Scene/Sequel Checklist
Scene/Sequel Checklist
Checkpoint Setting: Is reader oriented to a time and place? POV: Does the reader know whos telling the story? Goal: Is it clear what the main character in the scene wants? Motivation: Does the reader get a sense of WHY the mc wants this goal? Stakes: Does the reader know what will happen if the mc fails to attain this goal? Anticipation: What did you include to ensure the reader is concerned with the outcome? Emotion: What emotion are you trying to get out of the reader? Is that achieved? Story Question: Is the story question revealed? Conflict: What conflict/s does your character face that interfere with her goal? Four types: another
person, circumstantial, forces of nature, internal.
Description
Setback/Disaster: How does the scene end in relation to the goal? No, No and furthermore, No but, Yes but, Yes. Hints: Have you used foreshadowing or hints to let the reader know something is about to happen? Sequel: Do you have one? Reaction/Emotion: Initial response to the scene and its disaster. Is your mcs reaction in the scene believable? Dilemma/Thought: Do you go through the options here as your character thinks about what to do? Decision/Action: Is it clear what the MC has chosen to do about this situation? New action/goal: In the following scene, do you state this new goal? Thematic Significance: How does the scene relate to your theme?