Talk:Battle of Mount Dingjun

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No sources whatsoever, plus some format and style issues. Carom 01:22, 21 August 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Care to elaborate on the issues? _dk 07:13, 21 August 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Sure. The major issue is the total lack of sources, which is a relatively easy remedy. As far as format is concerned, some of the information from the introduction might be better moved into sections giving context for the battle and describing the aftermath (this is mainly a personal opinion). On the matter of style, the text describing the battle reads a little like a segment from Romance of the Three Kingdoms, which is somewhat problematic. Carom 17:37, 21 August 2006 (UTC)[reply]

In creating this article, I took all the info from wikipedia itself...so let's concentrate on those articles first (Huang Zhong, Xiahou Yuan, etc) and see if we can't make it right =] Cao Wei 05:17, 25 August 2006 (UTC)[reply]