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Requested articles (Association football)
Requested articles (Association football women)
Requested articles (Motor sports)
Requested articles (Estonian sportspeople)
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* Field hockey (History section needs sources and accurate information - very vague at the moment.)
* Standardize Category:American college sports infobox templates to use same font size and spacing.
* Sport in the United Kingdom - the Popularity section is incorrect and unsourced. Reliable data is required.
* Fix project template and/or "to do list" Current version causes tables of content to be hidden unless/until reader chooses "show."
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* Sport industry (currently a sub-stub)
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Update : List of world sports championships
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Managing a conflict of interest

@SportsNeuropsychology100: please do not revert changes made by more experienced editors to the way you want the article to be. Wikipedia has a manual of style and the edits I have made are to comply with that. You have re-added unnecessary citations in the lead section, and external links in the body contrary to WP:EXT. You have a declared conflict of interest in this subject and therefore now that the article is no longer a draft, you must submit WP:EDITREQUESTs rather than edit the article directly. Curb Safe Charmer (talk) 17:27, 21 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I apologize for my ignorance. There was confusion as the draft had not been accepted after it was accepted. So I had seen the last message as the rejection and went to edit again. Then there was a message that someone else was editing at the same time I was editing, and what I saw looked like an older version/draft. The message said to the merge the edits. Very confusing for me. Thank you for your patience.

Thank you also for the clarification about further submissions. I saw the note that an Early Education section needed to be added (which I had in my earliest version), so I re-added some of the info, but obviously incorrectly, not through the WP:EDITREQUESTs. At this point, I am happy to leave things up to the experienced editors to do what they see best with the entry. I will lurk and learn for now.

Thank you for your guidance. Best wishes for the holidays! SportsNeuropsychology100 (talk) 18:16, 21 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Should google scholar and ExpertScape citations be included? They have been removed? SportsNeuropsychology100 (talk) 18:43, 21 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Rosemarie Scolaro Moser: Early life and education and links for names/organizations

This edit request by an editor with a conflict of interest has now been answered.

What I think should be changed:

1. Someone has asked for Early Life and Education paragraph. I would like to supply one. 2. Some names and organizations can be linked to outside web sources. 3. Omit extra citations.

Why it should be changed:

To respond to editor requests and to link to webpages for more information.

References supporting the possible change (format using the "cite" button):

SportsNeuropsychology100 (talk) 18:36, 21 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

References

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More information is needed before your edit request can be implemented.

Lewcm Talk to me! 21:14, 21 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

^ https://files.eric.ed.gov/fulltext/ED221791.pdf

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