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S L AY T H E D R A GO N
G R E AT V I D E O G A M E S
Robert Denton Bryant & Keith Giglio
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DRAGON EXERCISES 02: EXPLORING THE GAME WORLD . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 71

CHAPTER 03: ARISTOTLE VS. MARIO . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 74
Our Grateful Acknowledgements . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 10

Foreword by Larry Hryb, Xbox Lives Major Nelson. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 12
CHAPTER 00: LOADING . . .
. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 17
W00t! A.K.A. Wow, Loot! . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 18

A Criminally Brief History of Storytelling Technology . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 20
The Golden Age of Games? . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 22
Hollywood Calling!. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 23
Why Slay the Dragon? . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 25
Meet Your Quest Givers: Bob & Keith . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 26
Screenwriter Meets Game Producer, Fight Breaks Out . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 29
Who Needs This Book?. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 31
How To Use This Book (Press X to Skip) . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 33
DRAGON EXERCISES 00: PLAYING TO LEARN . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 36
CHAPTER 01: WHATS IN A GAME?. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 40
What We Talk About When We Talk About Games. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 40

A Game Is a Journey of Action . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 44
Game Genre vs. Story Genre. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 46
How Do They Make Games? Whos the Director? . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 47
Where Do Game Ideas Come From?. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 48
The Narrative Designer . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 50
DRAGON EXERCISES 01: MAKING A GAME . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 51
CHAPTER 02: DO GAMES NEED STORIES?. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 55
Story Matters . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 55
Immersion: Context Is Everything. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 59
Story Plot. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 60
A Story Tutorial . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 60
A Criminally Brief History of Game Narrative. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 67
The Challenge of Game Writing. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 74

Aristotle vs. Mario: The Clash of Story and Gameplay . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 75
Making the Dragon Roar: Roles in a Game Studio. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 79
How Are Games Written? Are They Written?. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 80
The Rise of Story-Driven Games . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 82
How Do We Solve This Problem?. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 85
DRAGON EXERCISES 03: EXPRESSING YOUR GAME IDEA . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 88
CHAPTER 04: THE NO-ACT-FITS-ALL STRUCTURE OF VIDEO GAMES. . . . . 90
Finding the Dragon. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 90

What Is Structure?. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 91
Traditional Entertainment Structure = 3 Acts . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 93
Add a Midpoint = 4 Acts . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 96
Shakespeare and The Hulk = 5 Acts. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 97
The Sequence Approach = 8 Acts!. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 99
Serialized Storytelling . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 100
Beginning, Middle & Ending(s) . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 102
Time Is Different in Video Games . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 106
The Slay the Dragon Structure. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 107
A No-Act Structure?. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 108
DRAGON EXERCISES 04: SPEAKING OF STRUCTURE. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 110
CHAPTER 05: WRITING A GREAT PLAYABLE CHARACTER . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 112
The Evolution of the Video Game Character. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 112

Writing from the Arc Backwards . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 115
Whos More Awesome, Superman or Batman?. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 120
Conflict: The Essence of Drama . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 122
Backstory: How Is Finding Nemo Like The Last of Us? . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 123
Dont Tell Bowser: The Bad Guys Think Its Their Game. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 125
And the Dragon Goes To: The Best Supporting NPC. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 126
DRAGON EXERCISES 05: MEETING YOUR CHARACTERS. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 128
CHAPTER 06: WHO AM I WHEN I PLAY?

GAMEPLAY AS METHOD ACTING . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 130
Playing Your Character. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 130

Character Creation Is Not Creating Characters. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 131
Agency vs. Emotional Arc. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 130
Characters in Conflict Must Make Choices. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 132
To Be (Press A) Or Not To Be (Press B). . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 134
Choices Must Lead to Consequences. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 135
DRAGON EXERCISES 06: SPEAKING THROUGH YOUR CHARACTERS . . . . . 139
CHAPTER 07: GAME DESIGN BASICS FOR WRITERS . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 142
Its Only a GameAnd Thats a Pretty Good Thing. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 142

Gameplay Is the Core Building Block of Interactive Narrative. . . . . . . 143
What Is a Game Designer?. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 144
Our Theory of Fun. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 145
Mechanics = Active Verbs. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 147
Mechanics & Context. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 149
DRAGON EXERCISES 07: PLAYING WITH GAMEPLAY. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 152
CHAPTER 08: THE HERO OF A THOUSAND LEVELS . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 154
Quests, Levels, and Missions: Dissecting Your Game . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 154

Level Design Is Story Design. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 156
Story Beats by Level: an Analysis of The Last of Us . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 160
What Must Happen in Your Level?. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 162
Fit Your Idea in the Game Engine . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 162
Level Design Impacts Traditional Media . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 166
DRAGON EXERCISES 08: LEVELING UP. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 168
CHAPTER 09: BUILDING YOUR WORLD WITH THE
NARRATIVE DESIGN TOOLBOX. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 169
The Game Concept Document. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 170

The GameFly Pitch . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 171
Imagine Your WorldNot Someone Elses. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 173
Make Your Map . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 174
Filling Your Tool Box. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 175
Cinematics. Or Cut the Cut Scenes!. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 180
Software for Game Writing . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 183

Acting and DialogueBarking Up the Wrong Tree . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 184
Use the World for Words . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 187
DRAGON EXERCISES 09: BUILDING YOUR WORLD. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 188
CHAPTER 10: WE ALL CANT BE BATMAN:
ON MMOS AND MULTIPLAYER . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 190
Spel Time. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 191

Whose Story Is it, Anyway?. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 192
Sandbox Games. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 193
Multiplayer Games and Modes . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 193
Emergent Gameplay and Emergent Narrative. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 194
Aerith Dies. Bob Cries.. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 195
Multiplayer Often Comes First . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 196
DRAGON EXERCISES 10: FEELING YOUR WORLD . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 198
CHAPTER 11: ALWAYS BE CREATING. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 199
The Rise of the Indies. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 199

Who Are the Game Players? . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 200
Tools You Can Use . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 201
Start on Paper . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 202
Easy Mode. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 202
Medium Mode. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 203
Hard Mode: Game Engines. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 205
DRAGON EXERCISES 11: USING NEW TOOLS. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 206
CHAPTER 12: WHAT HAPPENS NEXT? . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 208
The Future Is Story. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 209

The World Is Full of Gamers . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 210
Get into the Game!. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 211
Our Final Challenge to You . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 213
DRAGON EXERCISES 12:BRINGING IT TOGETHER. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 216
Glossary of Select Terms from Video Game

Production and Culture . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 220
Our Grateful Acknowledgements
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playing; what you think is working in games and why. I hope your passion turns into your profession.
And I, Bob, would like to thank my Golden Globe-winning girlfriend
Terri DePaolo for putting up with a lota lotduring the writing and
researching of this book. Also to my former colleagues and lifelong friends
Karen McMullan, Martin Hagvall, St.John Coln, Amy Zimmitti, Mike
Dawson, Allen Im, Jennifer Estaris, Daniel Boutros, Jeffrey Kessler,
Firstly, we want to thank you for buying this book. For putting your
Greg Morchower, David Mullich, Bill Smith, and Michael Blackledge for
quarter in the arcade machine. We hope we inspire you to write, pro-
making me feel welcome and for teaching me to teach. Plus huge thanks
duce, or work on a great video game that elevates the industry to an even
to all of my students and knuckleheads, past and present, for teach-
higher standard.
ing me more than I ever taught you. I dedicate my effort in this book to
As this book is co-written, Keith and Bob have some co-thank yous.
As a team, thank you to Ken Lee and Michael Wiese for believing in this
book and opening up the video game world to their wonderful audience
and network of amazing writers. Thank you David Wright for your mad
copyediting skillz and for helping us to upgrade this book to epic quality.
Thank you Debbie Berne for making our musings and doodles look awesome. Thank you to Linda Venis and Chae Ko at the UCLA Extension
Writers Program for giving us a classroom and allowing us to fill it with
like-minded dreamers. Thank you to our research assistant, Stephen
Warren, and to Alice Art Design and Rae Yamamoto for help with the
graphics. And a special thank you to Larry Major Nelson Hryb for
penning the Foreword.
I, Keith, would like to thank the other pieces on my game board of
life: Juliet, Sabrina, and Ava. Weve come a long way from that crazy
night of playing Risk! Games often have a winner, and I am the winner
with all of you in my life. Thanks to everyone at Syracuse University for
supporting me in and out of the classroom. Especially to my chairman,
Michael Schoonmaker, for getting our class on the books and to Dean
Lorraine Branham for not telling me Im crazy with some of my crazy
ideas. Lastly, I want to thank Robert Sternberg. My friend. Its always
a treat to have you around the house and firing up the Xbox. But more
than thatthank you for letting me pick your brain about what you are
my goddaughter Kristen Ericksen, who was playing Gran Turismo using

manual transmission at age three, and who remains my favorite gamer.
F O R E W O R D 13
Foreword
by Larry Hryb, Xbox Lives Major Nelson
Fortunately, we did not have to wait too long.

I started working on the Xbox team in late 2003when we were
deep into planning Xenon, the console that would become the Xbox
360. I was working on the platform (the systems that games run
on) with some of the smartest people I have ever worked with: software developers, testers, network engineers, hardware engineers, and
are big business. As you will soon learn (if you dont know
more. ALL incredibly smart and talented, but VASTLY different from
already) the video game industry is HUGE. When I tell people that the
the creative environment I studied in and was used to. These men and
industry I work in is a BILLION dollar businessthey are amazed. I
women WERE the left brain. I was used to the warm, fuzzy, vague,
then follow up with another factoid: Its bigger than Hollywood. Thats
right-brain way of thinkingbut that was not what this was. I learned
right. At only 44 years old, sales of the video game industry regularly
to measure, analyze, and make data-driven decisions, not just ones
eclipse the 125-year-old motion picture industry.
that felt right.
VIDEO GAMES
Yeah. That big.
I also got my first look into game development.
While Ive always been into video gamesfrom that first time I
The next building over from where I worked was a studio named
played Pong at the local Sears department store on their Video Arcade
Bungie that Microsoft had purchased a few years earlier. They were
system (just a re-branded version of the venerable Atari 2600) to
working on Halo2, a follow-up to their massively successful game Halo
the countless hours spent after school at friends houses playing NFL
for the original Xbox. I would often go over there for meetings and I
Football on Intellivisionwhich was really nothing more than a series of
noticed something: The lines between technical and creative were
dots on a screen. We had to IMAGINE that they were QBs, linebackers,
just not there. It was one team of about one hundred people in a huge
etc. Hours and hours pushing dots around the screen with our hands
U-shaped room who were all creative and technical, sitting next to each
and our imaginations.
other and coming up with creative ideas and making them real with
I attended the Newhouse School of Communications at Syracuse
computer code. Right before my eyes I saw something amazing: The two
University to study television, radio, and film production. There, I
disciplines were working closely together to create that magical world I
learned about traditional story development and using technology to
dreamt of years before while at Syracuse.
bring ideas and characters to life: Write a script, go to the studio and
But, it was slightly different. As this book will show you, television,
shoot it with very expensive (tube) cameras, VTRs, etc. I practiced the
films, and radio are linear storytelling. The viewer (or listener) passively
art of storytelling, character arc, and all the hallmarks that make for a
sits back and watches (or listens) to the story play out at a prescribed
good linear story and program. I would study that by day, and return to
pace and with deliberately chosen camera angles and movements. In
my dorm in the evening and play video games. (It was upstate New York.
video games, its completely different. The players are at the center of
What else was a nerd to do in the winter?) I could FEEL the creative and
the action. THEY decide when and where to move, look, and take action.
technical fields were on a crash course in gaming.
They can spend ten minutes in a hallway. Or ten seconds. The players
One day we would have video games with the fidelity of movies and
can open this door, then that door, then go out this window. Or they can
TV. One day there would be far away worlds we could explore for hours
just go out another window. Maybe they turn around and go around
on end.
the building. The pace and direction are entirely up to the players. This
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non-linear interactive storytelling is one of the many innovations that
playing the same game can have three different experiences and results
video games have created.
based on their own in-game decisions. Very powerful stuff.
The book you are holding in your hands is for anyone who wants to
This book will show you what a game is and explore story and game
learn about this new way of storytelling that really is an evolution of tra-
genre, plot, character development, and much, much more. In my years
ditional storytelling. If youve written a screenplaythis book is for you.
of working in the industry this is the closest thing to a bible of creative
If youve ever played a video game and thought, Hey, I have a great idea
video game story creation as I have ever seen. This is an amazing indus-
for a storythis book is for you. If you want to get a better understand-
try that I am proud to be a part of where you really can make your own
ing of the multi-billion-dollar industry that is now a massive cultural
real life adventure. Anything can happen. I love telling my old Syracuse
and economic forcethis book is for you.
classmates that I came to Microsoft and I was part of a team that won
I love video games. I love that a person playing a game can create sto-
not one, but THREE Emmy Awards. A real life Emmy Award for work-
ries and character connections with deep emotions that can be greater
ing in the video game industry. Thats how far weve come. (Kudos to
than movies. When I played Red Dead Redemptionan incredibly popu-
the National Academy of Television Arts & Sciences for recognizing the
lar open-world game set in the great American West in the late 1800sat
importance and power of video game technology.)
the end I cried.

My wife walked into the room when I finished the game and she
asked, Whats wrong? All I could muster up was the ability to point at
the screen and say Its over. Its finally over.
Weve all felt a little something at the ending of a good book or a
Enjoy this book. Enjoy the journey of creating your stories and characters and making them come to life in a game for players around the
world to (hopefully) enjoy.
I hope we get to meet someday and you can tell me about your own
wonder and successes in the industry.
movie, but this felt deeper. It was MY character I was controlling. I was
the one that made the story go forward at my pace. I got to know the
All the best,
main character, John Marston, so well because I was controlling him.
Larry Hryb
In many ways, I became John Marston. Especially after the countless
Twitter: @majornelson
hours of gameplay and story decisions I had made. When I got to the
Seattle, Washington
end it was overwhelming. (I wont spoil it for you but if you finished the
February 2015
game, you probably had the same experience.)

In linear storytelling, the story and character arcs are straightforward and the ending is the same for everyone, and in video games that
can often be the case. But it becomes much more personal, since in video
games you actually control the character and pace of the story.
Video games often allow the player to control the direction of the
narrative, and in some games the outcome is directly based on in-game
choices you, the player, have made. Video games can employ some
extremely sophisticated storytelling where three different people
CHAPTER 00
LOADING . . .
When Desmond Miles is kidnapped by a sinister corporation, they

use a machine to send his consciousness back in time, where he is
forced to re-live the adventures of his ancestorsa secret society of
assassins. Can Desmond survive and stop the evil companys plans
to change history?
After his airplane crashes in the middle of the Atlantic, Jack discovers a man-made underwater Utopia called Rapture. But the
city has gone mad: its gene-splicing-addicted citizens attack him,
monstrous Big Daddies try to kill him on sight, and Raptures
autocratic founder will stop at nothing to maintain control. Can Jack
escape to the surface before he becomes an unwitting pawn in this
sub-marine madhouse?
After landing on a gargantuan, ring-shaped planet, the Master Chief,
a genetically enhanced super-soldier, must battle a fanatical civilization known as the Covenant. Can he stop them before they can use
their super weapon to destroy all life in the galaxy?
DO THESE BLURBS
sound like the plots of Hollywoods upcoming summer
blockbusters? They easily could be. Each of these story lines forms the
basis of a multi-million-dollar franchise with a global audience, shelves
full of licensed merchandise, legions of cosplaying fans, and side-stories
in multiple media.
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But these are NOT the plots of movies coming to a theater near you
$93 billion.2 (Were not great with big numbers, but heres a comparison:
(not at the time of this writing, anyway, although Halo: Nightfall is a
for the same period, worldwide theatrical box office revenue was $35.9
TV series). These are the story lines, worlds, and characters of block-
billion.3) Even though thousands of free to play games are available
buster video games: Assassins Creed, BioShock, and Halo. They are huge
nowadays, passionate players are still willing to spend big on games that
franchises born from video game stories. These games are interactive
engage them.
narratives that take place in very rich worlds populated with involving
Furthermore, everyone plays video games now. Think about that.
characters that inspire players to continue to interact and explore even
Video games have been around for almost 50(!) years, and for much of
after theyve beat the game. Video game stories and characterstheir
that time games have been made for and played by teenage boys. But we
intellectual property (or IP)are the next great frontier of our col-
play games at all ages now: Roughly a third of gamers are younger than
lective pop culture imagination. Video games have finally come of age.
18, a little more than a third are older than 36, and the remaining third
Great stories are being told.
are in the 1835 year range. And the gender breakdown is almost even:
Weve only mentioned three so far, but you can probably name many
more: Call of Duty, Borderlands, Resident Evil, Metal Gear Solid, Grand
48% female, 52% male.4

The audience for games has exploded in the last 10 years, with the
Theft Auto, Final Fantasy, and God of War.
advent of touch-screen smartphones and tablets, as well as easy-to-use
Does that list seem too hardcore?
download stores like Apples App Store, Google Play, and Steam. And we
Lets not forget the billions of dollars amassed by such family-friendly
cant forget Nintendos million-unit-selling Wii console, whose ground-
game franchises as Skylanders, Angry Birds, Plants vs. Zombies, Professor
breaking wiggle stick controllers helped thousands of parents and
Layton, Ratchet & Clank, and Clash of Clans. That list goes on and on
grandparents to play video gamesmany for the first time. But while
as well.
more people than ever are playing video games, not everyone identifies
Where did this all start? When did games become more than games
themselves as a gamer. (And thats okay. Well discuss this later on.)
and a place where great stories might be told? Just as the movies can be
With this huge and diverse audience playing games, some
traced back to the success of a lovable tramp, we think the first box-of-
Cassandras are now foretelling the END OF HOLLYWOOD AS WE
fice star . . . the Charlie Chaplin of the arcades . . . was a plumber who
KNOW IT.
helped to launch a thousand quarters, quests, multiple sub-franchises

and a billion dollar industry: MARIO!
It is not. Video games (and interactive fiction) are merely the latest media for writers to use their storytelling skills. We have a generation that has grown up with games. The Xbox has replaced the cable
W00T! A.K.A. WOW, LOOT!
box. Hollywood is not going anywhere, but neither are video games.
Consumers in North America spent over $21 billion on games at retail last
We believe thatjust as television learned from film and film learned
year, and thats just on traditional games-in-a-box played with game
from televisionit is time to examine the similarities and differences
consoles and personal computers. Worldwide and across all platforms,
between games and film as storytelling media. The new writers in
including mobile and tablet games, the number has been estimated at
Hollywood have grown up with games in their homes and in their
2 http://www.gartner.com/newsroom/id/2614915
1 Entertainment Software Association, Essential Facts about the Computer and Video Game
Industry 2014, p. 13. http://www.theesa.com/facts/pdfs/ESA_EF_2014.pdf
3 http://boxofficemojo.com/news/?id=3805&p=.htm
4 Entertainment Software Association, p. 3.
L O A D I N G . . . 21
purses. From mobile to desktop, games are part of the pop culture
viewers. Wanderers in penny arcades would put coins into kinetoscopes
conversation.
to watch what we would now think of as animated .GIFs. (BioShock
The emerging and the established writer in Hollywoodor who

dreams of Hollywood, or dreams of storytelling anywhere in the world
should know how interactive narrative adds to the conversation and
adds to the content.
Infinite uses a silent movie within the game to tell part of the story. The
machine the player sees it on: a kinetoscope.)
But there were no stories on film . . . until very short fiction films
began to appear, like Edwin S. Porters twelve-minute The Great Train
Robbery (1903). Audiences (groups of people watching together, rather
A CRIMINALLY BRIEF HISTORY OF STORYTELLING TECHNOLOGY
than the lonely experience of the kinetoscope) sat on benches or chairs in
Writers have always been drawn to new tech. From cave walls to the
tents, or in theaters. Barely a dozen years later D. W. Griffiths incredibly
printing pressif there is a new way of delivering a story, storytellers
successful (and incredibly racist) The Birth of a Nation (1915) proved that
will (usually) embrace it. Gutenbergs press was first used to print the
longer, feature-length movies were a viable means of telling longer,
Bible, but many other works soon followed. As books grew less expen-
more complex, and multi-threaded stories. Even silent movies needed
sive over time, newspapers, magazines, and dime novels were even
writers (or scenarists). Someone had to conceive the plot and write the
cheaperas they were designed to be mass-produced and distributed
intertitles.
as widely as possible. Charles Dickensa master of serialized storytell-
Movies came of age in 1939. This was the beginning of Hollywoods
ing and therefore the great-grandfather of binge watchingdelivered
golden age. Why 1939? The years 1939 to 1942 saw the release of a trove
his novels one chapter at a time in cheap, disposable weekly or monthly
of classic films that continue to captivate viewers to this day:
magazines. Devoted fans of his work and his characters would bark at
him as he walked through London: What have you in store for poor Pip?
When radio emerged as a mass medium, writers began scripting
Casablanca
Citizen Kane
radio plays: comedies, mysteries, science-fiction, adventure, melo
Destry Rides Again
dramas . . . you name it. Families gathered around the radio each night
Gone with the Wind
and listened to stories (and sometimes musical numbers). Orson Welles,
Goodbye, Mr. Chips
who had made his name as a stage director, used this new medium in a
The Maltese Falcon
legendary way when he staged H. G. Wellss The War of the Worlds as a
Mr. Smith Goes to Washington
radio play, without telling the audience it was a play. America thought
Ninotchka
they were listening to a music program when the performance was
Rebecca
interrupted with a special news report: Martians were invading the
The Rules of the Game (La rgle du jeu)
Earth via Grovers Mill, New Jersey. Welless cleverly disguised narra-
The Wizard of Oz
tive made use of then-familiar radio tropes to cause a national panic, if
Young Mr. Lincoln
only for one night.

Remember those two names: Welles and Wells.
When film arrived around the turn of the twentieth century, it was
a novelty. Early projections of trains coming into a station alarmed
Citizen Kane changed the medium. It set new expectations for cinematic storytelling. Its director? Orson Welles, the same boy wonder who
created a national panic with his radio play.
L O A D I N G . . . 23
Americans went to the movies in record numbers each week. But
has plateaued in recent years. In the last generation of high-def game
things change. Television landed in living rooms, so many moviegoers
consoles, you could see the nose hair growing out of the nostrils of the
landed on the couch. Today, not as many Americans go to the movies as
zombies that were about to kill you. In the current next generation,
they did back then, but more of the world goes. Hence, Hollywoods appe-
you can see individually animated legs on the mites on the nose hairs of
tite for computer generated imagery (CGI) and animation spectacles.
the zombies that are about to kill you. For most game players, the most
KA-BOOM! and SPLAT! are understood worldwide.
meaningful technological advancements of the last decade have been
Pick up any issue of any magazine that covers entertainment, eaves-
innovative controllers (via touch screens, cameras, plastic guitars, and
drop at a table where writers hang out, look at the original programming
wiggle sticks), better networking and, by far, the portability and ease of
offered by not only the broadcast and cable networks, but also Netflix,
use provided by both smartphones and their app stores.
Amazon and other streaming providers, and you will hear this consensus:
Whats been so exciting about this is that so many creators have
we are in a golden age of television. It has never been better. Broadband
been able to focus on making more immersive and emotionally compel-
and binge watching have changed the way stories are told. Audiences
ling stories with better gameplay, rather than having to spend so much
love long-form serialized storytelling. Kind of like what Dickens used
time learning how to render graphics on totally new platforms. Half-
to do. (Then again, many big game franchises have been providing long-
Life, Halo, Assassins Creed, Fallout 3, BioShock, Uncharted, Mass Effect,
form episodic storytelling for, well, a lot longer than Netflix has.)
The Last of Usall these landmark story-driven franchises have players
Television as a storytelling medium did not begin with a golden

age. Mom and Dad America did not unwrap their TV dinners and enjoy
returning again and again to experience the next chapter in the story; to
explore more deeply these compelling worlds.
Breaking Bad or The Sopranos. For decades, many TV shows were essen-
Although theyre not playable movies, their graphics and sound are
tially radio programs with pictures. (Many very early TV shows, like
cinematic. Advances in motion capture and a thousand other bits of tech-
Father Knows Best and The Adventures of Ozzie and Harriet, started
nology allow more realism and beauty. The worlds and story lines have
out as radio programs.) TVs current golden agewith its nuanced,
attracted A-list Hollywood talent. Music tracks are no longer the ping-
cinematic storytellingtook close to seventy-five years to get here.
ping-ping of an 8-bit chip but sweeping symphonic scores. World building
For decades, television was the most underappreciated and most often
and mythology are unparalleled. What was the norm for the video game
disparaged medium (besides comic books). Theater critic John Mason
industry now has become a key point in every story conference for movies
Brown famously called TV chewing gum for the eyes. It was unfash-
and television. The creators and narrative designers of these gamesKen
ionable in smart circles to declare that you might actually enjoy watch-
Levine (BioShock), Susan OConnor (Tomb Raider), David Cage (Heavy
ing television. Does that attitude seem familiar to those of us who love
Rain) and many othersare treated like rock stars at game conferences.
video games?
Agents, managers, and writers talk about how a writer in todays

world should know how to write it all: movies, novels, plays, articles,
THE GOLDEN AGE OF GAMES?
and webisodes. Even video games.
Weve come a long way from the bouncing ball that was Pong. We are now
in a golden age of video game storytelling. Thankfully, the technology
5 1955 June 6, Time, Radio: Conversation Piece, Time Inc., New York. (Accessed time.com
on September 12 2013; Online Time Magazine Archive)
HOLLYWOOD CALLING!
Film and television industry executives have long been fascinated by

video games. But, like many grown-ups, theyve had a very hard time
L O A D I N G . . . 25
understanding them. But if theres one thing blockbuster movies and
many times with non-Oz stories.) The film studio and game publisher
games have in common, its that their creators and distributors are
marketing executives call this pre-awareness, and its the Holy Grail
always pursuing The Big Idea.
theyre always pursuing.
Hollywood loves The Big Idea. The high-concept one-liner. The story
Those pre-aware movie audiences love being taken to explore new
that gets butts in movie seats. The tantalizing What If? question that
locations within their favorite worlds, going on new emotional jour-
people pay you to answer. The IP that can feed the fans insatiable appe-
neys with their favorite characters. The dramatic theory (according to
tite for sequels and spin-offs (and book tie-ins and toys and T-shirts).
Aristotlemore on him later) is that the audience empathically bonds
Every big media company wants nothing more than a franchise like
with the main character, and as that protagonist changes, the audience
Star Wars, in which the slightest announcement of new information or
comes to experience emotional change, or catharsis.
release of a new trailer can fill the halls at comic conventions and might
even crash Twitter.
And all this happens when they are sittingpassivelyin their

movie seats. But were not here to discuss passive entertainment; this
The appeal is twofold: for creators and fans, its about the fun of
book is about interactive entertainment.
exploring an exciting world and getting to know fascinating characters;

for the suits, its about the money! As Gus Grissom (actor Fred Ward)
WHY SLAY THE DRAGON?
says in The Right Stuff, No bucks, no Buck Rogers.
With video games, players are in the drivers seat (sometimes literally, if
The first modern American transmedia franchise was, arguably,
its a racing game like Gran Turismo). They are immersedemotionally
The Wizard of Oz (and we dont mean the beloved 1939 MGM filmthat
and physicallyin the game. A hero in a movie might need to rescue the
came almost four decades later). L. Frank Baum wrote The Wonderful
princess by slaying the big dragon, and we in the movie audience want to
Wizard of Oz in 1900. The book was a best-seller for years, and Baum
SEE him do it. But in a game, we the players want to slay the dragon and
wrote thirteen more novels based in the merry old land of Oz. He then
rescue the princess (or prince) through the vessel of the player character
brought the franchise to the stage as a musical play, which had a success-
(PC). We also want plenty to do and see along the way. Were players; we
ful run on Broadway and toured the United States. In 1914 he expanded
want to play.
into movies with a series of silent films produced by his own Oz Film
One of the axioms of dramatic writing is that action is character.
Manufacturing Company. There were spin-offs and merchandise (both
If we see a character doing something, it defines who they are. But in
licensed and unlicensed) for nearly forty years before audiences ever got
video games, were the ones driving the PCs actions. Were helping to
to see Judy Garland wear her sequined ruby slippers.
define (and become) the character we control on the screen. These game
All these journeys to Oz across multiple media made Baum a fortune.
mechanics are what the player gets to do in the game: Run. Jump. Shoot.
(He later lost a fortune, but thats a different story.) Audiences bought his
Explore. Collect. Solve. Beat the Boss. Be the Boss. (More on all this later).
books and tickets to his shows because they already knew of Oz and its
They are motivated by story and quests and goals to pound the joystick,
characters, but wanted to know more. It was much easier for Baum to
press X, Y. To lean forward and live in the story as the character would.
sell a new Oz-based bookfor which there was an existing audience
In the past, this was the most humbling thing for game writers to
than it was for him to sell a new book set in a different world. (He tried
learn. Players are often not as interested in what happens in the story you
have authored as they are in what happens in the story they are authoring
6 Baum, L. Frank. The Wonderful Wizard of Oz. Oxford University Press, 2008.
themselves by playing the game. You, the writer, have to learn to tell your
L O A D I N G . . . 27
story through the lens of PLAYER ACTION. If the player cannot succeed,
Our story begins in a 1920s apartment complex on Orange Grove
the character does not succeed. But the times have changed: players and
Avenue in the heart of Los Angeles. If the story has a title, its Aristotle
audiences want deeper content and characters they can connect to. Why
vs. Mario. Its a branching narrative (which is something well discuss
do we see gamers jumping back to Liberty City any chance they get?
later on when we talk about structure).
In his groundbreaking book on Hollywood screenwriting, Save the
Bob and Keith had both recently graduated with masters degrees
Cat, the late Blake Snyder showed us how important it is for us in the
from top film schoolsthe University of Southern California and New
movie audience to invest emotionally in the hero. He called those scenes
York University, respectively. The found themselves living two doors
that make us begin to root for the movie hero the Save the Cat scenes.
from each other, and became friends over Ethiopian food on Fairfax
Video games have a very similar but more active principle: The players
Avenue, too many Oki-Dogs, the L.A. Riots, and drives down to the San
have to invest emotionally in the journey youve laid out for them.
Diego Comic-Con (back when you could still find parking).
The player wants to slay the dragon.

This is what the player cares about. The story has to involve the
player. The player has to want to do and see cool things in the game world.
Keiths path took him on the road to Hollywood. He co-wrote feature film scripts with his wife Juliet and was a working screenwriter for
years.
The game mechanics (such as dragon slaying) should enhance the
Bob went to work in the video game business. He started at the bot-
story, and vice versa. They have to work in concert. Well guide you in
tom as game tester (think production assistant, mailroom clerk, or script
the coming pages so you understand how to tell your story through
reader). Bob quickly worked his way up the video game ladder, moving
the gameplay in an integrated fashion. Gameplay is like action scenes
into product development and then becoming a studio director, serving
in movies. They have to be organic to the story line for the audience to
as executive producer on dozens of games.
suspend disbelief and enjoy the ride. The best games accomplish this
Bob spent hours playing all kinds of games, and way too much World
fine alchemy between narrative and gameplay so that one enhances and
of Warcraft. Keith would get schooled in Halo by his nephews. They con-
reinforces the other (think of the big mid-game twist in BioShock). Your
tinued to be friends, have dinners, go down to Comic-Con with profes-
quest, outlined in the chapters to come, is to master that alchemy.
sional passes, read comic books, and talk movies and games.
But even though they thought they were on divergent paths, their
MEET YOUR QUEST GIVERS: BOB & KEITH
two worlds were gradually coming together. Xboxes and PlayStations
In video games, NPCs are the non-player characters who often guide the
were being marketed to adults, not just teens and parents. Kids who
PC through the world. These digital sidekicks hand out missions and
grew up playing video games were now working in the film business as
information to the PC. They are the quest givers, the rule enforcers, the
writers, directors, and visual effects artists.
explainers. (Think of Cortana, the Master Chiefs AI sidekick in Halo.)
One year Bob took Keith to the Electronic Entertainment Expo (E3)
You know them in game worlds as mentors, vendors, barkeeps, pass-
at the Los Angeles Convention Center. (Think of it as the Cannes Film
ersby, teachers, and trainers. We are going to be your quest givers. Were
Festival for the video game industry.) It was Keiths very first time, and
excited to explore with you this complex, awe-inspiring world of video
he felt like Luke walking into the cantina at Mos Eisley, but with less
game narrative.
danger and fewer loppings. Way more lightsabers, though.
We are not going to steal your virtual loot and sell it on eBay (though
one of us knows how).
Keith saw a giant world of entertainment and exciting story lines

enjoyed by millions of people. The crowds were huge, rushing between
gigantic booths with stadium-sized screens set up by the game publish-
L O A D I N G . . . 29
Damon Lindelof had to say about the similarities:
ers and hardware makers: Activision. Ubisoft. Electronic Arts. SquareEnix. Xbox. PlayStation. Nintendo. The booths were lavishly designed,
For me certainly, the big game-changer was Myst. Theres a lot of
with characters from the games walking about for photo ops. The giant
that feeling in Lost. What made it so compelling was also what made
screens played the trailers for these games on continuous loop, their
it so challenging. No one told you what the rules were. You just had
orchestral soundtracks booming throughout the halls: Mass Effect,
to walk around and explore these environments and gradually a story
Assassins Creed, Dragon Age, Final Fantasy.
was told. And Lost is the same way.7
These games looked and felt like movies! The quality of the content
was seductive. The computer animation was as good as watching the
Booker Prize-winning novelist Sir Salman Rushdie used video
Lord of the Rings trilogy. But more importantly, the stories that were up
games as a form of escapism during his years of hiding from Ayatollah
on the screen were inviting, begging to be seen. Film and games are no
Khomeinis fatwa. He has said he is quite fond of Mario. Video game
longer distant cousins, they are blood brothers. The South by Southwest
structure has influenced his storytelling. His novel Luka and the Fire of
(SXSW) Festival focuses on music, film, and games. The 2013 Tribeca
Life contains a main character, Super Luka, who is given 999 lives and
Film Festival debuted footage from a game called Beyond: Two Souls
has to pass through a number of levels to steal the fire of life and use it
starring Ellen Page and Willem Dafoe. Kevin Spacey (House of Cards
to wake his father from a coma. He remarked how non-linear narrative
Frank Underwood) plays the villain in a recent Call of Duty. Academy
is fascinating for him to explore. I think that really interests me as a
Award-winning composer Hans Zimmer wrote the music for Call of
storyteller, he said, to tell the story sideways.8
Duty: Modern Warfare 2.

The worlds have collided and the landscape of entertainment is
SCREENWRITER MEETS GAME PRODUCER, FIGHT BREAKS OUT
bigger and teeming with possibilities. (Side note: the last time Bob and
Remember we said our story was branching? Lets return to it. Keith
Keith went to E3, they accidentally wound up at a bar in the nearby Hotel
continued to work as a film and television writer, but he always kept one
Figueroa having cupcakes and beer with an adult film star, who was
eye open a little wider on what was happening in video games. Bob went
pitching her own game project. Our point is: everybody is getting into
on to executive produce more games. He was working on a game that
video games!)
had been mechanic-driven and was based on a toy companys IP. The
Sure, movies have influenced games. Uncharted is an interactive

Indiana Jones. Tomb Raider is a female Indiana Jones. In Minecraft, you
are Indiana Jones.
But every relationship works two ways. Video games have also been
influencing movies and books and television. Are we the only ones who
game world, though, seemed a little thin.

I need a writer, he said to Keith in the food court of the L.A.
Convention Center. They were taking a break from a comic book show.
For what? Keith asked, his feet still aching from walking the picket
lines for the then-in-progress Writers Guild strike.
thought the levels of the mind portrayed in Inception played out like
video game levels?
The first blockbuster mainstream CD-ROM game was the classic
Myst, about an island that contains lots of mysteries. Does that premise seem familiar to modern TV audiences? Heres what Lost co-creator
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same article, he says we have a lot of gamers on our writing staff.
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A game Im producing. If you want to audition for it, I need you to

write some barks for the NPCs.
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arena for storytellers and as a producer she wanted to know more.

Keith and Bob went on to expand the class to a full-semester course
Barks? NPCs? Bob was speaking a language different from what
in the Writers Program at UCLA. Keith then moved east and now
Keith was used to hearing. (Its a language well teach you in the coming
teaches the class at Syracuse University. Bob has taken the class to new
pages.) Keith asked a few questions, figured it out, wrote some barks and
heights, both teaching it online internationally and incorporating it into
auditioned for the job of narrative designer, which is game-speak for
game production courses he creates at other schools.
staff writer. Then Keith went to work for Bob at a toy company writing
video games.
Although theyd written and commented on each others work for
years, this was the first time they worked together professionally. They
They have seen their students enter the game industry armed with a
deep understanding of how story works for games.
This is our goal for you, the reader of this book. To level up your
abilities as a writer.
got along very well, except when they would argue about the role that
story should play in the game.
WHO NEEDS THIS BOOK?
Its not a movie!
Were convinced that in order for them to succeed, todays screenwriters
The character needs more of an arc!
must understand the interactive medium.
Agency?!? What the heck is that?
Many film directors working today openly acknowledge the influ-
The audience has to care! They have to be involved!
ence video games have on their work. Listen to director Joe Cornish,
Theyre players, not an audience!
discussing his movie Attack the Block:
It was story points vs. game mechanics. It was Aristotle vs. Mario;
drama vs. fun. They would spend hours discussing dramatic structure
The monsters were kind of inspired by a SNES game called Another
of movies and television and video games. What was the same? What
World, which was one of the first games to use motion capture,
was different? It was an ongoing education, from which they decided to
Cornish said. It had some terrific creatures that were made out of
create a course in game writing offered through the prestigious Writers
silhouettes. The idea of staging Attack the Blocks events in a single
Program at UCLA Extension.
location was something else that, Cornish maintains, came from the
Their very first class was a day-long seminar. They had no idea
who, if anyone, would show up. It was on a sunny 75-degree Sunday in
realm of video games. It was, he said, a unified spacesomething

commonly seen in first-person shooters.9
Westwood. Whod want to sit in a room with Bob and Keith and learn
about story structure, game mechanics, and barks?
Dan Trachtenberg directed an original short film based on the video
But the classroom was packed. Every seat was taken. There were
game Portal. It went viral, logging more than fifteen million views.10 He
people who worked in game design and community management; there
is now attached to direct the movie version of the comic book Y: The
were screenwriters; there were aspiring game designers; and, most sur-
Last Man written by Brian K. Vaughn, a comic book writer and producer
prisingly, an A-list actress/producer and her husband/producing partner,
on Lost.
himself a working TV actor. During a break Keith asked her, Why are you
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taking this class? She said it was because she knew this was an emerging
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Warner Bros. scored a huge hit with The Lego Movie. Audiences have
been playing with Lego for years. But in all the reviews (which were
L O A D I N G . . . 33
We hope you find the ideas and exercises within to be a worthy

quest. We wrote this book for you, if you are:
glowing) and discussions of the films success, we noticed a complete

lack of love for the Lego games. For years, people have been living in
a writer who wants to explore interactive storytelling,
Lego worlds, not just with the toy bricks, but with the funny animated
a writer who wants to understand the role of story in the
adventures that go along with playing any of the Lego games, including Lego Indiana Jones, Lego Star Wars, and Lego Batman. Its the Lego
game development process,

a game writer (or gameplay designer) who wants to make
games of the last 10 years, made by English developer Travellers Tales,
your work more integrated and emotionally resonant with
which inspired The Lego Movies comic sensibility. The Lego movie only
gameplay (and vice versa); or
broke new ground in movie theaters. There was an audience of mil-
a passionate fan of story-driven video games.
lions already familiar with that world. We were disappointed that film
reviewers didnt acknowledge this.
At the end of each chapter are some Dragon Exercises. We encour-
Seizing on the success of the Lego movie, its no wonder Warner Bros.
age you to do them. Let us be your quest givers here to take you through
has put Minecraft into accelerated development as a feature film franchise.
world-building, character creation, branching narratives, and game
To millions of people around the world its already a franchise! A movie
mechanics (among many other topics).
would be icing on a very big cake that has already been baked. (BTW,
Its time to begin your journey.
the creator of Minecraft was able to purchase a $70 million home in Los
Its time to slay the dragon!
Angeles. We guess you need a pretty big kitchen for that pretty big cake.)
Remember those story pitches that started this chapter? As we write
this, they are all in development as motion pictures. Michael Magneto
Fassbender is attached to star in Assassins Creed. Ridley Scotts company is developing the Halo feature film. Although, as of this writing, its
stuck in development hell, we fully expect to be on line the first day for
the BioShock movie.
HOW TO USE THIS BO OK (PRESS X TO SKIP)

Movies (and television) and video games; video games and movies. This book is
a bridge between those two types of media. Lets call them linear narrative and
interactive narrative.
Assassins Creed publisher Ubisoft has been compared to the next
You may be very familiar with the material on linear narrative: character, con-
Marvel for raising money to develop its own properties for the big
flicts, and all the other tenets of drama. But you might not know anything about
screen, including two games based on Tom Clancy novels-turned-game

franchises: Splinter Cell (with Tom Hardy attached) and Ghost Recon.11
Games are not just about games anymore. The worlds are colliding.
Swirling around you. It can be very confusing. Were here to clear up the
game mechanics and gameplay. Or, you may be an avid game playeror game creatorwho is familiar with gameplay but might not know about story structure. With
that in mind, we have laid out some choose-your-own-adventure options to help
guide you through the book. As much as we hate to skip over cut scenes, sometimes
it happens. So we are providing you with a SKIP button here.
differences, to bridge the similarities, and to get you thinking about that
alchemy!
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If You Are a Writer and Know a Little about Games

Most of this book is going to be new to you. Sure, you will be tempted to skip over
L O A D I N G . . . 35
story and jump right to gameplay. But you want to make sure you read the story
If You Teach and Use this as a Textbook
material also, for it is wildly different in interactive narrative.
Everything in this book has been beta-tested in our classrooms. We have structured the book so you can use it to map out your semester. Each chapter contains
Must-read chapters: all of them!
exercises and projects that we have workshopped with our own students with great
success. Our students have gone on to work in the video game field as writers, pro-
If You Are a Game Developer and Know a Little about Story
ducers, testers, and even journalists.
For a game dev, a chapter like Whats in a Game? may seem like a boot camp
tutorial. So skip it. And you can probably skip over game mechanics. But dont pass
Must-read chapters: all of them!
up story, or characters. Even level design has something to offer on how it applies to
what keeps viewers in their seatsengaging content.
If You Are a Hobbyist and Want to Make Your Own Game

Read it all the way through from beginning to the end. (And dont forget the
Must-read chapters:
2. Do Games Need Stories?
3. Aristotle vs. Mario
4. The No-Act-Fits-All Structure of Video Games
5. Writing a Great Playable Character
6. Who Am I When I Play? Gameplay as Method Acting
8. The Hero of a Thousand Levels
9. Building Your World with the Narrative Design Toolbox
12. What Happens Next?
If You Are a Film Producer or Creative Exec

Looking for the Next Big Crossover IP
Everyone wants to be that genius at the studio who makes the video game movie
(or TV show) work. So far it hasnt. Why is that? We think you should read through
the entire book to make your job easier. Bridge the two worlds together. You are not
looking to break into the video game business, so you will probably skip most of the
exercises as well.
Must-read chapters:
1. Whats in a Game?
2. Do Games Need Stories?
3. Aristotle vs. Mario
4. The No-Act-Fits-All Structure of Video Games
5. Writing a Great Playable Character
6. Who Am I When I Play? Gameplay as Method Acting
7. Game Design Basics for Writers
8. The Hero of a Thousand Levels
12. What Happens Next?
exercises!)
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games, they should ask: What are the rules? What are the obstacles?
Are there rewards and achievements? Setbacks? How is the game structured? This is not a book about balancing gameplay based on statistics
and math. Its a book on game story. But as Writers will soon learn, story
and gameplay go together. How does the gameplay in the board game
DRAGON EXERCISES 00
Playing to Learn
reflect its story or world?

The Gamer probably knows all about the gameplay. He or she will be
able to see the framework of the game the way a screenwriter would see
story structure. So the Gamer needs to play a new board game and concentrate on the storythe worldof the game. Who are the characters?
of each chapter weve suggested some exercises for you to do.
How are they represented? What is the story line? What is the goal of the
This is not homework. This is fun. This is brainstorming, or getting your
characters, and is that different from the goal(s) of the players? How is
brain ready to be stormed with your great game idea(s).
the world of the game conveyed to the player?
AT THE END
Play a game and in one page describe the world of the story, the plot,
START YOUR GAME JOURNAL
and the game play. Record your impressions in your Game Journal.
Games are meant to be played. Funny how simple that seems, but it is
the truth. But now when you play a game, we want you to play with a
Some board games that are well worth playing if you havent tried
them are:
more analytical eye. Start a Game Journal, and fill it with your reflections on and impressions of every game you play, good or bad. Record
Battlestar Galactica
your thoughts during or shortly after the game.
King of New York

Myth
Quantum
PL AY A BOARD GAME
For your first entry, we want you to play a board game. But not a game
Puerto Rico
thats sitting in the basement of Moms house, or in your closet. Play a
Settlers of Catan
new board gameone that youve never played before.
Sheriff of Nottingham
Board games have enjoyed a renaissance over the last decade or so.
Ticket to Ride
Actor Wil Wheaton (Star Trek: The Next Generation) hosts a web series
called Table Top, which features celebrities and game industry veterans playing new board games.
If youre still stumped as to what to try, there are plenty of great suggestions at www.boardgamegeek.com.
But why do you need to play a board game?

The Writer will probably be the player who loves to read the backstory that might come with the instructions; or really like the world
PL AY A VIDEO GAME
(We realize this may be stunningly obvious.)
as described on the back of the box. But board games are a great way
Way too many games; way too little time. Keith tells his screenwrit-
for writers to start thinking about game design. As Writers play board
ing students to watch all of the films on the American Film Institutes
P L AY I N G T O L E A R N 39
list of the 100 Greatest American Films of All Time. Well, aspiring
gameplay organic to the story line. They are also interactive narratives
game writers need to do the same sort of thing. However, there is no
that we feel make the best use of the tools of video game writing.
definitive list of the top 100 games, although many lists agree on many
great games. Many game magazines and web sites publish such lists
Assassins Creed franchise
periodically. But you as a writer should focus on the more story-driven
Beyond Good & Evil
games. (Pong is, after all, simply Pong.) Although many classic games
BioShock
have been remastered for play on modern systems ranging from PCs
BioShock Infinite
to smartphones, not every old game ages well.
Braid
Play games that have been recognized in the last five years or so for
Brothers: A Tale of Two Sons
their engaging stories or immersive worlds. Play games on a computer,
Deus Ex franchise
on a console, on a smartphone or tablet. Play indie games. Download and
Fallout
play trial and demo versions. Play games in various game genres to get
Fallout 3
the feel of how they work. Play a sports game like FIFA or NBA 2K. (Yes,
Final Fantasy VII
these do have stories.)
God of War
Play best-sellers, critics darlings, and award winners. Although the
Half-Life
games industry does not yet have its Academy Awards, its worth pay-
Halo franchise
ing attention to any such list. Some of the story-driven nominees and
Heavy Rain
winners of The Game Awards 2014 included:
Ico
Journey
Bravely Default
The Last of Us
Broken Age: Act I
Mass Effect franchise
Divinity
Portal
Dragon Age: Inquisition
Portal 2
Middle-earth: Shadow of Mordor
The Stanley Parable
South Park: The Stick of Truth

The Vanishing of Ethan Carter
(Please dont freak out if your favorite game isnt on the list. This is
The Walking Dead, Season Two
a short list, and is by no means definitive. We only present it here as a
The Wolf Among Us
jumping-off point for you to begin to explore story-driven games.)
This War of Mine

Valiant Hearts: The Great War
Wolfenstein: The New Order
We also recommend in our classes games from the following list, in
which we find the narrative, characters, or world very compelling, and
Play a game and in one page describe the world, the plot, and the
gameplay. Record your impressions in your Game Journal.
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to cover all computer games. Fair? Good. Well generally be talking about
digital (computer) games throughout the book. We have mad respect for
the writing and world building that goes into so many popular analog
CH A P T ER 01
WHATS IN A GAME?
(table-top) games, but, frankly, Bob still hasnt learned to play Settlers of
Catan, so well usually be talking about video games. But not always.
The hard partdefining gameis a lot harder, especially since the
ludologists got involved. (Ludology is the academic study of games and
gameplay.) We are in a very evolving period of time as a debate rages
about what exactly is a game.
A GAME IS NOT A MOVIE,
and a movie is not a game.
No one decides to go out for the evening to watch a game; and we

cant imagine a scenario where friends text each other: SUP? U WANNA
PLAY A MOVIE?
Legendary designer Sid Civilization Meier said that games are a

series of interesting decisions.13
Respected ludologist Jesper Juul said that a game is a rule-based
system with a variable and quantifiable outcome, where different out-
It makes no sense. How can you play a movie? You watch a movie.
comes are assigned different values, the player exerts effort in order to
How do you see a game? You play a game. (Although Amazons billion
influence the outcome, the player feels emotionally attached to the out-
dollar purchase of Twitch.tv is the latest evidence that video games are
come, and the consequences of the activity are negotiable.14
becoming something you watch as wella spectator sport.12)

Games and movies are two distinct media. Filmed entertainment
(movies, TV, scripted Internet videosanything written for a screen)
and video games are at once incredibly similar and totally different. But
Iconoclastic indie developer and critic Anna Anthropy wrote that a

game is defined as an experience created by rules.15
For our purposes, we like Ms. Anthropys definition the best, as its
the least limiting, most versatile, and shortest.
as these two storytelling platforms align more and more, certain con-
But what are some of the core aspects of a game? And are any of
ventions from the one have begun to influence the other. Two of the best
these characteristics also found in other storytelling media like films or
recent video game movies were not based on actual video games. Edge
television?
of Tomorrow and Snowpiercer are both movies that feature video game
tropes which may or may not be recognizable to the non-game-playing
Goals and Obstacles
audience.
Games have goals. Classic board games expressed this as The Object of
So what exactly do we mean by video game?
the Game printed at the top of the instructions. In order to make those
goals challenging, games have obstacles. From a pawn blocking a pawn
WHAT WE TALK ABOUT WHEN WE TALK ABOUT GAMES
Lets get the easy part out of the way: Video means, effectively, played
on a screen using a computer. That computer may be in your mobile
phone, your game console, or your laptop. But we like to use video games
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see_games_as_sets_of_interesting_decisions.php
14 Juul, Jesper. 2005. Half-Real: Video Games between Real Rules and Fictional Worlds.
Ebook. 1st ed. Cambridge, MA: MIT Press, loc 400.
15 Anthropy, Anna. 2012. Rise of the Videogame Zinesters: How Freaks, Normals, Amateurs,
Artists, Dreamers, Dropouts, Queers, Housewives, and People Like You Are Taking Back an Art
Form. Ebook. 1st ed. New York, NY: Seven Stories Press., Loc. 939.
in a game of chess to Jail in Monopoly or backtracking down a chute in
each other, or the game, or both, to win. In single-player video games,
Chutes and Ladders, there will always be obstacles to impede the prog-
players play against the game system, but they may also be playing
ress of the player.
against the entire world when it comes to online leaderboards and
Drama in any form must have obstacles and conflict. If Odysseus had
achievements. Scripted drama consists largely of us watching a compe-
used Google Maps, the Odyssey would have been a lot shorter and way
tition and rooting for the good guy, be they Othello, Atticus Finch, or
less interesting.
Katniss Everdeen.
And, perhaps most importantly:
Characters
I want to be the top hat! Have you ever heard this? It can happen any
Rules
time a group sits down to play Monopoly. Games often have characters
Games have rules. Its the first thing participants discuss when starting
that are acted by the players during the gameplay. Remember Clue?
a game. Someone will explain the rules. How to move. What the cards
We humans have a way of identifying with (and as) other people (real or
mean. How to win.
fictional), animals, and plants (see Plants vs. Zombies)even inanimate
Movies and TV shows also have rules. Drama has rules. Characters
objects, like Monopolys top hat. Even colors. Growing up, Bob always
must be motivated. Clues must be planted. Conflict must be resolved
wanted to play as black in checkers. He thought black was smarter and
somehow. When stories deviate from these rules, we often find them
cooler than red or white.
unsettling, unsatisfying, or a Lars von Trier film.
The play has a character (or avatar) who isfor the playerthe
Rules matter in games. Yes, there are some games where you play
protagonist of the story. There must also be antagonists. These can be
without rules. These are games you might have played at the playground
other players, or computer controlled villainsobstacles that move and
in a sandbox as a kid. (Remember that word: sandbox.) Peek-a-Boo. Ring
act and have cool dialogue.
Around the Roses. Make-believe games like House or Dinosaurs. But

on the same playground you might have kids playing games where they
Settings (or the Game World)
have to play with rules. Hide and Seek. Duck, Duck, Goose. Four Square
When you sit down to play a game, the game maker provides the dra-
(the ball game, not the app). All sports and card games.
matic context. The world. The setup. Building the world is the first step
And of course, board games.
to creating an immersive experience for the player. Where does the
So what is a rule? Think of it like an if-then statement. If I do or
game take place? The historic Atlantic City of Monopoly? The imaginary
accomplish this, then this other thing will happen. It could be a reward
island of Catan? The nineteenth century United States of Ticket to Ride?
or a setback. Simply put, when playing a Call of Duty or a Battlefield:
Even such simple board games as Stratego, Battleship, and Risk show us
a worldnamely, combat in the field, at sea, and on a global scale. (By the
If I fall on a grenade, then I will die.
way, where the heck did the aliens in the Battleship movie come from?
They werent in our game box!)
At some point during a board game, players might have to refer to the
rule book or instruction manual. Computers are awesome because they
Competition
automate the rules, making them close to invisible. The computer rolls
Competition is a huge component of gameplay. Players compete against
the dice, does the math (physics and calculus) instantly, keeps score, and
referees. The computer tracks changes in the games state (positions,
always thinking about what the characters are doing in a scene. What
statistics, achievements, etc.). Imagine having someone at the table
makes sense? Whats challenging? Whats too easy or too boring?
on game night doing all that. In so many games, the computer is your
Heres a brutally incomplete list of some common game mechan-
Dungeon Master, without the sarcasm or the onion-ring breath. Because
ics, with some example games. Think about games that youve played
the computer is running the game, the player can stay immersed in the
recently, or your favorites. Which mechanics do you recognize from this
world of the game. Finally, when its time for more of the story, the com-
list? Which are missing?
puter plays that content flawlessly, every time.

However, games are not only about the experience created by the
Moving
rule systems. Theyre about the story also. Stories have rules as well. Just
This can cover a lot, like running at a fixed speed (Temple Run, Canabalt)
think of all the rules associated with opening the lost Ark, or using the
or accelerating and decelerating, often while steering (Pole Position,
Force? Or how someone can awaken from a dream in Inception. Players
Project Gotham Racing). You might be jumping (Super Mario Bros.) and
(and characters) make choices that affect outcomes, and those outcomes
ducking (Super Mario Bros. 3) to avoid obstacles or to reach platforms.
affect further choices the player can make. Its a feedback loop: Rules
You can move to pursue or to avoid, fleeing enemies (Pac-Man) or chas-
create consequences. Consequences create feelings. Those feelings
ing them (powered-up Pac-Man).
affect the players next actions, and those actions are again judged by
the rules. And so on, tens of thousands of times per play session.
Exploring
Think about the emotions you feel when you are playing a game and
This might be seeking a hidden switch in a room (Myst, The Room) or
have to GO DIRECTLY TO JAIL. Or when you finally solve the puzzle
a more general exploring of a level or a world to discover its wonders
thats been thwarting your progress. Or when you find that one hidden
(World of Warcraft). You could be collecting things (Pokmon, Lego Star
item that will complete your quest. Our goal as game writers is to use
Wars) or gathering resources (Minecraft). If someone is searching for
those feelings to deepen the narrative experience for the player. This
you, then perhaps you should think about hiding (Metal Gear Solid).
is the storytelling alchemy that games can possessa combination of

gameplay and narrative.
Planning
Well explore story further in the next chapter, but for now, lets say
This is a broad one, as it can include managing (SimCity, Roller Coaster
that a story is a journey of emotion. If thats true, and we feel it is, then
Tycoon), strategizing (Civilization, Rise of Nations), or simply buying
its useful to think of a game as a journey of action.
and selling (The Sims, franchise mode in Madden). You may be choosing
which weapon or power-up to use (Angry Birds, Mario Kart), arrang-
A GAME IS A JOURNEY OF ACTION
ing gems or other things (Bejeweled, Puzzle Quest), or allocating cards
What action? Everything: the action the player takes, the resulting action
in your deck or points to your character (Magic: The Gathering or Mass
that the game system (or an opposing player) takes, then the resulting
Effect).
subsequent actions that the players take, etc.

Game mechanics are the actions that a player can take in a game.
Fighting
They are the verbs of the game. Gameplay designers are always think-
This can include attacking and defending in individual hand-to-hand
ing about what the players can do in a level, just as screenwriters are
combat (Street Fighter, Tekken), on the squad level (Final Fantasy Tactics)
or as a clash of armies (StarCraft, the Total War series). Although some
is an urban combat simulator, they share the same core mechanic: point-
games feature intimate stabbing, both more secretive (Assassins Creed)
and-click shooting. But just because we group games by their mechanics
and less (Chivalry: Medieval Warfare), by far the most popular form of
doesnt mean that story isnt important to our enjoyment of games. The
combat in video games is shooting. Whether the shooting is done from
story should complement the mechanics of the genre and vice versa. It all
a side view (R-Type), a top-down view (Asteroids), an over-the shoulder
comes together during the development and production of the game. With
view (Gears of War), or a first-person view (Quake, Unreal, Halo and so
that in mind, we want to touch on how video games are actually made.
many others), players love to point at a target, press a button, and let the
simulated physics fall where they may.
HOW DO THEY MAKE GAMES? WHOS THE DIRECTOR?
Movies have directors. Theyre the ultimate boss on a film set; they are
Timing
responsible for managing all the creative and technical departments so
This is another broad one, as it can include volleying the ball in Pong
that the hundreds of people who work on the film are executing toward
or Breakout, matching your steps or strums to the beats in Dance Dance
bringing the directors coherent creative vision to the movie.
Revolution or Guitar Hero, or swinging your club in Hot Shots Golf.
The movie-making process developed in Europe and America over a
We warned you this list is brutally short. What have we missed?
century ago, and its customs and practicesits industry cultureis very
Well dig deeper into this in Chapter 07: Game Design Basics for Writers.
deeply rooted. It would be hard to imagine a film without a director,
Remember that many games, and very many story games, tend to
and we have a long tradition of genius-level auteurs (Welles, Hitchcock,
combine several mechanics, either simultaneously or in phases. In the
Bergman, Fellini, Kubrick, . . .).
Grand Theft Auto games you race sometimes, you shoot sometimes, and
Games do not have directors, per se. They sometimes have creative
sometimes you shoot while racing. In Sid Meiers Pirates! you sword
directors, or design directors, or occasionally youll see a directed by or
fight, sail, and trade, amongst other piratey activities.
game director credit on large projects or some Japanese games, but the
Understanding a games mechanics is crucial to where it is placed,
term is rare. There may be a person (say, the Director of Game Design)
both on the retail shelf and in the minds of game players, because histor-
who owns the creative vision of the game, but he is always working with
ically, thats how we think of game genres.
the producer (responsible for the schedule and budget) and the technical
director (or lead programmer, responsible for the coding), as well as the
GAME GENRE VS. STORY GENRE
other department heads (art, audio, marketing, live team, testing, com-
Stories are journeys of emotion. We tend to group movies and televi-
munity managers, etc.) to balance their creative vision against the other
sionalong with novels and playsby the emotions they evoke (comedy,
resources (Time! Money!) that are running short on the project.
horror, romance, etc.).
The process of making computer games emerged four decades ago
Games are journeys of action, however. We tend to group games by
in Japan, America, and Europe, and each regions game development
their core mechanics (racing, shooting, role-playing, etc.). Players who
culture is a little different. In America, the game development process
enjoy a certain mechanic tend to look for other games with the same
still often reflects the well-established process of grown-up software
mechanics they enjoy, just as people who enjoy mystery novels look for
developmentbanking, medicine, aviationthat arose in the 1960s and
more mysteries to read. Thats why retailers often put Halo and Call of
70s. There, the clients (represented by marketing) often dictated their
Duty on the same shelf. Even though one is a space opera and the other
needs or creative vision, which was mediated by a project manager, who
then managed teams of programmers, who wrote the software. (If it
a campfire. Theyre leaderless, oppressed, and homeless. One starts
seems Dilbert-y, it is.)
to sing . . . and then Bob launched into a song hed written that would
Fortunately, game development can be a lot more democratic, in

the sense that managing the entire team (which is done by producers or
project managers, not a director) relies a lot more on consensus build-
cover the action in the first cut scene.

Wait a minute, a producer said. Is this a game youre pitching?
What do I get to do?
ingand horse tradingthan orders dictated through a megaphone by
Well, fight your way out of the mines and re-take Castle Greyskull.
an auteur in a canvas chair. There is often a blue sky period very early
Fine, thats the storybut what do I get to do?
on in the conception phase. No good (or bad) idea goes unexpressed.
Bob had figured that details like gameplay could be sorted later. He
Blue sky is the honeymoon period of creativity. Anything is possible.
was wrong.
Creators meet, brainstorm, spitball. They might be producers, designers,
His experience was typical for screen and fiction writers who move
and writers who work from this mantra: If we can have anything in the
into game writing. Its a very sobering realization that you, the writer(s),
world in our game, what might it be? Blue sky starts the collaborative
are never the prime creator of a game. Fledgling game writers get told
process and differs greatly from the screenplay-driven, authorial pro-
almost daily, we cant do that, by producers or programmers. A sim-
cess of Hollywood. Sure, the creative producer of the game will reject
ple idea like lets make our hero swim! can have a huge impact on the
most ideasbut the ideas will be heard.
schedule and budget of a game, because implementing that suggestion
There are, of course, a few video game auteurs who work like, and
would require the time and money involved to create entirely unantici-
have fans like, film directors: Hideo Kojima (Metal Gear Solid), Sid
pated models, textures, and animation trees. The sad irony is that for an
Meier (Civilization), Will Wright (SimCity, The Sims), Tim Schafer (Grim
interactive medium, it is often very difficult in video game development
Fandango), and Ken Levine (BioShock), among a few others. But they
to adapt on the fly in the middle of a project.
remain the exception rather than the rule.
Thats the bad news. And it is also looking in the rear-view mirror.
The good news is that more than ever, developers at every level need
WHERE DO GAME IDEAS COME FROM?
good writers to compete in the marketplace as the mediumand the
When Bob was working as a game tester at Mattel, he thought he had
audiencegrows more sophisticated and discriminating. We are just
a great idea for a game: Mattel should resurrect its then moribund
beginning to unlock the potential of video games as a form of artistic
Masters of the Universe IP and make a hardcore action game aimed
self-expression.
at the then 20- and 30-year-olds who grew up playing with He-Man and
Although game concepts traditionally have been driven by technol-
Skeletor. Because it was aimed at a mature audience, Bob envisioned
ogy and game mechanics, this is changing. The idea for The Last of Us
the game as a gritty, noir take on He-Man. Skeletor had years ago con-
did not come from the mechanics. It came from the mind of the writer/
quered Castle Greyskull. He-Man had been stripped of his Sword of
co-director Neil Druckmann. He wanted to develop a game version
Power and had been banished to hard labor in a forgotten astro-mine.
of the iconic zombie movie Night of the Living Dead. Unable to get the
Bob pulled together an ad hoc group of artists and producers (who often
rights, he came up with his owna mash-up of Night of the Living Dead
doubled as gameplay designers) from the studio and pitched them his
and the classic PlayStation 2 game Ico.16 Druckmann made the idea his
idea over lunch.

We open up with three of He-Mans buddies huddled around
16 The Making of The Last of Us - Part 1: A Cop, A Mute Girl and Mankind, http://youtu.
be/Fbpvzq-pfjc, retrieved January 20, 2015.
own, blending story and game mechanics in a way that resulted in a

game-changing game.
THE NARRATIVE DESIGNER
The process of video game production suffers when a writer is brought

in late to the project to assemble all the assets and make something that
DR AGON E X ERC ISES 01
is cohesive. A narrative designer might be brought into the project early.
Making A Game
On his blog The Narrative Design Explorer, transmedia story designer

and interactive design evangelist Stephen Dinehart17 put together one
of the best job descriptions weve seen of the role and responsibilities of
a narrative designer. He wrote that:
WRITE YOUR OWN GAME
The Narrative Designer will focus on ensuring that the key elements
In this exercise, gameplay will be locked, and its up to you to make the
of the player experience associated with story and storytelling
game as interesting as possible using only the tools of storytelling. The
devices, script and speech are dynamic, exciting and compelling.
game is a simple dice race:
A job title has emerged recently thats often junior to narrative

designer: content designer. But whatever its called, we hope that you
will one day soon be working for (running, perhaps?) the game developer of your choice.
But lets learn to crawl before we fly. Lets break things down all the
way to their fundamentals.
Lets talk about story. See you in the next chapter.
1. Two players
2. One six-sided die
3. Both players start on the same space (#1). Taking turns, each
player rolls the die and moves their token one to six spaces around
17 http://narrativedesign.org/about/
the board.

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DRAGON EXERCISES 02: EXPLORING THE GAME WORLD . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 71

Our Grateful Acknowledgements . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 10

W00t! A.K.A. Wow, Loot! . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 18

What We Talk About When We Talk About Games. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 40

The Challenge of Game Writing. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 74

Finding the Dragon. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 90

The Evolution of the Video Game Character. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 112

CHAPTER 06: WHO AM I WHEN I PLAY?

Playing Your Character. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 130

Its Only a GameAnd Thats a Pretty Good Thing. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 142

Quests, Levels, and Missions: Dissecting Your Game . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 154

The Game Concept Document. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 170

Software for Game Writing . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 183

Spel Time. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 191

The Rise of the Indies. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 199

The Future Is Story. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 209

Glossary of Select Terms from Video Game

Our Grateful Acknowledgements

quarter in the arcade machine. We hope we inspire you to write, pro-

to all of my students and knuckleheads, past and present, for teach-

my goddaughter Kristen Ericksen, who was playing Gran Turismo using

Fortunately, we did not have to wait too long.

industry I work in is a BILLION dollar businessthey are amazed. I

to measure, analyze, and make data-driven decisions, not just ones

eclipse the 125-year-old motion picture industry.

that felt right.

Yeah. That big.

I also got my first look into game development.

system (just a re-branded version of the venerable Atari 2600) to

working on Halo2, a follow-up to their massively successful game Halo

Football on Intellivisionwhich was really nothing more than a series of

noticed something: The lines between technical and creative were

dots on a screen. We had to IMAGINE that they were QBs, linebackers,

and our imaginations.

I attended the Newhouse School of Communications at Syracuse

University to study television, radio, and film production. There, I

disciplines were working closely together to create that magical world I

learned about traditional story development and using technology to

dreamt of years before while at Syracuse.

pace and with deliberately chosen camera angles and movements. In

technical fields were on a crash course in gaming.

non-linear interactive storytelling is one of the many innovations that

video games have created.

based on their own in-game decisions. Very powerful stuff.

genre, plot, character development, and much, much more. In my years

ditional storytelling. If youve written a screenplaythis book is for you.

of working in the industry this is the closest thing to a bible of creative

ing of the multi-billion-dollar industry that is now a massive cultural

and economic forcethis book is for you.

than movies. When I played Red Dead Redemptionan incredibly popu-

importance and power of video game technology.)

the end I cried.

All the best,

main character, John Marston, so well because I was controlling him.

In many ways, I became John Marston. Especially after the countless

game, you probably had the same experience.)