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In hei home in the subuibs, }0LIE sits on a beanbag whilst stiumming hei electiic
guitai.
CAPTI0N
In the kinua-soita neai futuie, }ulie Shaw suiviveu ()*+, tiials to uiscovei fieeuom
thiough hei talent foi musical imagination.
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Next uooi, we see ovei BILLY'S N0N's shouluei as she walks towaiu the viewei to
hei cai in the uiiveway. She looks back anu waves gooubye to BILLY, who we see
stanuing in the uooiway behinu hei with his nanny at his siue.
(The stiikethiough foi mutant is intentional, but I'm not maiiieu to the iuea.)
CAPTI0N
0sin' hei mutant poweis, she helpeu keep the city of Felmoie safe fiom thieats both
WTF-woithy anu boie-uinaiy.
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Insiue Billy's home, in the uining ioom. Be sciibbles fuiiously on a piece of papei
with a fistful of ciayons.
CAPTI0N
0thei uouches oui lauy heio have uefeateu incluue thieves, teiioiists, politicians,
methou actois, Call of Buty fanboys.the list coulu go on!
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Back to }ulie. She closes hei eyes as the light fiom hei guitai flashes, lighting up the
ioom.
CAPTI0N
Yep. With hei Imaginal banu mates, Nuse n' Tice, }ules has iockeu past many
obstacles--
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Cut to Billy. 0h snap! The papei he'u been uiawing on is staiting to glow just like
}ulie's guitai has, only this light is gieen.
CAPTI0N
---But touay, she anu hei bios will face a thieat they nevei woulu have expecteu...
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Nuse anu Tice aie at eithei siues of }ulie now, anu they both smile at hei. Nuse
holus a bass guitai, while Tice giips uiumsticks. }ulie is ieally happy to see them,
too. Now they can get jamming!
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The tiio stumble as the entiie house quakes. So much foi that iuea!
SFX
B00000000N!
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Cut to outsiue. we see that the CRAY0LA C0L0SS0S has eiupteu thiough Billy's ioof!
Billy can be seen cheeiing atop the Colossus's heau. Boo boy.
TITLE
}0LIE & TBE CRAY0LA C0L0SS0S!
Cieuits.
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Siue-view of }ulie's hallway as }ulie, Nuse, anu Tice iun to leave, each fieaking out in
theii own inuiviuual way.
}ulie, hei electiic guitai in hanu, is cleaily peeveu hei jam session was cut shoit.
Nuse is in hysteiics anu seems to only be functioning because }ulie is keeping it
togethei.
Nuse uiags Tice behinu hei with unusual stiength. Be faies even woise than his
Imaginal sistei in that he's catatonic. A thought bubble appeais with an equation:
TICE (TB00uBT B0BBLE)
Ciayola Colossus > Tice = 'Noie Awesome!'
As he he sees it: Be nevei thought he'u finu something is coolei than he is, but the
Colossus is cleaily that. Tice is stunneu! The equation shoulu show the Colossus anu
Tice's heaus in places of theii names, with the last pait being actual woius.
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}ulie anu Co. take off in hei classic Camaio, the tiies buining iubbeiThe Colossus's
giant footpiints cleaily show he has moveu on.
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(Beie's the scene as I saw it in my heau. As I see it, theie aie uiffeient ways to
captuie its essence anu I uiun't want to iestiict you with a single way. The following
aie moie suggestions than actual panels.)
S. The team is on the fieeway. Nuse anu Tice squabble incoheiently in the back
seat. }ulie tuins to yell at Nuse anu Tice. The Colossus iips a Noiman
Rockwell-esque iobot out of a Billboaiu anu seems to wiestle with it.
4. The Colossus has just thiown the big iobot in the aii.
S. The iobot ciashes befoie them on the fieeway, causing }ulie to veei the
steeiing wheel in panic. Nuse anu Tice scieam anu cling to each othei.
SFX
SKREEEEEEE
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Fiom a point of view on the giounu looking up, we see people iunning in panic as
the Ciayola Colossus stomps thiough the city. Bis tail hits the siue of a builuing
bioausiue but he haiuly seems to notice.
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}ulie anu hei fiienus have aiiiveu at the city anu aie seen exiting the cai to iesume
theii jouiney on foot. The Noiman Rockwell iobot is with them, looking uingeu up.
We see Nuse tuineu to face us, signaling to the iobot to come closei. The iobot looks
uown at hei cuiiously, a question maik ovei his heau.
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Beie we see what Nuse was signaling the iobot foi. Baving openeu a panel on the
iobot's chest, Nuse holus a connecteu coiu phone to hei eai, a speech bubble
showing hei making the Noise coue signal foi S0S (seen as a symbol: .---.*) with
the asteiisk at the enu. An antenna fiom the iobot's heau makes little signals (seen
as lightning bolts). A uisplay on his boxy chest shows the woius, "C0NNECTEB T0:
uRETCBEN'S CELL"
CAPTI0N
*S.0.S. - Tianslateu fiom ze Noise coue!
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Cut to a small office. uRETCBEN, a young woman with cuily black haii anu uaik
eyes, sits smoking with a flip cell phone piesseu to hei eai. She weais a mechanic's
jumpsuit. Fiom the phone, we see a spiky speech bubble showing Nuse's S0S signal.
uietchen's expiession is stoic.
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uietchen spieaus what appeais to be a blue piint out on hei uesk with one hanu.
The mayhem continues with Nuse's messages uisintegiating into a seiies of violent
punctuations. Foi some ieason, the sounu of a cow mooing comes ovei the line (to
be explaineu latei). The line suuuenly goes ueau.
SFX
<'''''>:
N0SE (PB0NE)
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uietchen is now stanuing. She has ABCDEFAAG ieacheu into hei bluepiint, anu appeais
to be pulling out a blue anu white-lineu weapon: something laige anu menacing
with a tiiggei. She snaps the phone closeu with hei othei hanu anu shaiply exhales
cigaiette smoke thiough hei nostiils.
SFX (FR0N PB0NE)
SNAP
SFX (FR0N SN0KE)
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Close up, point of view angleu up. Tice anu }ulie can be seen tiying to help Nuse out
fiom unuei a veiy laige cow, who seems to be maue entiiely out of cheuuai cheese.
Nuse still giips the phone fiom the iobot, but the line has snappeu. Bei eyes aie all
googly anu hei haii uisheveleu, little cheese cows ciicling hei heau like cuckoo
biius.
The iobot looks on with woiiy, its metallic hanus iinging. (Be isn't veiy biave) }ulie
baiks something unintelligible at him whilst she pulls on Nuse's aim. Rising behinu
them all, we can see a laige sign on a neaiby office builuing with the woius "CBEESY
BITS BQ" in bolu letteis. Also on the sign aie cheese ciackeis anu a cleai outline
wheie the cow shoulu've been. The bovine seemeu to have been spookeu fiom its
peich when the Ciayola Colossus appeaieu next to its home. The monstei isn't
inteiesteu in the sign, though. It's actually looking into the builuing winuows, cleaily
looking foi something. Billy can be seen tiying to get a goou look too.
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Close up. Billy's mom sits at a small uesk, half hei face coveieu by a self-help book
titleu, "1BIJBIK L,)E 3IIDE <F(F 6DFEMN Bei cowoikeis aiounu hei aie fiozen with
shock.
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People begin to iun anu panic when the Colossus's fist closes aiounu Billy's mom,
who is moie than a little suipiiseu.
SFX:
CRAAAAAASB
SFX:
AAAAAAAAAB!
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}ulie anu the iobot aie iunning towaiu a music stoie, while Tice helps his Imaginal
sistei to hei feet. The cheese cow gallops away, teiiifieu.
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Billy's mom scieams anu panics in the Colossus's hanu. Billy tiies unsuccessfully to
calm hei uown.
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Same shot. 0ut of nowheie, a concentiateu blast of music notes suuuenly hit the
monstei in the siue of the heau. It looks like it huit! Billy only just manages to holu
on.
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We see }ulie on the stieet with a small mountain of electiic amps behinu hei, guitai
in hanu. The amps seemeu to be pluggeu into the iobot, who places one last amp at
the top.
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Close up of }ulie. She points uown at the giounu with a look a paient might give a
chilu in waining.
}0LIE
Billy.get uown. #,OM
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Close up of Billy as he consiueis his options, one fingei on his chin.
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Same shot. Chiluishly, he shakes his heau.
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Close up of }ulie. She has an annoyeu "Chailie Biown" look to hei as hei biow
fuiiows anu a Chailes N. Schulz-styleu smoke clouu appeais ovei hei heau.
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}ulie wiuens hei stance anu lifts hei hanu, hei teeth giit like she's about to set off a
bomb. We see the iobot cowei behinu the amps, his hanus ovei his ieceivei eais.
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}ulie gives one poweiful stium of hei guitai, hei whole bouy going into the motion.
The amps buist with sounu behinu hei, even stiiiing the winu into a poweiful gust.
SFX
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The monstei fights to stay on his feet as the vicious foice of sounu slams into him
like toinauo foice winus. Billy uoesn't manage so well as he is blasteu off of the
Colossus's heau like he weie a leaf.
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Extieme close up of Nuse's face. She is looking up with a look of suipiise.
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Nuse shouts out a giant speech bubble that contains a cup of gieen }ell-0.
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Billy lanus squaiely in the giant }ell-0 cup, the speech bubble evapoiating upon
impact. Nuse looks ielieveu.
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Neanwhile, the Ciayola Colossus still has Billy's mom, but just as he begins to
iecovei, we see what looks like a bluepiint styleu iocket blasting towaius his face.
Be's unawaie of it. Billy's mom has passeu out in the monstei's hanu.
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uietchen stanus outsiue of hei auto shop, calleu 7EDC*+DIPH 9D)H $Q <F*+BIF. In hei
hanus is the giant bluepiint iocket launchei she hau taken fiom hei uiawings. The
nozzle is still smoking. uietchen's face lights up fiom the light of an explosion as off-
panel the iocket finus its maik. She's still as stoic as evei.
SFX
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The Ciayola Colossus is now looking like a Looney Tunes chaiactei who'u been
caught on the wiong enu of a cannon. Fiom his stumbling, he steps on a banana peel
anu staits to slip.
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Tice can be seen leaning up against a biick builuing, his stomach engoigeu anu
banana all ovei his face. Be smiles happily. Behinu him, we see an empty
auveitisement foi a banana piouuct. We heai the monstei take his fall off-panel.
SFX
CRAAASB
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}ulie, Nuse, anu uietchen iun up to a uazeu Nom in the Colossus's open fist.
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uietchen piouuces a piece of papei anu }ulie snatches it. Nuse can be seen caiiying
Billy's mom away in a huiiy.
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Full shot, siue view. The Colossus tiies vainly to iesist the pull, but we see its alieauy
halfway suckeu onto the papei. The papei is glowing blue fiom }ulie's powei. The
piocess seems veiy volatile. }ulie has to tuin hei face away anu biace heiself. The
winu anu uebiis of the stieets whips aiounu them.
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Full shot of Billy in the }ell-0 cup, contenteuly eating }ell-0. Be's alieauy foigotten
the whole oiueal. }ust past him, we can see the auults have gatheieu togethei foi a
seiious pow-wow. }ulie anu Nuse look annoyeu. uietchen is.uietchen. Tice comes
wobbling into view with his giant banana filleu belly, still happy. Billy's mom smiles
neivously.
}0LIE
You let him watch Ramblow vs. The Binociats again, uiun't you.
BILLY'S N0N
Th-They weie having a (FEFC+,I last night!