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** '''ALT1''': ... that [[American football]] player '''[[Danton Barto]]''' played for the [[Memphis State Tigers football|Tigers]], [[Memphis Mad Dogs|Mad Dogs]], and [[Connecticut Coyotes|Coyotes]] and coached the [[Manchester Wolves|Wolves]]? |
** '''ALT1''': ... that [[American football]] player '''[[Danton Barto]]''' played for the [[Memphis State Tigers football|Tigers]], [[Memphis Mad Dogs|Mad Dogs]], and [[Connecticut Coyotes|Coyotes]] and coached the [[Manchester Wolves|Wolves]]? |
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* Source: [https://www.commercialappeal.com/story/sports/college/memphis-tigers/2022/09/24/memphis-football-to-retire-danton-barto-jersey/69515538007/ Tigers], [https://www.profootballarchives.com/players/b/bart01330.html Mad Dogs and Coyotes], [https://www.oursportscentral.com/services/releases/manchester-wolves-sign-howard-gilmore/n-3744040 Wolves] |
* Source: [https://www.commercialappeal.com/story/sports/college/memphis-tigers/2022/09/24/memphis-football-to-retire-danton-barto-jersey/69515538007/ Tigers], [https://www.profootballarchives.com/players/b/bart01330.html Mad Dogs and Coyotes], [https://www.oursportscentral.com/services/releases/manchester-wolves-sign-howard-gilmore/n-3744040 Wolves] |
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** '''ALT2''': ... that within two years, football coach '''[[Danton Barto]]''' both led his team to a league championship and witnessed them folding? |
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* Sources: [https://www.oursportscentral.com/services/releases/barto-named-af2-coach-of-the-year/n-3210583 championship], [https://www.arenafan.com/news/?page=pressrel&article=6398 folding] |
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*:{{re|WikiOriginal-9}} I think many readers might just think it's a mundane team history roll call, although you might subtly be trying to make a point about the actual names. How about incorporating the tackles record with the petition to retire his number posthumously?[https://www.commercialappeal.com/story/sports/college/memphis-tigers/2022/09/24/memphis-football-to-retire-danton-barto-jersey/69515538007/]—[[User:Bagumba|Bagumba]] ([[User talk:Bagumba|talk]]) 04:51, 1 October 2024 (UTC) |
*:{{re|WikiOriginal-9}} I think many readers might just think it's a mundane team history roll call, although you might subtly be trying to make a point about the actual names. How about incorporating the tackles record with the petition to retire his number posthumously?[https://www.commercialappeal.com/story/sports/college/memphis-tigers/2022/09/24/memphis-football-to-retire-danton-barto-jersey/69515538007/]—[[User:Bagumba|Bagumba]] ([[User talk:Bagumba|talk]]) 04:51, 1 October 2024 (UTC) |
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:::The team names hook is because they're all canines. Not sure how to write the petition hook. The source doesn't say that's why the number was retired. [[User:WikiOriginal-9|<span style="color: blue">'''''~WikiOriginal-9~'''''</span>]] ([[User talk:WikiOriginal-9|<span style="color: blue">'''talk'''</span>]]) 13:21, 1 October 2024 (UTC) |
:::The team names hook is because they're all canines. Not sure how to write the petition hook. The source doesn't say that's why the number was retired. [[User:WikiOriginal-9|<span style="color: blue">'''''~WikiOriginal-9~'''''</span>]] ([[User talk:WikiOriginal-9|<span style="color: blue">'''talk'''</span>]]) 13:21, 1 October 2024 (UTC) |
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*Added another alt (props to BeanieFan11). [[User:WikiOriginal-9|<span style="color: blue">'''''~WikiOriginal-9~'''''</span>]] ([[User talk:WikiOriginal-9|<span style="color: blue">'''talk'''</span>]]) 16:54, 1 October 2024 (UTC) |
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Danton Barto
- ... that despite still being the Memphis Tigers' all-time leading tackler over 30 years after his college career ended, Danton Barto never made it to the NFL?
- ALT1: ... that American football player Danton Barto played for the Tigers, Mad Dogs, and Coyotes and coached the Wolves?
- ALT2: ... that within two years, football coach Danton Barto both led his team to a league championship and witnessed them folding?
- Reviewed:
~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 23:44, 12 September 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: The hook uses despite, which is a word to watch per MOS:EDITORIAL. Being a school's leading tackler doesn't necessarily imply one is destined to be an NFL player. Also the hook says he's still the leading tackler "over 30 years" later, but his career ended in 1993, and the WP article says "As of 2022" i.e. less than 30 years. There's also no explicit sourced statement in the article that he didn't play in the NFL. —Bagumba (talk) 15:17, 29 September 2024 (UTC)
"Somehow, Barto never played in an NFL game. When he remained unsigned in the fall of 1994, I hung up my scout’s hat for good. I’ve since seen vastly inferior players line up behind a defensive line on fall Sundays. At the very least, Barto would have been a special-teams killer in the pro ranks." ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 17:07, 29 September 2024 (UTC)
- But it seems to be that one reporter's opinion:
When he remained unsigned in the fall of 1994, I hung up my scout’s hat for good.
. So if it were to be added to the WP page, it would seem to need WP:INTEXT attribution, but is this opinion all that notable for inclusion?—Bagumba (talk) 17:21, 29 September 2024 (UTC)- I'm not sure. I couldn't find a 2024 media guide to make the other thing over 30 years anyway. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 18:18, 29 September 2024 (UTC)
- Added an alt. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 00:22, 1 October 2024 (UTC)
- @WikiOriginal-9: I think many readers might just think it's a mundane team history roll call, although you might subtly be trying to make a point about the actual names. How about incorporating the tackles record with the petition to retire his number posthumously?[1]—Bagumba (talk) 04:51, 1 October 2024 (UTC)
- The team names hook is because they're all canines. Not sure how to write the petition hook. The source doesn't say that's why the number was retired. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 13:21, 1 October 2024 (UTC)
- Added another alt (props to BeanieFan11). ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 16:54, 1 October 2024 (UTC)