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The student felt they did well with their thesis statement and topic sentences. They need improvement in explaining their quotations, as the analysis for each quote was too short. The loop cycle of organizing paragraphs worked for the student by giving their paper more structure. They rated themselves as strong in topic sentences, incorporating quotes, and concluding sentences. They need to focus on explaining quotes in more depth for future assignments to add more analysis and meaning to their writing.

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Writing Reflection 3

The student felt they did well with their thesis statement and topic sentences. They need improvement in explaining their quotations, as the analysis for each quote was too short. The loop cycle of organizing paragraphs worked for the student by giving their paper more structure. They rated themselves as strong in topic sentences, incorporating quotes, and concluding sentences. They need to focus on explaining quotes in more depth for future assignments to add more analysis and meaning to their writing.

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WRITING REFLECTION # _____3_____

Mrs. Cracchiolo (2014-2015)


PIECE OF WRITING ___Under the Influence__________________________________________
In class writing OR out of class writing
1. Looking at the feedback, what/where do you think you did particularly well?
I felt like I did very well on my thesis and was clear with my topic sentences.

2. Looking at the feedback, what do you think was the area you need the most
improvement in and why? (Be Specific)
I should have done a better job in explaining my quotations. My analysis for each quote
was not long enough.

3. Did the loop cycle work for you? Why or why not?
The loop cycle did work for me because it gave my paper more order. It allowed me to
organize my thoughts more thoroughly.

4. Body paragraph construction is the most important part of your paper since this is the
area that uses evidence to back up your claims. Looking at your paper and feedback,
rate yourself overall on the following elements that correspond to the loop structure.
STRONG
AVERAGE
WEAK
MISSING
Topic Sentences

__X__

________
Suppoting Details (SD)
________
Explanations (EXP)
________
Closings (CLOS)
________
Transitions
________

_______
__X___

______
______
__X___

_______
___X____
___X____
_______

_______
_______
_______
_______
_______

Incorporating Quotes

__X____

_______

_______

________
Set up quotes

__X___

_______

_______

_______

_______

________
Used quote and documenting properly__X___
________
Explain relevance

______

_______

___X____

________
Concluding sentences
________
OVERALL RATING
________

__X____
__X___

_______

_______

_______

_______

5. The big question: based on your comments, checklist where you rated yourself on body
paragraph structure, and overall score, what NEW GOAL do you have for your next
writing assignment? In other words, what skills will you try to focus on in the future and
why?
GOAL:
On my future writing assignment, I will focus more on explaining my quotes. I will take my
time analyzing each quote and understanding them.

WHY:
I will focus more on my quotes in order to give more structure and meaning to my paper.

6. Any other feedback youd like to share??


Make your voice heard more!

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