Instruction Manual Peer Review
Instruction Manual Peer Review
Highlight all that apply, and add an overview of your assessment on the back of this sheet !mail it to the other group Authors emails: "# eloiler$csu fullerton edu %# &choe'""()$gmail com Assessors names: "# %# *# '# 0!S NO *# harpomar+,($csu fullerton edu '# patty-mac%*$yahoo com
"# .o the instructions have a clear, appropriate title/ 1 specify your title, but don2t make it too lengthy %# .oes the introduction to the instructions o State the purpose of the task/ o .escribe safety measures or other concerns that readers should understand/ o 5ist necessary tools and materials/ *# 6re the step-by-step instructions o 3umbered/ o !+pressed w7 active, imperative verbs/ o Simple, clear, and direct/ o !asy to follow8could you do this procedure using this guide/ o 6ccompanied by appropriate citations/ '# 6re the graphics o 6ppropriate and clear/ o 5ocated near their corresponding te+t/ o 6ccompanied by descriptive captions/ o 6ccompanied by appropriate citations/
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9# .oes the conclusion o Include any necessary follow1up advice/ o Include, if appropriate, a troubleshooting guide/ :# Is the manual designed effectively, with ade;uate white space/
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Assessment Overview (hint: start with a positive whats wor!ing here"#: 1 1 1 1 Reformat the first page< optimi=e the white space and layout> 6dd a design> 5ike how you wrote ?IPS and 34?!S along each step appropriately @reak down the S?!PS Atoo much %6, %@, %BC# De like how you screenshot for each step, but maybe include bigger picture and with detail/ Maybe include 6B?I43 arrows or icons for each picture, to indicate what e+actly needs to be selected Eor each step, the instructions should I3S?RFB? more< the instructions make it seem like it2s &ust recommending with observations and guiding us rather than instructing us ?here isn2t a lot of flow from one step to the ne+t< use smoother transitions from step to step ?he transition between steps is dis&ointed and the clarity of the steps is uncertain De tried a usability test and were unable to follow your instructions to create a weebly profile
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