that's a really nice little game, it has potential! i like the artstyle and use of music and sound effects🖤. a note tho - for secret room's pasword better use "input number" command, not "name processing"
omg i was waiting for your review so much and so glad to see it😍 If i get it right, you mean you played it a day ago, but it was so much that you needed time to digest it???? If so i'm honored:> Being able to "break hearts and minds" is exactly what i'm striving for! I want my stories to be as dramatic as possible. In previous reviews people kinda split between those who noticed only comedy elements and thos who appreciated deep dialogs and story... You put it all in place, i guess both were right:> I must say i didnt have a certain plan when i started to make the game. I knew it would be a dark and gloomy story, with a lot of dark police humor of "i'm too old for this shit" style. But midway i suddenly wanted to add some tragedy. For me Eveness is a very tragic character, i broke my own heart by what i've done to her😭 She was supposed to be a cheerful young detective with a bright future.... and was sacrificed for the sake of drama:((( But it seems for everyone else she was simply a villain that you must hate😔 I'm glad you noticed that the story combines classic murder mistery and paranormal elements. (tho in that world spirits of dead people is a scientifical phenomena,as you know after playing "Pieces". But most people think they are just echoes and can't affect this world directly. That's why Evaness couldnt talk to anybody about what she saw...) I'd like to know what parts where the game explained an important event in text form instead of showing it? It will be useful to know for future improvement. Oh and also - whom did you suspect? I wanted the moment you realize Evaness was behind it all to be a shock, i'm not sure if i succeded... Huge thanks for amazing review as always!🖤
*beep*, man, thank you!😅 I'm surprised by how many people liked Ben. I was afraid i made him too creepy... But it seems he's a loveable loser like i intended hehe/ The opinions kinda split on if this game is a comedy or not...🤔
edit: can't wait to see your reaction to other games muahahah
I wanted it to be tragic story, and i thought that comedy moments could make it more sad in the end... i guess i really overestimated my writing skills ... that i dont have...
can't say i understood the story, but i really like the presentation, very creative. Though the game is pretty small, I'd suggest to add a save option.
thank you for playing! Since it's a jam entry i didnt have time to draw my own maps😥 As for making a shorter story i'm not sure - i can't think of any part that i could scrap😅 Glad you liked the dialogs - it was the first time i wrote so many for a game.
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