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General Tips
Given its breadth and open nature, creative writing can seem a bit overwhelming to even the
most experienced writers. This section contains some tips on getting started, as well as some
general reflections on what makes a good read and tips for students of creative writing.
A five to ten minute 'free write' in one of these channels about an idea or something physical can
both be good ways to figure out what to write about. For example, writing about a house through
the feeling channel will produce something very different from the observational channel. A lot
of material can come through free writing; it can spark an idea for a more focused piece.
Pick a book of poems or collected creative essays/story excerpts:
Go through the book and pick a few with a good opening line and ending line, then a few you
feel are weaker.
Ask yourself why the selected are the stronger and weaker.
Usually the stronger will instantly draw the reader in with an intriguing action and conclude with
an equally powerful image. The weaker are often predictable or non-unique images. Keep this in
mind with your own writing.
After you start, take away what you love the most:
This can be very hard to do once you actually begin the composition process--there is bound to
be a sentence, paragraph, or stanza that inevitably becomes your favorite.
However, in order to make the other parts equally as strong, an effective technique is to cut out
the 'favorite' bit so that you can examine the remaining parts and see how you can make them as
strong as the best one. Afterwards, you can put the removed component back in to see if the
piece still flows.
Let it marinate:
Once you have finished a piece, try 'putting it away' for a day or two. Often, new inspiration will
come from something that has already been written to produce something even better.
His guardian angel whispered to Fabian, behind his shoulder: "Careful, Fabian! It is
decreed that you will die the moment you pronounce the word doyen."
"Doyen?" asks Fabian, intrigued.
And he dies.
Though this is an incredibly short example of a story, the elements of a 'moment' are clearly
present: The piece builds toward is Fabian's death. The death is a surprise and a "moment"
because of the irony: It is Fabian's guardian angel who is ultimately responsible for Fabien's
death (it is hard to believe Fabien would have ever randomly said "Doyen"); also, when
Fabien utters the fatal word he is "intrigued" instead of fearful. This turn in the final section
of the piece is what causes it to be effective.
Had the piece been something like:
Fabien was staggering down the street, drunk, the smell of cheap whiskey assaulting the
atmosphere around him. He was thinking about all the problems in his life when he
stumbled into the street and was hit by a car.
Then the piece would not have been effective because there is no 'turn' here--it is not all that
interesting or surprising that a drunk person would accidentally stumble into the street, it is
only tragic; however, this tragedy does not constitute a "moment" or the sort of turn that
would make a piece interesting and engaging to read because the piece has no complexity.
However, simply because moments are paramount does not mean the author has to know
what moment he/she is building toward when he/she begins drafting. In fact, rarely will an
author know what this effect will be before he/she sits down to write the piece.
Instead, the purpose and punch of the piece usually reveals itself to the author in the process
of writing, and it is on the author to go back and recognize what contributes to building
toward that "moment" and what does not.
Below is an example of a how a free-write can help lead to a theme and a moment:
"It's a funny thing-that which can cause inanimate objects to take on great meaning. I
remember my friend Oliver, with his glasses and his quiet way-the way he'd do
everything slowly, the way that there was no rush----excepting of course those moments
of spontaneity and levity that seemed to randomly burst from him like juice from one of
those gusher fruit snacks from the old days. How is it that a chess board can be such a
slice of life? It's plastic and felt that's packaged in Korea by workers getting paid Goddoesn't-even-want-to-know how little. And yet in my hands, in my mind, those pieces
come alive. It's a delirious transformation, how sixty four checkered squares become
relevant. The heads in the hands (which greases up the hair), and that wild look that the
players can get-the savagery, the ire, the devil himself looking out from behind the eyes
of someone that wouldn't say a goddamn word to you if you cut in front of him at the
Starbucks line. The board changes people."
There are many images in this free write: it rambles about the author's experiences at chess
tournaments and wanders down various tangents; however, eventually the author finds a
theme that he likes and sees has potential to use throughout the piece.
Even though at this point in the writing it may not be clear to the author what his/her moment
is, the point of the free write is to find a starting point that the author knows will lead to some
sort of moment, even if the author doesn't know what exactly that moment will be.
In the above free write, when the author got to "The board changes people," he subjectively
saw this as a strong statement to use to start his piece because of the potential for interesting
ultimate effects it offeredhe could use interesting images to show how his opening
statement is true, or he could focus the piece toward an ending line in which he contradicts
the opening statement. Even if you do not know what your moment will be right away, if you
find yourself thinking and talking about ultimate effect then you are on the right track.
If you have a piece that doesn't seem to be building toward anything, sometimes it's useful to
just chat about the piece. Chatting is easier than free writing for many individuals; having
someone to bounce ideas off of can provide you with a creative spark.
If you have a piece that is building toward something but it still seems awkward to you, that
is probably because the piece is not taut--that is, not all of what is written contributes to the
moment. In this case, ask yourself how different aspects of the piece contribute to the
meaning and work from there.
Significant, concrete detail
Precise language is the difference between an engaging story or poem and a boring story or
poem. Look for vague language and abstractions (some abstractions include hard-to-grasp
concepts like intelligence, criticism, love, and anger which can often be more effectively
shown through specific events, actions, or dialogue in a piece).
Though sometimes you may be using this language for some other purpose (like in dialogue to
capture the voice of a character), generally speaking the more specific the language is the
stronger the piece will be.
Janet Burroway's book The Elements of Craft has a terrific discussion of significant, concrete
detail which conveys this point well: "The notion of detail is important to the image because
it moves away from the generalized notion and toward the particular. For example, creature is
a generalized notion, hard to see except in the vaguest way. Animal is still vaguefourlegged animal is a little more specific; domestic animal a little more; dog narrows the field;
mix-breed Sheppard we can see, old Sammy asleep on the red rug, his haunches twitching in
his dreams brings the dog into sharp focus in our minds."
The best way to play with language is to find places where your language is vague.
Sometimes, you will have a specific purpose in choosing the language that you did; more
often, it might be the case that you go through your piece to find places where the language
discipline).
Creative Non-fiction
If representing and exploring the real by writing in the genre of creative non-fiction is your
goal, we hope these tips about what creative non-fiction is, as well as some pointers on a few
genres that are considered creative non-fiction (memoir and the personal essay) can help you.
We have also included some links to some well-known examples of creative non-fiction to give
you a sense of what is out there.
An Introduction to Creative Non-Fiction
What is creative non-fiction?
Creative nonfiction merges the boundaries between literary art (fiction, poetry) and research
nonfiction (statistical, fact-filled, run of the mill journalism). It is writing composed of the
real, or of facts, that employs the same literary devices as fiction such as setting, voice/tone,
character development, etc. This makes if different (more creative) than standard
nonfiction writing.
Sometimes called literary journalism or the literature of fact, creative non-fiction merges the
boundaries between literary art (fiction, poetry) and research non-fiction (statistical, factfilled, run of the mill journalism). It is writing composed of the real, or of facts, that employs
the same literary devices as fiction, such as setting, voice/tone, character development, etc.
Creative non-fiction should (1) include accurate and well-researched information, (2) hold
the interest of the reader, and (3) potentially blur the realms of fact and fiction in a pleasing,
literary style (while remaining grounded in fact).
In the end, creative non-fiction can be as experimental as fictionit just needs to be based in
the real.
Content of creative non-fiction:
It's important to clarify that the content of creative non-fiction does not necessarily have to
come from the life or the experience of the writer. Say, for instance, the writer is using
techniques from literary journalism to create a portrait of a person interviewed. The writer
may choose to write a portrait of the interviewee through an omniscient perspective, meaning
the writer wouldn't be in the piece at all.
On the other hand, non-fiction writers often choose to write about topics or people close to
them (including themselves). As long as the piece deals with something real, or something
based on the real, the writer is allowed to take the piece in any direction he or she wishes.
In creative non-fiction, writers attempt to observe, record, and thus shape a moment from real
life. Writers thus extract meaning through factual details-they combine the fact of detail with
the literary extrapolation necessary in rendering meaning from an observed scene.
At the same time, successful creative non-fiction attempts to overlay fact with traditional
conceptions of dramatic structure. While rendering meaning from an observed scene, a piece
should suggest a beginning, middle and end that clearly conveys the conflict and the
characters, and pushes the action toward some sort of closure.
In effect, creative non-fiction attempts to project a dramatic, literary framework upon
everyday existence, rendering it enjoyable, enlightening and potentially meaningful.
While writing creative non-fiction, writers should dwell on sensory details and "show show
show."
A piece should never just tell the reader something or summarizethis is what research nonfiction does.
Different types of creative non-fiction writing:
Due to the fact that creative non-fiction is an ever-evolving genre of writing, it is difficult to
define set types:
The Personal Essay:
A piece of writing, usually in the first person, that focuses on a topic or a personal
experience that strongly affects the reader vis--vis its apparent emotional impact on the
narrator. It can be narrative or non-narrative-it can tell a story in a traditional way or
improvise a new way for doing so. Ultimately, it should always be based on true,
personal experience.
The Memoir:
A memoir is a longer piece of creative non-fiction that delves deep into a writer's
personal experience. It typically uses multiple scenes/stories as a way of examining a
writer's life (or an important moment in a writer's life). It is usually, but not necessarily,
narrative.
The Short Short:
A short/short is a (typically) narrative work that is concise and to the point. It uses
imagery and details to relay the meaning, or the main idea of the piece. Typically it's only
one or two scenes, and is like a flash of a moment that tells a whole story.
Literary Journalism:
Literary journalism uses the techniques of journalism (such as interviews and reviews) in
order to look outside of the straight forward, objective world that journalism creates. It
uses literary practices to capture the scene/setting of the assignment or the persona of the
person being interviewed. It can often be narrative or heavily imagistic. Another
important aspect of literary journalism is that it often stretches the idea of "objective
facts" in order to better reflect real life and real people. In other words, while journalism
is about being completely objective, literary journalism says that people can't be objective
because they already have their own subjective views about the world. Therefore, by
taking the "objectiveness" out of the journalistic process, the writer is being more
truthful.
The Lyric Essay:
The lyric essay is similar to the personal essay in that it also deals with a topic that affects
the reader. However, the lyric essay relies heavily on descriptions and imagery. Lyrical
suggests something poetic, musical, or flowing (in a sense). This type of piece uses a very
lyrical, heavily descriptive, flowing tone in order to tell a story.
You may want to find some memoirs in the library or online in order to get a feel for the
variety out there and some of the ways you might want to go about writing yours. A few
examples I am familiar with are:
Though these are longer books, memoirs can make the form of shorter, more "snapshot" like
pieces as well. A memoir does not have to be a long, all-inclusive cataloguing of your lifethat could be overwhelming, boring, and read more like a formal autobiography---choose a
specific focus. Take creative license.
A memoir, though based on and rooted in truth and fact, does not have to be 100% straight
laced non-fiction. Take a new perspective, get creative, find a way to make your piece more
interesting, fresh, thought-provoking etc. In other words, just because this is non-fiction, that
DOES NOT have to make it boring, dry, straight-forward, and humorless.
Though there is some controversy over what can and cannot be called memoir,
Lauren Slater's book Lying is a good example of how creative you can get with this
genre. Hers is specifically labeled a metaphorical memoir in order to avoid this
controversy (though it has followed her anyway), and so perhaps saying something to
that effect is a way of avoiding complaints of false advertising and fraud. Though you
should not claim something to be true that is not, you can choose what you want to
leave out of or include in your memoir. You can make it read like fiction, and you
can make conscious decisions to surround your work with ambiguity that questions
the nature of truth vs. fact (as Slater does). It may sound complicated, but really is
quite basic: don't make claims your piece is something it's not, don't outright lie and
then say it's fact, but choose your material carefully and you can do many more things
with memoirs than you might at first think (see the limits of the real in creative nonfiction above).
Finally, have fun with it! Enjoy it! Memoirs can be very emotionality releasing, fun to
play around with, and can reward not only the reader but also you, the writer. Test
your limits and try different ways of writingits all about self-exploration and
discovery.
with material in class at a very personal, complex, and meaningful level, and also in the amount
of latitude that you as a writer are afforded in terms of style, technique, and form. The following
are some tips and strategies to help you think as you write and revise a personal essay, or prepare
to write this kind of assignment for the first time (the topic of the essay will always varywe are
focused on the genre as a whole here).
Focus. In some ways, the personal essay is similar to memoir and many of the same techniques
can be used effectively. It differs in that an essay is focused on one specific topic (and here, it
will be explored through your own experiences) whereas the memoir has the capability to trace
or illuminate several themes, topics, and ideas via the authors life (or part(s) of that life) that
he/she describes (and how he/she describes it).
Organization. Not to be confused with form (see below). Your essay, like other essays, should
have some kind of coherent organization to it. This is not to say that you must use thesis style
(in fact, we are confident that powerful personal essays follow that organization scheme less than
5% of the time). No matter how you choose to organize (and what form you use), be sure that
your paragraphs and ideas flow from one to the next, connected by a common theme (trying to
tackle the topic on which you are writing). It can be scattered or fragmented (if that is a
stylistic/form choice you make), but the entire paper should have a relationship, even if it only
becomes clear at the end. This allows the reader to follow your experience.
Form. One of the best parts of this kind of writing is the power given to you as the writer.
There is no form, no formula, no tried and true method that you must use to be effective. In fact,
to copy something that somebody else has done is not only rather boring, but also defeats the
purpose of this being a personal essay. Choose a form and style that suits you and is fitting for
the experience that you are describing. Try to think of the form as a part of the writing itself, not
just a framework for it: the form should actually enhance and make more poignant what it is you
are taking about. Push the boundaries, but dont go too faryou are still writing an essay (and
be sure that you follow any specific requirements outlined by your professor).
Diction/Language. Like form, in the personal essay (and creative writing generally, perhaps
even, to some extent, writing in general) the way in which you say something can mean just as
much as the form into which you place what it is you are saying. Use language to enhance what
you are writing about and not just as a means to say it. Here is where you can get really creative
and appropriately use linguistic play to explore your topic and your own relation to it in new
and complex ways.
the importance of the word personal is not to be undervalued. Whatever you choose to write
about must be important to you, hinge around your experience, and have some impact on you.
When writing a personal essay, it is important to remember that the main character is you. This is
challenging for a lot of people who are used to expressing themselves through a character or
through poetry. Personal essays demand more vulnerability than either of these forms. In a
personal essay, the writer should never be afraid of the word I in fact, it should be used as
often as possible. In most situations where you find yourself straying into the first person plural
(we) or even the third person, using such vague language as "one could" or one would, you
will almost always find the writing becomes stronger if you replace the subject with I. Most of
the time, drifting into vague language is a sign that you are trying to convey a message you find
too personal and are afraid of expressing. However, it is this vulnerability that fuels the
personal essay. You cannot learn from the experience unless you are honest with yourself, and
readers will not be able to understand why this experience is significant if you hide yourself from
view. Your character in the story can only develop if you claim the story as your own.
Revising Tips
While one of the most common kinds of creative non-fiction writing (at least in an academic
setting), the personal essay is probably one of the harder assignments to revise. After all, how do
you fix a paper that is composed of very personal ideas? A personal essay is not like a formal
analytical essay-- it doesn't need an explicit thesis-driven format. Therefore, revising a personal
essay can be complicated, especially when you feel as though you don't want to tamper with
personal thoughts. However, a personal essay often needs someone to tamper with it in order to
make it a complete piece. Below we have listed several steps that may be useful when revising or
giving feedback on a personal essay (either your own or someone elses).
Voice/Tone: The voice and tone are important in the personal essay because they reflect the
attitude the writer is trying to get across. Is the mood happy? Sad? Is it serious? Are we
placed inside the writer's head? These are all important questions to ask in order to realize the
effect/the emotion the writer wants the piece to convey. Ask yourself (or the writer): Is the
writer's voice consistent throughout the piece? Does it reflect the tone of the piece? Does the
piece incorporate some experimental ideas? It is not necessary to have a personal essay be
experimental, but it does need to be unique to the writer (hence the name). Some
experimental ideas include: playing with the sentence structure by juxtaposing short
sentences with longer, complicated sentences ... playing with word usage by including
repetition or alliteration ... or playing with form by including other voices, dialogue, and
points of views.
Showing v. Telling: Details and imagery can only help a personal essay; they help to
develop a story by making it more real to the reader. A personal essay doesn't necessarily
need scenes, but it does need a well formed focus or point and imagery can help to establish
that.
Character Development: If the personal essay has characters, make sure they're developed
clearly and that the relationships between the characters are developed. Dialogue between
characters not only helps the reader to understand the relationships, it helps the reader to
understand the individual characters and their actions. Imagery also helps with this and ties
back into showing v. telling; by describing a character through details (of their actions or
their appearance), we better understand a character.
Original Language: Everything in a piece of creative writing is subject to scrutiny,
including word choice. Therefore it's helpful to look closely at language. Is the writing fresh?
Are there any obvious clichs that detract from the piece?
Form: How a piece of creative non-fiction writing is put together is extremely important.
The form not only needs to be organized well, it also speaks to the piece as a whole. Good
questions to ask: Why is it organized in this way? How does this reflect your (or the writers)
experience? It's also helpful to discuss different form techniques such as flashbacks, stream
of consciousness, or different scenes that piece together a writer's main idea.
Fiction/Poetry Techniques: Since creative non-fiction writing is such a hybrid and multifaceted genre, it's often helpful to use/borrow techniques from fiction or poetry. Scenes,
dialogue, narrative structure, setting, and an emphasis on language are all important aspects
of creative non-fiction as well.
Examples
Note: To access excerpt, follow the link, click where it says click to look inside and
then use the arrows to flip the pages.
Excerpt from Lars Eighner's Travels with Lizbeth: Three Years on the Road and on the
Streets
A great example of memoir. What do you see as the point or message of this piece to
be? How does the author accomplish this? What features make this an example of
creative non-fiction? Of memoir?
Fiction
Fiction writing allows human creatively to run limitless, creating stories that probe every facet of
life and the human experience. This very openness, however, is what can make it seem so
challengingeven if you know what you want to write about, how do you begin? Below you
will find some suggestions on writing short stories, as well as revising your work, that can
hopefully guide you along the way.
Keeping that in mind, decide on a point of view. The most common are singular first person
and third person. First person uses a narrator who leads the story by saying "I didn't have
enough money" as opposed to third person, which follows a character around by saying "Bob
didn't have enough money." They both have pros and cons; first person is more personal with
a specific character, but third person is more inclusive and lets the reader know what's going
on beyond one character.
Figure out where the story is going to take place. Short stories generally stick to one setting
since not much time passes (don't have a line that reads "three days later, for example), so
make sure the setting makes sense. The characters should be there for a reason.
So You've Started to Write:
Remember that you have already done one of the hardest parts; actually writing can be the
easier part of the process.
Don't introduce too many characters you will have to account for and develop later on. Small
characters can often be combined for simplicity's sake.
Keeping a story "simple" and interesting can be difficult, especially if you are writing from
life. There is a tendency to include everything that happened, but in reality not every scene is
important. If the scene doesn't drive the plot, don't include it.
By the same token, include plenty of metaphors and imagery to enhance the "point" of the
story. What are you trying to say in the story? What do the ' characters learn in the end? Why
is this particular story worthy of being told? Whatever answers those questions can be
considered the "point." If you don't have a "point" right away, don't worry. Often authors
don't find what they are trying to say until they have finished writing, and sometimes they
change the ending to convey a different message. Try to enhance the point by using details
and imagery without adding pointless scenes, but if you don't have a point at first don't
worry--it will come to you.
Done? What now?
Read over your story.
Does the story have a beginning, middle, and end? Something should have been set up,
happen, and then be over. If not, try revising your story.
Do the characters (or the reader) learn anything? If not, there is no point to your story. There
isn't anything that makes it worth telling. Something really interesting could have happened
but if doesn't affect the characters then it isn't a really interesting story. Readers connect best
with the characters, not necessarily what happens to them.
Check out some of our other suggestions for revising fiction below.
Remember, there are no rules to writing (most of the time). Feel free to break any of these
if it makes the story better. These are just guidelines, but they should help if you are
struggling. Also, remember to revise. The first draft isn't always the best; most first drafts can
be improved upon.
One last tip: READ READ READ. Read other authors for inspiration by looking critically at
how they are deploying technique. The best writers are also pretty active and critical readers.
Revising Fiction
Some basic questions to get yourself (re)thinking:
Is every scene necessary? Are you repeating yourself? Are you missing a scene? List for
yourself what your scenes are about. Not just what the action is but what the scene means and
how it furthers the story. Remember that a scene moves a story through the use of action,
character change and development, and the passage of time. Very rarely do you find a scene
that does nothing for the story, no matter how small that something might be.
Have you chosen the right point of view? Is the POV best for viewing conflict? Is it the most
interesting and intense (i.e. most appropriate for the story you are telling)? Try to think your
character's(s) POV out as far as you can, as it can dictate what becomes possible later
onand there may be a part of a character that reveals itself to you via exploring a new
POV.
Ask yourself about plotare the scenes and the revelations within scenes arranged to best
effect, for intensity and for cause and effect.
Consider the action or actions that drive your story. Make sure that for every action there is a
reaction. This will help keep your story moving. Consider all the reactions to an action and
then decide what will give the best effect (and what is plausible to the extent that you are
striving for at least some realism/believability).
Look at your charactersare they differentiated enough? Are they individuals? Are there
too many for a short story? Is there a character that might have more to say and might make
the story stand out if he/she is developed? Is it difficult for the central character to get what
he/she wants, or is it too easy? The better you know and understand your characters, the
more powerful they become in your writing.
Look at your settingsare they evocative enough, are they part of the story or are they just
there as fill-ins?
Does your first paragraph hook your reader? Avoid introductory kinds of things.
Look at the last paragraph. Why did you choose to end there?
Have faith in your story: recaps are not usually necessary.
Save your drafts and never be afraid to try something, even if it does not end up working out.
Poetry
Below you will find a brief discussion of What Makes a Poem Good, some useful tips on several
poetic forms, as well as some general tips on composing a poem, that you will hopefully find
helpful as you use poetry to explore the world and our experiences in it.
Sight:
This refers to the layout of the poem on the page. Poetry is not just about the use of words.
Although the words are of great importance, the use of space is equally important. Frank Bidart
is a poet who is noted for his use of the page, as well as his interesting use of capitalization and
punctuation. His decisions, no matter how odd, are intentional and contribute to the power of his
poetry. One example is his poem Herbert White, a dramatic monologue in the voice of a
necrophiliac child murderer. The topic is powerful enough, but the way his words string down
the page is truly remarkable. The layout of a poem is something a writer should keep in mind
while composing.
Sound:
Sound refers to the relationships that form between words within your writing. This does not
mean that it is necessary to use alliteration or onomatopoeia (unless it is appropriate). It means
that as a poem is being composed, the writer should be aware of these relationships. Words will
fight against one another, or they will embrace each other, stringing together to form beautiful
lines and sentences. A writer can hold an image within the line by sound A writer can make
the decision to allow their words to clash. The writer can decide the way in which a reader will
move through the lines. Sound not only refers to words, but also to rhythm. The rhythm of a
poem will become apparent when it is read aloud.
Intellect:
A writer must be able to present information effectively. The challenge with poetry is figuring
out the best way to present the information that needs to be conveyed. Poetry has the ability to
suggest meanings that go above and beyond what the poem actually says. This can be done
through the use of sight and sound as suggested above. Intellect will allow a poet to contemplate
abstract ideas, and convey them through the use of language. Poetry is an exchange of electrical
currents through language. Controlling the currents and placing them on the page in an effective
way will create a good poem.
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Stanza -a section of lines that divide the poem. It's like a paragraph within a poem. The
following poem has three stanzas in it:
[Stanza 1]
[Stanza 2]
[Stanza 3]
Sestina
A poem with six six-line stanzas and finished with one three-line. No refrain (A refrain is a
stanza or line repeated again and again during a poem. It is similar to the refrain of a song that is
sung after each verse.) Usually unrhymed, but uses the same six words in different orders to
finish the lines in each stanza.
Here comes the tough part: The order. Let's number the end words 1-6. They should then be
aligned in the following order.
Stanza 1
1-2-3-4-5-6
Stanza 2
6-1-5-2-4-3
Stanza 3
3-6-4-1-2-5
Stanza 4
5-3-2-6-1-4
Stanza 5
4-5-1-3-6-2
Stanza 6
2-4-6-5-3-1
And a final '3 liner' should contain all six end words somewhere in the lines.
Example:
The Concord Art Association Regrets
by Pam White
Your entry was not accepted. We regret
it wasn't (enough for us), a work of love.
We liked many of the colors on the whole
but the mass was just something unrelated
to the rest of our show. We hope your work
will have a bright future in another place.
We remember last year you tried to place
another photograph and it was also with regret
we turned you down. Though for that particular work
we found nothing about it (no one could) to love.
It was obscure and a little upsetting in relation
to the rest of our show which we look on as a whole.
Now you may think us ungenerous. On the whole
you are probably right, but this is our place
and we can do what we want whether you relate
to it or not. However we don't want you to regret
your association with us. We want you to love
us, send us money, but please, no more work.
You see right now we need money to work
on the building we're in. There's a hole
in the roof and one wall needs all the love
and attention it can get. Really the place
needs so much, which all costs. I regret
to remind you we need more space for related
works. We're trying to expand and relate
to lots of different kinds of work
so different people won't regret
their visit with us but will see the whole
beauty and tranquility of the place
and come with us, a journey of love
where people of all races, colors, and creeds love
to look and bask and of course bring relations,
friends, and lovers. All are welcome to our place
here where all the world's magnificent work
can be shown in its entirety, the whole
place filled - with your exception, we regret.
We know you'll love the whole
work we're doing for this place.
Villanelle
19 lines long, but only uses two rhymes whilst also repeating two lines throughout the poem.
The first five stanzas are triplets (containing three lines), and the last stanza is a quatrain (a
stanza made of four lines.) The rhyme scheme is as follows: "aba aba aba aba aba abaa. "
The 1st and 3rd lines from the first stanza are alternately repeated so the 1st line becomes the last
line in the second stanza, and the 3rd line becomes the last line in the third stanza. The last two
lines of the poem are lines 1 and 3 respectively, making a rhymed couplet (a set of two lines that
rhyme). To break that down it means the line structure looks like this: 1-2-3, 4-5-1, 6-7-3,
8-9-1, 10-11-3, 12-13-1-3
Example:
Do not go gentle into that good night
by Dylan Thomas
Do not go gentle into that good night,
Old age should burn and rave at close of day;
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.
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Sonnet
There are two major types of sonnets: the Italian or Petrarchan and the Shakespearean or English.
The Shakespearean is the more common form. It is a fourteen-line poem in iambic pentameter,
usually with an ababcdcdefefgg rhyme scheme. A Petrarchan sonnet follows an abbaabbacdecde
(or abbaabbacdccdc) rhyme scheme.
Example of a Shakespearean Sonnet:
Sir Walter Raleigh to His Son
Three things there be that prosper up apace
And flourish, whilst they grow asunder far;
But on a day, they meet all in one place,
And when they meet, they one another mar.
And they be these: the wood, the weed, the wag.
The wood is that which makes the gallow tree;
The weed is that which strings the hangman's bag;
The wag, my pretty knave, betokeneth thee.
Mark well, dear boy, whilst these assemble not,
Green springs the tree, hemp grows, the wag is wild;
But when they meet, it makes the timber rot,
It frets the halter, and it chokes the child.
Then bless thee, and beware, and let us pray
We part not with thee at this meeting day.
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Haiku
A 17-syllable poem made of three lines following a 5-7-5 syllable pattern.
Example (we made this one up ourselves):
Twilight
Warm summer evening
Sitting by the quiet lake
Pink sun disappears.
Ghazal
(pronounced like "guzzle" with a soft g)
The Ghazal is a poem written in couplets, in which the last word of each couplet is the same. In
the first stanza, the repeated word ends both lines. All lines should be similar in length, and the
poet will put his or her signature (some type of self reference, like his or her name) in the last
lines. It is traditionally a form of expressing love and longing, but today it can be used to explore
other feelings too.
Example
Twilight
Tonight
by Agha Shahid Ali
Pale hands I loved beside the Shalimar
Laurence Hope
Where are you now? Who lies beneath your spell tonight?
Whom else from rapture's road will you expel tonight?
Those Fabrics of Cashmere- to make Me beautiful-
Trinket-to gem-Me to adorn-How tell-tonight?
I beg for haven: Prisons, let open your gatesA refugee from Belief seeks a cell tonight.
Gods vintage loneliness has turned to vinegarAll the archangels-their wings frozen-fell tonight.
Lord, cried out the idols, Dont let us be broken;
Only we can convert the infidel tonight.
Mughal ceilings, let your mirrored convexities
multiply me at once under your spell tonight.
Hes freed some fire from ice in pity for Heaven.
Hes left open-for God-the doors of Hell tonight.
In the hearts veined temple, all statues have been smashed.
No priest in saffron's left to toll its knell tonight.
God, limit these punishments, theres still Judgment DayIm a mere sinner, Im no infidel tonight.
Executioners near the woman at the window.
Damn you, Elijah, I'll bless Jezebel tonight.
Ode
Generally speaking, odes have no specific form and the only requirement on length is that it must
be long. Unlike the other poems, in order to be considered a traditional ode the poem must be
serious and address a noble subject in a dignified manner. (Previously used topics include "Ode
to the Confederate Dead" by Allen Tate and "Ode to Joy" by Frank O'Hara.) Newer odes,
however, may present a lighter topic as Pablo Neruda often does.
Example:
Ode to a Lemon
by Pablo Neruda
Out of lemon flowers
loosed
on the moonlight, love's
lashed and insatiable
essences,
sodden with fragrance,
the lemon tree's yellow
emerges,
the lemons
move down
from the tree's planetarium
Delicate merchandise!
The harbors are big with itbazaars
for the light and the
barbarous gold.
We open
the halves
of a miracle,
and a clotting of acids
brims
Change your location - if ideas arent coming to you, try writing in a caf, on a park bench,
in the library, anywhere.
Favor concrete images. (things you can see, touch, taste, hear, feel) over abstractions (ideas
or concepts that are not experienced directly through the five senses).
Beginning a poem can be the hardest part, so having a list of words or a specific topic can help
you to begin. Once you begin, the poem can take many different forms.
Start Writing
Don't worry about form yet, unless that is the purpose of the exercise. Write down words,
phrases, and sentences that relate to the topic. Explore different angles; try to capture your
idea completely.
Work with the idea
Figure out what you want to say. Ask yourself what you want the reader to experience. What
mood do you want to create? What tone best fits the meaning you are trying to convey?
Link the ideas
Once you have a better idea about what you want to say, connect the words and phrases in a
logical order. Decide where to begin and then expand until you have a rough first draft,
something that resembles a poem. Don't feel obligated to use all of the phrases that you wrote
down initially. Rework them if necessary, and always feel free to add or subtract.
Read the first draft out loud
How does the poem make you feel? Ask if the goal of the poem is accomplished. Does it
elicit the desired response? Does it have the right effect? Effectiveness of a poem is hard to
judge. Basically, it's the "so what?" factor. If the poem creates interest and elicits an
emotional response, then it is effective. You want the reader to ponder the poem when they
finish reading it. Refer to your goal in "Work with the idea." Was this meaning realized? Did
you find new meaning through writing?
Mess around with the poem
Try reordering words to create emphasis. Remember that as a poet you have poetic license
and don't have to conform to grammar rules.
Ex: change "the bottle sits silently" to "silently sits the bottle"
The second version emphasizes silently.
Try to condense the poem by taking out unnecessary words.
Ex: change "the dog was barking" to "dog, barking"
Ex: change "the darkness consumed me / And I felt alone" to "consuming darkness, me
alone"
The second version emphasizes the action
Does it create the effect that you want? Does it leave the reader feeling how you want them
to feel? Could the ending be more effective by being either more or less specific?
Read it out loud a final time.
Fire Starters
When it comes to creative writing, sometimes the most difficult part can be discovering what you
want to write about. Due to the virtually limitless possibilities, it can seem daunting to choose a
topic. Like rubbing two sticks together to start a fire, thinking about a subject for your piece can
be a laborious and frustrating process. But once you get that spark, the fire takes off. In order to
get those creative sparks flying and help you figure out what kinds of things you would like to
write about, here are a few fire starters to help kindle memories, emotions, experiences, and
observations that will fuel your creative fire:
Think of a unique person you knew/know. How has that person impacted your life? Or, draw a
character sketch of that person (if you are thinking of writing a fictional piece, use that character
sketch to help you create one of you literary characters).
Write an imagined history of someone you know but whom you do not know very much about.
Where is this person coming from? What experiences might this person have gone through to
become who he/she is today? Is there something about this person that you always wondered
about but were never sure about? Here is your chance to blend the real and the fictitious to
satisfy your desire for an answer.
Has something happened to you recently that you feel has affected you in some way? Write
about it.
Have you ever seen or experienced something that fundamentally changed you as a person?
Describe in as much detail as possible a particular emotion (this lends itself well to poetry!).
You have eight sentences to recount a childhood memory and use it to get some kind of point
across. Choose your words carefully!
Use your favorite song as inspirationwhat is this song talking about? Can you see any
connections to your life? Better yet, just let the song play and close your eyes. What are you
thinking about? Write about it.
This link has tons of little idea sparkers (some of them more formal and serious, others goofy
and for fun). Check them out and see if one leads you in a direction you might want to pursue (or
at least gets you thinking about something, even if it is completely unrelated)!
www.creativewritingprompts.com
If you are still stuck, be sure to check out our tips on How Do I Get Started.
Well, to be clear and to have a purpose, to have what youre doing in mind.
In a bad way?
I dont know if I really have a favorite, but I do see that I end up at JSTOR a lot.
Any last advice for writing creative writing, whether for the intro courses or upper levels?
I think that its good for students to do some pre-writing: to clarify what they think
they are going to try to do in their paper before they actually write the paper, to
write a summary in one paragraph of their basic argument thats going be in a 10-
page paper. Or even with stories I think you should write a simple 150-word or
200-word paragraph that states in summary the basic makeup of what your story
will become. I think students sometimes will sit down and start writing and they get
to page five and go, You know, I dont know what the end is supposed to be. I
think that writing a summary paragraph first can really help.