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    This document provides examples of vague language and suggests more specific or concrete alternatives. The original statements are imprecise about age, quality of grades, amount of money lost, timing, and dollar amounts. The revised versions replace vague terms like "young men", "good grades", "fortune", "soon", and "some years ago" with more precise language such as numeric age ranges, grade point averages, dollar amounts, dates, and years to improve clarity and understanding.

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    Lesiker's Business Communication Solution 6

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    This document provides examples of vague language and suggests more specific or concrete alternatives. The original statements are imprecise about age, quality of grades, amount of money lost, timing, and dollar amounts. The revised versions replace vague terms like "young men", "good grades", "fortune", "soon", and "some years ago" with more precise language such as numeric age ranges, grade point averages, dollar amounts, dates, and years to improve clarity and understanding.

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    This document provides examples of vague language and suggests more specific or concrete alternatives. The original statements are imprecise about age, quality of grades, amount of money lost, timing, and dollar amounts. The revised versions replace vague terms like "young men", "good grades", "fortune", "soon", and "some years ago" with more precise language such as numeric age ranges, grade point averages, dollar amounts, dates, and years to improve clarity and understanding.

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    Lesiker's Business Communication Solution 6

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    Sajid Shafiq
    This document provides examples of vague language and suggests more specific or concrete alternatives. The original statements are imprecise about age, quality of grades, amount of money lost, timing, and dollar amounts. The revised versions replace vague terms like "young men", "good grades", "fortune", "soon", and "some years ago" with more precise language such as numeric age ranges, grade point averages, dollar amounts, dates, and years to improve clarity and understanding.

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    Lesikers Business

    Communication Solution

    Chapter-2: Critical Thinking Exercises


    Selecting Concrete Words
    22. We have found that young
    men are best for this work.
    23. She makes good grades.
    24. John lost a fortune in Las
    Vegas.
    25. If we dont receive the goods
    soon, we will cancel.
    26. Some years ago she made
    good money.

    22. We have found that men


    under 30 are best for this
    work.
    23. She has a 3.9 grade-point
    average.
    24. John lost $7,800 in Las Vegas.
    25. If we dont receive the goods
    by January 15, we will cancel.
    26. In 2003 she made $125,000.

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