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This student reviewed feedback on their paper about Oedipus the King. They felt their thesis statement was strong but needed improvement on topic sentences. The loop structure did not work well due to weak topic sentences. When rating elements of their paper, they identified topic sentences, supporting details, and explanations as areas needing work. Their goal for future papers is to improve topic sentences and explanations to make the loop structure more effective and increase the overall quality of their writing.

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Writing Reflection

This student reviewed feedback on their paper about Oedipus the King. They felt their thesis statement was strong but needed improvement on topic sentences. The loop structure did not work well due to weak topic sentences. When rating elements of their paper, they identified topic sentences, supporting details, and explanations as areas needing work. Their goal for future papers is to improve topic sentences and explanations to make the loop structure more effective and increase the overall quality of their writing.

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WRITING REFLECTION # ____1_____

Mrs. Cracchiolo (2014-2015)


PIECE OF WRITING: Oedipus the King
In class writing OR out of class writing
1. Looking at the feedback, what/where do you think you did particularly well?
An area in the paper where I did particularly well in is the thesis statement.

2. Looking at the feedback, what do you think was the area you need the most improvement in and
why? (Be Specific)
The area on the paper where I need the most improvement in would be the topic sentences. Having a
clearer topic sentence would make the supporting details and evidence, and the paper much more solid
piece of writing.

3. Did the loop cycle work for you? Why or why not?
The loop cycle did not work for me due to the lack of a strong topic sentence making the format look
messy and unclear.

4. Body paragraph construction is the most important part of your paper since this is the area that uses
evidence to back up your claims. Looking at your paper and feedback, rate yourself overall on the
following elements that correspond to the loop structure.
STRONG
AVERAGE
WEAK
MISSING
Topic Sentences

__X__

_______

_______

________

Supporting Details (SD)

______

_______

__X___

________

Explanations (EXP)

______

_______

__X___

________

Closings (CLOS)

______

__X___

_______

________

Transitions

______

_______

__X___

________

Incorporating Quotes

__X__

_______

_______

________

Set up quotes

__X__

_______

_______

________

Used quote and documenting properly______

__X__

_______

________

Explain relevance

__X__

_______

_______

________

Concluding sentences

__X__

_______

_______

________

OVERALL RATING

______

_______

_______

________

5. The big question: based on your comments, checklist where you rated yourself on body paragraph
structure, and overall score, what NEW GOAL do you have for your next writing assignment? In other
words, what skills will you try to focus on in the future and why?
GOAL: The goal I have for the next paper I will be writing will be to improve on my topic sentences, and the
explanations of supporting quotes and details.

WHY: By improving these three areas on my paper, the loop cycle will be more efficient and increase the
overall quality of the piece of writing.

6. Any other feedback youd like to share??


No.

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