussing the
applicability of rhetorical theory to the teaching of writing with reference to
readings from the work of James Kinneavy and Frank D'Angelo, among others.
Since it was only the second week of class, students still had not really come to
grips with the principles of modem discourse theory or with their potential appli-
cations. The writing in this student's journal is, therefore, generalized and unfo-
cused. One goal of the course (but not of the instructor's immediate commen-
tary) would be to focus the writing, through questioning, as a means of encourag-
ing the sort of energetic, intellectual connection-making that would constitute
learning in this particular subject matter:
As I was reading James Kinneavy and D'Angelo I just let their ideas run together in
my mind-somewhat anxious about what they might be trying to say. I was not
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trying to see how they were going to help me as a teacher, but just trying to gather
in information. What exactly are they saying to me? D'Angelo argues for salvaging
the classical models of conceptualizing: definition, comparison/contrast etc., he
says, are processes of the mind. Meanwhile, Kinneavy points to the "fact" that all
discourses have "aims," that is, a direction toward the audience, or the world, or
the writer herself, or the discourse itself as an aesthetic object. It seems to me he's
also, like D'Angelo, working from the classical tradition, sorting and categorizing,
working from the classical model of knowledge. Now what does all this mean to me
as a teacher? Or am I getting ahead of myself? Should I be asking first about the
assumptions on which they base their taxonomies? I'll back up: Kinneavy is right
that we can sort texts the way he says-but what does that tell us about the com-
posing of them? And D'Angelo is right that we occasionally compare things, or
define them, or look for causes and effects. But how selfconscious are we about
that when we write, how selfconscious should students be? Since all these sortings
and categories are listed in textbooks, I guess I'm supposed to teach them. But they
seem awfully static, artificial, afterthefact to me.
The confusions and uncertainties that we notice in this entry not only reveal
the student's relationship to the content of the course but also suggest some
points of teacher intervention in the student's thinking to improve intellectual
penetration. One comment might be: "Can you tell me what you think the 'clas-
sical model of knowledge' is? Do we still accept it? Does our teaching still de-
pend on it? How? What would a 'modern' theory of knowledge look like? How
might it change our teaching?" Another comment might be: "Granted that we
can sort texts as Kinneavy does, what is the point of sorting them? Could it be
valuable to know the sortings even if you do not teach them explicitly? What
kinds of aims are we conscious of when we write? Some of your own questions
are good ones: now that you've posed them, why not try out some answers?"
Any number of issues could have been raised, of course; these happened to
interest a particular teacher. The choice of response or question is less important
than the type: these serve to initiate dialogue about a shared subject, and there-
fore more thinking, more writing, more learning about it.
What we see in these two instances of writing in "content" courses is the
feasibility of using composing as a central feature of instruction in courses that
do not directly emphasize writing "improvement." Presumably what any class-
room seeks to nurture is intellectual conversation, leading to enhanced powers of
discernment. Since writing enables both learning and conversation, manifesting
and enlarging the capacity to discover connections, it should be a resource that
all teachers in all disciplines can rely on to achieve their purposes. Naturally,
students should learn, over time, how to observe prose decorum in the forms
available to writers in different fields. So too we would all hope that their writing
will "improve" as they continue their education. But we should put first things
first, creating motives to write by showing its value for learning before laboring
the mastery of superficial constraints. If our cooperative colleagues in other dis-
ciplines can see the importance writing has for their own instructional purposes,
they may be more willing to ask for it, and not just in order to do a favor for the
English department. Meanwhile, if students have frequent opportunities to learn
by writing throughout their curricula and across all levels of education from the
primary grades to graduate school, the English department's special concern for
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literacy is likely to be far better served than it is now in pointless ritual regurgita-
tions of the pros and cons of capital punishment with title page, notes, and bibli-
ography. It will be easy enough for historians and biologists to show thinking,
verbally acute human beings how to write in their professional modes, provided
we teachers, collectively, have worked to develop thinking, verbally acute
human beings in the first place.
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