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As soon as I started playing this game, I was hooked, and kept on playing until Emma and Ruby tried to frame the MC as a sex offender for having the audacity to be better than them at sports, and he finds it endearing. I lost complete interest. Up until then, I had been eagerly anticipating the next turn of events, and as soon as that happened, I was clicking out of the game.

You have been nothing but a nice guy to these bitches, and they seriously try to frame you as a sex offender?! Nope, not interested in being the slave to evil, sadistic, spoiled bitches, even in a game. Had there been an option for the MC to let these bitches know that framing a guy for a felony because you're jealous he's better than you at sports, is NOT a valid retaliation, and if any of them ever want to have any relationship with MC again, they had better make it up to MC, I might have kept my interest, but the MC barely even mentions it to these bitches, and has forgiven them even before he is out of danger of being imprisoned for years thanks to their evil, sadistic, spoiled natures. He even rewards them for it!

Too bad, it was an enjoyable game up until that point, but trying to frame someone as a sex offender as revenge for losing at sports, is not an acceptable behaviour, not even in a game, and it should have major impact on the story, not be portrayed as 'just cutesy-girly-teasing" and rewarded. IRL, MC could be facing up to 20 years in prison, be forced to register as a sex offender, and basically have his entire life ruined before he turns 20, simply because some bitches were jealous of being beaten at sports. Yes, it is a game, it is a fantasy, but when several of the characters try to frame you as a sex offender, even in a fantasy, it should have major consequences for the story, and your relationship(s) with those who did it, not just be a minor incident.

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I don't remember any of this actually happening in the game, so you either mixed up the story of another game or you interpreted things in a different way than I meant.

The only thing I can think of is the pool scene, where the girls take off his swimming trunks as a joke, but it has nothing to do with being better at sports. In any case, if our protagonist had been in trouble, the girls would have confessed that it was their fault. They would never wish anything bad for the protagonist

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Yeah, that scene is kind of iffy. I remember it being close to a dealbreaker.

The girls'  complete lack of consideration for the consequences he might face is quite offputting and cost them a lot of sympathy. Whether they intentionally put him at risk or just didn't care to think about how their actions might affect him makes little difference, both are revolting.

Even if you ignore the possibility of being mistaken as sex offender, they forcefully exposed him in public against his will. That's sexual assault, along with a number of other offenses. This is made worse by the fact he would not get away with such behavior. I can't really see a way to justify that even if they were to "fess up" about their involvement.

You can't blame him for evaluating the scene based on the events that objectively happen. If anything, you misjudged the severity of that "joke", and did not manage to strike the tone you were trying to. That scene might be worth reevaluating.

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I remember getting to Chapter 10, but I don't remember if the scene in the pool at the gym where Emma and Ruby try to frame you as a sex offender happens in that chapter, or ch11 or 12. I definitely didn't get to chapter 13 or 14.

As I said in my initial comment, until that scene happened I was immersed in the story, and barely noticed the chapter markers. Once that scene played out, I clicked out of the game and uninstalled it, because the story was ruined for me at that point.

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all I hear is yapping for no reason. 

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WTF are you talking about that never happens in this game.
I really think you got your games mixed up.

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This is the most unrelatable, cool-story-bro tl;dr Ive ever read on itch. 

Zargon, you're games based. Don't mind the concern trolls. Keep'em coming man.