WT Hoarse Script
WT Hoarse Script
Int morning Jake and his mother sit at a table with standard breakfast items (Cereal,
Toast, ect) quick jump cuts of various house hold object posters shoes tables family
photos
Mid shot of Mother eating cereal looking past the camera at out of shot Jake (J), we
hear the sound of cereal rustling and bags moving
Mother/
Are you sure youre ready?
Cut to mid shot of Jake sitting at the table holding a spoon of cereal hangs for
about 3 seconds
Jake/
Yeah, pretty sure.
CUT ext jakes house in line with doors medium wide shot of all of Jake, J walks down
path and out on to street CUT close up of J all of head in shot with glimpses of
shoulders TRACKS with him as he walks J puts his earphones in AUDIO (YC the Cynic
Rude boy Jamaican) sounds quite on the track and when he puts in the buds snaps
to overdub. Various shots of jake from different angles as he walks CUT slow motion
walk through waves of other students with the mask clearly visible as the song
reaches the end of the verse J is sideswiped by hooded individual AUDIO cuts
CUT worms eye view a circle of hooded figures surround the shot blocking out the
sun (ENTER THE CHAVS!!!) CUT to high angles shot looking down at J
Jake:
Hi?
CUT to other worms eye
Kai:
(sucking teeth) get the fuck up blud!
CUT to other high angle
Arm grabs J by the shirt and drags him out of shot
Cut to medium wide shot so the backs of the chavs are seen all hoods up with the
brims of caps partially visible
J is thrown out of the circle and stumbles but still stands the chavs semi-circle around
him
Kai:
bruh whats this weirdo fink he wearing doe
Jayden:
got that shirt from the frift store you know
Mackenzie:
dat gay ass bag tho
Kai/
who do you think you are bitch
Jake
/ um jake
Kai/
you come round here again youll get a hoof to the head
K pushes J back down to the floor
Cut so we see Jake fall onto the ground AUDIO we hear the group laughter of the
chavs as the walk away happy with their work CUT to close up of Jake propped up
on his elbows on the grass AUDIO Lighting Crack
CUT int Js room side on mid shot of J sitting at a computer or laptop the room is
darkly lit and set up like a stereotypical teenagers room with unmade bed, the table
lit is on and we hear J typing at his computer
CUT over the shoulder shot of jake with the snout of the mask in shot but out of focus
with the screen in focus
The title of his blog JUSTJAKE101
CUT to extreme close up of computer screen so the white should fill the frame we
hear the typing and the words appear First day of college was (2 seconds pause)
eventful. Got pushed around by some hoodies who probably doing Hospitality or
something. Its obvious theyre not going away. So I think Ill have to avoid them.
CUT as he types Avoid Them EXTREME ClOSE UP on those two words.
AUDIO Mission impossible style music cuts in
MONTAGE CUT CUT CUT of J wandering around school sticking close to walls rushing
through doors ducking in crowds, in-between each CUT a clock and a few seconds
of ticking are heard with the time advancing each time.
CUT to clock with the time set to 10 to 4 crescendo sound in build ups
CUT to clock CUT to J
CUT to clock face but closer
CUT to J
Extreme close up slightly angled so the second hand can be seen ticking round
CRESCENDO CLIMAX!!
Mid shot of J CRESCENDO fades as BELL RINGS
Jake:
*SIGHS*
Jake:
stands to get up
Mids hot holds and the chavs walk behind the chair he is sitting in
Kai:
(as menacingly as darth sidious) where do you fink youre going m8
Two chavs push J back into his chair
CUT To Shot reverse shot of K lower angle looking across the table at J
Kai:
did you really think you could get away from us, did you really think you could
escape from us
Chantelle
do you believe that?
Kai:
Im finding it hard to believe well I think we should teach him a lesson dont you guys
All (except corey)
YEAH!
CUT to close up on corey with a sad uneasy face)
CUT to Kai reaching across the table to slam Js face on the table
Ambient sounds of shuffling and slamming fades out as sad music fades in.
Montage of J being beaten up CUT CUT CUT, Shaky Cam high angles low angles
slow motion shots of kai slamming down on j with face in full view gritted teeth and
snarling this should continue with various kicks head slams ect for around 25 seconds
until kai spits and leaves the room with the posse in slow motion. Corey is the last to
leave and looks back at J with a pained facial expression.
As J is left on the table the cutting sound of an alarm cut snaps in
CUT camera is placed on bed angled so when J bolts up its a mid shot
Jake:
heavy breathing
Cut to close up of J with most of the head in friend
Jake:
heavy breathing intensifies!!
Int living room Js mother sits looking worried we hear the sound of J coming down
the stairs and bustling past her we should only see a blur as he passes
Jakes mum:
sweetie are you all..
BOOM DOOR SLAM!!
CUT
Ext the street by his house
J walks on the pavement tracking mid shot we should see his full face in frame
AUDIO the echoing sounds of insults of the various chavs yelling things
This should build into a horrifying cacophony of unrecognisable sounds
CUT Extreme close up
Audio REVERB builds
CUT
Ext the quad
J sits on a bench with is bag by his side and his phone in hand scrolling
CUT POV from js perspective he looks up and sees the chav semi-circle around him
KAI:
hey bitch!
The intro of lighthouse by Mallory knox is heard coming from Js headphones and
when he puts them in it overdubs and J lashes out at Kai
CUT to side on medium wide shot J flies on k and pushes him to the ground with a
right cross before slamming small punches across his face as he brushes off the
chavs trying to jump on him music fades out as school bell fades in
CUT to over the shoulder of J sitting in the headmasters office
Head Teacher:
I can honestly say Im very disappointed in you Jake especially when you arrived at
this college with excellent GCSE grades. I expected better from you but instead I
find that youre lashing out at other pupils who have done nothing to you at all,
now before I call your mother and inform her of what happened is there anything
else you want to tell me
CUT
J should be centre frame and the chavs expect corey should be semi circled
around him with grins and smirks on their faces
Jake:
no sir
CUT
Ext the street at dawn or night but preferably darker
J walks along the street to his house again a tracking shot in a mid shot we see him
alone when suddenly Kai appears from an alley or something and over his shoulder
raises the spanner and strikes him on the head with the spanner and J should fall out
of the shot in slow motion leaving the figure of K behind him
CUT worms eye view of J looking up at the figure of K as the other chavs without
corey gather around him
Sad music fades in as in slow motion in a birds eye view they beat up J with kicks
punches and steps until the music climaxes and J is left in the middle of the
pavement sprawled out.
A black hoodied figure pulls the body of J out of shot and a slow fade to black
Int Js bedroom
Fades in and out slowly like waking up until it fades up and stays there to reveal the
ceiling of js room POV from J
Corey with hood down and smiling face swings into shot over J
Corey: hey
Cut to angled low shot of J
Jake: hey
The horse mask slowly fades off