A Guide to Completing the

Music Education Thesis

Revised: June, 2007

Frank Abrahams, Professor of Music Education

Patrick K. Schmidt, Associate Professor of Music Education

Westminster Choir College

Music Education Department

A Guide to Completing the Master of Music Education Thesis

INTRODUCTION
Completing a thesis is the culminating activity in the Master of Music Education
and Bachelor of Music/Master of Arts in Teaching degree programs. For some students
the experience of writing a thesis can be a rewarding one and can serve as a critical point
of entry into doctoral study. For others, writing a thesis can be onerous and excessively
time consuming. The general purpose of this document is to help students complete their
thesis in a reasonable period of time and with as few problems as possible. This manual
explains the format and arrangement requirements for your thesis as established as policy
by the Music Education Department of Westminster Choir College of Rider University.
This handbook was revised June 2007 and replaces all previous versions.
Students in the MME degree program preparing a thesis should register for one credit of
thesis with the college registrar. Students in the BM/MAT degree program need not
register for thesis credit.
GENERAL INFORMATION
Carole Slade, in her book, Form and Style, states a thesis refers to a substantial
research project. As the word implies, a thesis should draw an original conclusion based
on information derived from research (1997, p. xv).
A thesis may have only one author. Previously completed work by the author may be
included in the thesis provided that the work represents research conducted by the student
while the student was enrolled in the Westminster M.M.E. or BM/MAT degree programs
and has not been used to meet the requirements for another degree and is not co-authored.
1.

Parts of the Thesis

A thesis generally contains five sections:

Statement of the problem
Review of the Literature
Methodology
Data Analysis
Conclusion
A reference list, containing all sources, appears at the end of the document.

2.

Length of the Thesis

A Masters Thesis is between 50 and 150 double-spaced pages in length. The research
design must be qualitative. It is recommended that students enroll in ME 685: Research
in Music Education as preparation for the completion of the Masters thesis. Students are
also referred to the following texts:
Creswell, John W. Qualitative Inquiry & Research Design, 2nd ed.
Oaks, CA: SAGE, 2007.

Thousand

EndNote, Biblographies Made Easy (computer software)

Slade, Carole. Form and Style, 13th ed. Boston: Houghton Mifflin, 2008.
3.

Use of Copyrighted Material

When copyright material is included in the thesis manuscript, the author is

responsible for obtaining written permission from the owner. Westminster Choir College
of Rider University takes no responsibility for damages that may arise from copyright
violations by a degree student.
4.

Use of Human Subjects

If human subjects are used in the research for the thesis, the student must adhere
to all of the policies and procedures of the Rider University Institutional Research Board
(IRB). The Human Subjects Research policy and Human Subjects form are available on
the web at http://www.rider.edu/2564_3633.htm.
5.

The Thesis Advisor

A masters thesis is completed by a student under the supervision of a thesis

advisor. Thesis advisors are assigned by the Department Chair for Music Education. The
students academic advisor may or may not be the thesis advisor. All full-time members
of the department shall approve the thesis proposal. The advisor shall approve the
completed final document.
The student should work with the thesis advisor to choose a topic for study and an
appropriate research design.

6.

Submission of the Thesis Proposal

The first step in writing the masters thesis is the completion of a thesis proposal.
Written in future tense, the proposal constitutes sections 1, II and III of the thesis. It
contains:
(a)
a working title and statement of the purpose of the study, including such
topics as the need for the study;
(b)

the research question or questions which the thesis will attempt to answer;

(c)
a literature review containing a presentation of relevant research so that
the proposed study is placed in a theoretical context;
(d)

a detailed presentation of the methods that will be used in the study;

(e)
a proposed timeline, containing a best guess estimate of when each of the
separate parts of the thesis (data collection; data analysis;; completion of the first
draft, etc.) will be completed;
(f)
a copy of the signed approval from the University Institutional Research
Board (IRB) if the research includes participation by human subjects;
(g)

a table of contents to assist the readers.

When completed, the proposal is submitted to each full-time member of the music
education department for approval. It is the students responsibility to distribute copies
of the proposal to each full-time member of the music education department in a timely
fashion allowing each member adequate time to read and comment on the document.
The student is to provide each reader with a telephone number and e-mail address in
order that the reader may contact the student to discuss the document. In some cases it
may be necessary for the student to meet with the readers as a group to discuss issues in
the proposal. Further, it may be necessary for the student to revise the thesis proposal
before final approval by the faculty members in the department. When all full-time
members of the department have reviewed and approved the proposal, they shall notify
the students thesis advisor, who will then inform the student.
After the proposal has been approved the student may begin the process of implementing
the study. A critical element in this process is close contact and collaboration with the
thesis advisor.
7. Thesis Registration
In April, 2007, the Westminster Academic Policy Committee passed the following:
Students enrolled in programs with a thesis requirement must register for thesis credit
(ME 650) each semester from onset through completion of the document. Part time

students in the MME program who complete their coursework exclusively during
summers must register for thesis credit every summer from onset through completion of
the document, and in any semester during the regular academic year in which thesis
advising is expected. If there is a lapse in thesis registration prior to completion of the
document, the student can be held accountable for program requirements in place at the
time of return. Music Education students are currently required to submit the completed
thesis a minimum of 1 month prior to graduation.
FORMAT AND APPEARANCE OF THE THESIS DOCUMENT
1.

Methods of Production

All theses must be produced with word processing or page layout software. No
other production methods are acceptable. The original must be on quality white opaque
paper, 20-24 lb. bond, 100% rag, 8-1/2 x 11 sheets. The watermark will say 100%
cotton copy. This may be photocopied from computer generated copy. This paper may
be purchased at any stationary store. A recommended paper is Southworth #403C.
2.

Preparation of the Manuscript

a.

Type

Font size must be 12 points. Print must be legible and readable. Traditional serif
fonts such as Times or Palatino are encouraged.
b.

Margins

Left margin must be 1-1/2 (1.5 inches); all other margins must be 1.
Subheadings and body text must have at least two full lines of text below or must begin
on a new page.
c.

Pagination

(1)

Number consecutively all pages following the title page in the upper right
hand corner at the 1 margin intersection.
Use Roman numerals for the preliminary pages since they are counted and
numbered. Begin with the Roman numeral ii on the first page after
the title page.
Use Arabic numbers for the text, references, appendices, bibliography, and
all other pages including photographs, illustrations, and drawings.

(2)
(3)

Note: Begin these numbers on the first page of the text and continue in
consecutive order until the end of the thesis.
(a)
Do not use a period after the page number.
(b)
Do not number the title page even though it is counted as
i.

(c)

Do not insert lettered page numbers such as 10a, 10b, or 10c.

d.

Spacing

(1)
(2)

Double space general text material.

Insert 4 line spaces above and below figures, table, and other
graphics.
Single space footnotes, long quotations and bibliographic entries. But-use double spacing to separate these bibliographic entries from each other.

(3)
e.

Footnotes

Separate footnotes from the text with a solid line across the page and leave two
spaces between the line and the footnote.
f.

Tables and Figures

(1)

Tables and figures must be included as part of the document. They

should be included with the text when preparing the manuscript.
The same margin limitations apply to tables and figures.
Tables and figures are to be placed as close to the text to which they
apply as possible. They may be in portrait or landscape orientation.
Where possible, photographs should be scanned into body of the
document and included with the text.
Labels and captions on photographs must printed on the document.
No attachments may be made to the thesis paper.
Musical notation must be prepared on the computer. Handwritten
manuscript is not acceptable.

(2)
(3)
(4)
(5)
(6)
(7)
g.

Binding

Upon completion of the final document, the student will submit 2 unbound copies
to the Chair of the Department along with a check in the amount of $40.00
payable to Rider University. This covers the cost of binding. Once bound, a copy
will be placed in Talbott Library and a second copy will be stored in the Music
Education Resource Room. Students may purchase additional bound copies of
their thesis for $20 per copy.
h.

Style Manual

The thesis must conform to a standard style manual. Most educational research
conforms to the Publication Manual of the American Psychological Association
commonly called the APA Style Manual. Qualitative studies often conform to
the Chicago Manual of Style or to the style manual by Kate Turabian. All styles
are included in Slade, Form and Style. Thesis rarely use MLA format.

ARRANGEMENT
Every thesis is composed of the following parts:
1. The Preliminaries
(a) Thesis Approval Form
(1)
See Sample on page 11 at the end of this manual.
(2)
Print or type your full name and thesis title.
(3)
You must obtain all required signatures.
(4)
This page is required and will be bound in the front of the
original thesis only. It is neither numbered nor counted.
(b) Title Page
(1)
See Sample at the end of this manual (page 12).
(2)
Use your full name, including your middle initial or
name.
(3)
Write out the name of the degree for which you are a
student. All Masters Degree students must use the
precise degree name (i.e. Master of Music Education or Master of
Arts in Teaching).
(4)
Use the month and year in which the degree is to be
granted or your thesis was accepted.
(5)
This page is counted but not numbered.
(c) Copyright or Blank Page
If the thesis is copyrighted, the following information should be included:
a copyright notice, full legal name of author, and date of publication on
file. Students must obtain the necessary forms for copyright on their own.
The following information should be centered on the page is shown:
Copyright 2007
Jane S. Jones
All Rights Reserved
Include a blank page even if the thesis is not copyrighted.
In either situation, the page is neither counted nor numbered.
(d) Dedications
(1)
This page is optional and should appear before the
acknowledgments page.
(2)
This page must be counted and numbered.
(e) Acknowledgments
(1)
This page is optional but most theses do include a brief

(2)
(3)

statement of thanks or recognition of any special

assistance.
The heading Acknowledgments should be bold,
centered but without punctuation, and at least 2 from the
top of the page.
This page must be counted and numbered.

(f) Table of Contents

(1)
The heading Table of Contents should be bold, centered
but without punctuation, and at least 2 from the top of the page.
(2)
Do not list any titles that precede the Table of Contents (i.e.
Dedications, Acknowledgments).
(4)
List titles of the sections, and at least the first or second order
subdivisions. These titles must be worded exactly as they appear
in the body of the thesis.
(5)
These pages are numbered in lowercase Roman Numerals.
(g) List of Tables
Consult the appropriate style manual for the formatting of tables.
(h) List of Figures
Consult the appropriate style manual for the formatting of tables.
(i) Abstract
(1)

(2)

All theses must contain an abstract. It is a summary which

will permit a reader to determine the value of reading a full
thesis. Abstracts include a statement of the problem, an outline
of procedures or methods, and a summary of results and
conclusions. The abstract should be limited to 350 words.
The following heading is centered at the top of the abstract
page, at least 2 from the top of the page:
Abstract
Full Title of Thesis
Authors Name as it appears on the Thesis
Thesis Advisors Name

(3)
(4)
(5)

The text begins four lines below this heading.

The text must be double spaced.
The abstract is numbered in lowercase Roman numerals.

(j) Blank Page

This page separates the preliminary section from the text. It is
neither numbered nor counted.

2. The Text
(a)
The text should be subdivided into five major parts. The major parts may
contain such subjects as introduction, general argument, description of
procedures, research methods, discussion, summary, conclusions,
recommendations, and other pertinent topics that are necessary for a complete
understanding on the part of a sophisticated or professional reader.
(b)
The subdivisions of the preliminaries, text and the reference
material should be the same as the headings listed in the Table of Contents.
3. Reference Material
(a) Footnotes
(1)
Each footnote cites an authority for statements in the text.
(2)
Each one is numbered chronologically in lowercase
superscript Roman numerals.
(3)
Each one is placed at the bottom of the same reference page.
(4)
Each footnote entry uses single spaces.
(b)

Bibliography or Reference List

(1)
Any thesis that includes other works, either in direct
quotation or by reference, must contain a Bibliography that lists
these sources. If pertinent works have been consulted but not
cited specifically in the text, they should be listed separately as an
appendage to the Bibliography and given the sub-heading
General References.
(2)
The section begins with a cover sheet that bears the heading
Bibliography (or List of References) centered without
punctuation. This page is neither counted nor numbered.
(3)
The heading is repeated on the first page of the Bibliography
itself, 2 from the top, centered, and without punctuation. The
list of sources begins four spaces below the heading.
(4)
The list of sources is double-spaced between entries, but
single-spaced within each entry.
(5)

Entries may be in any consistent arrangement (i.e.

alphabetical by author, numerical, or chronological) as specified
by the style manual used.

(c) Appendices
(1)
If supplementary original data, illustrative material, a
detailed derivation of equations, as extensive proof of a theorem,
or a quotation too extensive for the body of the thesis are

included, they may be presented in appendices. Similar material

should be gathered in a single appendix.
Note: A list of nomenclature and symbols, if used, should be
included as a separate appendix.
(2)
This section is separated from the preceding material by a
cover sheet that bears the heading Appendix (or Appendices)
centered vertically and horizontally without punctuation. This
sheet is neither numbered nor counted.
(3)
The appendices may be divided into Appendix A, Appendix
B, etc., depending on the kinds and amount of material used.
Each appendix may have its own cover sheet which is not
counted nor numbered. The heading is repeated on the page
that bears the material. The title of the material follows four
spaces below the heading.
(4)
Each appendix and its title should be listed separately in the
Table of Contents.
(d) Last Page
An unnumbered blank page ends the thesis.
For details not covered by the preceding instructions, consult the appropriate style
manual.
Quick Guide to Arranging Your Thesis
1.
Title Page
2.
Blank (or copyright) page
3.
Dedications (optional)
4.
Acknowledgments (optional)
5.
Table of Contents
6.
List of Tables
7.
List of Figures
8.
Abstract
9.
Blank page
10.
Text
11.
Bibliography
12.
Appendices
13.
Blank page

(Sample Proposal Title Page)

PROPOSAL
FOR A THESIS IN PARTIAL FULFILLMENT
OF THE REQUIREMENTS FOR THE MASTER OF MUSIC EDUCATION
DEGREE

THE APPLICATION OF CRITICAL PEDAGOGY FOR MUSIC EDUCATION

ON ONE THIRD GRADE ELEMENTARY KODLY PROGRAM
Jennifer Student
Music Education Department
Westminster Choir College of Rider University
August, 2007

Approval of the Music Education Department:

Signed: _____________________________ _________ Chairperson
Frank Abrahams
Date
Signed: _____________________________ _________ Member
Patrick K. Schmidt
Date

(Sample Title Page of the Finished Thesis)

THE APPLICATION OF CRITICAL PEDAGOGY FOR MUSIC EDUCATION
ON TWO MIDDLE SCHOOL MUSIC CLASSES:
AN ACTION RESEARCH
_________________________________________
A Thesis
Submitted to
the Music Education Department
Westminster Choir College of Rider University
_________________________________________

in Partial Fulfillment
of the Requirements for the Degree
Master of Music Education
_________________________________________

by
Jennifer Student
August, 2007

______________________________
Frank Abrahams, Thesis Advisor