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Draft 1 - Date
Shot Music & Sound
Shot No. Location Type Angle Movement Length Dialogue Graphics Effects Description of Action Actors Equipment
Credits: produced by
Erisa Ghodratzadeh and
Hannah Dixon, written by
Noel Clarke, directed by black screen with credits
1 N/a n/a n/a n/a 8 seconds n/a Adam Deacon n/a appearing n/a iMac.

main girl running really fast Camera (no tripod

Woman (not Charlene- the necessary at this point
Long shot/ Slight down a suburban back
A road in seen): Own soundtrack, made main because we're aiming
1a point of high Hand held 3 secs no graphics yet street, but audience are
Hainault "SOMEBODY on the iMacs. character. to create a
view shot angle unaware of who or what
GET THAT HER!" (Erisa) shakey/unstable
she is running from
effect.)

main girl running really fast Camera (no tripod

Charlene- the necessary at this point
Long shot- Slight Credits on top of the down a suburban back
A road in Soundtrack continues main because we're aiming
1b from the high Hand held 3 secs N/A action- Erisa street, but audience are
Hainault through character. to create a
side. angle Ghodratzadeh unaware of who or what
(Erisa) shakey/unstable
she is running from
effect.)
Charlene- the
Stopped running and thinks
A road in Straight Soundtrack continues main
2 Mid shot Tilt down 3 secs N/A n/a she is now safe, cooling
Hainault on through character.
down with hands on knees.
(Erisa) Camera and tripod.

soundtrack continues Black screen with a title

n/a n/a n/a n/a 3 secs n/a Title; Monday morning… n/a
through showing the day
iMac.
Tasha, you in
Iltown, I think I Charlene out in the town Charlene- the
Straight can see you Soundtrack continues centre, on the phone to her
main
Town centre Long shot n/a 5 secs n/a
on yanoe, come through friend telling her to comecharacter. Camera and tripod.
outside chicken over and have a chat. (Erisa) Prop; bottle of KA & a
shop init' box of chicken.
Friend coming out of Ashley, Camera and tripod.
Long Straight just cross the Soundtrack continues
Town centre n/a 5 secs n/a macdonalds looking around Charlene's Props; two mobile
shots on road woman' through
for Charlene. friend. phones.
hi, what you
doing here'
straight 'nothing girl,have Credits on top of the The two characters having Charlene and
Town centre two shot n/a 5 secs Soundtrack pauses
on you seen Jamal action- Hannah Dixon a casual conversation. Ashley
about?' 'nah, he's
your man!' camera and tripod.
jamal, where you
Charlene left waiting for her
Outside Ilford straight at!?' PAUSE
close up n/a 3 secs n/a Soundtrack resumes unreliable boyfriend, alone Charlene
station on 'hurry up I'm camera and tripod.
as per usual.
there' Props; mobile phone.
 He walks out of the
slight Credits on top of the
Outside Ilford Soundtrack continues station,comes up behind his Charlene &
long shot low n/a 3 secs guess who' action- Riccardo
station through girlfriend and hugs her from Jamal.
angle Mckenzie.
the back camera and tripod.
just walked into the house,
boyfriend goes upstairs
Inside a straight you go up, I'll just Soundtrack continues quickly, Charlene makes Charlene &
long shot n/a 5 secs n/a
house on wait down here' through herself at home Jamal. Camera and tripod.
downstairs,as somethings Prop; small bag of
caught her eye drugs

A hand sneakily snatching

Inside a straight Soundtrack continues
close up n/a 2 secs n/a n/a the bag of drugs, mystery n/a
house on through
as to who it is.
camera
Soundtrack continues
through voiceover of
Charlene sitting alone on
her thoughts 'how can I
inside a high the sofa, many thoughts
long shot n/a 2 secs n/a n/a steal from my own Charlene.
house angle running through her head
boyfriend, keep it? Put Camera and tripod.
about her previous actions.
it back? Oh shit he's Prop; something she
coming down' steals from Jamal

Jamal has joined her back

whats wrong with downstairs, they are sitting
Inside a straight Soundtrack continues Charlene &
two shot n/a 4 secs you, you been n/a on the sofa together at last,
house on through Jamal.
quiet all day man' but Charlene doesn't seem
too happy.
Camera and tripod.

the deadline to FLASHBACK-Charlene is at

College apply for the an interview at Redbridge
Straight Credits on top of the Soundtrack continues Teacher and Camera and tripod.
interview Mid shot n/a 3 secs beauty course is college regarding her
on action- Melissa Severn through. Charlene. Props; table and
room next week application for the course
Tuesday' that she is so interested in chairs. (classroom
atmosphere)

FLASHBACK-Charlene is at
College So, does the an interview at Redbridge
Straight soundtrack continues Teacher and Camera and tripod.
interview Mid shot n/a 3 secs course require a n/a college regarding her
on through Charlene. Props; table and
room deposit' application for the course
that she is so interested in chairs. (classroom
atmosphere)

FLASHBACK- The teacher

telling Charlene the cost of
College
low the course, it is said in slow Teacher and
interview close up n/a 5 secs £200' n/a soundtrack paues Camera and tripod.
angle motion and echos, Charlene.
room Props; table and
connoting it playing on
Charlene's mind. chairs. (classroom
atmosphere)
Just resumed from the
flashback, back into the
Inside a Straight what were you Charlene and
mid shot n/a 3 secs n/a Soundtrack resumes house, Charlene and Jamal
house on saying, sorry?' Jamal.
are just sitting together
quietly. Camera and tripod.
 Still in the house, Jamal is
Inside a Straight do you want my making sure that Charlene
close up n/a 3 secs n/a soundtrack continues Jamal
house on help or not!?' knows exactly what it is that
she wants. camera and tripod
Someone outside the
house, banging hard on the
Outside the low soundtrack continues
longshot n/a 3 secs Credit- Matthew Ongar. door, either Charlene or Matthew
house angle throughout
Jamal is in some serious
trouble. camera and tripod

Charlene's reaction to the

Inside a high I need to get out soundtrack continues loud banging on the door,
close up n/a 3 secs n/a Charlene
house angle of here' throughout shes scared and thinks
someone is out to get her.
camera and tripod
Jamal sitting next to
Charlene, preparing to
Inside a high soundtrack continues
close up pan left 4 secs ima handle this' n/a handle who ever it is Jamal
house angle throughout
outside, protecting his
girlfriend. camera and tripod.
The person who was
knocking on the door is now
Outside the high soundtrack continues
long shot n/a 3 secs n/a n/a unconscious laying flat on Matthew
house angle throughout
the ground outside the
house. camera and tripod.

Jamal putting a knife back

Outside the Straight soundtrack continues
mid shot n/a 4 secs n/a n/a inside his jacket pocket, Jamal
house on throughout
looking proud of his actions.
camea and tripod

Charlene just woken up in

Straight soundtrack continues
Bedroom mid shot n/a 3 secs n/a n/a bed alone, looking around Charlene
on throughout camera and tripod.
the room, looking confused.
Props; bed.
Charlene in bed, hugging a
Straight I wish you were soundtrack continues teddy that says 'special
Bedroom long shot n/a 4 secs n/a Charlene
on still here throughout daughter' asd expression
across her face. camea and tripod

Charlene walking on her

Street in straight soundtrack continues own, on her way to the
long shot n/a 4 secs n/a Charlene
Goodmayes on throughout college, aduience unaware
were exactly she is going.
camera and tripod

Charlene walking up to the

soundtrack continues college, the college infront,
Street in straight
long shot n/a 3 secs n/a n/a throughout. Deep shes near the gates and Charlene
Goodmayes on
breath takes one last deep breath
before entering.
camea and tripod
College
Straight soundtrack continues Money placed down on the
interview close up n/a 4 secs its all there n/a n/a camera and tripod.
on throughout table in the college.
room Props; money (notes)
 Teacher holds up the
College
Straight except there's a soundtrack continues money that charlene put
interview mid shot n/a 4 secs n/a Melissa
on slight problem throughout down, it isnt real money it's camera and tripod.
room
monopoly money. Props; fake money
College Charlene runs out of room,
Straight soundtrack continues
interview long shot n/a 4 secs n/a n/a leaving her money on the Charlene camera and tripod.
on throughout
room table. Props; fake money

soundtrack continuess Text saying the name of the

N/a n/a n/a n/a 4 secs Dead end n/a but stops when the text film appears on a black n/a
dissapears. screen
iMac.