My first published story is "Fear", Which is my second completed work. Both are short stories and are but a first step towards the longer fiction I have batting around my skull. Read Fear, it is (a...view moreMy first published story is "Fear", Which is my second completed work. Both are short stories and are but a first step towards the longer fiction I have batting around my skull. Read Fear, it is (and will remain) free, and tell me your opinions. My style is fairly set, but I am more than willing to hear from my potential readers anything to improve my writing.view less