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Proofreading Marks Annotated Bibliography Round-up Peer Review Summary

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The Frenchmen laughed following our newly hired Mechanics explanation. The night before, on our drive into paris, we had filled up the candy apple red, rented Camaro with gazelle. And, now, in the cool morning air, the car wouldnt start because, intranslation, gazelle means diesel.. Frustrated that our weekend in Paris would be cut to one after noon, I asked our blue Dickie-clothed, chuckling mechanic for a bathroom. He pointed one finger grubby towards a red door and said in a thick French accent, Natalie will show you

Annotated Bib Round-up


Whats the purpose of constructing an annotated bibliography? To find, critique, and evaluate plausible sources for YOUR end of semester research project 1 paragraph What is it about? 1 paragraph Is it a good source? EXPLAIN 1 paragraph Can you use in in YOUR research? EXPLAIN DO THIS FOR EACH SOURCE

Annotated Bib Round-up


Whats the rule of thumb for paragraph length in academic writing? 7-10 sentences These kinds of sentences lack specificity: This article is useful. This article is reliable...
Because it was published????? smh

Evaluating Sources

Activity
Is the source reliable or unreliable?

Why?

And this?????

There is an entire PowerPoint Presentation that gives you guiding questions to help determine whether or not a source is reliable or credible.

The tools have been given to you; you have to decide to use them.

Annotated Bib Round-up


Grammar issues... Verb tense shifts Which tense should be used to write about literature including studies? PRESENT NOT PAST

Also awful... The source uses a variety of people to show what happiness is. That is how people are. NEVER end a sentence with a Be verb or a preposition

Annotated Bib Round-up


Citation issues... Essays in the Behrens text... WRONG Behrens, Lawrence and Leonard J. Rosen. Chapter 12/The Pursuit of Happiness. Writing and Reading across the Curriculum. Boston, MA.: Pearson, 2013. 408-10. Print.

Just a singular essay On OWL A work in an anthology, reference, or collection https://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/747/06/

Annotated Bib Round-up


Good job... General formatting Citations for the most part Mulligans Wednesday Will submit revision AND original

Peer Review Summary


On peer review sheet, write Reviewed by: (insert your name) Summary author: (peers name) Exchange essays. Read the essay and complete the peer review sheet. Give both to author (your peer).

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Summary final copy due Monday 2/24

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