Script Draft (5) : Subject: Media Class: 12A/Me1 Teacher: MR Becker
Script Draft (5) : Subject: Media Class: 12A/Me1 Teacher: MR Becker
2 utside :T15)1# s se*i4detached house' C !"# looks at house' CAM1+A2 J +0A# C+"C)! 3 C !"# turns around and looks around' C !"# looks to the ri(ht$ and his eyes widen' C !"# runs to a skateboard on the &athway$ and &uts his ri(ht hand on it' )e be(ins to skate down the &athway' utside Bur(h )eath woods' :T15)1#$ 14$ is lookin( at his watch; the ti*e is <290a*' )e is stood standin( still outside the woods' )e is wearin( s*art clothes$ which look a bit all o/er the &lace$ as i% he has been rushin(; his hair is hal% co*bed$ and one o% his shoelaces is not tied u&' :TA++"#= Jordan >ent :T15)1# looks u& %ro* his watch and u& at the loo*in( trees in %ront o% hi*' The trees surroundin( the woods loo* u& /ery hi(h' There is a *ound o% earth stickin( /ery %ar out o% the (round$ and has been *ade into a sort o% ra*&' :ound o% trees rustlin( C !"# s %eet' 19 seconds
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A Jack 3oods :T15)1# s le%t eye twitches$ as he looks to his ri(ht$ and then behind hi*' :T15)1# looks back u& at the trees$ and his shoulders %all as he hea/es a hea/y si(h' And Jack )i((s :T15)1# be(ins to walk %orwards$ at a slow &ace' "nside Bur(h )eath woods' :T15)1# continues :T15)1# s %eet on 9 seconds walkin( %orwards in the the (round' woods$ with another hurried (lance at his Trees rustlin( watch' n the &athway there is do( waste and other litter' :T15)1# be(ins to &ant sli(htly$ and hurries %orward' "nside Bur(h )eath woods' Further on in the woods$ T+1#T$ 16$ is stood on the outskirts o% the &athway' :o*e o% the branches on so*e trees are han(in( loosely %ro* the trees' T+1#T is wearin( a white school shirt$ with his tie e@tre*ely loose and han(in( down %ro* his collar$ and he is leanin( a(ainst a tree with his &hone in his hand' T+1#T is lookin( at his &hone$ readin( a :T15)1# s %eet on the (round' :T15)1#2 ?:i(h? :T15)1# s %eet'
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4 te@t' At the to& o% the &hone screen$ it says it is %ro* TB+ #1$ and the te@t says2 7Mate where u atC At school waitin('8 T+1#T locks his &hone$ and then looks u&' "nside Bur(h )eath woods' :T15)1# is walkin( %orwards at a %ast &ace$ lookin( down at his %eet whilst he walks' T+1#T s*iles and sto&s leanin( on the tree and *o/es %orwards into the *iddle o% the &athway' )e &uts his &hone into his &ocket$ and then &uts his other hand in his other &ocket' :T15)1# sto&s suddenly in the *iddle o% the &athway' There is a &athway leadin( one way$ and a &athway leadin( the other$ and there is a &athway in %ront o% hi*' )e looks to either side and then looks %orwards' T+1#T %u*bles around his &ocket$ and then in the other &ocket' :T15)1# s eyes sDuint and he looks !ockin( o% &hone' T+1#T2 ?:i(h?
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9 down the &athway' "nside Bur(h )eath woods' T+1#T *o/es behind the tree$ and &okes his head around the corner$ so he can see down the &athway' :T15)1# be(ins to ste& towards the &athway' C !"# reaches out his hand and &uts it on :T15)1# s shoulder' :T15)1# turns around Duickly' C !"# is &antin($ his shoulders are hea/in(' < seconds
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:kateboard is in back(round$ on its side' :T15)1# whis&ers2 " didn6t want to be late' C !"# re*o/es his hand %ro* :T15)1# s shoulder' C !"# &oints to the le%t' :T15)1# walks in the direction C !"# &ointed' C !"# looks down the &athway' C !"# then runs a%ter :T15)1#' "nside Bur(h )eath woods' T+1#T ste&s out onto the &athway and looks %orwards' )is e@&ression turns into a 10 seconds C !"# whis&ers2 Co*e on' !et6s (o'
6 (ri*ace' )is li& ti(htens$ and his eye twitches' T+1#T turns around and walks down the &athway' Total Ti*e2 1A4 seconds