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Your “I’m looking for an opportunity” post isn’t hitting the mark. 🎯 It isn’t getting results because it isn’t resonating with the right audience, it isn’t telling them what you can do, and it isn’t directing them to take action. Don’t just say, ❌ “I’m looking for opportunities in retail management…” ❌ “I’m looking for an Administrative Assistant position…” ❌ “I’m looking for new opportunities and would appreciate your support…” This doesn’t tell anything to the people hiring for the opportunities you’re targeting. Enhance your post with details that show what you’re capable of, what you specialize in, and what can be expected of you including: ➡️ Years of experience ➡️ Industries ➡️ Key results that will resonate with anyone hiring for those roles ➡️ Keywords that will help your post appear in recruiter searches ➡️ Specific call to action 𝗚𝗼 𝗳𝗿𝗼𝗺: “I’m looking for a sales development position. If you’re hiring, please reach out to me…” 𝗧𝗼:  “I’m looking for a new role as a Sales Development Representative. I have 5+ years of experience in the HVAC industry and am open to remote opportunities or onsite in [Your City]. I was the top SDR in my region in 2023, largely accredited to the following: • Grew the number of accounts by 20% YOY by improving existing scripts, conducting 100 cold calls per day, and developing a follow-up sequence. • Developed ideal customer profiles for residential and commercial clients to grow and nurture a pipeline, and schedule appointments with 30% more qualified leads. If you’re hiring or recruiting for an SDR role in HVAC, trades, or residential or commercial services, please send me a direct message to discuss the opportunity to work together!" 👉 Modify it, test it out, and see how it impacts your results. Do you have a post that led to a relevant connection, interview, or job offer? Link to that post or share what got you results!👇

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