Ed315 First Observed Feedback
Ed315 First Observed Feedback
Ed315 First Observed Feedback
SUPERVISORs Feedback
OF ED 315 Field Student
Candidate Cecilia Marrero
Supervisor: D. Habanek
Date: 3.16.15
Number of Students: 15
Grade: 7/8
2nd Observation __
Subject(s): English
Evidence (Candidate)
You planned a lesson that matched Common Core Standards for literacy.
Your objectives should be: Explain details that match the elements of a
story. Identify the theme of a story. Construct a graphic organizer.
Objectives should be more generalizable that yours are.
Your planning information shows detailed thinking about students and their
needs.
You added details about your lesson segments for the 40 minute time
period.
You prepared materials and a model of the thinking you wanted students to
engage in.
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Evidence (Candidate)
You gave clear directions and a time target for the first activity.
Try not to talk after you get students to work. They cant think and write and
listen at the same time.
You explained how you needed students to work together and how to focus
their discussions as well as turn their attention back to you when you ask
them to.
You gave specific reminders of what turn and talks means.
Consider using a signal that indicates that you want students to bring their
attention back to you. This group was close in and is not very big but
signals always work no matter the size of the group.
Your attention to students as individuals shows them that you notice each
of them. This age group especially will relate to you for that.
____Inadequate
____Emerging
__x__Proficient
____Distinctive
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Evidence (Candidate)
You began by giving students your rationale abut summarizing. Then you
directed students to do a short activity to spark their thinking.
The summary activity at the beginning seems disjointed from this lesson.
You did explain the connection to a student but did everyone get that?
Some didnt know what to do with what they wrote.
Try not to ask yes/no questions unless you are polling the class. When you
say does anyone want to? or does anybody know? you wont get as
many responses than if you say Who will share..? or something like that.
You can also say Think about this In a minute Im going to call on
someone to respond.
You asked students to remember the elements of a story. Your obvious
enthusiasm for their identification of most of the elements was infectious.
Your voice and word choices as you talk to students are inviting.
You played a video of a song that both re-introduced and reinforced the 5
elements of a story.
Consider what you want your role to be when students talk to each other.
This is usually a great opportunity to listen. When the teacher injects her
opinion, many students will stop and listen, lessening their opportunity to
think for themselves. You should be listening and making notes. You will be
clarifying when you come back to whole group.
You asked to make sure that everyone knew what to do. Consider asking a
student to explain the task in his/her words. The repetition helps kids who
didnt get it all as well as helping you know what they heard of what you
said.
As soon as kids move to work independently, zoom around the room to
ensure that everyone has what is needed to get started. Then you can
focus on kids who need more assistance. Posting the visual that you made
allows students a reminder of what the task is. The zoom around helps you
see how to clarify directions if many students arent clear about how to
proceed.
The small group option in the center provides students the opportunity to
get specific help. Try giving them hints, then moving around to others.
Sitting in one place narrows your vigilance. Think about ways to keep track
of everyone even as you attend to the needs of idividuals.
____Inadequate
____Emerging
_X__Proficient
____Distinctive
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Evidence (Candidate)
__x__Emerging
__x__Proficient
____Distinctive
Evidence (Candidate)
You look and sound professional. It is evident that students relate to you.
____Emerging
_x__Proficient
____Distinctive
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