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February 6, 2011 [CORUPTION AND INDONESIAN CULTURE]

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2011

CORUPTION AND
INDONESIAN CULTURE
KORUPSI DAN BUDAYA INDONESIA

Nama Kelompok :
Ika Septianingsih
Mawartika Ningrum
Ratri Anggraini
Wahyu Kristiani

SMAN 16 SEMARANG KELAS XII IPA


2/6/2011
ANALYTICAL EXPOSITION

Purpose : to persuade by presenting arguments


to analyze or explain ‘how’ and ‘why’
Text Organization :
A thesis
Arguments
Reiteration or Conclusion

Language Features :
Emotive words (e.g. worried, alarmed etc)
Words that qualify statements (e.g. usual, Probably etc)
Words that link arguments (e.g. firstly, However, therefore etc)

An analytical exposition is a type of spoken or written text that is intended to


persuade the listeners or readers that something is the case. To make the
persuasion stronger, the speaker or writer gives some arguments as the
fundamental reasons why something is the case. This type of text can be found in
scientific books, journals, magazines, newspaper articles, academic speech or
lectures, research report etc. Analytical expositions are popular among science,
academic community and educated people. The generic structure of analytical
exposition usually has three components:

(1) Thesis, (2) Arguments and (3) Reiteration or conclusion.

A.Generic Structure of Analytical Exposition


1. Thesis : Introduces the topic and shows speaker or writer’s position;
Outlines of the arguments are presented.
2. Arguments : It consists about Point and Elaboration
Point, states the main argument
Elaboration, develops and supports each point of argument
3. Conclusion : Reiteration (restatement), restates speaker or writer’s position

B. Generic Features of Analytical Exposition

1. An analytical exposition focuses on generic human and non human


participants.
2. It uses mental processes. It is used to state what the writer or speaker thinks
or feels about something. For example: realize, feel etc.
3. It uses emotive and evaluative words
4. It often needs material processes. It is used to state what happens, e.g.
….has polluted… etc.
5. It usually uses Simple Present Tense and Present Perfect Tense.
6. Enumeration is sometimes necessary to show the list of given arguments:
Firstly, secondly …, Finally, etc.

Analytical Exposition

Social Function (Tujuan / Fungsi Sosial)

To persuade the reader or listener that something is the case. (Untuk meyakinkan
dan mempengaruhi pembaca atau pendengar bahwa ada masalah yang perlu
mendapat perhatian)

Generic Structure (Struktur)

a. Thesis Position: Introduces topics and indicates writer’s position.


(Memberitahukan topic dan menunjukkan pendapat penulis).

b. Arguments Points : Menjelaskan argument dan elaborasi (dijelaskan secara


mendetail

c. Reiteration : Restates writer position : Menjelaskan kembali posisi penulis atau


penguatan kembali posisi penulis

Significant Lexicogrammatical Features (Ciri – ciri yang menonjol)

General nouns, misalnya car, pollution, leaded petrol car, dsb.· Abstract nouns,
misalnya policy, government, dsb.· Technical verbs, misalnya species of animals,
dsb.· Relating verbs, misalnya It is important, dsb.· Action verbs, misalnya She must
save, dsb.· Thinking verbs, misalnya Many people believe, dsb· Modal verbs,
misalnya we must preserve, dsb.  

· Modal adverbs, misalnya certainly, we, dsb.

· Connectives, misalnya firstly, secondly,dsb.

· Bahasa evaluatif, misalnya important, valuable, trustworthy, dsb.

* Kalimat pasif
Read the following text of Analytical Exposition! The Importance of English

Thesis { I personally think that English is the world’s most important language. Why
do I say that?

Argument 1 { Firstly, English is an international language. It is spoken by many


people all around the world, either as a first or second language.

Argument 2 { Secondly, English is also the key which opens doors to scientific and
technical knowledge, which is needed for the economic and political development of
many countries in the world.

Argument 3 { Thirdly, English is a top requirement of those seeking jobs. Applicants


who master either active or passive English are more favorable than those who do
not.

Conclusion { From the fact above, it is obvious that everybody needs to learn
English to greet the global era.

Notes:

1. Enumerations such as Firstly, secondly, thirdly etc are sometimes given to


show the list of given arguments
2. Present Tense: I think, English is international language, Everybody needs to
learn English etc.

SAMPLE TEXT

Corruption and Indonesian Culture

Corruption has happened for many years and today it becomes a bad culture in
Indonesia for three reasons
Most adult Indonesian or foreigners have known and admitted that corruptions
happen in many places. The daily newspapers, news programs on TV and radio
have reported corruptions are done everywhere, almost in all departments or public
services of this country. Corruptions happen in health, education departments and
banks. When we manage to get some documents in public service offices, we
usually need much money to pay. Manipulations happen everywhere.
The actions to eliminate corruption are weak. The ever stronger culture seems
not to come to an end when the responsible institutions who have to reinforce the
justice today commit corruption. This is the worst. Corruptions happen in police
department, courts where judges, public prosecutors, lawyers make deals to do
corruption. All of us also heard in the end of 2004, Probosutejo reported that he had
bribed the Supreme Court, or called Mahkamah Agung which becomes the highest
level where the justice can be obtained.
Perhaps you have to try to come to the local courts and see what happen there.
You will see practices of bribery and other kinds of corruption. Therefore, we can say
that corruptions becomes our culture. Do you like it?
The citizens have no goodwill to fight against the corruption. They create the
situations in which people have opportunities to do corruptions. The citizens like to
break the rules because they are not disciplined. For example, in the street when
they drive a car or ride motorcycle, they do not have the driving license or necessary
documents. Then, they are caught by the local policemen. To avoid more difficulties,
they like to bribe the officer. The officer let them go then. In other words, the citizens
and officers are the same, doing corruption together. If only the people were critical,
disciplined, and obey the rules, and willing to report any wrong behaviors, this
country will not be number one corrupting country in the world.
Conclusion Based on the reasons, we can conclude that corruption is
becoming a bad culture in Indonesia if it is not ended soon by all of us. It seems that
there must be more severe penalty for the Corruptors. Do we still care about the
future of this country?

Korupsi dan Budaya Indonesia

Korupsi telah terjadi selama bertahun-tahun dan sekarang menjadi budaya


buruk di Indonesia karena tiga alasan.
Kebanyakan orang dewasa atau orang asing Bahasa Indonesia telah
mengenal dan mengakui bahwa korupsi terjadi di banyak tempat. Surat kabar
harian, program berita di TV dan radio telah melaporkan korupsi yang dilakukan di
mana-mana, hampir di semua departemen atau layanan publik negeri ini. Korupsi
terjadi di bidang kesehatan, pendidikan departemen dan bank. Ketika kami berhasil
mendapatkan beberapa dokumen di kantor-kantor pelayanan publik, kita biasanya
membutuhkan banyak uang untuk membayar. Manipulasi terjadi di mana-mana.
Tindakan untuk menghilangkan korupsi yang lemah. Budaya yang pernah kuat
tampaknya tidak berakhir ketika lembaga-lembaga yang bertanggung jawab yang
harus memperkuat keadilan hari ini melakukan korupsi. Ini adalah yang terburuk.
Korupsi terjadi di kepolisian, pengadilan di mana hakim, jaksa penuntut umum,
pengacara membuat kesepakatan untuk melakukan korupsi. Semua dari kita juga
mendengar di akhir tahun 2004, Probosutejo melaporkan bahwa dia telah menyuap
Mahkamah Agung, atau disebut Mahkamah Agung yang menjadi tingkat tertinggi di
mana keadilan dapat diperoleh.
Mungkin Anda harus mencoba untuk datang ke pengadilan lokal dan melihat
apa yang terjadi di sana. Anda akan melihat praktek-praktek penyuapan dan korupsi
jenis lain. Oleh karena itu, kita dapat mengatakan bahwa korupsi menjadi budaya
kita. Apakah Anda suka?
Warga tidak mempunyai niat baik untuk memerangi korupsi. Mereka
menciptakan situasi di mana orang-orang memiliki kesempatan untuk melakukan
korupsi. Warga suka melanggar aturan karena mereka tidak disiplin. Sebagai
contoh, di jalan ketika mereka mengendarai mobil atau naik motor, mereka tidak
memiliki surat ijin mengemudi atau dokumen yang diperlukan. Kemudian, mereka
ditangkap oleh polisi setempat. Untuk menghindari lebih banyak kesulitan, mereka
suka untuk menyuap petugas. Petugas membiarkan mereka pergi kemudian.
Dengan kata lain, warga dan pegawai yang sama, melakukan korupsi bersama-
sama. Jika hanya orang-orang kritis, disiplin, dan mematuhi aturan, dan bersedia
untuk melaporkan perilaku yang salah, negara ini tidak akan menjadi nomor satu
negara korup di dunia.
Kesimpulan Berdasarkan alasan-alasan, kita dapat menyimpulkan bahwa
korupsi menjadi budaya buruk di Indonesia jika tidak segera diakhiri oleh kita semua.
Tampaknya harus ada hukuman yang lebih berat bagi koruptor. Apakah kita masih
peduli tentang masa depan negara ini?
Question:

1. What is the type of the text

D. Discussion

2. What is the purpose of the text

3. How to erase the corruption

D. Reported the subject to the president

4. Why the coruption become our culture

D. because it have been done a long


time ago

5. corruptions are done everywhere except…

D. No where
D. To tell an in

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