User contributions for EEBuchanan

12 November 2024

• 04:5004:50, 12 November 2024 diff hist +733 SouthPark, Charlotte →2023 Construction Fire current
• 04:4104:41, 12 November 2024 diff hist +419 SouthPark, Charlotte →2023 Construction Fire
• 04:2304:23, 12 November 2024 diff hist +343 Portal:Current events/2024 November 6 No edit summary current

4 November 2024

• 13:3413:34, 4 November 2024 diff hist −11 Chitty Chitty Bang Bang →After the story: the story is set in 1909

2 November 2024

• 23:5423:54, 2 November 2024 diff hist 0 Chitty Chitty Bang Bang →Caractacus' story Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 23:4823:48, 2 November 2024 diff hist +51 Chitty Chitty Bang Bang No edit summary Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 23:3223:32, 2 November 2024 diff hist +33 Chitty Chitty Bang Bang →After the story: Tidying up Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 23:2623:26, 2 November 2024 diff hist +6 Chitty Chitty Bang Bang →Caractacus' story Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

29 October 2024

• 00:5300:53, 29 October 2024 diff hist +2 Ladyhawke (film) →Plot Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 00:5100:51, 29 October 2024 diff hist −13 Cloudy with a Chance of Meatballs 2 →Plot: Unnecessary Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 00:5000:50, 29 October 2024 diff hist +2 Cloudy with a Chance of Meatballs 2 →Plot: Inaccuracy Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

26 October 2024

• 06:0206:02, 26 October 2024 diff hist +1 Cloudy with a Chance of Meatballs 2 →Plot: Poor grammar Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 05:5905:59, 26 October 2024 diff hist +3 Cloudy with a Chance of Meatballs 2 →Plot Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

25 October 2024

• 17:3617:36, 25 October 2024 diff hist −13 Lord Peter Views the Body No edit summary Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 17:3217:32, 25 October 2024 diff hist −3 Stage Fright (1997 film) →Plot Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 17:3117:31, 25 October 2024 diff hist +16 Stage Fright (1997 film) No edit summary Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 13:3513:35, 25 October 2024 diff hist +1 Evil Under the Sun →Plot summary

24 October 2024

• 22:2722:27, 24 October 2024 diff hist +43 Evil Under the Sun →Plot summary
• 02:3902:39, 24 October 2024 diff hist +7 Watership Down →Part 1: The Journey: better to put the "bucks and does" thing all together. We don't need to clarify Fiver's a buck since we use "His" right after.
• 02:2902:29, 24 October 2024 diff hist −13 Ladyhawke (film) →Cast: see previous edit summary
• 02:2902:29, 24 October 2024 diff hist −13 Ladyhawke (film) →Plot: this is the fictional town of Aquila FRANCE, not the real town of Aquila, Italy.
• 02:2802:28, 24 October 2024 diff hist −12 Ladyhawke (film) →Plot
• 02:2502:25, 24 October 2024 diff hist +1 Ladyhawke (film) →Plot
• 02:2402:24, 24 October 2024 diff hist 0 Ladyhawke (film) →Plot
• 02:2302:23, 24 October 2024 diff hist −347 Ladyhawke (film) →Plot: making more concise/removing extraneous detail and extra verbiage. Wordcount now 614.
• 02:0102:01, 24 October 2024 diff hist −4 Ronald Pickup →Television: removing red link
• 02:0102:01, 24 October 2024 diff hist −4 Ronald Pickup →Television: removing red link
• 01:4801:48, 24 October 2024 diff hist +4 Danny, the Champion of the World (film) →Plot
• 01:4601:46, 24 October 2024 diff hist +8 Danny, the Champion of the World (film) →Plot
• 01:4201:42, 24 October 2024 diff hist +52 Danny, the Champion of the World (film) →Plot: final tidy up, I hope.
• 01:2801:28, 24 October 2024 diff hist −1 Danny, the Champion of the World (film) →Plot
• 01:2301:23, 24 October 2024 diff hist 0 Paw Patrol: The Mighty Movie →Plot
• 01:2101:21, 24 October 2024 diff hist +5 Paw Patrol: The Mighty Movie →Plot
• 01:2001:20, 24 October 2024 diff hist +24 Paw Patrol: The Mighty Movie →Plot: this would likely heavily confuse someone who hasn't seen the film. Slight tweak for clarity. Also I thought we WEREN'T going to capitalize the word PAW per an old archived talk page discussion. I am not going to edit that right now but did I miss something?

23 October 2024

• 19:0019:00, 23 October 2024 diff hist +2 Danny, the Champion of the World (film) →Plot
• 18:4718:47, 23 October 2024 diff hist +3 Danny, the Champion of the World (film) →Plot
• 18:4518:45, 23 October 2024 diff hist −4 Danny, the Champion of the World (film) →Plot
• 18:4518:45, 23 October 2024 diff hist +8 Danny, the Champion of the World (film) →Plot
• 18:4218:42, 23 October 2024 diff hist −390 Danny, the Champion of the World (film) →Plot: still culling words/extraneous phraseology. Thing about the petrol really doesn't advance the plot. Nor do the full details about the police car, funny as that scene is. now down to 693
• 18:1418:14, 23 October 2024 diff hist −273 Danny, the Champion of the World (film) →Plot: getting wordcount down under 700 by cutting extraneous info. Also only one or two of Hazell's guests come with him at the end.
• 18:0018:00, 23 October 2024 diff hist +98 Evil Under the Sun →Plot summary: events out of order. Picnic is AFTER investigating Alice Corrigan
• 17:5217:52, 23 October 2024 diff hist +5 Evil Under the Sun →Plot summary
• 17:5017:50, 23 October 2024 diff hist +32 Treasure Planet →Plot: "group finds" is correct grammar here. "Group find" is not. Also, Jim doesn't learn that Silver is actually leading the crew instead of Amelia until later.
• 17:4517:45, 23 October 2024 diff hist +7 Treasure Planet →Plot: These two sentences/events have nothing to do with each other and should be separate, not connected. One extra word or two for flow cant hurt.
• 17:4017:40, 23 October 2024 diff hist 0 Paw Patrol: The Movie →Plot: this is how it is always written/stylized in the films and TV show.
• 17:3617:36, 23 October 2024 diff hist +79 Paw Patrol: The Mighty Movie →Plot: A) it's a lot better to have the subject nearer the verb instead of breaking up sentences with intermediate phrases when it's not necessary. Also, there are multiple types of endangerment (public, child, spousal, animal, etc) so we have to specify which one.
• 17:3017:30, 23 October 2024 diff hist +17 Tarzan (1999 film) →Plot
• 17:2417:24, 23 October 2024 diff hist +11 Paw Patrol: The Mighty Movie →Plot
• 17:2217:22, 23 October 2024 diff hist +1 Paw Patrol: The Mighty Movie →Plot: this is how it is always written/stylized in the films and TV show. Also wrong tense here.
• 17:1917:19, 23 October 2024 diff hist −11 Paw Patrol: The Mighty Movie No edit summary