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I'm not very far into the game, but I have a small complaint. The writing, or language rather needs to be tidied up. It's understandable, but it's not smooth. The first goddess is referred to by both she and he pronouns. Not an issue for me if deliberate, but it looks and feels like the S was left off by mistake. Other things like that are common. Words or letters missing. I think proof reading would clear this up.

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Ok, the actual story writing is looking to be amazing just like the visuals. 

The language issues still make me sad, but you're making an amazing game and translating it into a language not your own. You're awesome.

The music in this is also so cool and amazing

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Thanks for your feedbacks! I appreciate them very much, and about the grammatical errors, they are my fault, I always miss them but I'm fixing little by little.

Later in the story you'll see Ncrow really fixed their writing skills and it becomes extremely coherent and you'll barely be able to tell there was even any issues with it at all.