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The Three Parts of a Paragraph:
All paragraphs have a topic sentence and supporting sentences, and some
paragraphs also have a concluding sentence.
The topic sentence states the main idea of the paragraph. It not only names the topic of
the paragraph, but it also limits the topic to one specific area that can be discussed
completely in the space of a single paragraph. The part of the topic sentence that
announces the specific area to be discussed is called the controlling idea.
Notice how the topic sentence of the model states both the topic and the controlling
idea:
TOPIC
CONTROLLING IDEA
Gold, a precious metal, is prized for two important characteristics.

Supporting sentences develop the topic sentence. That is, they explain or prove the topic
sentence by giving more information about it.
Following are some of the supporting sentences that explain the topic sentence about
gold:
First of all, gold has a lustrous beauty that is resistant to corrosion.
For example, a Macedonian coin remains as untarnished today as the day it was made
25 centuries ago.
Another important characteristic of gold is its usefulness to industry and science.
The most recent use of gold is in astronauts' suits.
The concluding sentence signals the end of the paragraph and leaves the reader with
important points to remember:
In conclusion, gold is treasured not only for its beauty but also for its utility.
Concluding sentences are customary for stand-alone paragraphs. However, paragraphs
that are parts of a longer piece of writing usually do not need concluding sentences.
The Topic Sentence

Every good paragraph has a topic sentence, which clearly states the topic and the controlling
idea of the paragraph.
A topic sentence is the most important sentence in a paragraph. It briefly indicates what the
paragraph is going to discuss.
For example, in the model paragraph on gold, the topic sentence alerts the reader to look for two
characteristics.
Here are three important points to remember about a topic sentence.

1. A topic sentence is a complete sentence; that is, it contains at least one subject and one
verb. The following are not complete sentences because they do not have verbs:
Driving on freeways.
How to register for college classes.
The rise of indie films.!
2. A topic sentence contains both a topic and a controlling idea. It names the topic and
then limits the topic to a specific area to be discussed in the space of a single paragraph.
TOPIC
CONTROLLING IDEA
Driving on freeways requires skill and alertness.

TOPIC
CONTROLLING IDEA
Registering for college classes can be a frustrating experience for new students.
TOPIC
CONTROLLING IDEA
The rise of indie film is due to several factors.
3. A topic sentence is the most general statement in the paragraph because it gives only the
main idea. It does not give any specific details.
Position of Topic Sentences

The topic sentence is usually (but not always) the first sentence in a paragraph, but the best spot
is usually right at the beginning.
PRACTICE 1: Recognizing Topic Sentences:
Group 1
________ a. The 11istory of astronomy is interesting.

________ b. Ice age people recorded the appearance of new moons by making scratches in animal
bones.
________ c. For example, Stonehenge in Britain, built 3500 years ago to track the movement of
the sun.
________ d. Ancient people observed and recorded lunar and solar events in different ways.
Group 2
________ a. It is hard to know which foods are safe to eat nowadays.

________ b. In some large ocean fish, there are high levels of mercury.
________ c. Undercooked chicken and hamburger may carry E. coli bacteria.
________ d. Not to mention mad cow disease.
________ e. Food safety is an important issue.
Group 3
________ a. Hybrid automobiles more economical to operate than
gasoline-powered cars.
________ b. The new hybrid automobiles are very popular.
________ c. Hybrid cars have good fuel economy because a
computer under the hood decides to run the electric
motor, the small gasoline engine, or the two together.
________ d. The new hybrid automobiles are popular because of their fuel economy.
Group 4
________ a. The North American Catawba Indians of the Southeast and the Tlingit of the
Northwest both see the rainbow as a kind of bridge between heaven and earth.
________ b. A rainbow seen from an airplane is a complete circle. ________ c. Many cultures
interpret rainbows in positive ways. ________ d. Rainbows are beautiful. _______ e. The belief that
you can find a pot of gold at a rainbow's end.
B. Read the following scrambled paragraphs and decide which sentence is the topic sentence.
Write TS on the line next to that sentence:
Paragraph 1
__ a. A notes/memo function lets you make quick notes to yourself.

__ b. Other capabilities include word processing, spreadsheets, and e-mail.
__ c. A voice recorder that uses a built-in microphone and speaker works like a tape recorder.
__ d. Basic tools include a calendar to keep track of your appointments, an address and phone
number book, to-do lists, and a calculator.
__ e. MP3 playback lets you listen to digital music files, and a picture viewer lets you look at
digital photos.
__ f. Most personal digital assistants (PDAs) have tools for basic tasks as well as for multimedia
functions.
__ g. A few models also include a built-in digital camera and keyboard.
Paragraph 2
__ a. Twelve years after Sputnik, the United States caught up by becoming the first nation to land
a man on the moon.
__ b. The Europeans have joined the competition, vowing to land European astronauts on the
moon by 2025 and on Mars by 2035.
__ c. The number of nations competing in the "space race" has grown since the early days of
space exploration.
__ d. China joined the competition in 2003 when it launched Shenzhou 5.
__ e. Initially, the former Soviet Union took the lead when it sent the first man into Earth orbit in
the spaceship Sputnik in 1957.
__ f. For almost 50 years, the United States and Russia were the only competitors in the contest
to explore space using manned spacecraft.
Paragraph 3
__ a. Another important change was that people had the freedom to live and work wherever they
wanted.
__ b. The earliest significant change was for farming families, who were no longer isolated.
__ c. The final major change brought by the automobile was the building of superhighways,
suburbs, huge shopping centers, and theme parks such as Disney World in Florida.
__ d. The automobile revolutionized the way of life in the United States.
__ e. The automobile enabled them to drive to towns and cities comfortably and conveniently.
__ f. In fact, people could work in a busy metropolitan city and drive home to the quiet suburbs.
WRITING TOPIC SENTENCES

When you write A TOPIC SENTENCE, remember these three points:
1- A topic sentence must be a complete sentence, with a subject and a verb.
2- A topic sentence should be neither too general nor too specific.
3- A topic sentence should not have unrelated controlling ideas.

Write good topic sentences for the following paragraph. Remember to include both a
topic and a controlling idea.
Paragraph
..
English speakers relaxing at home, for example, may put on kimonos, which is a Japanese word. English
speakers who live in a warm climate may take an afternoon siesta on an outdoor patio without realizing
that these are Spanish words. In their gardens, they may enjoy the fragrance of jasmine flowers, a word
that came into English from Persian. They may even relax on a chaise while snacking on yogurt, words of
French and Turkish origin, respectively. At night, they may shampoo their hair and put on pajamas, words
from the Hindi language of India.
Supporting Sentences:
Supporting sentences explain or prove the topic sentence. One of the biggest problems in
student writing is that student writers often fail to support their ideas adequately. They need to
use specific details to be thorough and convincing. There are several kinds of specific
supporting details: examples, statistics, and quotations.
Examples
Examples are perhaps the easiest kind of supporting detail to use because you can often take
examples from your own knowledge and experience. Furthermore, examples make your writing
lively and interesting, and your reader is more likely to remember your point if you support it
with a memorable example.
Words and phrases that introduce examples include:
In particular, A clear example of this is , for example, for instance, such as, This is shown/illustrated or exemplified by,
Illustrate and illustration (One illustration of this is the rise in the number of women who chose to take
the bus in 2007.)
The Concluding Sentence:

A concluding sentence serves two purposes:
1. It signals the end of the paragraph.
2. It leaves the reader with the most important ideas to remember. It can do this in two ways:
By summarizing the main points of the paragraph
OR
By repeating the topic sentence in different words.

A paragraph does not always need a concluding sentence. For single paragraphs, especially long
ones, a concluding sentence is helpful to the reader because it is a reminder of the important
points. However, a concluding sentence is not needed for every paragraph in a multi-paragraph
essay.
- Concluding words include:
End-of-Paragraph Signals Followed by a Comma:
Finally,
In short,
up,
In brief,
Lastly,
In conclusion,
Therefore,
Indeed,
Thus,
To sum
End-of-Paragraph Signals Not Followed by a Comma:

The evidence suggests that
examples show that .
We can see that ...
There can be no doubt that .
These
NOTE: Do not use the phrase At last as an end-of-paragraph signal. At last means "at the end of
a long period of time," as in this sentence: At last, you've come home.
Writing an essay:
Parts of an Essay
An essay has three main parts: an introduction (introductory paragraph), a body (at least one, but usually two or more
paragraphs), and a conclusion (concluding paragraph).
1- Introduction
General statements
Thesis Statement
2- Body
A. Topic Sentence
1- Support
2- Support
3- Support
(concluding sentence)
A. Topic Sentence
1- Support
2- Support
3- Support
B. Topic Sentence
1- Support
2- Support
3- Support
C. Topic 3Sentence
Conclusion:
1- Support
2- Support
Restatement or3summary
of the main points;
Support
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The Three Parts of a Paragraph:

Gold, a precious metal, is prized for two important characteristics.

The Topic Sentence

Here are three important points to remember about a topic sentence.

Driving on freeways requires skill and alertness.

The rise of indie film is due to several factors.

Position of Topic Sentences

________ a. The 11istory of astronomy is interesting.

________ a. It is hard to know which foods are safe to eat nowadays.

__ a. A notes/memo function lets you make quick notes to yourself.

WRITING TOPIC SENTENCES

3- A topic sentence should not have unrelated controlling ideas.

the bus in 2007.)

The Concluding Sentence:

By repeating the topic sentence in different words.

End-of-Paragraph Signals Not Followed by a Comma:

There can be no doubt that .

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