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The student reflects on feedback from a writing assignment on the novel "The Kite Runner". The student felt their thesis and topic sentences improved but could focus on making the thesis more clear. Through using the "loop cycle" method of drafting, the student was able to incorporate evidence and quotes effectively to support claims. The student rated themselves as average on most elements of paragraph structure. Their goal is to minimize mistakes and take more time drafting future assignments to continue improving writing skills.

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Writing Reflection For Paper 2

The student reflects on feedback from a writing assignment on the novel "The Kite Runner". The student felt their thesis and topic sentences improved but could focus on making the thesis more clear. Through using the "loop cycle" method of drafting, the student was able to incorporate evidence and quotes effectively to support claims. The student rated themselves as average on most elements of paragraph structure. Their goal is to minimize mistakes and take more time drafting future assignments to continue improving writing skills.

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WRITING REFLECTION # ____2______

Mrs. Cracchiolo (2014-2015)


PIECE OF WRITING _____The Kite Runner ________________________________________
In class writing OR out of class writing
1. Looking at the feedback, what/where do you think you did particularly well?
I think I did an overall okay job. My thesis was an improvement from the first paper. I also
could identify each topic sentence very clearly. My quotes stayed strong and clear like
from the first paper so I didnt disprove I only improved.

2. Looking at the feedback, what do you think was the area you need the most
improvement in and why? (Be Specific)
I think I could focus on a very clear thesis statement. I also know that I have to work on
not using 2nd person.

3. Did the loop cycle work for you? Why or why not?
The loop cycle also works for me. I especially honed in on the loop cycle on this
paper thats how I got the results that I wanted.

4. Body paragraph construction is the most important part of your paper since this is the
area that uses evidence to back up your claims. Looking at your paper and feedback,
rate yourself overall on the following elements that correspond to the loop structure.
STRONG
AVERAGE
WEAK
MISSING
Topic Sentences

___X___

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Suppoting Details (SD)
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Explanations (EXP)
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Closings (CLOS)
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Transitions
Incorporating Quotes
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___X___
___X___
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___X_
___X___

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___X____

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Set up quotes

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___X____

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Used quote and documenting properly____X__

_______

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Explain relevance

___X___

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______X_

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Concluding sentences
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OVERALL RATING
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_____X_

5. The big question: based on your comments, checklist where you rated yourself on body
paragraph structure, and overall score, what NEW GOAL do you have for your next
writing assignment? In other words, what skills will you try to focus on in the future and
why?
GOAL:
The new goal is to minimize my mistakes as possible. Also a new goal is to take the paper at
a good pace. This paper was split upon days which is why I did better this time than my
previous paper.

WHY:
I personally this this is a silly question. A person should I was want to do better than a
previous time. It makes life easier and it shows a sign of accomplishment.

6. Any other feedback youd like to share??


I think this project is good I like doing things like this. I also like how much time we had to
complete the project.

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