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This document discusses the advantages and disadvantages of using technology in the classroom. It notes that there are many spelling, grammar, punctuation and stylistic issues in the text. The key advantages mentioned are that technology allows for fast and easy searching of information on the internet, develops students' minds, and makes use of modern tools in an easy way. However, disadvantages include technology may waste time as programs need to download or update, students may get distracted by going on other websites, and it becomes easy for students to cheat. The document received a score of 47 out of 100 due to the many issues found.

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This document discusses the advantages and disadvantages of using technology in the classroom. It notes that there are many spelling, grammar, punctuation and stylistic issues in the text. The key advantages mentioned are that technology allows for fast and easy searching of information on the internet, develops students' minds, and makes use of modern tools in an easy way. However, disadvantages include technology may waste time as programs need to download or update, students may get distracted by going on other websites, and it becomes easy for students to cheat. The document received a score of 47 out of 100 due to the many issues found.

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DOCUMENT

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Using Technology in the


classroom1

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ISSUES FOUND IN THIS TEXT

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Contextual Spelling

Confused Words

Grammar

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Determiner Use (a/an/the/this, etc.)

Wrong or Missing Prepositions

Modal Verbs

Misuse of Modifiers

Faulty Subject-Verb Agreement

Incorrect Verb Forms

Punctuation

Comma Misuse within Clauses

Punctuation in Compound/Complex Sentences

Misuse of Semicolons, Quotation Marks, etc.

Sentence Structure

Style

Unclear Reference

Inappropriate Colloquialisms

No errors

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Vocabulary enhancement
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Using Technology in the classroom1


Using Technology in the classroom.
Nowadays, some people like to use technology in everything's, there
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[ learn learned ] Incorrect verb form


in perfect tense

[ have in ] Redundant preposition

Repetitive word: advantages

they can find id quickly. Secondary, It develops the mind of the

Unclear antecedent

student 8 and it makes use of modern things in an easy way. Finally,

[ have has ] Incorrect verb form with


singular subject

also in education have learn 1 with technology. Before five years ago
the modern technology was maybe only in the university's and
college's but now also have in 2the school's some teachers said that's
much better than book's, in this essay we will talk about advantage
and disadvantage of the using technology in the classroom.
There have a lot of advantages 3 of using technology in the classroom
the most important is that, searching in the internet so fast and easy.
This means 4 that if student have 5 to find answer 6 of 7 some question

Make the lesson come funny. For example, when students studying
with books may feel bored with the same routine, but when they use
the technology they will see that there are many programs could them
use for teaching, so 9 students will feel passionately 10.
There are many disadvantages in this topic is the most prominent is
that, 11 using technology in the classroom may lost 12 time. This

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article
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[ student, ] Missing comma in


compound sentence

[ teaching , so teaching so that ] Informal


word choice

10

means 13 that some programs need time to download or updating.

[ passionately passionate ] Adverb


instead of adjective after sense verb

Also 14 some times 15 that will be disadvantage 16 because some

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student maybe go another website to play or watching movie 17 and

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[ lost lose ] Incorrect verb form after


modal

they don't be attention in the classroom. The last thing is that, 18 it has

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become easy for the student to cheat in activities. For example, the

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student will be looking at reports written by others and will become


unable to think of it just depends on technology.

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introductory phrase
Possibly miswritten word: some times
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10 Advantages And Disadvantages Of Technology In Education |

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Futureofworking.Com". Futureofworking.com. N.p., 2016. Web. 14


Oct. 2016.
"The Disadvantages Of Technology In Classroom". 19
Eslteachersboard.com. N.p., 2016. Web. 15 Oct. 2016.
"The 6 Pros & Cons Of Using Technology In Your Classroom - Top

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