Coruption and Indonesian Culture
Coruption and Indonesian Culture
Coruption and Indonesian Culture
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2011
CORUPTION AND
INDONESIAN CULTURE
KORUPSI DAN BUDAYA INDONESIA
Nama Kelompok :
Ika Septianingsih
Mawartika Ningrum
Ratri Anggraini
Wahyu Kristiani
Language Features :
Emotive words (e.g. worried, alarmed etc)
Words that qualify statements (e.g. usual, Probably etc)
Words that link arguments (e.g. firstly, However, therefore etc)
Analytical Exposition
To persuade the reader or listener that something is the case. (Untuk meyakinkan
dan mempengaruhi pembaca atau pendengar bahwa ada masalah yang perlu
mendapat perhatian)
General nouns, misalnya car, pollution, leaded petrol car, dsb.· Abstract nouns,
misalnya policy, government, dsb.· Technical verbs, misalnya species of animals,
dsb.· Relating verbs, misalnya It is important, dsb.· Action verbs, misalnya She must
save, dsb.· Thinking verbs, misalnya Many people believe, dsb· Modal verbs,
misalnya we must preserve, dsb.
* Kalimat pasif
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Thesis { I personally think that English is the world’s most important language. Why
do I say that?
Argument 2 { Secondly, English is also the key which opens doors to scientific and
technical knowledge, which is needed for the economic and political development of
many countries in the world.
Conclusion { From the fact above, it is obvious that everybody needs to learn
English to greet the global era.
Notes:
SAMPLE TEXT
Corruption has happened for many years and today it becomes a bad culture in
Indonesia for three reasons
Most adult Indonesian or foreigners have known and admitted that corruptions
happen in many places. The daily newspapers, news programs on TV and radio
have reported corruptions are done everywhere, almost in all departments or public
services of this country. Corruptions happen in health, education departments and
banks. When we manage to get some documents in public service offices, we
usually need much money to pay. Manipulations happen everywhere.
The actions to eliminate corruption are weak. The ever stronger culture seems
not to come to an end when the responsible institutions who have to reinforce the
justice today commit corruption. This is the worst. Corruptions happen in police
department, courts where judges, public prosecutors, lawyers make deals to do
corruption. All of us also heard in the end of 2004, Probosutejo reported that he had
bribed the Supreme Court, or called Mahkamah Agung which becomes the highest
level where the justice can be obtained.
Perhaps you have to try to come to the local courts and see what happen there.
You will see practices of bribery and other kinds of corruption. Therefore, we can say
that corruptions becomes our culture. Do you like it?
The citizens have no goodwill to fight against the corruption. They create the
situations in which people have opportunities to do corruptions. The citizens like to
break the rules because they are not disciplined. For example, in the street when
they drive a car or ride motorcycle, they do not have the driving license or necessary
documents. Then, they are caught by the local policemen. To avoid more difficulties,
they like to bribe the officer. The officer let them go then. In other words, the citizens
and officers are the same, doing corruption together. If only the people were critical,
disciplined, and obey the rules, and willing to report any wrong behaviors, this
country will not be number one corrupting country in the world.
Conclusion Based on the reasons, we can conclude that corruption is
becoming a bad culture in Indonesia if it is not ended soon by all of us. It seems that
there must be more severe penalty for the Corruptors. Do we still care about the
future of this country?
D. Discussion
D. No where
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