At Swim, Two Boys
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Jim Mack is a naïve young scholar and the son of a foolish, aspiring shopkeeper. Doyler Doyle is the rough-diamond son—revolutionary and blasphemous—of Mr. Mack’s old army pal. Out at the Forty Foot, that great jut of rock where gentlemen bathe in the nude, the two boys make a pact: Doyler will teach Jim to swim, and in a year, on Easter of 1916, they will swim to the distant beacon of Muglins Rock and claim that island for themselves. All the while Mr. Mack, who has grand plans for a corner shop empire, remains unaware of the depth of the boys’ burgeoning friendship and of the changing landscape of a nation.
Set during the year preceding the Easter Uprising of 1916—Ireland’s brave but fractured revolt against British rule—At Swim, Two Boys is a tender, tragic love story and a brilliant depiction of people caught in the tide of history. Powerful and artful, and ten years in the writing, it is a masterwork from Jamie O’Neill.
Jamie O'Neill
Raised in County Dublin, Jamie O'Neill is the author of Kilbrack and At Swim, Two Boys, which won the Ferro-Grumley Award for Fiction and the Lambda Literary Award in Gay Men's Fiction. He lives in Galway, Ireland.
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Readers find this title to be a windy and captivating journey. Despite some passages that may be confusing and a slow learning curve, the book is described as absolutely magnificent and astounding. The Irish charm may take some getting used to, but the language and storytelling guide readers through a journey of love, brotherhood, redemption, and freedom. Overall, the book is described as captivating and wonderful.
- Rating: 5 out of 5 stars5/5An exquisitely written novel set in Ireland in 1915-1916. Although the writing and the Irish rhythms of the dialogue do take some time to get used to, it is well worth the initial effort. Jim Mack is an appealing main character, a shy young catholic boy with a good heart who comes into his own during the course of the novel. Doyler Doyle is a poor, rough lad of the same age, patriotic and determined to fight for Ireland. The character of MacMurrough was interesting, an older man who comes off at first as a sexual predator and one perhaps suffering from schizophrenia, but by the end of the book a much more complex and sympathetic person. I really enjoyed the passages with Jim's father Mr. Mack, a slightly dim but proud man struggling to better himself and his family. By the end you find he has a great heart -- I loved that he went to visit his former friend, Doyler's father; it was one of my favorite parts of the book. My poor description doesn't do justice to this work of literature, I'm afraid. But it's the best book I've read this year.
- Rating: 5 out of 5 stars5/5I don’t think that I’ve ever read anything like this and i don’t think that i ever will. Can’t put into words what it’s about and what it made me feel. Astounding and captivating to say the least.
- Rating: 4 out of 5 stars4/5Plot summarySet in Dublin before and during the 1916 Easter Rising, At Swim, Two Boys tells the love story of two young Irish men: Jim Mack and Doyler Doyle. Jim goes to school on a scholarship (for which he is looked down upon) – he is quiet, studious, thoughtful, and naïve. In contrast, Doyler is outspoken, rebellious, brave, and affectionate. Doyler might once have received a scholarship, like Jim, but Doyler withdrew from school to find work and support his impoverished family, leading the pair to grow apart. They have an additional connection through their fathers, who served in the army together during the Boer War, and were once best friends.Events of 1915Jim attends a Catholic school, regularly attends church, and plays in the school's flute band, where he is the object of his Latin teacher's obsession. Brother Polycarp likes to have extra prayer sessions with him alone, during which Jim is subject to mild sexual pawing whose nature he does not understand; Jim reminds Polycarp of his own past. Unbeknown to his father, Jim is offered the chance of a vocation to join the brothers of the church. When Doyler joins the flute band, their old friendship is renewed. Doyler takes Jim out to the Forty Foot a well known swimming area in Dublin Bay for a swim. The two boys make a pact: Doyler will teach Jim to swim, and in a year, on Easter Sunday, 1916, they will swim to the distant island of Muglins Rock and claim it for themselves. As their friendship grows, Jim reconsiders his vocation, ultimately refusing; Brother Polycarp is emotionally stricken and has to resign. Meanwhile, patriots appear on the novel's stage: Madame Eveline MacMurrough continues to support the idea of Ireland's liberty. The clergy also supports the patriotic body of thought, in particular, Father Amen O'Toiler – who pushes the boys church's flute band to resemble a regimental band. Even Jim's father, Mr. Mack, who is proud having served as a soldier in an Irish Battalion, is swollen with pride for the boys in MacMurrough's garden, seeing them all in uniform kilts.Only Anthony MacMurrough, the nephew of Eveline MacMurrough, turns away from their politics. After his return from imprisonment in England, for acts of gross indecency, his nationalist aunt Eveline MacMurrough is determined to redeem his reputation through a prosperous marriage. In a garden party, Eveline MacMurrough introduces him to Irish society, pushing him to follow her patriotic ideals. However, MacMurrough is still caught up in his memories of imprisonment, conversing with the internal voice of his dead prison-mate, Scrotes, on the fate of homosexuals.In the meantime, Doyler works to help support his family, which has been driven to poverty by Mr. Doyle's alcoholism and illness. Doyler accepts payment from MacMurrough in return for sexual favours. Although Doyler is depicted as accepting his own sexuality, his response to the older man is ambiguous and ultimately MacMurrough fails to attract the boy. Doyler, being a vehement Socialist and outcast from the society of his home community, leaves home and joins the Irish Citizen Army at Dublin.Events of 1916Jim, bereft of the pal of his heart Doyler, befriends MacMurrough, who becomes a mentor to Jim, teaching about swimming as well as homosexuality and philosophy. MacMurrough finds that he is unable to rid himself of his fascination with the two boys, their relationship and their pact to swim to the Muglins and claim them for Ireland. The night before Easter Sunday, Doyler leaves his duties as army member and visits Jim. They renew their pact, confessing their love for each other. The next morning, Easter Sunday, Jim and Doyler successfully swim to the Muglins. Not only do they claim the islands with an Irish green flag, but they also make love to one another. On their swim back to the Forty Foot, as Doyler is close to drowning, MacMurrough rescues both of them.While Doyler rests and recovers at MacMurrough's house, Jim feels responsible for the duties his friend cannot carry out. As the Easter Rising takes place, Jim grabs the uniform of Doyler and joins the fighting for the Irish Volunteers at Dublin downtown. Meanwhile, MacMurrough does not realize Jim's action.When Doyler discovers what Jim has done, both Doyler and MacMurrough go searching for Jim. As they approach downtown Dublin where the fighting is occurring, Doyler sees Jim standing in the open. Just as the two are about to be reunited, Doyler is himself fatally wounded.CharactersJim is the son of shopkeeper Mr. Mack, who runs a small shop for everyday people's needs at Glasthule, close to Dublin. Jim is depicted as a naïve scholar boy and has a shy appearance:[4] Jim Mack is worried about self-abuse and going to hell as he tries to obey to rules of church. He responds to the more experienced Doyler with friendship, which turns to love – possibly even desire, but recoils from Doyler's movements towards intimacy; he would love to kiss his friend, but cannot. Despite his naivete and inhibitions, he has a clear mind, sharp ideas and thoughts. He sees the pact with Doyler to swim to the Muglins as a symbol of their union, their very own experience which no one can take from them.Doyler is the rough diamond son of Mr. Doyle, who is Mr. Mack's old army pal. Doyler has grown up in poverty, hence he already knows quite a lot about life and is in no way naïve. Doyler used to be Jim's friend when they were about twelve, but Doyler left town for some time looking for work and his Irish roots . As Doyler returns, and the story unfolds, Jim and Doyler are both aged 15 to 16 years old. Doyler is sympathetic to the Irish workers front and later joins the Irish Citizen Army.Madame Eveline MacMurrough is depicted as the daughter of a republican figure famous in the history of the local patriotic movement. In the name of Ireland she supports the troops at the Western Front with socks to warm the soldiers' feet, and organizes a garden party to enliven the patriotism of the local society and to support its clubs. Finally, she even backs the Republicans by providing them with weapons for the Easter Rising.Anthony MacMurrough is the nephew of Eveline MacMurrough. Jim calls him McEmm as the story develops. Prior to the novel's action, MacMurrough has served a prison sentence in England of two years' hard labour for acts of gross indecency with a chauffeur-mechanic boy. As he returns to Ireland, his previous cellmate Scrotes follows in his mind, providing an internal ghostly friend, supporting the soliloquizing of MacMurrough. He stays at the home of his nationalist aunt Eveline MacMurrough, who pushes him to become a patriotic Irishman, mentoring and leading the young, and, in her imagination, eventually marrying. MacMurrough conforms to some degree but recognises his homosexuality as a permanent character trait. It is only when he becomes a mentor to Jim and Doyler individually, teaching them about swimming as well as homosexuality and philosophy, that he finds some degree of personal fulfilment.From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia
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- Rating: 3 out of 5 stars3/5I found the first third of this book quite difficult, as I don't have any Catholic or Christian background, nor any particular interest in Ireland. The former meant that many of the purportedly meaningful or symbolic elements just passed me by, while the latter made the frequent exposition on Irish independence irritating and the political motivations of the characters hard to connect to. McMurrough was a selfish bore, his aunt was a self-righteous bore and Jim's father was just a bore. The exceptions were the two protagonists, Doyler Doyle, whose youthful socialism I could at least understand and relate to, and Jim, who was a sensitively drawn character who developed throughout the story.
The middle third is dominated by the story of Jim and Doyler, so I enjoyed it much more. The final third gets a bit preposterous, and it still isn't clear why Irish independence is important.
The writing throughout is somewhat pretentious, with the rather clumsy use of a very highbrow vocabulary. At least some of O'Neill's use of words I wasn't familiar with didn't seem appropriate when I looked the words up in the Oxford English Dictionary. There are excellent sections, however, and I would describe this as a promising novel, but well short of a masterpiece. - Rating: 5 out of 5 stars5/5Once you get past all the Irish charm, you will be engulfed by the essence of this book and it will stay with you for a long time to come.
The language may be hard to process at first. But Jamie O'Neill doesn't just TELL a story, like a seasoned wordsmith he guides us through a journey. A journey of love, brotherhood, redemption and freedom. We are taught to experience every thought and action of the protagonists. And how wonderful it was!2 people found this helpful
- Rating: 3 out of 5 stars3/5I really wanted to like Jamie O'Neill's "At Swim, Two Boys" more than I did. I can't really put on my finger on why this was such a slog for me -- perhaps it was just that I didn't particularly care for most of the characters (with the exception of MacMurrough, who was interesting enough to keep me pushing on to see what would happen to him.) Set in Ireland in 1915, O'Neill's book is populated with gay men in the hidden places you'd find them in those times-- from creepy priest to young boys secretly in love. MacMurrough is now an ex-con, due to his predilections and now has an aunt that is hoping to somehow reform him. McMurrough changes but not the ways his aunt hopes, of course.I liked the story as it revolved around the characters' faith (or lack of it) but overall just didn't find this to be something that I was inspired to pick up and read. This was a hard one for me to rate, so I'm sticking with three stars at this point.
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- Rating: 2 out of 5 stars2/5Here is a book I wanted to like more than I did.
Don't get me wrong, At Swim, Two Boys has some stunning lines that I could already imagine on a million tumblr edits. There was a lot of potential here and it hits a market that I think is highly lacking in literature (I'm talking historical queer romance). But...
But.
Okay so first off, this is a hard book to read. The writing is, in many ways, very sophisticated and so it takes a while to get into the rhythm of it. It's stream-of-consciousness and flips between characters without hesitation. Plus, it's Irish and full of slang and such that I am entirely unfamiliar with. So the first 50 pages or so are rough, but then things start to get easier.
Second, I didn't care for, uhhhhhhhhh, about 50% of the story. I liked Doyler and Jim. I cared about Doyler and Jim. Everything else was background, and I found myself zoning out for page after page when it wasn't focused on them.
Third, okay, the romance was pretty good. It wasn't an idealized romance: it was rough and messy and felt very real and very era-appropriate. It was sweet and sad and fulfilling and I quite enjoyed that.
And fourth.... the ending was horrible.
H o r r i b l e.
It's the kind of ending you know is going to happen because you're not an idiot, but you're hoping the author has the guts to do something different, but he doesn't. He gives you exactly what you think he'll give you, and it's entirely unsatisfying. Yawn.
500 pages that should have been 200.
And that's that. - Rating: 5 out of 5 stars5/5I don't know what to say about this unforgettable book: beautiful; magnificent; heart wrenching; breathtaking. Everything about it is wonderful and as soon as I finished it I wanted to start reading it all over again. What I can say is that in all the many many years I've been reading, this is by far the best book I have read and if I could never have another book then I'd be happy so long as I had this to read.
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- Rating: 5 out of 5 stars5/5I think I have to start over again from page one. Absolutely magnificent.
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- Rating: 4 out of 5 stars4/5Normalmente , prefiero no leer historias trágicas , es decir , libros de este estilo que te dejan un sabor amargo cuando lo terminás ... pero At Swim , two Boys , lo empecé (con reservas) y no pude dejarlo hasta el final .
Excelente. Casi .
“Listen to me. When you’d touch me, I won’t be jumping, I won’t be startled, won’t hardly show if I felt it even.’
‘What about it?’
‘I’m just thinking that would be pleasant. To be reading, say, out of a book, and you to come up and touch me – my neck, say, or my knee – and I’d carry on reading, I might let a smile, no more, wouldn’t lose my place on the page. It would be pleasant to come to that. We’d come so close, do you see, that I wouldn’t be surprised out of myself every time you touched.’” - Rating: 4 out of 5 stars4/5Oy, so you know starting a book like this that it is not going to be a happy book. Or not a completely happy book, anyway. There are passages that I never did figure the purpose of, and long stretches that drag, and a slow learning curve while you figure out the WW1 Irish slang and syntax. But then this is literary fiction, and there's no formula to follow. This novel is windy and twists and turns from the beginning to the end, and if you've gotten used to skimming quickly to the end, don't, because this book isn't about the ending at all. No happy ever after or big climax awaits on the last page, the wonder in this story is all to be found in the journey. And I would like to add a bit about authors who know how to use words and even put them together to form beautiful sentences and paragraphs.
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- Rating: 5 out of 5 stars5/5What a beautiful book altogether. Every character is perfectly drawn, set and completed in this excellent novel. Call it gay lit, or Irish literature, a bildungsroman, or a historical novel, it is Literature with the big "L". It explores the nature of love, of patriotism, of honor, of family, of history, within the context of the Irish independence movement, just before the doomed Rising of Easter Monday, 1916. It ends as you know all along it will, and though it's hard to accept, it's quite right, too. The language is so lovely, I wanted to roll around in it the way a cat rolls in nip.
- Rating: 5 out of 5 stars5/5We don't have an equivalent word to "virtuoso" for someone with superior skill with language, do we? Because that's what At Swim, Two Boys is: a virtuoso literary performance. O'Neill seems to understand and experience language on a higher level than the rest of us. He sees how sentences and words fit together, and he tweaks them into combinations startlingly both unexpected and inevitable. O'Neill's prose is all about sound, and his book is all about story. And that's what's so remarkable about At Swim, Two Boys--it is at once a pitch perfect exercise in masterful language art and an engaging story populated with the sorts of characters who I am certain I will find myself thinking about at odd moments for years. Language never trumps story and story never trumps language; they are finely intertwined, with each word, each sentence, each character, each event displaying the same care in their crafting. The comparison to Joyce feels inescapable, but O'Neill's prose resists being described as language play and there's nothing clever about the book. I felt when I was reading it that O'Neill had a story to tell and he told it in the way he knew how. And that way is beautiful. I never got the feeling, as I so often do with Joyce, that he was sniggering quietly to himself because he expected me not to get the joke--or even that there was a joke to begin with.
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- Rating: 5 out of 5 stars5/5The best book I have read in a long time.
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- Rating: 5 out of 5 stars5/5Highly recommended. This is my favorite queer novel of the Oughts so far. What I love even more is its mash-up with revolutionary fiction and Dickensian characters. The characters: like the father and Aunt of the main character are hilarious and so believable. This book broke my heart and even though its pretty long I didn't want it to end.
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- Rating: 5 out of 5 stars5/5I bought this on the recommendation of some of my flist waaaay back in February or March, I believe. It is the story of two young men, Jim and Doyler, friends and eventual lovers, in Dublin 1916. It sat on my bookshelf, patiently waiting for me to get to it. I wanted to be able to give it the attention it deserved, and had been warned that the dialect would be difficult... thus figured I wouldn't be able to bring it to work and truly concentrate on it the way I needed to. It isn't so much a dialect thing, I discovered, as a cadence to the words... a lovely dance that the writer twirls and spins across the floor. I found the book slow-going at first. Partially because it takes a few chapters to find the rhythm of the words, and partially because the tale focuses at first on Jim's father and Jim's gone-to-war brother. It doesn't take long for Doyler to enter the picture, though, and I found myself cursing when a "Mr. Mack" section of the book took the focus off Jim/Doyler. But I then found myself drawn so much into the story that all of the characters meant something. They were all real, all three-dimensional, all with foibles and joys and vanities and pleasures and I could identify with each of them. And -- this is kind of hard to explain -- with each chapter you could see the growth of the characters as they learned from each other. Everything weaved together seamlessly. Mr. Mack, in particular, really spoke to me. In a world populated by those who pay lip-service to love, devotion, piety and honesty, it is Mr. Mack, outwardly so concerned with appearances and rising above his station, who proves to be a Good Man. It is his nature.The ending gutted me.(Reviewed October 2004)
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- Rating: 5 out of 5 stars5/5Gay City Staff Pick: Stunning book set in turn of the century Ireland. Beautiful, poetic prose about two boys budding friendship/relationship on the backdrop of a war.
- Rating: 3 out of 5 stars3/5This was not what I was quite expecting. The first page almost put me off until I realized it was Irish jargon filling up the page that was confounding me. On top of the confusing terms, the language is very lyrical so for a while there I simply gaped at what I had picked up. This was written in 2002 but it doesn't seem like that. It seems rather that it was written then, in 1916. After a few pages you get used to the expressions and figure out what most of them mean. And while the three leads in this book are gay the story hardly focuses its attention on that; there is much more history here. I know hardly anything of the Irish or their revolt against the British so that also made the reading slow and a little tedious. Really, I needed to know a little before this book because some of it was very confusing for me. The one thing here was that I was only really interested in Jim, Doyler and MacMurrough so the other secondary characters were more of an intrusion for me. I feel like I should come back and reread this again in a few years when I can take it more slowly and appreciate all aspects. There is too much too get in one reading. Paying attention to one thing and you miss all these other aspects. It's a book that deserves a reread. It's a wonderful book, I can see that. Only at this time in my current mood it was too high a reach and I feel I only got part of the story. It took ten years for O'Niell to write this and I can see why. There is much to ponder here, and I will be back, I'm sure, to try to grasp those I missed this time.
- Rating: 2 out of 5 stars2/5Although the Irish aspect of this book was interesting, I don't enjoy the homosexual genre. If you do, its worth the read.
- Rating: 5 out of 5 stars5/5The year is 1916, the place Dublin, and two young boys, one the son of a shopkeeper, the other a rough street boy. Watching over the two boys is a young self-centred man of the privileged class.The two boys, Jim and Doyler were school friends before Doyler left school and moved away, and Doyler has a very soft spot for Jim. When Doyler returns and meets up again with Jim, still at school, he offers to teach him to swim out at the Forty Foot, a large rock where gentlemen bathe without the benefit of any costume. They make a pact that within the year they will swim to the distant Muglins Rock. At the same time Ireland is tied up in its troubles, with war raging in Europe and the rumblings of the battle for the countries independence, the two boys cannot remain unaffected.But very much involved in the destiny of the two boys is Anthony MacMurrough, the nephew of a well to do Irish family, fresh out of a stint spent at his majesties pleasure in England for his illicit activities with another young man. Seemingly self centred and led by his inclinations, he strikes up a 'relationship' with Doyler, paying him for his services, and even trying to improve the young man, but Doyler is not to be one over, and even warns MacMurrough not to lay a finger on Jim. Yet in Doyler's absence MacMurrough watches over Jim, even makes sacrifices for him, and teaches his to swim.Providing light relief to the proceedings is Jim's bumbling father, Mr Mack, the aspiring shopkeeper who somehow unfailing manages never to get it quite right.At Swim Two Boys is a hauntingly beautiful story. It is told in turn from the perspective of the various main protagonists, and the style of writing changes accordingly. The relationship between the two boys is most touching; street wise Doyler longing for intimacy with the naive and innocent Jim, but unsure of Jim's inclinations. By contrast Doyler gives MacMurrough whatever he wants, and receives recompense in return. Yet through it all it is perhaps MacMurrough who grows the most, and his loyal attachment to Jim may be the making of him. A deep and most pleasurable read, highly recommended.
- Rating: 5 out of 5 stars5/5Within, despite, and because of the political unrest in Ireland which culminates in the Easter Uprising of 1916, Jim Mack and Doyler Doyle are drawn together as teenagers to revive a childhood friendship. Doyle's swimming lessons for Jim and the strong attachments that arise between them are two of the few constants in their lives otherwise marked by upheaval, uncertainty, violence, and marginalization. At Swim, Two Boys is a gay coming of age story, but it also exceeds either the genre of romance or bildungsroman by the political anxiety unfolding behind the boys that makes clear this is not only their story but that of their country and history.It is a story about going for broke for the sake of passion, the relative satisfactions of safety versus recklessness, and how to decide where to moor one's convictions and stabilities in a world without much solid ground. As we see the life of every character disrupted by the political build-up to the uprising, questions of loyalty and love themselves take on a dual meaning between the private and public spheres, between constructions of family and of patriotism.
- Rating: 5 out of 5 stars5/5I had mixed feelings about this book, because I’m just the sort of person who prefers to find books on my own whether it’s gay fiction or not. To read and research them beforehand and decide if I wish to read them. This was a gift to me by a very old and dear Irish friend who absolutely loved it. For him, more than for the book itself, I read it. I am infinitely glad I did.“At Swim, Two Boys” was brilliant in providing a setting and mood of this period in Irish history, and the bittersweet aspect of love, obligation, and the helplessness one feels towards perceived inevitability. Though some readers laboured with portions of the dialect, since I’m quite used to hearing it from the above friend, it wasn’t a problem for me.My conclusion towards it reflects some of my own feelings about my writing, which can contain difficult subjects. Just like in life, even when the most horrible and unthinkable happens, is one suppose to lament eternally in a way others think proper, or will you write it as you’ve experienced and/or observed? Whether a reader identifies with your way of writing your story, shouldn’t keep you from writing the way you see fit. I think Jamie O’Neill did that exceptionally well. An outstanding example of thought-provoking fiction, not just gay fiction.Note: I was fortunate to have a first edition local printing, as some have remarked the changes made to later editions.Originally posted at my review site Flying With Red Haircrow.
- Rating: 5 out of 5 stars5/5One of the most beautiful love stories I've ever read, set against the Irish rebellion in the beginning of the last century.
- Rating: 5 out of 5 stars5/5Extraordinary. Inspired me to write. I read that this book took about 10 years to write. So I'm hoping a new one from Mr. O'Neill will be coming soon.
- Rating: 5 out of 5 stars5/5This is a book that exploits all the clichés of bad Irish fiction - an historical novel set in Dublin in 1915-16 with passages of pastiche Joyce and Flann O'Brien, generous doses of nationalism, abusive priests, grinding poverty, alcohol, supercilious English officers, the Easter rising, and plenty of wet weather. It's also a gay coming-of-age novel with lashings of Platonic dialogues, Reading Gaolery, and Edward-Carpentry for beginners. And it's endlessly long. It should be absolutely awful, but O'Neill somehow or other manages to put these hackneyed bits together in original ways, and tells the whole thing with so much style and confidence that it is all rather fun in the end.
- Rating: 2 out of 5 stars2/5Anthony MacMurrough grooms and sexually abuses a number of boys.
- Rating: 4 out of 5 stars4/5If ever there were a book completely unlike anything that I would usually enjoy reading, this would probably be it. That being said I am remarkably surprised that I can't say that I hated the story. Primarily this is a book about an Irish uprising against the British rule at the beginning of WWI (from what I gather, I may have gathered incorrectly). The story is told from the points of view of a number of different people from an Irish shopkeeper who supports the English regency, to an older woman who supports the revolution. In particular the story centers on two 16 year old boys from different classes and backgrounds who form an extraordinary friendship based on love and trust. One of the boys, Jim Mack, is the son of a shopkeeper, a scholarship student and prone to flights of fancy, easily carried outside himself by the words and actions of others. The second boy, Doyler is a citizens soldier in the making, dedicated to the freedom of the working class and self-appointed socialist. Together they make a pact to swim to the Muglins on Easter, a risky proposition which becomes the crux of their dedication to each other.I picked up this story based on the description which basically indicated this is a coming of age type story of two boys (as I guess I have also, because this is the part of the book which touched me the most). However, there is much more to it. It is a story of politics and beliefs during wartime and of people trying to find a place for themselves and someone to care for them. I found the book very hard to read, part of this is because I don't enjoy conflict and am not fond of war stories. However, it was the Irish dialect and slang itself that made the reading of the book so confusing to me, especially in the beginning. Not only were the characters words confusing, but the narrative and setting descriptions themselves were all written in this manner. It was hard work to get through, but certainly worth the effort. I came to care about the story and very much for the characters of Jim, Doyle, and especially MacMurrough. Despite his rocky and necessarily confused introduction into the tale, it was he I empathized with the most for his relationship with Jim and Doyle and for his own personal demons and tragedies.Knowing for truth now what this book is I can honestly say had I understood what the book was about I would never have picked it up, but even still I cannot say at all that I regret having read it. It is one that will stay on my mind for some time to come, if not only for the sweet quote, "pal o' me heart" which will always remind me.
- Rating: 4 out of 5 stars4/5Very well written. Especially enjoyable for those interested in Irish history. The first chapter didn't lure me in, but after chapter two I was hooked.
- Rating: 4 out of 5 stars4/5This very Irish novel was a sometimes frustrating, but ultimately wonderful book to read. The combination of a luscious prose style and interesting love story combined to provide for an enjoyable experience for this reader. The main characters came alive over the course of this long novel. However, both the difficulties I had with the dialect and confusion over the events (not being that expert in Irish history of the World War I era) detracted from my overall enjoyment. At the heart of the novel is the love of two boys, Jim and Doyler, for each other and, for me, the particularly moving relationship of Jim with his father, Mr. Mack. I was at another disadvantage in my ignorance of Catholicism which also impeded my appreciation of the story.Nonetheless the book captured me as I'm sure it has other readers, for the passion of the characters and their language was truly inspiring.
- Rating: 4 out of 5 stars4/5I enjoyed parts of this book very much. O'Neill does a brilliant job of unfolding the relationships between people and letting them grow and contract in a very natural way. I read several of the scenes (no, not just the racy ones) two or three times because they were so beautifully laid out.It was a little hard to understand at times, not because of the dialect ('tis very Irish, so it is--if you like the lilt of Frank McCourt's 'Tis you'll love this) but because of the author's style. Incomplete sentences. Thoughts unfinished. Many words on the page, one after the other, the way words normally occur, and yet—. Sometimes describing thoughts and at other times, the scene. Confusing. The book takes place in 1915-1916, just before the Easter Rising that resulted in the independence of the Republic of Ireland, and it puts the reader into the middle of that conflict. This is good if you like history, which I do. If you didn't I think it might pull you away from the story, trying to figure out which side is which and how it all connects. I never did quite figure out which side a couple of the characters were on--or maybe that was the point. And, well, I didn't love the ending, but that's personal preference--it was very well done, it just wasn't the exact ending I would have chosen.
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At Swim, Two Boys - Jamie O'Neill
PART ONE
1915
I will make inseparable cities with their arms about each other’s necks;
By the love of comrades.
—WALT WHITMAN
CHAPTER ONE
At the corner of Adelaide Road, where the paving sparkled in the morning sun, Mr. Mack waited by the newspaper stand. A grand day it was, rare and fine. Puff-clouds sailed through a sky of blue. Fairweather cumulus to give the correct designation: on account they cumulate, so Mr. Mack believed. High above the houses a seagull glinted, gliding on a breeze that carried from the sea. Wait now, was it cumulate or accumulate he meant? The breeze sniffed of salt and tide. Make a donkey of yourself, inwardly he cautioned, using words you don’t know their meaning. And where’s this paper chappie after getting to?
In delicate clutch an Irish Times he held. A thruppenny piece, waiting to pay, rolled in his fingers. Every so often his hand queried his elbow—Parcel safe? Under me arm, his hand-pat assured him.
Glasthule, homy old parish, on the lip of Dublin Bay. You could see the bay, a wedge of it, between the walls of a lane, with Howth lying out beyond. The bay was blue as the sky, a tinge deeper, and curiously raised-looking when viewed dead on. The way the sea would be sloping to the land. If this paper chappie don’t show up quick, bang goes his sale. Cheek of him leaving customers wait in the street.
A happy dosser was nosing along the lane and Mr. Mack watched with lenient disdain. Any old bone. Lick of something out of a can. Dog’s life really. When he came to the street Mr. Mack touched a finger to his hat, but the happy dosser paid him no regard. He slouched along and Mr. Mack saw it puddling after, something he had spilt in the road, his wasted civility. Lips pursed with comment, he pulled, squeezing, one droop of his bush mustache.
Oh hello, Mrs. Conway, grand day it is, grand to be sure, tiptop and yourself keeping dandy?
Nice class of lady, left foot, but without the airs. Saw me waiting with an Irish Times, twice the price of any other paper. They remark such things, the quality do. Glory be, I hope she didn’t think—his Irish Times dropped by his side—Would she ever have mistook me for the paperman, do you think?
Pages fluttered on the newspaper piles, newsboards creaked in the breeze. Out-of-the-way spot for a paper stand. Had supposed to be above by the railway station. But this thoolamawn has it currently, what does he do only creeps it down, little by little, till now he has it smack outside of Fennelly’s—
Mr. Mack swivelled on his heels. Fennelly’s public house. The corner doors were propped wide where the boy was mopping the steps. Late in the morning to be still at his steps. The gloom inside gave out a hum of amusement, low mouths of male companionship, gathered by the amber glow of the bar. Mr. Mack said Aha! with his eyes. He thrust his head inside the door, waved his paper in the dark. ’Scuse now, gents.
He hadn’t his hat back on his head before a roar of hilarity, erupting at the bar, hunted him away, likely to shove him back out in the street.
Well, by the holy. He gave a hard nod to the young bucko leaning on his mop and grinning. What was that about?
Presently, a jerky streak of anatomy distinguished itself in the door, coughing and spluttering while it came, and shielding its eyes from the sun. Is it yourself, Sergeant?
Hello now, Mr. Doyle,
said Mr. Mack.
Quartermaster-Sergeant Mack, how are you, how’s every hair’s breadth of you, what cheer to see you so spry.
A spit preceded him to the pavement. You weren’t kept waiting at all?
This rather in rebuttal than inquiry. Only I was inside getting of bronze for silver. Paper is it?
The hades you were, thought Mr. Mack, and the smell of drink something atrocious. Fennelly has a crowd in,
he remarked, for the hour.
Bagmen,
the paperman replied. Go-boys on the make out of Dublin. And a miselier mischaritable unChristianer crew—
Ho ho ho, thought Mr. Mack. On the cadge, if I know my man. Them boys inside was too nimble for him.
Would you believe, Sergeant, they’d mock a man for the paper he’d read?
What’s this now?
said Mr. Mack.
The paperman chucked his head. God be their judge and a bitter one, say I. And your good self known for a decent skin with no more side than a margarine.
Mr. Mack could not engage but a rise was being took out of him. The paperman made play of settling his papers, huffling and humphing in that irritating consumptive way. He made play of banging his chest for air. He spat, coughing with the spittle, a powdery disgruntled cough—Choky today,
said he—and Mr. Mack viewed the spittle-drenched sheet he now held in his hand. This fellow, the curse of an old comrade, try anything to vex me.
I’m after picking up,
choosily he said, "an Irish Times, only I read here—"
"An Irish Times, Sergeant? Carry me out and bury me decent, so you have and all. Aren’t you swell away with the high-jinkers there?"
Mr. Mack plumped his face and a laugh, like a fruit, dropped from his mouth. I wouldn’t know about any high-jinkers,
he confided. Only I read here ’tis twice the price of any other paper. Twice the price,
he repeated, shaking his cautious head. A carillon of coins chinkled in his pocket. I don’t know now can the expense be justified.
Take a risk of it, Sergeant, and damn the begrudgers.
The paperman leant privily forward. A gent on the up, likes of yourself, isn’t it worth it alone for the shocks and stares?
Narrowly Mr. Mack considered his man. A fling or a fox-paw, he couldn’t be certain sure. He clipped his coin on the paper-stack. Penny, I believe,
he said.
Thruppence,
returned Mr. Doyle. Balance two dee to the General.
Mr. Mack talked small while he waited for his change. Grand stretch of weather we’re having.
’Tisn’t the worst.
Grand I thought for the time of year.
Thanks be to God.
Oh thanks be to God entirely.
Mr. Mack’s face faltered. Had ought to get my thanks in first. This fellow, not a mag to bless himself with, doing me down always. He watched him shambling through the pockets of his coat. And if it was change he was after in Fennelly’s it was devilish cunning change for never the jingle of a coin let out. A smile fixed on Mr. Mack’s face. Barking up the wrong tree with me, my merry old sweat. Two dee owed.
At last the paperman had the change found. Two lusterless pennies, he held them out, the old sort, with the old Queen’s hair in a bun. Mr. Mack was on the blow of plucking them in his fingers when the paperman coughed—Squeeze me
—coughed into his—Squeeze me peas, Sergeant
—coughed into his sleeve. Not what you’d call coughing but hacking down the tracts of his throat to catch some breath had gone missing there. His virulence spattered the air between, and Mr. Mack thought how true what they say, take your life in your hands every breath you breathe.
He cleared his own throat and said, I trust I find you well?
Amn’t I standing, God be praised?
With a flump then he was down on the butter-box he kept for a seat.
Bulbous, pinkish, bush-mustached, Mr. Mack’s face lowered. He’d heard it mentioned right enough, that old Doyle, he was none too gaudy this weather. Never had thought to find him this far gone. That box wouldn’t know of him sitting on it. He looked down on the dull face, dull as any old copper, with the eyes behind that looked chancy back. Another fit came on, wretched to watch, like something physical had shook hold the man; and Mr. Mack reached his hand to his shoulder.
Are you all right there, Mick?
Be right in a minute, Arthur. Catch me breath is all.
Mr. Mack gave a squeeze of his hand, feeling the bones beneath. Will I inquire in Fennelly’s after a drop of water?
I wouldn’t want to be bothering Fennelly for water, though.
Them chancy old eyes. Once upon a time them eyes had danced. Bang goes sixpence, thought Mr. Mack, though it was a shilling piece he pulled out of his pocket. Will you do yourself a favor, Mick, and get something decent for your dinner.
Take that away,
Mr. Doyle rebuked him. I have my pride yet. I won’t take pity.
Now where’s the pity in a bob, for God’s sake?
I fought for Queen and Country. There’s no man will deny it.
There’s no man wants to deny it.
Twenty-five years with the Colors. I done me bit. I went me pound, God knows if I didn’t.
Here we go, thought Mr. Mack.
I stood me ground. I stood to them Bojers and all.
Here we go again.
Admitted you wasn’t there. Admitted you was home on the boat to Ireland. But you’ll grant me this for an old soldier. That Fusilier Doyle, he done his bit. He stood up to them Bojers, he did.
You did of course. You’re a good Old Tough, ’tis known in the parish.
Begod and I’d do it over was I let. God’s oath on that. We’d know the better of Germany then.
He kicked his boot against the newsboard, which told, unusually and misfortunately for his purpose, not of the war at all but of beer and whiskey news, the threat and fear of a hike in the excise. I’d soon put manners on those Kaiser lads.
No better man,
Mr. Mack conceded. Mr. Doyle tossed his head, the way his point, being gained, he found it worthless for a gain. Mr. Mack had to squeeze the shilling bit into his hand. You’ll have a lotion on me whatever,
he said, confidentially urging the matter.
The makings of a smile lurked across the paperman’s face. There was a day, Arthur, and you was pal o’ me heart,
said he, me fond segotia.
The silver got pocketed. May your hand be stretched in friendship, Sergeant, and never your neck.
Charity done with and the price of a skite secured, they might risk a reasonable natter. Tell us,
said Mr. Mack, is it true what happened the young fellow was here on this patch?
Sure carted away. The peelers nabbed him.
A recruitment poster I heard.
Above on the post office windows. Had it torn away.
Shocking,
said Mr. Mack. Didn’t he know that’s a serious offense?
Be sure he’ll know now,
said Mr. Doyle. Two-monthser he’ll get out of that. Hard.
And to look at him he only a child.
Sure mild as ever on porridge smiled. Shocking.
Though Mr. Mack could not engage it was the offense was referred to and not the deserts. Still, you’ve a good few weeks got out of this work.
They’ll have the replacement found soon enough.
You stuck it this long, they might see their way to making you permanent.
Not so, Sergeant. And the breath only in and out of me.
An obliging little hack found its way up his throat. There’s only the one place I’ll be permanent now. I won’t be long getting there neither.
But Mr. Mack had heard sufficient of that song. Sure we’re none of us getting any the rosier.
The parcel shifted under his arm and, the direction coming by chance into view, Mr. Doyle’s eyes squinted, then saucered, then slyly he opined,
Knitting.
Stockings,
Mr. Mack elaborated. I’m only on my way to Ballygihen. Something for Madame MacMurrough and the Comforts Fund.
Didn’t I say you was up with the high-jinkers? Give ’em socks there, Sergeant, give ’em socks.
Mr. Mack received this recommendation with the soldierly good humor with which it was intended. He tipped his hat and the game old tough saluted.
Good luck to the General.
Take care now, Mr. Doyle.
Parcel safe and under his arm, Mr. Mack made his way along the parade of shops. At the tramstop he looked into Phillips’s ironmongers. Any sign of that delivery?
Expected
was all the answer he got.
Constable now. Sees me carrying the Irish Times. Respectable nod. Little Fenianeen in our midst and I never knew. After hacking at a recruitment poster. Mind, ’tis pranks not politics. Pass a law against khaki, you’d have them queueing up to enlist.
The shops ended and Glasthule Road took on a more dignified, prosperous air. With every step he counted the ratable values rising, ascending on a gradient equivalent to the road’s rise to Ballygihen. Well-tended gardens and at every lane a kinder breeze off the sea. In the sun atop a wall a fat cat sat whose head followed wisely his progress.
General, he calls me. Jocular touch that. After the General Stores, of course. Shocks and stares—should send that in the paper. Pay for items catchy like that. Or did I hear it before? Would want to be sure before committing to paper. Make a donkey of yourself else.
A scent drifted by that was utterly familiar yet unspeakably far away. He leant over a garden wall and there it blew, ferny-leaved and tiny-flowered, in its sunny yellow corner. Never had thought it would prosper here. Mum-mim-mom, begins with something mum. Butterfly floating over it, a pale white soul, first I’ve seen of the year.
Pall of his face back there. They do say they take on worse in the sunshine, your consumptives do. Segotia: is it some class of a flower? I never thought to inquire. Pal of me heart. Well, we’re talking twenty thirty years back. Mick and Mack the paddy whacks. We had our day, ’tis true. Boys together and bugles together and bayonets in the ranks. Rang like bells, all we wanted was hanging. But there’s no pals except you’re equals. I learnt me that after I got my very first stripe.
He looked back down the road at the dwindling man with his lonely stand of papers. A Dublin tram came by. In the clattering of its wheels and its sparking trolley the years dizzied a moment. Scarlet and blue swirled in the dust, till there he stood, flush before him, in the light of bright and other days, the bugler boy was pal of his heart. My old segotia.
Parcel safe? Under me arm.
The paper unfolded in Mr. Mack’s hands and his eyes glanced over the front page. Hotels, hotels, hotels. Hatches, matches, dispatches. Eye always drawn to Loans by Post.
Don’t know for why. What’s this the difference is between a stock and a share? Have to ask Jim when he gets in from school.
He turned the page. Here we go. Royal Dublin Fusiliers depot. Comforts Fund for the Troops in France. Committee gratefully acknowledges. Here we go. Madame MacMurrough, Ballygihen branch. Socks, woollen, three doz pair.
Gets her name in cosy enough. Madame MacMurrough. Once a month I fetch over the stockings, once a month she has her name in the paper. Handy enough if you can get it.
Nice to know they’re delivered, all the same, delivered where they’re wanted.
His eyes wandered to the Roll of Honor that ran along the paper’s edge. Officers killed, officers wounded, wounded and missing, wounded believed prisoners, correction: officers killed. All officers. Column, column and a half of officers. Then there’s only a handful of other ranks. Now that can’t be right. How do they choose them? Do you have to—is that what I’d have to do?—submit the name yourself? And do they charge for that? Mind you, nice to have your name in the Irish Times. That’s what I’ll have to do maybe, should Gordie—God forbid, what was he saying? God forbid, not anything happen to Gordie. Touch wood. Not wood, scapular. Where am I?
There, he’d missed his turn. That was foolish. Comes from borrowing trouble. And it was an extravagance in the first place to be purchasing an Irish Times. Penny for the paper, a bob for that drunk—Jacobs! I didn’t even get me two dee change. One and thruppenny walk in all. Might have waited for the Evening Mail and got me news for a ha’penny.
However, his name was Mr. Mack, and as everyone knew, or had ought know by now, the Macks was on the up.
The gates to Madame MacMurrough’s were open and he peered up the avenue of straggling sycamores to the veiled face of Ballygihen House. A grand lady she was to be sure, though her trees, it had to be said, could do with a clipping.
He did not enter by the gates, but turned down Ballygihen Avenue beside. He had come out in a sweat, beads were trickling down the spine of his shirt, the wet patch stuck where his braces crossed. He mended his pace to catch his breath. At the door in the wall he stopped. Mopped his forehead and neck with his handkerchief, took off his hat and swabbed inside. Carefully stroked its brim where his fingers might have disturbed the nap. Replaced it. Size too small. Would never believe your head would grow. Or had the hat shrunk on him? Dunn’s three-and-ninepenny bowler? No, his hat had never shrunk. He brushed both boots against the calves of his trousers. Parcel safe? Then he pushed inside the tradesmen’s gate.
Brambly path through shadowy wood. Birds singing on all sides. Mess of nettles, cow-parsley, could take a scythe to them. Light green frilly leaves would put you in mind of, ahem, petticoats. A blackbird scuttled off the path like a schoolboy caught at a caper. Then he was out in the light, and the lawns of Ballygihen House stretched leisurely to the sea. The sea oh the sea, long may it be. What a magnificent house it was, view and vantage them both, for its windows commanded the breadth of Dublin Bay. If he had this house what wouldn’t he do but sit upon its sloping lawns while all day long the mailboats to’d and fro’d.
Mr. Mack shook his head, but not disconsolately; for the beauty of the scene, briefly borrowed and duly returned, would brighten the sorrow of a saint. He followed the path by the trees, careful of stepping on the grass, till he came into the shadow of the house where the area steps led down to the kitchens.
And who was it only Madame MacMurrough’s slavey showing leg at the step. Bit late in the morning to be still at her scrubbing. From Athlone, I believe, a district I know nothing about, save that it lies at the heart of Ireland.
He leant over the railing. You’re after missing a spot, Nancy.
The girl looked up. ’Tis you, Mr. Mack. And I thought it was the butcher’s boy after giving me cheek.
She thought it was the butcher’s—Mr. Mack hawked his throat. Julian weather we’re having.
She pulled the hair out of her eyes. Julian, Mr. Mack?
Julian. Pertaining to the month of July. It’s from the Latin.
But ’tis scarce May.
Well, I know that, Nancy. I meant ’tis July-like weather. Warm.
She stood up, skirts covering her shins. Something masonic about her smile. Any news from Gordie, Mr. Mack?
Mr. Mack peered over her shoulder looking to see was there anyone of consequence about. Gordie?
he repeated. You must mean Gordon, my son Gordon.
No letters or anything in the post?
How kind of you, Nancy. But no, he’s away on final training. We don’t know the where, we don’t know the where to. Submarines, do you see. Troop movements is always secretive in times of war.
Ah sure he’s most like in England, round about Aldershot with the rest of the boys.
No cook in evidence, no proper maid. Entire residence has the look of—Aldershot? Why do you say Aldershot?
Do you know the place? Famous military town in Hampshire.
You oughtn’t be talking such things. Haven’t I just warned you about submarines?
In Ballygihen, Mr. Mack?
Matter a damn where.
He felt he had stamped his foot, so he patted his toes on the gravel and muttered, Dang. Matter a dang, I meant.
The breeze reblew the hair in her eyes. Slovenly the way she ties it. Has a simper cute as a cat. Is there no person in authority here I might address my business to?
Sure we’re all alone in the big house together. If you wanted you could nip round the front and pull the bell. I’d let you in for the crack.
Flighty, divil-may-care minx of a slavey. Pity the man who—He pinched, pulling, one droop of his mustache. I haven’t the time for your cod-acting now, Nancy. It so happens I’m here on a serious matter not altogether disconnected with the war effort itself. I don’t doubt your mistress left word I was due.
She looked thoughtful a moment. I misrecall your name being spoke, but there was mention of some fellow might be bringing socks. I was to dump them in the scullery and give him sixpence out of thank you.
After the huffing and puffing and wagging his finger, in the end he had to let his parcel into her shiftless hands. She knew better by then to bring up the sixpence. He had tipped his scant farewell and was re-ascending the steps when she let out, Still and all, Mr. Mack, it’s the desperate shame you wouldn’t know where your ownest son was stationed at.
A shame we all must put up with.
Sure wherever it is, he’ll be cutting a fine dash of a thing, I wouldn’t doubt it.
Slavey, he thought, proper name for a rough general. Don’t let me disturb you further from your duty.
Good day, Mr. Mack. But remember now: all love does ever rightly show humanity our tenderness.
All love does what? Foolish gigglepot. Should have told her, should have said, he’s gone to fight for King and Country and the rights of Catholic Belgium. Cutting a dash is for rakes and dandyprats. All love does ever what?
He sloped back down the road to Glasthule, his heart falling with the declining properties. Could that be true about the sixpence? It was a puzzle to know with rich folk. Maybe I might have held on to the stockings and fetched them over another day. Nothing like a face-to-face in getting to know the worth of a man. Or maybe the lady supposed I’d be too busy myself, would send a boy instead. Jim. She thought it was Jim I’d be sending. Jim, my son James. The sixpence was his consideration. Now that was mighty generous in Madame MacMurrough. Sixpence for that spit of a walk? There’s the gentry for you now. That shows the quality.
Quick look-see in the hand-me-down window. Now that’s new. Must tell Jim about that. A flute in Ducie’s window. Second thoughts, steer clear. Trouble enough with Gordie and the pledgeshop.
Brewery men at Fennelly’s. Mighty clatter they make. On purpose much of the time. Advertise their presence. Fine old Clydesdale eating at his bait-sack. They look after them well, give them that. Now here’s a wonder—paper stand deserted. Crowd of loafers holding up the corner.
A nipper-squeak across the road and his heart lifted for it was the boy out of the ironmonger’s to say the tram had passed, package ready for collection. He took the delivery, signed the entry-book, patting the boy’s head in lieu of gratuity, recrossed the street.
He was turning for home into Adelaide Road, named after—who’s this it’s named for again?—when Fennelly’s corner doors burst open and a ree-raw jollity spilt out in the street. Sister Susie’s sewing shirts for soldiers,
they were singing. Except in their particular rendition it was socks she was knitting.
Quare fine day,
said one of the loafers outside. Another had the neck to call out Mr. Mack’s name.
Mr. Mack’s forefinger lifted vaguely hatwards. Corner of his eye he saw others making mouths at him. Loafers, chancers, shapers. Where were the authorities at all that they wouldn’t take them in charge? Fennelly had no license for singing. And the Angelus bell not rung.
Package safe? Under me arm. Chickens clucking in the yards, three dogs mooching. What they need do, you see, is raise the dog license. That would put a stop to all this mooching. Raise the excise while they’re about it. Dung in the street and wisps of hay, sparrows everywhere in the quiet way.
The shop was on a corner of a lane that led to a row of humbler dwellings. He armed himself with a breath. The bell clinked when he pushed the door.
Incorrect to say a hush fell on the premises. They always spoke in whispers, Aunt Sawney and her guests. There she sat, behind the counter, Mrs. Tansy sat on the customers’ chair, they had another fetched in from the kitchen for Mrs. Rourke. Now if a customer came, he’d be hard put to make it to the till. Gloomy too. Why wouldn’t she leave the door wide? Gas only made it pokier in the daylight. Which was free.
God bless all here.
He touched the font on the jamb. Dryish. Have to see to that. Blessed himself.
Hello, Aunt Sawney. Ready whenever to take over the reins. Mrs. Rourke, how’s this the leg is today? I’m glad to see you about, Mrs. Tansy.
New tin of snuff on the counter. Must remember to mark that down in the book. Impossible to keep tabs else. Straits of Ballambangjan ahead. I wonder if I might just . . . pardon me while I . . . if you could maybe.
Maneuver safe between. Find harbor in the kitchen. Range stone cold, why wouldn’t she keep an eye on it? Poke head back inside an instant. Range is out, Aunt Sawney, should your guests require some tea.
Three snorts came in reply as each woman took a pinch of snuff.
He sat down at the kitchen table, laid the new package in front of him. His eyes gauged its contents, while he reached behind his neck to loosen the back-stud of his collar. He flexed his arms. Let me see, let me see. The boy at the ironmonger’s had dangled the package by the twine and he had a deal of difficulty undoing the knot. Keep the torn paper for them on tick.
And finally there they were. Bills, two gross, finest American paper, fine as rashers of wind, in Canon bold proclaiming:
Adelaide General Stores
Quality Goods At Honest Prices
Mr. A. Mack, Esqr.
Will Be Pleased To Assist In All Your Requirements
An Appeal To You!
One Shilling Per Guinea Spent Here
Will Comfort Our Troops In France!
Page was a touch cramped at the base so that the end line, Proprietress: Sawney Burke,
had to be got in small print. Still, it was the motto that mattered, and that was a topper. Will comfort our troops in France. Appeal to the honor of the house.
Mustache. Touch it. Spot of something in the hairs. Egg, is it? Stuck.
Was I right all the same to leave it to honor only? Nothing about the pocket. How’s about this for the hookum?
Pounds, Shillings and Pence!
Why Not Buy Local And Save On Leather?
Appeal to the pocket of the house. Might better have had two orders made up. One for the swells, other for the smells.
Never mind the smells, the Macks is on the up.
Jim. What time is it? Home for his dinner at five after one. Gone twelve now. He could maybe deliver the startings in his dinner-hour, the leavings before his tea.
Have I missed the Angelus so? How’s this I missed the Angelus?
Clink. That’s the door. Customer? No, exeunt two biddies. She’ll be in now, tidy away. Aunt Sawney, I’ve had these advertising-bills made up . . . ? No, wait till they’re delivered first. Fate accomplished. Where’s that apron? Better see to the range. Aunt Sawney, there you are. Must be puffed out after that stint. I’ll do shop now. You read the paper in your chair. We’ll soon have a feel of heat.
Stay away from that kitchener,
she said.
The range?
said Mr. Mack.
That kitchener wants blacking.
The range?
She was already on her knees. She had a new tin of Zebra blacklead with her. Ye’ll have me hands in blisters. I left it go out since yesternight.
Surely a touch uncivil to name a kitchen range after the hero who avenged Khartoum. Did we finish that other tin of Zebra already? Right so, I’ll mark that down in the book. It’s best to keep tabs.
’Tis cold plate for dinner. And cold plate for tea.
Whatever you think is best, Aunt Sawney. But you’re not after forgetting it’s his birthday today?
I’m not after forgetting this kitchener wants blacking.
She damped a cloth in the black-lead tin, letting out a creak of coughing as she did so.
The door clinked. Customer. I’ll be with you directly,
he called. Then, thoughtfully: Not to trouble yourself, Aunt Sawney. I have a cake above out of Findlater’s. Sure what more could his boyship want? But no mention of birthdays till after his tea. We’ll have nothing brought off all day else.
I suppose and you got him them bills for his treat.
Well, I’ll be sugared. How would she know about the bills? He watched her at her labor for a moment. Wiry woman with hair the color of ash. The back tresses she wore in a small black cap which hung from her crown like an extra, maidenly, head of hair. Even kneeling she had a bend on her, what’s this they used call it, the Grecian bends. If you straightened her now, you’d be feared of her snapping. Cheeks like loose gullets, wag when vexed. When the teeth go, you see, the pouches collapse. Nose beaked, with dewdrop suspending. Not kin, thanks be to God, not I, save through the altar. Gordie and Jim are blood.
She coughed again, sending reverberations down her frame. Brown titus she calls it. Useless to correct her at her age. I’ll leave the inside door pulled to in case you’d feel a chill from beyond. You’re only over the bronchitis.
Mrs. Tansy says the font wants filling.
Gently Mr. Mack reminded her, Mrs. Tansy is a ranting Methody.
She still has eyes to see.
Why would anyone look into a font? he wondered as he poured the holy water. Suppose when you are that way, dig with the other foot that is, these things take on an interest, a mystery even, which all too often for ourselves, digging as it were with the right foot, which is to say the proper one, have lost—lost where I was heading for there.
Cheeses, would you look at that motor the way it’s pitching up Glasthule. Tearaways they have at the wheel. Take your life in your hands every turn you take. Hold on now, I believe I recognize that motor-car. He blew on his mustache, considering. There’s a pucker idea: fonts for trams. Should send that in the paper. Never seen a font in a moving object. Would a bishop have one in his brougham for instance? Or is there maybe an injunction against fonts in anything not stationary? Should check the facts before committing to paper. There’s fellows ready to pounce, the least miscalculation.
Nothing much in the street. Far away beyond the fields and the new red-bricked terraces rose the Dublin Mountains. Green grew to grey. Oats by reason the wet climatics. Clever the way the fields know to stop just where the hills begin. Turf then. They were down the other week trying to hock it on account the price of coal. Is there a season for turf, though? Make a donkey of yourself buying the wrong time of year.
Curls of smoke from the cottages nearby. Keeping the home fires burning. Back inside the shop. Clink, it’s only me. Font again, no wonder it dries up so. Trade a little slack. Always the same this time of day. Might give that counter a wipe-down. Bits of snuff and goodness knows. Time to finish a stocking before dinner? Wouldn’t it be grand now if Gordie would be wearing one of my stockings.
Where’s there a place to fix a new shelf? Need a display for maybe a quality range of teas. High-grown, tippy Darjeeling, cans of, please. That would fetch the carriage trade.
What’s this that Nancy one was on about, all love does ever what? Damn silly child. Holy show she made of his parade. Marching with Gordie in the ranks to the troopship. Son of mine stepping out with a slavey. Where’s the up in that?
Here a shelf, there a shelf? Can smell it now, the wafting scents. Would madam take a seat while I weigh her requirements? None of your one-and-fourpence populars, but Assam and pekoe and souchong, and customers to match, and souchong and oolong and Assam and—
Peeping up at him, her dabs just nipping the counter, a little female bedouin with dirty face and half an apron on.
Well, little lady? Why aren’t we at school today?
The ma sent me over for a saucer of jam.
Beside the door Mr. Mack had fixed a makeshift sign. One Shilling per Guinea Spent Here is a CREDIT to You!
He might better have saved the paper. Ha’penny,
he said to the slum-rat.
The sleek green motor cleared the feeble rise, haughty jerk as it jumped the tramlines, swept through the gates, gravel flittering with road-dust in its wake. Past the lodge, empty these years, least so by day, under the fairy light of arching trees, to emerge at its stabling where it shuddered in quiet triumph before a gauntleted glove that had stroked its wheel reached down to cut the engine.
Silence then, a world at rest. Not the antithesis of dust, of speed, but its complement. The gloved hand ungloved its partner which in turn ungloved its mate. Fingers untied her chiffon and felt for hair under her hat. Strays tidied behind her ears. The chiffon became a scarf, her hands reawoke the wide sloping brim of her hat. Gradually the earth too rewoke. Hedges chirruped to life, a crow bickered above, the sea resumed its reverend tide. Her hat was hopelessly démodé but the fashion was too ridiculous: she refused to wear flower-pots, and would have nothing to do with feathery things she had not shot herself.
Eveline MacMurrough slid to the passenger side, shifted her skirt over the low door. One leg, two legs, she steadied on the running-board, then slipped to the ground. The hand that held her gloves patted the coachwork, patted the trim. My Prince Henry. And they had thought to requisition you for an ambulance at the Front. Les brutes anglaises.
There was no one to see to her entrance, only the skivvy from the kitchen whom she had scarcely begun to civilize. This skin of jitters received her gloves, her chiffon, hat; Eveline allowed the dustcoat to be eased from her shoulders. L’idiote. Not through the hall, child,
she said. Outside and shake the dust.
In the stand glass she reviewed her visage. The wind-screen had not been a total success. Then again goggles did leave such hideous lines. Perhaps it must be the veil after all. Though she did so resent the implication of purdah. Toilet water, a good scrub, then hot damp towels.
Is old Moore about?
Would he not be in the garden, mam?
Peasant insistence on interrogative response. It rather appealed to Eveline. Yes, she rather believed she liked it. When you find him, tell him the motor-car wants cleaning. Lamps too, I dare say. Cook?
Hasn’t she taken the morning to visit her sister in St. Michael’s that’s poorly?
Defensive really: none of my doing, as though to say. Are we to starve so?
No, mam. She left a cold dinner prepared.
Lunch,
said Eveline.
Lunch, mam.
There was a quick call through the staff roll. Bootman repairing a leak in the attic, meaning presumably he was high; parlor maids called back to the registry, replacements not turned up. Really she must see to appointing new people, a housekeeper at the very least. So trying with the war on. Rush to the altar to avail of the separation allowances. It was something her nephew might take in hand. And my nephew?
I’m not sure, mam
—flush in her cheeks—if he hasn’t gone bathing.
Eveline had completed her inspection at the hall stand. The child waited by the pass door, hands by her sides like a board-school girl. Itching to be below stairs out of harm’s way. Pauvre ingénue. Eveline smiled and ordered hot water and towels to her dressingroom. Even the imbécile might manage that.
While she sponged her cheeks with water of roses, she considered her interview with the new curate at St. Joseph’s, Glasthule. Naturally, it was the canon she had called upon, some invitation to decline, but a young priest had received her, offering regrets at the canon’s indisposition. The canon’s health was neither here nor there to Eva, her confessor being of the Jesuits at Gardiner Street, but the young man made such parade of hospitality, she had quickly perceived her demurs would serve but to encourage his insistence.
She had accepted tea in best blue china. The curate gave his name—unless she misheard, Father Amen O’Toiler, which sounded a sermon in itself. He fingered her card, then, still fidgeting, stood to make his say. I cannot tell you, Madame MacMurrough, what pleasure it is to greet a scion of your famous name.
Her famous name was given its due, which she heard as a type of Cook’s tour of Irish history. Bridges taken, fords crossed, the sieges broken, battles lost, long valiant retreats—and not a one but a MacMurrough had been to the fore.
It was a familiar account and she had waited politely, seated at the edge of an aged Biedermeier whose stuffing was gone. Absently she wondered which charity the curate had in mind and what donation might eventually suffice.
The priest had continued his progress round the sunless parlor, chilly yet fuming from an ill-ventilated fire. Every few paces he referred to her card, as though the heads of his argument had been pencilled thereon, as onwards he passed through the dark centuries, the long night of Ireland’s woe. Yet night, he averred, not so dark as to blind, for in every generation a light had sparked, betimes no more than a flash on the hillside, moretimes a flame to set the age afire. And not once in all the years but the cry had gone out: MacMurrough! The name was imperishable, ineradicable, sempiternal, a lodestar in the Irish firmament that had blazed to its zenith, as many believed (and not least the curate himself, if he might make so bold), in the brilliant, some might say heliacal, career of Madame MacMurrough’s late revered regretted father, Dermot James William MacMurrough, Queen’s Counsellor, quondam Lord Mayor and Chief Magistrate of our great metropolis, freeman of the cities of Waterford, Cork, New York and Boston, Chevalier de la Légion d’Honneur, Knight Grand Cross of the Order of St. Gregory the Great, Member for the Borough of Ferns.
And there at the moment of her direst need
—the curate’s voice had strained as he came to the crux of his tale—when sacred Ireland stood upon the edge, at the very brink of extinction, who stood forth to show the way? Who but your father saw through the genteel broadcloth, the polished suaviloquence, to the degenerate soul within? Who was it saved Ireland from the alien heretical beast?
Yes, Eveline thought now, before her dressing-table glass, her father had been first to denounce Parnell. Though it had been a close race, so fierce the stampede.
Perfume bottles, phials of scent, Gallé and Lalique; a porcelain shepherdess proffered tiny sugared treats on a tray, offered them twice, for the toilet glass reviewed her, stretching through the bottles, a child sinking through colored viscous water. Eveline chose a bon-bon, sucked it thoughtfully.
There was more to this curate than at first she had suspected. More than once he had made allusion to the Fenians. His face had pecked in the intervals after, seeking collusion. She had nodded, blinked with charming detachment. Then taking her leave she had felt his high neck bend toward her. That odor of carbolic and abstinence so readily in the mind confused with mastery. The priest whispered in her ear: The sword of light is shining still. England’s difficulty is Ireland’s opportunity.
The formula was stale, let alone the notion, but it had sounded singular on the lips of a priest. If this now was the teaching of the seminaries, change most certainly was in the air. Poor old Parnell—the Chosen Man, the Chief, the Uncrowned King of Ireland, adulterer, fornicator, the Lost Leader—it would be the supreme irony: to have terrified the Church into Irish Ireland.
She rose now from her dressing-table and approached the garden window. She turned the hasp and the casement opened. She inhaled the breath from the sea. Casement, how very beautiful was the word. She spoke it softly. A decidedly beautiful name, Casement. He is far from the land,
she softly hummed.
A trundle on the stairs and the child came in with towels and steaming water. At the washstand she ventured to say, There was a delivery while you was out, mam.
Eveline nodded.
Only stockings, mam. Was I right to leave them in the library like you said?
Stockings, yes. She must see to them directly her toilet was done.
One more bon-bon from the porcelain shepherdess. It was evident the maids—the few were left her—had been at her supply. When you have finished whatever you are doing below, go down to Glasthule. The confectioner’s will know my order.
As she came down to the library she saw through the open door the gardener and the gardener’s boy and the gardener’s boy’s boy all greedily washing her Prince Henry. It was the one chore she might charge them to perform. Her mind drifted to a time late last summer when she had motored over the hills to the old demesne near Ferns. With her had traveled two gentlemen of the press and a representative of the Irish Automobile Club. Her intention had been to astonish the world by ascending and descending Mount Leinster, whose track, winding to the summit, had in parts a gradient steeper than one in three. This feat would prove not only the motor’s magnificent pedigree but her own accomplishment, representative of all Irish womanhood’s, in handling it.
And indeed she had carried the day. The motor performed superbly, the IAC man figured and stamped in his book, the newspapermen assured her of a prominent notice. She had expected at the least a Johnsonian quip—the wonder being not in her exploit, but in a lady’s wish to stage such performance. But the next day’s newspapers gave no mention of her. The August bank holiday had passed and while she had been conquering Mount Leinster Great Britain had declared war on Germany.
At her library desk, begloved once more, this time in creamy four-button mochas, she opened the brown-papered parcel of stockings. Plain-knit, rough-textured stuff. Queer specimen down Glasthule had suggested the arrangement. She might not approve of enlistment in the tyrant’s yeomanry, but she did not see why Irish soldiers should suffer cold feet. Besides, the soul had grown soft since Parnell, with the English and their ploys, killing home rule with kindness. A reacquaintance with arms might prove useful, indeed requisite, in the coming times.
For she too felt the change in the air. Last August, while she motored home alone through the acetylene-lit gloom, the twilight had forced itself upon her. But this was not the evening twilight of the foolish poets. It was the half-light before dawn, the morning of a new Ireland. For indeed it was true: England’s difficulty is Ireland’s opportunity. And she, a MacMurrough born to lead, knew well where lay her duty.
Inside the foot of each stocking she inserted a slip of paper. Green paper whose script proclaimed: Remember Ireland!
CHAPTER TWO
The girls were colloguing outside the confectioner’s when Jim came by.
Lookat, there’s Jim Mack, home for his dinner. Isn’t he the grand swell in his college get-up? Dinky cap and lovely shiny boots on. Delivered out of a bandbox.
And his knickers up to his knees and proper black stockings on. Wouldn’t you love to take him home with you and stick him on a cake?
Ah, but why wouldn’t his da put him in longers?
On his birthday and all.
Big boy he’s getting, and handsome with it.
Though without the anatomicals yet, would you listen to me!
Are you getting your greens there, Jim?
Ah, the wee spurt, little by little.
Shush now,
said Nancy, leave him be. You’ll have him baked for shame.
She left her companions and beckoned Jim privately over. How’s the birthday boy?
she asked and she planted a smacker on his cheek. There you are for luck.
From a distance his face looked unwashed, but closer to you saw there were rosebuds on his cheeks, buds that bloomed now to perfect pinks, occasioning a further shrill of laughter from the girls behind.
Well, Nancy,
he said, brushing a hand against the wet.
Is that all you have to say for yourself?
She hooked his arm and marched him onward. Don’t mind them saucepots. Them saucepots is only ignorant.
She chid them over her shoulder, Ignorant, so yous are!
He was muttering something, but she held to his arm. Past the butcher O’Brien’s where tubs of brine fumed on the pavement and carcasses buzzed with blow-flies above. Past the buttery milky smell of Smelly’s marbly dairy. Muck for more luck,
said she when he stepped in dried-up dung. Adelaide Road was spilling with children from the national school and there were cries and street-calls all ways. Only when they came to the entry to Adelaide Cottages did she draw him aside.
You’ll never guess.
Guess what?
I’ve news from Gordie. Got a letter in the first post.
She watched his eyes close, squeeze, then open wide again. A right scholar he makes. Can’t even blink without thinking. Has that woken you?
He’s all right?
Flying sure. You know where he’s at?
She had the letter out of her apron pocket and she stumped a finger at the top of the page.
All Love,
he read, Does Ever Rightly Show,
he read, Humanity Our Tenderness . . . ?
He looked up, querying her face.
Do you not catch on? Likes of you, a scholarly chap and all.
She danced her finger under each word, spelling it out. A-L-D-E-R-S-H-O-T. It’s a code, of course.
Aldershot! I see it now.
It’s in England. Famous military town. I looked it up in a book in Miss MacMurrough’s.
We knew he was to go to England,
said Jim, only they couldn’t say where.
Well, now you know.
Yes, now we know.
His head dawdled over the letter. The peak of his cap pointed up at the sky. She couldn’t make out the face for his quiff fell over his eyes like the fringe of a show horse. She let him read on, biting her lip, till she knew by the purpling ear-tips that he’d reached the passage she intended. Enough. She snatched the letter away. I’d leave you read the news for yourself, only it’s a taste mashy inside.
Mashy?
Oh mashy something desperate.
He looked up and a smile traveled his face as though unsure where to fit. When she returned the letter to its envelope, the S.W.A.K.
on the seal caught his eye and he asked, Is that the return?
The return, would you listen to it!
But the ox-eyed look of him brought the fondness out of her. She laid a hand on his neck, relishing the twitch when she rubbed behind his ear. Don’t mind that. That’s only Gordie trying to land me in scrapes at Miss MacMurrough’s. He’s a bold particle is your brother. I hope and you don’t take after him. You don’t, sure you don’t, Jim Mack?
Again the ponderous squeezing blink. I think I take after my mother. I’m not sure.
Ah sure, God bless you, what more could you ask? Your poor mother and now your poor brother gone and all. Do you miss him? Of course you do. The street isn’t the same. But God is good, he’ll be home again. Safe and sound, you’ll see.
He was fidgeting with the flap of a pocket. She could feel the hairs on his neck bristling. And the heat off him! She lifted her hand. I do declare, if you blush any redder you’ll go up in a smoke.
I’d better be getting in.
Don’t let on to your da about the letter. He came by this morning giving such a slice of the ignore, I thought to let him stew.
At last she had made him smile. His cheeks rose, the dimples came, the lonesome look departed.
You see?
said she. That’s found the sunshine in you.
It was sunshine rarely seen at home. As soon as the shop door clinked closed, his father bustled from the window and said, What were you doing talking to hussies in the street? Shop-girls and maids-of-all-work. And you had your college cap on.
And from in the kitchen, Aunt Sawney called, ’Tis cold plate for dinner and take off them boots when you’re stepping inside.
‘Memorable Scenes at Dardanelles.’ Now that’s a further development. ‘Race to land before dawn.’ We’ll have to mark that down on the map. ‘Australasians’ Gallantry.’ Australasians means Australians and New Zealanders, them both. No word of the Dubs, but we know they’re out there.
Dinner was cold bacon and cold cabbage, the cabbage adrift in a murky water. Mr. Mack brought his fork as far as his lips. Eat up your greens, Jim. World of goodness in cabbage.
He waited while his son obeyed, then back to the news.
‘Fight for Ypres. Use of Stupefying Gases.’ Now that’s shocking. That’s beyond the beyonds. ‘Canadians’ Gallantry.’ Still no mention of the Dubs. Mind you, don’t know why we’re supposed to be shocked. The German soldier has no tradition of honor. That’s the case with Germany. See it with the Kaiser. All Prussian gas and gaskets, but no command of honor. And that’s the sad truth.
He gave the sad truth a moment’s commiseration, staring at his fork. From out the shop the Rosary came, Hail Mary low and Holy Mary high. He leant closer over the table. I’ve a small something inside needs seeing to after.
I’m finished now, Da.
Out in the shop Aunt Sawney disremembered her Rosary sufficient to bang her stick and bawl, Boys don’t speak at table.
Mr. Mack half turned to the open door. A stickler for decorum, no harm in that. Have you finished your dinner, Jim?
Yes, Da.
Again the bang of a stick on the floor. Mr. Mack frowned. He looked doubtfully at the mess of cabbage. Best thing for it was to say grace and get back in the shop. We give Thee thanks, Almighty God, for all Thy gifts, who livest and reignest world without end.
Over which, as though in competition, Aunt Sawney brayed: Holy Mary, Mother of God, pray for us sinners now and at the hour of our death.
It was a race to Amen, which Aunt Sawney won. Mr. Mack rose. The Rosary of course was good and proper, but had she forgotten there was socks needed knitting for the Front? I’ll take over now, Aunt Sawney. You come back to your chair.
Confidentially to Jim he said, Fetch the shop bike out of the yard and meet me inside.
The boy’s face creased and he said, But Da, I’m due back at school.
Papa,
Mr. Mack corrected.
Papa,
said Jim.
Better put some juldy in it so. Chop-chop.
He watched his son as he loafed through the scullery. Keen as mustard a moment since, now he’s hanging dogs. Would want to catch on to himself.
What use is a chair to me?
Aunt Sawney complained as she came in from the shop. I’m beckoned hither and beckoned thither like a common shop-miss.
Now now, I’m only thinking of your health. You’re only over the bronchitis and you needs your rest.
When she drew level with him, she abruptly jutted her chin in his face. I’m still the name on the lease of this shop. And while there’s saints in heaven, ’tis stopping that way.
When his son had fetched the bike, Mr. Mack muttered, discreetly closing the inside door, Crumbi rumpitita. Latin for cabbage warmed up. Save that wasn’t warmed up even.
He thought a moment, recollected himself. There’s plenty would walk to Dublin for a plate of cold cabbage.
What do I need the bike for, Da?
Mr. Mack said Aha! with his eyes, and from under the shelves pulled out an onion box. He lifted it on the counter. I want you to deliver some advertising-bills round the local populace. What do you think? They’re hot off the printer’s press.
He showed one to his son, running his finger along the words at the expected rate of reading. It’s the modern way of drumming up trade.
The boy gazed into the box, his face growing longer and plainer. Makes a comical sketch, thought Mr. Mack. Eyebrows straight and nose the length of the Shannon. Has a face like a capital T. He thought—did he think that?—the box held his birthday present. All in a rush, he spluttered, I’ve a cake for you after out of Findlater’s.
What, Da?
Deliveries first.
His son flicked through the pile and Mr. Mack had to check himself from cautioning against creasing the sheets. Don’t crease them now,
he said, defeated by the boy’s shiftlessness.
You want me to distribute these?
Deliver them.
Though in point of fact, distribute was probably the more appropriate sentiment in this particular instance. Fair dues. Comes from having a scholarship boy for a son. Distribute them if you choose. But you needn’t do it all the one go. Do a couple of streets now, the bulk after your school.
The Capital T was for Tragic on his face, till the boy shrugged. All right.
Hold your horses, do your buttons up first. Don’t you want to know where to deliver them?
You said the local populace.
But which local populace? Have you not the horse-sense to ask?
Which local populace, Da?
Well, up Glasthule Road towards Ballygihen. Do you know where I mean?
The posh houses.
Quality Street,
said Mr. Mack. We’re on the up, Jim, never forget it. Juldy on now. And don’t be late for school. And remember, that bicycle is shop property, not something to hare up and down with.
He had ushered his son to the door, but at the door his son said, Papa, do I have to?
Incomprehension creased Mr. Mack’s rotund face. What does it mean, do I have to?
"It’s just that, some of the boys at school,