Burke 408lab Annotatedlesson
Burke 408lab Annotatedlesson
TE-408-002 (Lab)
February 20, 2014
Understanding Special Education Annotated Lesson
Jack needs frequent positive feedback, a caring classroom environment, and to be
called on when [he] knows the answer (Kent ISD, 3). Furthermore, as he is rather disinterested
in most of the course work, Jack needs to be able to relate the lesson to his own life,
establishing relevancy and a purpose for learning by relating to previous experiences (9). As
this is not always possible, the teacher must fall back on consistent positive reinforcement. This
type of accommodation doesnt necessitate many changes in an actual lesson plan, but requires
teacher attention on the individual student, perhaps with changes in instructional methods.
Below is a three-day lesson plan I created for a short text, The Tell Tale Heart, by Edgar
Allan Poe. The lesson plan was originally designed for a ninth grade classroom, and instead of
aging Jack by a year, I chose to rejuvenate (or make younger) the lesson by a year. Using track
changes, also known as Microsoft Words comment/review capability, I have accommodated the
lesson to suit a mainstream eighth grade classroom with Jack in it, a classroom just like the one
described in the portfolio description (part 1) section of this assignment. A bibliography for all of
the resources I used in both the portfolio description and the annotated lesson can be found on
the final page of this document.
DATE
September 1-3, 2015
The very first unit of
9th
8th grade English, day
1 through day 3.
Standard
(overview & application)
Day 1: developing a basic
understanding of a text.
It is important to be able to
provide an objective summary of
a fictional text, which the students
will do.
Day 1: participating in basic
discussion about a text.
To meet the needs of this
standard, students will discuss
CCSS.ELA-Literacy.RL.9-10.2
Determine a central idea of a text and analyze its
development over the course of the text, including how it
emerges and is shaped and refined by specific details;
provide an objective summary of the text.
CCSS.ELA-Literacy.SL.9-10.1
CCSS.ELA-Literacy.RL.9-10.5
CCSS.ELA-Literacy.RL.11-12.3
Objectives
CCSS.ELA-Literacy.L.9-10.3
Learner Factors
Environmental
Factors
Instructional
Activities and Tasks
What activities will you and your students do and how are they
connected to the objectives?
We will discuss what kinds of texts the students like to read in
their spare time. We will discuss why they like these kinds of
texts, and what makes a text enjoyable. Through this, students
will enhance their ability to discuss and analyze a text.
We will discuss the concept of genre, mystery, and suspense.
We will complete the graphic organizer to examine the basic
How will you determine what the students know and are able to
do during and as a result of the lesson?
Students will complete a basic graphic organizer. On this
worksheet, they will predict or reinvent the end of the The Tell
Tale Heart. When they finish reading the story, students will
write a summary of the text, and students will compare their
predictions/reinventions to the actual text. I will be able to
check for completion of the graphic organizer, and grade the
content of their short essays.
Students will participate in discussion about authorial intent,
the credibility of the narrator in the story, and the major
elements of the story that stood out to them. I will simply judge
whether or not the students are engaging in discussion, either
through speaking or active listening. I will also assess students
by their engagement in the online discussions I will have with
them.
Students will compose a short parody of The Tell Tale Heart,
mimicking specific stylistic elements of it. I will be able to
grade the content of their parodies. list stylistic elements of
Poes story, and craft standalone sentences that typify each
element. For extra credit, compose a short parody of The Tell
Tale Heart, mimicking specific stylistic elements of it. I will be
able to grade the content of their parodies/sentences.
September 1, 2015
8:00am 8:15am:
Ninth grade English, day 1. Introduce myself. Good morning, I
am Mr. Burke. As this is an English class, I thought we should
start by introducing ourselves and learning a little bit about what
each of us likes to read in our spare time. As I said, Im Mr.
Burke, and I like to read (or watch) television comedies, and
mystery novels. My two favorite TV shows are Lost and Friends,
and my favorite author is Stephen King.
8:15am 8:17am:
Discuss patterns among the students comments.
8:17am 8:21am:
Write on the board what makes a good text? Model some
examples for the students: I like mystery novels. I like longrunning TV shows. Well-developed and relatable characters.
8:21am 8:23am:
Well come back to this list.
With any text you read, whether it enthralls you, it is boring, it is
simple, or it is complicated, taking notes is the best way to
organize your thoughts.
Hand out graphic organizer. Sometimes it is helpful to take notes
while reading. As I read this text, please fill out the first three or
four boxes of the graphic organizer, drawing pictures or writing
words in each box to mark the progression of the story.
8:23am 8:28am:
I will read The Tell Tale Heart out loud. (pass out story, with a
break where I will stop reading).
I will stop after the first two paragraphs of the text to model a way
Students will fill out the first three or four boxes of the graphic
organizer while the teacher reads the first half of the story out
loud. Students may wait to fill out the first couple of boxes until
after teacher finishes reading, during class discussion, feeding off
of other students.
Students will discuss what they wrote/drew in the graphic
organizer. Students will discuss who the characters are, and what
they want.
Students will predict the ending of the story, and finish filling out
the first page of the graphic organizer. TW circulate through the
class, making sure to give assistance to those who are struggling.
Students will discuss their predictions. Then students will discuss
how the story and their predictions compare to the list of good
qualities in a text that we previously generated.
For homework, students will finish reading the story. Students
will also be provided with an audio of the story. They should
listen to the audio, and read along with it. They will draw/write
the actual progression of the story. Then they will write a
paragraph comparing their prediction/reinvention to the actual
plot, which should include a short summary of the actual plot.
Students will share their parody ideas. I will also share my own
idea.
Students will share what they know about simple literary devices
and how they are used to enhance the mystery or suspense of a
story.
Students will still have the laptops, and will write the list of
literary devices on their google doc.
Students will discuss how Poe uses literary devices, and we will
discuss the unreliability of the narrator.
Students will work individually on their google docs to quote an
example of how Poe uses literary devices in The Tell Tale Heart.
Students will write, with a pen and paper, the beginning of a
parodic story, mimicking Poes signature creepy style, and
utilizing literary devices to enhance the feeling of the story.
Students will work by themselves to craft standalone sentences
that mimic Poes signature style and utilize some of the literary
devices we have been talking about..
Students will share and discuss their stories.
Further Rationale
I know it gets a little messy toward the end of the lesson plan, and I blame Microsoft Word. I dont want to be redundant, but in
case the track changes were hard to follow, I will go over the general accommodations I made in the lesson right here. Most importantly,
I have implemented the use of less public forms of discussion, such as journaling, so that I might converse with Jack without the
scrutiny of his classmates. My goal would be to respond to all of his online journal entries within a day so that he is constantly reminded
of my engagement with him. Though I see great value in the ability to participate in verbal discussions with peers, I will assess Jacks
participation through the attention he exhibits in his writing. Beyond that, I have virtually eliminated all homework, and embedded the
work during class time. Jack has a difficult time motivating himself to accomplish assignments during class, and I can only imagine its
even more difficult when hes at home. Thus, I have given everybody ample class time to work on their assignments.
I would also like to add that, no matter how much lesson planning I do, it is my primary goal to adapt to the students. If students
begin to steer discussions toward something I hadnt planned, I will follow them there. The same goes for Jack. In his online
participation, I will respond based on what he has written, and let him take the conversation in whatever direction he chooses. After all,
labels rarely tell the teacher who can be taught in what way. One could put five or six labels on the same child and still not know what
to teach him or how (Heward et al, 336). Jacks IEP, stating that he has a specific learning disability, and difficulty in reading
comprehension and written expression, is useful, but the most important thing is for me to get to know him, and adapt.
Peer Review
Paige: I like the visual organizer for symbols
I like how youre trying to create a safe environment for students to participate in via the online space
however, I feel like it should be a mandatory thing-- the topic may be optional, but I think that the students should be required to
participate in it.
I think you should make it very clear in your lesson plan that you plan on rolling with what the students are bringing to the table, and
adjusting to what the students are learning and discussing that day.
I like the idea of having students watch the versions of ATTH
Cary: How to establish relevancy of Poe? I do like that you want to have/make a safe space for all students. Internet options journaling (how would requirements for participation work here?) assessment based on discussion/writing I like, but if he has difficulty
with written expression is this adequate? Listing stylistic elements (is this different? - I feel like it is) are students just going to choose
this option if they dont want to writ the whole story? Maybe making this the first step, or the final step for everyone. Taking home a
tape is good - or the link for the read aloud or video.
James: trying to introduce the assignment/activity by creating a safe environment is actually really cool. Make them comfortable.
This is especially relevant in the positive feedback aspect of your accommodations.
Graphic organizer is good.
journaling is not only a great way to measure comprehension, but also in creating some kind of connection with the student, and
understanding what makes them tick.
Response to Peer Review
I had originally thought the online journaling would be optional, but Paige convinced me otherwise. I made it a requirement
because I agreed that students might not take it seriously if it was optional. Paige also wanted me to be clear that I plan on rolling with
what the students are bringing to the table so I tried to make that clear. This is just my style in general, but it might make it seem like
my plans are too loose, so I think Paige was right in saying I should be clear about my adaptability. We also discussed having the
students watch different version of The Tell Tale Heart, and I thought it was an interesting idea, but decided not to incorporate it into my
lesson. It goes beyond the scope of what I want to accomplish in this lesson, and I believe there are better texts with which to explore
versions of interpretation.
Cary made a good point about establishing relevancy of The Tell Tale Heart. I agree that there isnt much in the plot or character
to which students can relate, but my goal is to establish relevancy in terms of aesthetic appeal. This is why the lesson begins with a
discussion of what makes a good text and flows into a discussion of how Poe might make use of aesthetic elements that students had
previously discussed. The relevancy or relatability here is not in the story, itself, but in the aesthetic appeal of texts, in general. Cary
also mentioned that, if Jack has difficulty with written expression, the online journaling might not be any better than in-class discussion.
Hes right about this, but I have seen Jacks writing, and I have observed him in class; he doesnt have a problem putting words on a
page. In the online journals I am not looking for well developed paragraphs of new ideas, I am just looking to see that Jack is thinking
and paying attention. Based on my observations, his difficulties are primarily in motivation and public speaking; in-class journaling with
daily feedback circumvents these issues.
During the time dedicated for peer feedback in lab, James generally reiterated Paiges and Carys points. He wrote mostly
positive feedback in the google doc (see above), but had the same constructive criticisms that I have already addressed.
Works Cited
"Classroom Adaptations." Kent ISD (n.d.): 0-27. Web. 21 Feb. 2014.
Durbin, Emily, PhD. "Child and Family Psychopathology." PSY-424-001. Michigan State University, East Lansing, MI. 2013. Lecture.
Heward, William L., Sara E. Bicard, and Rodney A. Cavanaugh. "Educational Equality for Students with Disabilities." (n.d.): n. pag.
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