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One of Us Is Lying
One of Us Is Lying
One of Us Is Lying
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One of Us Is Lying

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#1 NEW YORK TIMES BESTSELLER • NAMED ONE OF THE TEN BEST BOOKS OF THE YEAR BY ENTERTAINMENT WEEKLY • BUZZFEED • POPCRUSH

“Pretty Little Liars meets The Breakfast Club” (Entertainment Weekly) in this addictive mystery about what happens when five strangers walk into detention and only four walk out alive.

 
Pay close attention and you might solve this.
On Monday afternoon, five students at Bayview High walk into detention.

    Bronwyn, the brain, is Yale-bound and never breaks a rule.
    Addy, the beauty, is the picture-perfect homecoming princess.
    Nate, the criminal, is already on probation for dealing.
    Cooper, the athlete, is the all-star baseball pitcher.
    And Simon, the outcast, is the creator of Bayview High’s notorious gossip app.
 
Only, Simon never makes it out of that classroom. Before the end of detention Simon's dead. And according to investigators, his death wasn’t an accident. On Monday, he died. But on Tuesday, he’d planned to post juicy reveals about all four of his high-profile classmates, which makes all four of them suspects in his murder. Or are they the perfect patsies for a killer who’s still on the loose?

Everyone has secrets, right? What really matters is how far you would go to protect them.

All the secrets of the Bayview Four will be revealed in the TV series now streaming on NBC's Peacock!

And don’t miss the #1 New York Times bestselling sequel, One of Us is Next!
LanguageEnglish
Release dateMay 30, 2017
ISBN9781524714703

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  • Rating: 5 out of 5 stars
    5/5
    I was really proud of myself for figuring it out, but I'm mad because I doubted myself and dismissed the thought.
  • Rating: 5 out of 5 stars
    5/5
    My only complaint: not fond of first person narratives that switch between characters. Otherwise, one of the best teen books I've read so far this year.
  • Rating: 3 out of 5 stars
    3/5
    I was sorely disappointed by the curveball, but the climax and the denouement made up for it.
  • Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
    4/5
    Book on CD performed by Kim Mai Guest, Shannon McManus, MacLeod Andrews, and Robbie Daymond
    3.5***

    Five high school students are found with cell phones in class, which is a violation of class rules. All claim the phones are not their own, but their teacher still requires them all to go to detention. While together in the room, but without the teacher present, one of the students dies. As it turns out there are significant questions about how this happened and the police are involved. Who did it?

    This was a twisty mystery and the students surprised me with their insight and tenacity in trying to clear their names. Of course, there is the usual teenage drama as well: getting into college, sports, relationships, parents, bullying, social media, etc. There are also issues of dysfunctional families, and racism. Surprisingly I didn’t think all this teen drama distracted from the central plot. I certainly was kept guessing and didn’t figure out the culprit until the author chose to reveal the truth.

    The audiobook is wonderfully performed by a quartet of talented voice artists. I’m not sure which artist performed which chapters, other than that the women voiced the teen girls and the men voiced the teen boys.
  • Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
    4/5
    Five kids are in detention and one of them dies. The other four kids are suspects. The boy who died was Simon, who spilled everyone's deepest, darkest, secrets online to the whole school. Everyone of the other four had a reason to have killed him. Which one is guilty? The police and the media put pressure on each of the students to admit to wrong doing. This is first book of a trilogy. If you are into high school romance, peer pressure and teenage angst this is the book for you.

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  • Rating: 3 out of 5 stars
    3/5
    It was fine. The ending a little predictable and the characters a bit stereotypical but overall an enjoyable and easy read.
  • Rating: 3 out of 5 stars
    3/5
    The quintessential YA book, complete with the appropriate amount of teenage angst. The plot is clever and keeps the reader engaged. I would gladly recommend this book at teens, especially teen girls, who would recognize many of the characters as friends of theirs in real life.
  • Rating: 2 out of 5 stars
    2/5
    It's easy to see why this book is so popular, although it was a little disappointing to me, likely because I walked in expecting adult-level thrills and suspense from a YA book. Don't get me wrong, this book was good, but it was also trope-heavy, and I definitely would've been more engaged with it if I had read it when I was a teenager.
  • Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
    4/5
    3,7 stars

    A YA mystery where I went around in circles trying to figure out the culprit, considering the possibility of it being who it ended up being on several occasions. However, there were enough red herrings to keep me from being convinced before the ending, so that was good.

    I enjoyed the main romance right up until the point where the author decided to go full cliche and turned an otherwise believable teenage relationship into corn fest.

    There was nothing wrong with the writing, but there also wasn't anything particularly memorable or striking about it either. The characters were okay, and I liked how the author made the effort to develop them through the story, even though this was a mystery.

    Definitely closer to a four than a three star read.
  • Rating: 3 out of 5 stars
    3/5
    Simon created About That; Bayview High’s most popular gossip app. He planned on reviling the life changing secrets of Bronwyn, Addy, Nate, and Cooper. Coincidentally, all five of them wind up in after school detention the day prior to publication. Tragedy strikes when Simon goes into anaphylaxis and dies. Investigators believe his death was a murder.

    Everyone has secrets. How far would one go to protect a secret?

    One of Us Is Lying was a good audio book and mystery. I bounced between two suspects regularly. Karen managed perspective changes and character relationships well. Though, the character development was a little flat.
  • Rating: 2 out of 5 stars
    2/5
    Eh, it was ok. But I guessed the end and wasn't impressed.

    And spoilers, annoying that the title is technically a lie and gross to see suicide used as a revenge tactic.
  • Rating: 3 out of 5 stars
    3/5
    It all starts with detention. Five students at Bayview High whose social circles don't usually all overlap find themselves cooped up together. Soon, one of them ends up dead, killed by a peanut allergy after drinking water from a peanut oil-tainted paper cup. One of them is almost certainly the killer, but which one is it?

    The story is told from alternating POVs. There's Bronwyn, a perfect student who's destined to get into an Ivy League school. There's Addy, the pretty girlfriend of Jake, the captain of the football team. There's Cooper, a rising star baseball player. And there's Nate, a detention regular who's already on probation for dealing. Simon, the victim, ran a gossip blog and knew secrets about each of them that he'd been preparing to expose to the world. Could someone have killed him in order to protect themselves?

    I'm drawn to YA mysteries and thrillers, and this is one I've wanted to read for some time. Although it took me longer to get through than I expected (I'm not much of an e-book reader anymore), I liked it overall.

    With one big exception, the characters weren't as compelling as they could have been. The publisher's description presents them all as stereotypes: the brain, the beauty, the criminal, the athlete, and the outcast. They all had more to them than those labels might imply, but the only one that really grew on me was Addy. It surprised me, because she was initially one of my least favorite characters. Her entire life revolved around her boyfriend, to the point that she even wore her hair the way he preferred. It was a joy to watch her grow and figure out what she wanted to do.

    The mystery was okay and kept me interested. The solution was messed up, but made sense considering the way it was framed.

    I was wondering how McManus managed to continue this since this book wrapped things up pretty well, but it looks like the next book stars all-new characters. I may give it a shot.

    Extras:

    The author includes contact information for those who might need help with some of the various serious topics that the book touches upon, such as substance abuse and depression.

    (Original review posted on A Library Girl's Familiar Diversions.)
  • Rating: 5 out of 5 stars
    5/5
    This book was one of my favorite books that I have read this year! It was not the typical high school murder mystery. It was actually very thought provoking and it had twist and turns until the end. I high recommend this book to everyone.
  • Rating: 3 out of 5 stars
    3/5
    Five students; Simon, Nate, Bronwyn, Addy, and Cooper, are serving detention with the teacher who caught them with cell phones, but somebody placed a cell phone in each of their backpacks in order to frame them. While they are in detention, there is a car accident in the parking lot outside their classroom, and the teacher goes to help. Simon gets a drink of water and suddenly begins convulsing. He is taken to the hospital and dies of anaphylactic shock due to a peanut allergy. The four other students who were serving detention with Simon all fall under suspicion, especially since Simon's blog was about to reveal their deepest secrets.

    The title, One of Us Is Lying, is a bit deceiving since in one form or another, all of the characters have been lying. All of the characters' secrets become public knowledge and several clues are pursued by the police and the characters themselves. Once the secrets are revealed, the after effects are explored, adding depth to the mystery. The only real disappointment was the resolution. I had trouble believing that high schools students would be that clever, vengeful, and devious. Overall, however, a good mystery with a less than believable ending.
  • Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
    4/5
    An interesting mystery set in a high school, with the same setup as The Breakfast Club. The book is written in the first person, although it rotates perceptive throughout. This is a bit off putting to me, but was generally well done, so that is only a minor gripe.

    I read through the book pretty quickly, and I enjoyed most of it. The conclusion was fairly satisfying. The epilogue is a bit too sickly sweet for my taste.
  • Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
    4/5
    I actually enjoyed reading it and honestly I kept guessing till the end !!
  • Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
    4/5
    Breakfast Club with murder. Nice plot twists.
  • Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
    4/5
    I really enjoyed this book! There were certainly some “twists” that I saw coming, but I thought the suspense and pacing of the book were excellent. All four of the main characters were fairly compelling and I was actually invested in them, which unfortunately can be a rare feat with YA fiction!
  • Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
    4/5
    This is really well done in my opinion. It's a mystery (whodunit) told from the point of view of all the characters involved. It has some twists. One of Us is Lying is a story for teens that will keep the attention of adults also. All their personal issues come in to play. They're a group of teens sort of like the breakfast club, all different backgrounds, but things about them continue to surface. The boy who is dead wrote a column exposing secrets, and they all had something to hide.
  • Rating: 3 out of 5 stars
    3/5
    3.5 stars. This was a well written story with an ending that surprised me and some other twists along the way. I am personally not a fan of lots of language in a book especially a book marketed as young adult. I especially find GD offensive and it was used several times in the book.
  • Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
    4/5
    This was an enjoyable teen murder mystery with lots of character development. I guessed at the whodunnit before the resolution, but that did not detract from my eagerness to keep reading. I found it entertaining and the four main characters compelling.
  • Rating: 3 out of 5 stars
    3/5
    A teen whodunit set in California, appropriately. Interesting, and written well enough for what it is: teen fiction with a cheesy romance in the end. I actually liked it.
  • Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
    4/5
    One of us is Lying by Karen McManus is a 2017 Delacorte Press publication.

    A riveting YA thriller

    I admit I added this book to my TBR pile after seeing a multitude of glowing reviews for it. Then I realized it was categorized as YA, and featured a teenage cast, so I passed on it due to a few bad experiences with this genre. Recently I noticed a few advertisements for the follow up to this book, and again, the reviews were mostly positive. Against my better judgement, my curiosity won out and I decided to give this book a chance.

    As the book begins, one can’t help but think of ‘The Breakfast Club’, as a group of diverse kids wind up stuck in detention together. However, in this situation, one of them will not make it out alive.

    It would appear someone deliberately set the victim up to experience a deadly allergic reaction, also removing access to a lifesaving EpiPen.
    Naturally, the teens find themselves under suspicion, which brings them closer together as a group, as they work to cover up the secrets and lies that could make them appear guilty.

    This mystery is a well- executed whodunit, with well-timed twists and surprises The secrets the teens were protecting were pretty big, but I also like the way the characters coped with the fallout, perhaps learning a few important lessons along the way or becoming a better person in the process.

    I can understand why so many people praised this book and why it was so popular. Unfortunately, the number one reason why I struggle with this genre- the adult content in a young adult novel- was an issue for me in this book, as well.

    Because I have voiced these concerns in the past, and the reactions to my questioning the behavior and language in YA novels has been either summarily dismissed, perhaps with a virtual eyeroll, or met with extreme frustration and exasperation- (which is why I normally avoid this genre at all cost)- all I’m going to say is this:

    It is my hope that the ‘YA’ audience the book supposedly targeting, will view the actions of the characters in this book as a cautionary tale. While the characters did show responsibility by protecting themselves in some ways, they still left themselves vulnerable to other, very serious dangers, and at the end of the day, proved they were not yet emotionally mature enough to handle the adult situations they were engaging in.

    That said, this is a well-written mystery, constructed for teens, but clever enough to keep adults interested in the plot, too.
    I’m not sure I will attempt to read the follow up novel anytime soon, as originally planned, but I have decided include a YA book in my reading rotation from time to time, instead of freezing it out entirely.

    4 stars
  • Rating: 5 out of 5 stars
    5/5
    All I can say is ... what just happened? This book had me pulled in from the first page all the way to very last one. The story line, character development, and the manner in which each day was broken down, made for a very interesting novel to say the least. This is my first official "YA" novel, but I can say without hesitation that I did not feel like I was reading a teenager's book. The author did an amazing job with going through the lives and scenarios that Nate, Bronwyn, Coooper and Addy, all went through after the unexpected death of their classmate Simon. You truly do not know what happened until the very last few pages of the book, which I will say is an amazing feat for an author; usually you can catch on to what is happening, especially in 'whodunits' pretty early on.

    Overall, I would highly recommend this book to anyone that loves mysteries and whodunits, as this will keep you on your toes. I am looking forward to starting the sequel sooner rather than later!
  • Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
    4/5
    4.5 YA A really good whodunnit teen mystery. Didn't realize that's what I was in for initially, but the action really is about solving a crime, more than just witnessing an incident. In a Breakfast Club gathering of after school detention students, someone dies. The remainder of the book is sorting out how/why. All present as a potential set-up for having cell phones in class are: Bronwyn, the brain/good girl who is Yale bound; Cooper, the baseball jock with major league prospects; Nate, the delinquent with a JD record and a horrible homelife; Addy, the pretty popular girl who is devoted to her boyfriend Jake; and Simon, the socialite who has an app that reveals all the gossip and dirt around Bayview High. SEMI-SPOILER ALERT: He is the one who dies after drinking a glass of water from the classroom's lab sink. Accident or murder? Each of the survivors has a secret that is at risk of exposure, and therefore a motive. However, with some modern technology and some masterminding beyond the grave, the secrets are slowly revealed one by one. Each one makes the person look guilty of killing Simon and also wreaks havoc with their position in the high school pecking order. The 4 survivors/unlikely "friends" must band together to prove their innocence though lots of obstacles come their way, and police seem a little incompetent to deal with teenagers. A sweet romance develops between Nate and Bronwyn and lots of minor characters like Bronwyn's sister Maeve, Jana, Simon's friend and others get a decent role. Pretty intricate plot with a surprising resolution. Well done.
  • Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
    4/5
    The story opens with four students heading into detention, all thinking they don't deserve to be there. Before long, a fifth student, Simon, who owns a popular gossip app called About That, dies right in the classroom. Bronwyn, Nate, Addy, and Cooper, who were the only other people in the room with Simon when he died become murder suspects. Not only that but they also all have devastating secrets Simon was close to publishing.

    As the story unfolds, it's possible the students have been framed, but they keep unraveling more of one another's secrets, leaving them all confused as to whom they can trust. They also learn Simon had plenty of enemies on campus, as he had wrecked many lives by posting students' secrets and misdeeds. Romance, bullying, cliques, secret lives, cheating, and family issues entangle the four main characters as they try to figure out which of them did it or who would want to set them up for a murder conviction.

    The story is told through alternating chapters in the point of view of each of the four murder suspects and was better than I expected. I never figured out how Simon was killed before the author told us. I loved the development of the characters, so I might check out the sequel, with some different main characters.

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  • Rating: 3 out of 5 stars
    3/5
    Solid 3.5. Breakfast Club meets Pretty Little Liars with a twist of Gossip Girl. Definitely dragged in the middle. Figured out the murderer early on, but not the accomplice.
  • Rating: 3 out of 5 stars
    3/5
    When 5 strangers walk into detention “guilty” of the same crime and only 4 make it out alive, all 4 students become suspects in an unexplainable murder of the boy who knows all their secrets. The entertainment of Gossip girl, the secrets of Pretty Little Liars and the characters like Breakfast club. These 4 students must come together to figure out why they are being singled out. Secrets are revealed about each student to make them all appear guilty, but which one is lying? Is everything what it seems to be or is there something deeper?

    This book is very juvenile, which is fitting being that it is labeled as YA. With all the hype this book got, I was anticipating so much more. The plot was average at best, the characters were high school students but written to be so much older. SPOILERS* So the summary of this book was a young male student, Simon, lured 4 unknowing students of different crowds’ “lemmings” as he would say into detention. Simon fell into anaphylaxis then later dying, after ingesting some water, later determined the water had peanut oil in it, causing his allergic reaction. Simon was the “gossip girl” of the school, having a website that disclosed the deepest darkest secrets of all the students. Riveting. Considered a Homicide, the 4 students in detention with him were considered suspects. Throughout the book you find out all 4 of them were all hiding dark (to them) secrets that and were made to take the blame, for said homicide. Then the rest of the book are the students trying to piece together the puzzle, as to who “killed” Simon, stumbling upon the truth at the end. Simon committed suicide by staging a fender bender outside of school to distract everyone while he put peanut oil in his water and drank it, leaving behind a Manifesto. Apparently, he wanted to do more than a “mass shooting”, he wanted to make a statement and take someone down. Just blah.
    Overall I did not enjoy this. Like I said previously, the way this book was hyped up I was ready for so much more, and this just did not do it for me.
  • Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
    4/5
    This was a very entertaining read. It is easy to see some similarities to the Breakfast Club style set up as the book begins, five kids in detention after school for cell phone confiscation of phones that weren't their own. McManus, like John Hughes, has a good handle on the world these kids navigate these days. When gossip monger Simon dies, the investigation brings to light all kinds of secrets, social media tips and high school drama. Told in alternating chapters, the four accused students reveal a lot about themselves and how they eventually determine the solution to the mystery. One of those things you see, but don't see right away. Interesting to note there is now a follow-up story, and Bronwyn's sister Maeve is a main character.
  • Rating: 5 out of 5 stars
    5/5
    The 4 suspects rotate chapters as they tell their side of the story.

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One of Us Is Lying - Karen M. McManus

Part One: Simon Says.Chapter One..

Bronwyn

Monday, September 24, 2:55 p.m.

A sex tape. A pregnancy scare. Two cheating scandals. And that’s just this week’s update. If all you knew of Bayview High was Simon Kelleher’s gossip app, you’d wonder how anyone found time to go to class.

Old news, Bronwyn, says a voice over my shoulder. Wait till you see tomorrow’s post.

Damn. I hate getting caught reading About That, especially by its creator. I lower my phone and slam my locker shut. Whose lives are you ruining next, Simon?

Simon falls into step beside me as I move against the flow of students heading for the exit. It’s a public service, he says with a dismissive wave. You tutor Reggie Crawley, don’t you? Wouldn’t you rather know he has a camera in his bedroom?

I don’t bother answering. Me getting anywhere near the bedroom of perpetual stoner Reggie Crawley is about as likely as Simon growing a conscience.

Anyway, they bring it on themselves. If people didn’t lie and cheat, I’d be out of business. Simon’s cold blue eyes take in my lengthening strides. Where are you rushing off to? Covering yourself in extracurricular glory?

I wish. As if to taunt me, an alert crosses my phone: Mathlete practice, 3 p.m., Epoch Coffee. Followed by a text from one of my teammates: Evan’s here.

Of course he is. The cute Mathlete—less of an oxymoron than you might think—seems to only ever show up when I can’t.

Not exactly, I say. As a general rule, and especially lately, I try to give Simon as little information as possible. We push through green metal doors to the back stairwell, a dividing line between the dinginess of the original Bayview High and its bright, airy new wing. Every year more wealthy families get priced out of San Diego and come fifteen miles east to Bayview, expecting that their tax dollars will buy them a nicer school experience than popcorn ceilings and scarred linoleum.

Simon’s still on my heels when I reach Mr. Avery’s lab on the third floor, and I half turn with my arms crossed. Don’t you have someplace to be?

Yeah. Detention, Simon says, and waits for me to keep walking. When I grasp the knob instead, he bursts out laughing. You’re kidding me. You too? What’s your crime?

I’m wrongfully accused, I mutter, and yank the door open. Three other students are already seated, and I pause to take them in. Not the group I would have predicted. Except one.

Nate Macauley tips his chair back and smirks at me. You make a wrong turn? This is detention, not student council.

He should know. Nate’s been in trouble since fifth grade, which is right around the time we last spoke. The gossip mill tells me he’s on probation with Bayview’s finest for…something. It might be a DUI; it might be drug dealing. He’s a notorious supplier, but my knowledge is purely theoretical.

Save the commentary. Mr. Avery checks something off on a clipboard and closes the door behind Simon. High arched windows lining the back wall send triangles of afternoon sun splashing across the floor, and faint sounds of football practice float from the field behind the parking lot below.

I take a seat as Cooper Clay, who’s palming a crumpled piece of paper like a baseball, whispers Heads up, Addy and tosses it toward the girl across from him. Addy Prentiss blinks, smiles uncertainly, and lets the ball drop to the floor.

The classroom clock inches toward three, and I follow its progress with a helpless feeling of injustice. I shouldn’t even be here. I should be at Epoch Coffee, flirting awkwardly with Evan Neiman over differential equations.

Mr. Avery is a give-detention-first, ask-questions-never kind of guy, but maybe there’s still time to change his mind. I clear my throat and start to raise my hand until I notice Nate’s smirk broadening. "Mr. Avery, that wasn’t my phone you found. I don’t know how it got into my bag. This is mine," I say, brandishing my iPhone in its melon-striped case.

Honestly, you’d have to be clueless to bring a phone to Mr. Avery’s lab. He has a strict no-phone policy and spends the first ten minutes of every class rooting through backpacks like he’s head of airline security and we’re all on the watch list. My phone was in my locker, like always.

You too? Addy turns to me so quickly, her blond shampoo-ad hair swirls around her shoulders. She must have been surgically removed from her boyfriend in order to show up alone. That wasn’t my phone either.

Me three, Cooper chimes in. His Southern accent makes it sound like thray. He and Addy exchange surprised looks, and I wonder how this is news to them when they’re part of the same clique. Maybe überpopular people have better things to talk about than unfair detentions.

Somebody punked us! Simon leans forward with his elbows on the desk, looking spring-loaded and ready to pounce on fresh gossip. His gaze darts over all four of us, clustered in the middle of the otherwise empty classroom, before settling on Nate. Why would anybody want to trap a bunch of students with mostly spotless records in detention? Seems like the sort of thing that, oh, I don’t know, a guy who’s here all the time might do for fun.

I look at Nate, but can’t picture it. Rigging detention sounds like work, and everything about Nate—from his messy dark hair to his ratty leather jacket—screams Can’t be bothered. Or yawns it, maybe. He meets my eyes but doesn’t say a word, just tips his chair back even farther. Another millimeter and he’ll fall right over.

Cooper sits up straighter, a frown crossing his Captain America face. "Hang on. I thought this was just a mix-up, but if the same thing happened to all of us, it’s somebody’s stupid idea of a prank. And I’m missing baseball practice because of it." He says it like he’s a heart surgeon being detained from a lifesaving operation.

Mr. Avery rolls his eyes. Save the conspiracy theories for another teacher. I’m not buying it. You all know the rules against bringing phones to class, and you broke them. He gives Simon an especially sour glance. Teachers know About That exists, but there’s not much they can do to stop it. Simon only uses initials to identify people and never talks openly about school. Now listen up. You’re here until four. I want each of you to write a five-hundred-word essay on how technology is ruining American high schools. Anyone who can’t follow the rules gets another detention tomorrow.

What do we write with? Addy asks. There aren’t any computers here. Most classrooms have Chromebooks, but Mr. Avery, who looks like he should have retired a decade ago, is a holdout.

Mr. Avery crosses to Addy’s desk and taps the corner of a lined yellow notepad. We all have one. Explore the magic of longhand writing. It’s a lost art.

Addy’s pretty, heart-shaped face is a mask of confusion. But how do we know when we’ve reached five hundred words?

Count, Mr. Avery replies. His eyes drop to the phone I’m still holding. And hand that over, Miss Rojas.

"Doesn’t the fact that you’re confiscating my phone twice give you pause? Who has two phones? I ask. Nate grins, so quick I almost miss it. Seriously, Mr. Avery, somebody was playing a joke on us."

Mr. Avery’s snowy mustache twitches in annoyance, and he extends his hand with a beckoning motion. "Phone, Miss Rojas. Unless you want a return visit. I give it over with a sigh as he looks disapprovingly at the others. The phones I took from the rest of you earlier are in my desk. You’ll get them back after detention." Addy and Cooper exchange amused glances, probably because their actual phones are safe in their backpacks.

Mr. Avery tosses my phone into a drawer and sits behind the teacher’s desk, opening a book as he prepares to ignore us for the next hour. I pull out a pen, tap it against my yellow notepad, and contemplate the assignment. Does Mr. Avery really believe technology is ruining schools? That’s a pretty sweeping statement to make over a few contraband phones. Maybe it’s a trap and he’s looking for us to contradict him instead of agree.

I glance at Nate, who’s bent over his notepad writing computers suck over and over in block letters.

It’s possible I’m overthinking this.

Cooper

Monday, September 24, 3:05 p.m.

My hand hurts within minutes. It’s pathetic, I guess, but I can’t remember the last time I wrote anything longhand. Plus I’m using my right hand, which never feels natural no matter how many years I’ve done it. My father insisted I learn to write right-handed in second grade after he first saw me pitch. Your left arm’s gold, he told me. Don’t waste it on crap that don’t matter. Which is anything but pitching as far as he’s concerned.

That was when he started calling me Cooperstown, like the baseball hall of fame. Nothing like putting a little pressure on an eight-year-old.

Simon reaches for his backpack and roots around, unzipping every section. He hoists it onto his lap and peers inside. Where the hell’s my water bottle?

No talking, Mr. Kelleher, Mr. Avery says without looking up.

I know, but—my water bottle’s missing. And I’m thirsty.

Mr. Avery points toward the sink at the back of the room, its counter crowded with beakers and petri dishes. "Get yourself a drink. Quietly."

Simon gets up and grabs a cup from a stack on the counter, filling it with water from the tap. He heads back to his seat and puts the cup on his desk, but seems distracted by Nate’s methodical writing. Dude, he says, kicking his sneaker against the leg of Nate’s desk. Seriously. Did you put those phones in our backpacks to mess with us?

Now Mr. Avery looks up, frowning. "I said quietly, Mr. Kelleher."

Nate leans back and crosses his arms. Why would I do that?

Simon shrugs. Why do you do anything? So you’ll have company for whatever your screw-up of the day was?

One more word out of either of you and it’s detention tomorrow, Mr. Avery warns.

Simon opens his mouth anyway, but before he can speak there’s the sound of tires squealing and then the crash of two cars hitting each other. Addy gasps and I brace myself against my desk like somebody just rear-ended me. Nate, who looks glad for the interruption, is the first on his feet toward the window. Who gets into a fender bender in the school parking lot? he asks.

Bronwyn looks at Mr. Avery like she’s asking for permission, and when he gets up from his desk she heads for the window as well. Addy follows her, and I finally unfold myself from my seat. Might as well see what’s going on. I lean against the ledge to look outside, and Simon comes up beside me with a disparaging laugh as he surveys the scene below.

Two cars, an old red one and a nondescript gray one, are smashed into each other at a right angle. We all stare at them in silence until Mr. Avery lets out an exasperated sigh. I’d better make sure no one was hurt. He runs his eyes over all of us and zeroes in on Bronwyn as the most responsible of the bunch. Miss Rojas, keep this room contained until I get back.

Okay, Bronwyn says, casting a nervous glance toward Nate. We stay at the window, watching the scene below, but before Mr. Avery or another teacher appears outside, both cars start their engines and drive out of the parking lot.

Well, that was anticlimactic, Simon says. He heads back to his desk and picks up his cup, but instead of sitting he wanders to the front of the room and scans the periodic table of elements poster. He leans out into the hallway like he’s about to leave, but then he turns and raises his cup like he’s toasting us. Anyone else want some water?

I do, Addy says, slipping into her chair.

Get it yourself, princess. Simon smirks. Addy rolls her eyes and stays put while Simon leans against Mr. Avery’s desk. Literally, huh? What’ll you do with yourself now that homecoming’s over? Big gap between now and senior prom.

Addy looks at me without answering. I don’t blame her. Simon’s train of thought almost never goes anywhere good when it comes to our friends. He acts like he’s above caring whether he’s popular, but he was pretty smug when he wound up on the junior prom court last spring. I’m still not sure how he pulled that off, unless he traded keeping secrets for votes.

Simon was nowhere to be found on homecoming court last week, though. I was voted king, so maybe I’m next on his list to harass, or whatever the hell he’s doing.

What’s your point, Simon? I ask, taking a seat next to Addy. Addy and I aren’t close, exactly, but I kind of feel protective of her. She’s been dating my best friend since freshman year, and she’s a sweet girl. Also not the kind of person who knows how to stand up to a guy like Simon who just won’t quit.

She’s a princess and you’re a jock, he says. He thrusts his chin toward Bronwyn, then at Nate. And you’re a brain. And you’re a criminal. You’re all walking teen-movie stereotypes.

What about you? Bronwyn asks. She’s been hovering near the window, but now goes to her desk and perches on top of it. She crosses her legs and pulls her dark ponytail over one shoulder. Something about her is cuter this year. New glasses, maybe? Longer hair? All of a sudden, she’s kind of working this sexy-nerd thing.

I’m the omniscient narrator, Simon says.

Bronwyn’s brows rise above her black frames. There’s no such thing in teen movies.

Ah, but Bronwyn. Simon winks and chugs his water in one long gulp. "There is such a thing in life."

He says it like a threat, and I wonder if he’s got something on Bronwyn for that stupid app of his. I hate that thing. Almost all my friends have been on it at one point or another, and sometimes it causes real problems. My buddy Luis and his girlfriend broke up because of something Simon wrote. Though it was a true story about Luis hooking up with his girlfriend’s cousin. But still. That stuff doesn’t have to be published. Hallway gossip is bad enough.

And if I’m being honest, I’m pretty freaked at what Simon could write about me if he put his mind to it.

Simon holds his cup up, grimacing. This tastes like crap. He drops the cup, and I roll my eyes at his attempt at drama. Even when he falls to the floor, I still think he’s messing around. But then the wheezing starts.

Bronwyn’s on her feet first, then kneeling beside him. Simon, she says, shaking his shoulder. Are you okay? What happened? Can you talk? Her voice goes from concerned to panicky, and that’s enough to get me moving. But Nate’s faster, shoving past me and crouching next to Bronwyn.

A pen, he says, his eyes scanning Simon’s brick-red face. You have a pen? Simon nods wildly, his hand clawing at his throat. I grab the pen off my desk and try to hand it to Nate, thinking he’s about to do an emergency tracheotomy or something. Nate just stares at me like I have two heads. "An epinephrine pen, he says, searching for Simon’s backpack. He’s having an allergic reaction."

Addy stands and wraps her arms around her body, not saying a word. Bronwyn turns to me, face flushed. I’m going to find a teacher and call nine-one-one. Stay with him, okay? She grabs her phone out of Mr. Avery’s drawer and runs into the hallway.

I kneel next to Simon. His eyes are bugging out of his head, his lips are blue, and he’s making horrible choking noises. Nate dumps the entire contents of Simon’s backpack on the floor and scrabbles through the mess of books, papers, and clothes. Simon, where do you keep it? he asks, tearing open the small front compartment and yanking out two regular pens and a set of keys.

Simon’s way past talking, though. I put one sweaty palm on his shoulder, like that’ll do any good. You’re okay, you’re gonna be okay. We’re gettin’ help. I can hear my voice slowing, thickening like molasses. My accent always comes out hard when I’m stressed. I turn to Nate and ask, You sure he’s not chokin’ on somethin’? Maybe he needs the Heimlich maneuver, not a freaking medical pen.

Nate ignores me, tossing Simon’s empty backpack aside. Fuck! he yells, slamming a fist on the floor. Do you keep it on you, Simon? Simon! Simon’s eyes roll back in his head as Nate digs around in Simon’s pockets. But he doesn’t find anything except a wrinkled Kleenex.

Sirens blare in the distance as Mr. Avery and two other teachers race in with Bronwyn trailing behind them on her phone. We can’t find his EpiPen, Nate says tersely, gesturing to the pile of Simon’s things.

Mr. Avery stares at Simon in slack-jawed horror for a second, then turns to me. "Cooper, the nurse’s office has EpiPens. They should be labeled in plain sight. Hurry!"

I run into the hallway, hearing footsteps behind me that fade as I quickly reach the back stairwell and yank the door open. I take the stairs three at a time until I’m on the first floor, and weave through a few straggling students until I get to the nurse’s office. The door’s ajar, but nobody’s there.

It’s a cramped little space with the exam table up against the windows and a big gray storage cabinet looming to my left. I scan the room, my eyes landing on two wall-mounted white boxes with red block lettering. One reads EMERGENCY DEFIBRILLATOR, the other EMERGENCY EPINEPHRINE. I fumble at the latch on the second one and pull it open.

There’s nothing inside.

I open the other box, which has a plastic device with a picture of a heart. I’m pretty sure that’s not it, so I start rummaging through the gray storage cabinet, pulling out boxes of bandages and aspirin. I don’t see anything that looks like a pen.

Cooper, did you find them? Ms. Grayson, one of the teachers who’d entered the lab with Mr. Avery and Bronwyn, barrels into the room. She’s panting hard and clutching her side.

I gesture toward the empty wall-mounted box. They should be there, right? But they’re not.

Check the supply cabinet, Ms. Grayson says, ignoring the Band-Aid boxes scattered across the floor that prove I’ve already tried. Another teacher joins us, and we tear the office apart as the sound of sirens gets closer. When we’ve opened the last cabinet, Ms. Grayson wipes a trickle of sweat from her forehead with the back of her hand. Cooper, let Mr. Avery know we haven’t found anything yet. Mr. Contos and I will keep looking.

I get to Mr. Avery’s lab the same time the paramedics do. There are three of them in navy uniforms, two pushing a long white stretcher, one racing ahead to clear the small crowd that’s gathered around the door. I wait until they’re all inside and slip in behind them. Mr. Avery’s slumped next to the chalkboard, his yellow dress shirt untucked. We couldn’t find the pens, I tell him.

He runs a shaking hand through his thin white hair as one of the paramedics stabs Simon with a syringe and the other two lift him onto the stretcher. God help that boy, he whispers. More to himself than to me, I think.

Addy’s standing off to the side by herself, tears rolling down her cheeks. I cross over to her and put an arm around her shoulders as the paramedics maneuver Simon’s stretcher into the hallway. Can you come along? one asks Mr. Avery. He nods and follows, leaving the room empty except for a few shell-shocked teachers and the four of us who started detention with Simon.

Barely fifteen minutes ago, by my guess, but it feels like hours.

Is he okay now? Addy asks in a strangled voice. Bronwyn clasps her phone between her palms like she’s using it to pray. Nate stands with his hands on his hips, staring at the door as more teachers and students start trickling inside.

I’m gonna go out on a limb and say no, he says.

Chapter Two.

Addy

Monday, September 24, 3:25 p.m.

Bronwyn, Nate, and Cooper are all talking to the teachers, but I can’t. I need Jake. I pull my phone out of my bag to text him but my hands are shaking too bad. So I call instead.

Baby? He picks up on the second ring, sounding surprised. We’re not big callers. None of our friends are. Sometimes when I’m with Jake and his phone rings, he holds it up and jokes, What does ‘incoming call’ mean? It’s usually his mom.

Jake is all I can get out before I start bawling. Cooper’s arm is still around my shoulders, and it’s the only thing keeping me up. I’m crying too hard to talk, and Cooper takes the phone from me.

Hey, man. ’S Cooper, he says, his accent thicker than normal. Where you at? He listens for a few seconds. Can you meet us outside? There’s been…Somethin’ happened. Addy’s real upset. Naw, she’s fine, but…Simon Kelleher got hurt bad in detention. Ambulance took him an’ we dunno if he’s gon’ be okay. Cooper’s words melt into one another like ice cream, and I can hardly understand him.

Bronwyn turns to the closest teacher, Ms. Grayson. Should we stay? Do you need us?

Ms. Grayson’s hands flutter around her throat. Goodness, I don’t suppose so. You told the paramedics everything? Simon…took a drink of water and collapsed? Bronwyn and Cooper both nod. It’s so strange. He has a peanut allergy, of course, but…you’re sure he didn’t eat anything?

Cooper gives me my phone and runs a hand through his neatly cropped sandy hair. I don’t think so. He just drank a cup of water an’ fell over.

Maybe it was something he had with lunch, Ms. Grayson says. It’s possible he had a delayed reaction. She looks around the room, her eyes settling on Simon’s discarded cup on the floor. I suppose we should put this aside, she says, brushing past Bronwyn to pick it up. Somebody might want to look at it.

I want to go, I burst out, swiping at the tears on my cheeks. I can’t stand being in this room another second.

Okay if I help her? Cooper asks, and Ms. Grayson nods. Should I come back?

No, that’s all right, Cooper. I’m sure they’ll call you if they need you. Go home and try to get back to normal. Simon’s in good hands now. She leans in a little closer, her tone softening. I am so sorry. That must have been awful.

She’s mostly looking at Cooper, though. There’s not a female teacher at Bayview who can resist his all-American charm.

Cooper keeps an arm around me on the way out. It’s nice. I don’t have brothers, but if I did, I imagine this is how they’d prop you up when you felt sick. Jake wouldn’t like most of his friends being this close to me, but Cooper’s fine. He’s a gentleman. I lean into him as we pass posters for last week’s homecoming dance that haven’t been taken down yet. Cooper pushes the front door open, and there, thank God, is Jake.

I collapse into his arms, and for a second, everything’s okay. I’ll never forget seeing Jake for the first time, freshman year: he had a mouth full of braces and hadn’t gotten tall or broad-shouldered yet, but I took one look at his dimples and summer sky–blue eyes and knew. He was the one for me. It’s just a bonus he turned out beautiful.

He strokes my hair while Cooper explains in a low voice what happened. God, Ads, Jake says. That’s awful. Let’s get you home.

Cooper leaves on his own, and I’m suddenly sorry I didn’t do more for him. I can tell by his voice he’s as freaked out as I am, just hiding it better. But Cooper’s so golden, he can handle anything. His girlfriend, Keely, is one of my best friends, and the kind of girl who does everything right. She’ll know exactly how to help. Way better than me.

I settle myself into Jake’s car and watch the town blur past as he drives a little too fast. I live only a mile from school, and the drive is short, but I’m bracing myself for my mother’s reaction because I’m positive she’ll have heard. Her communication channels are mysterious but foolproof, and sure enough she’s standing on our front porch as Jake pulls into the driveway. I can read her mood even though the Botox froze her expressions long ago.

I wait until Jake opens my door to climb out of the car, fitting myself under his arm like always. My older sister, Ashton, likes to joke that I’m one of those barnacles that would die without its host. It’s not actually so funny.

Adelaide! My mother’s concern is theatrical. She stretches out a hand as we make our way up the steps and strokes my free arm. Tell me what happened.

I don’t want to. Especially not with Mom’s boyfriend lurking in the doorway behind her, pretending his curiosity is actual concern. Justin is twelve years younger than my mother, which makes him five years younger than her second husband, and fifteen years younger than my dad. At the rate she’s going, she’ll date Jake next.

It’s fine, I mutter, ducking past them. I’m fine.

Hey, Mrs. Calloway, Jake says. Mom uses her second husband’s last name, not my dad’s. I’m going to take Addy to her room. The whole thing was awful. I can tell you about it after I get her settled. It always amazes me how Jake talks to my mother, like they’re peers.

And she lets him get away with it. Likes it. Of course, she simpers.

My mother thinks Jake’s too good for me. She’s been telling me that since sophomore year when he got super hot and I stayed the same. Mom used to enter Ashton and me into beauty pageants when we were little, always with the same results for both of us: second runner-up. Homecoming princess, not queen. Not bad, but not good enough to attract and keep the kind of man who can take care of you for life.

I’m not sure if that’s ever been stated as a goal or anything, but it’s what we’re supposed to do. My mother failed. Ashton’s failing in her two-year marriage with a husband who’s dropped out of law school and barely spends any time with her. Something about the Prentiss girls doesn’t stick.

Sorry, I murmur to Jake as we head upstairs. I didn’t handle this well. You should’ve seen Bronwyn and Cooper. They were great. And Nate—my God. I never thought I’d see Nate Macauley take charge that way. I was the only one who was useless.

Shhh, don’t talk like that, Jake says into my hair. It’s not true.

He says it with a note of finality, because he refuses to see anything but the best in me. If that ever changed, I honestly don’t know what I’d do.

Nate

Monday, September 24, 4:00 p.m.

When Bronwyn and I get to the parking lot it’s nearly empty, and we hesitate once we’re outside the door. I’ve known Bronwyn since kindergarten, give or take a few middle-school years, but we don’t exactly hang out. Still, it’s not weird having her next to me. Almost comfortable after that disaster upstairs.

She looks around like she just woke up. I didn’t drive, she mutters. "I was supposed to get a ride. To Epoch Coffee." Something about the way she says it sounds significant, as if there’s more to the story she’s not sharing.

I have business to transact, but now probably isn’t the time. You want a ride?

Bronwyn follows my gaze to my motorcycle. Seriously? I wouldn’t get on that deathtrap if you paid me. Do you know the fatality rates? They’re no joke. She looks ready to pull out a spread sheet and show me.

Suit yourself. I should leave her and go home, but I’m not ready to face that yet. I lean against the building and pull a flask of Jim Beam out of my jacket pocket, unscrewing the top and holding it toward Bronwyn. Drink?

She folds her arms tightly across her chest. Are you kidding? That’s your brilliant idea before climbing onto your machine of destruction? And on school property?

You’re a lot of fun, you know that? I don’t actually drink much; I’d grabbed the flask from my father this morning and forgotten about it. But there’s something satisfying about annoying Bronwyn.

I’m about to put it back in my pocket when Bronwyn furrows her brow and holds out her hand. What the hell. She slumps against the redbrick wall beside me, inching down until she’s sitting on the ground. For some reason I flash back to elementary school, when Bronwyn and I went to the same Catholic school. Before life went completely to hell. All the girls wore plaid uniform skirts, and she’s got a similar skirt on now that hikes up her thighs as she crosses her ankles. The view’s not bad.

She drinks for a surprisingly long time. What. Just. Happened?

I sit next to her and take the flask, putting it on the ground between us. I have no idea.

He looked like he was going to die. Bronwyn’s hand shakes so hard when she picks up the flask again that it clatters against the ground. Don’t you think?

Yeah, I say as Bronwyn takes another swig and makes a face.

Poor Cooper, she says. He sounded like he left Ole Miss yesterday. He always gets that way when he’s nervous.

I wouldn’t know. But what’s-her-name was useless.

Addy. Bronwyn’s shoulder briefly nudges mine. You should know her name.

Why? I can’t think of

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