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007 Cause & Solution Essay (Model Answer)

Lower salaries compared to other professions, poor student behavior, and excessive workload have led to a decline in the number of people wanting to become teachers. To address this, governments should raise teachers' pay to attract more people, parents should teach their children to respect teachers to improve behavior, and hours should be cut or more teaching assistants hired to lessen workload pressures. Solving this problem is important for ensuring high-quality education for children.

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007 Cause & Solution Essay (Model Answer)

Lower salaries compared to other professions, poor student behavior, and excessive workload have led to a decline in the number of people wanting to become teachers. To address this, governments should raise teachers' pay to attract more people, parents should teach their children to respect teachers to improve behavior, and hours should be cut or more teaching assistants hired to lessen workload pressures. Solving this problem is important for ensuring high-quality education for children.

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Cause/ Solution Essay: Model Answer

These days, in many countries, fewer and fewer people want to become teachers,
particularly in secondary schools.
What are the reasons for this, and how could the problem be solved?

A generation ago, teaching in a high school was considered an extremely well-respected and
popular job, and in some countries this is still true. However, in many parts of the world, there
has been a sharp drop in the number of young people who want to become high school
teachers. This essay will look at the reasons for this and propose some solutions.

One of the main causes of the problem is that teachers salaries are lower than many other
jobs. Teachers pay has not kept pace with that of other professions, such as law or medicine.
In the UK, for example, a doctor with five years experience will earn far more than a teacher
with the same experience. The solution is for the government to raise teachers pay
significantly, which would attract more people into the profession.

Another problem is that many children do not behave well in class. That is to say, teachers
often have to deal with pupils who disobey them, which often causes them to give up
teaching. This tends to put off potential teachers as well. To tackle this issue, parents must
give their children a sense of respect for teachers, in order to make children behave better in
class.

A third cause of the problem is that teachers often have too much work to do. Most teachers
are snowed under with marking and paperwork, which means that they have to stay late at
school and work at home in the evenings. As a result, many teachers are tired and stressed,
and their job has a negative effect on their family life. The way forward could be to cut
teachers hours, and to take on more teaching assistants, which would make teaching an
easier job.

To sum up, teaching has become a much less popular job in many countries, due to reasons
such as the salary, the working hours and pupils behavior. This is a serious problem, and
unless we can get more talented young people to become teachers, the education of our
children will suffer. My view is that the main responsibility for solving the problem lies with
parents and the government.

(356 words)

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