Talk:ThinkSystem
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objectivity
editThis article has useful information. Unfortunately, it appears to be stitched together from marketing blurbs and press releases. It really needs to be cleaned up.
One small step in that direction: the Techpowerup article cited in the description of the TS430 was referred to as a review but in fact it is just a press release from Lenovo. Big difference! This sure looks like quote laundering. I corrected that. DHR (talk) 16:48, 18 November 2012 (UTC)
Update to the ThinkServer Intro
editHi. I work for Lenovo and have a disclosed conflict of interest. As stated in the page, the ThinkServer line has been renamed ThinkSystems. There is no ThinkSystems page yet (though someone started a draft). There are two things changes I'd like to request impartial editors consider:
- Adding "now known as ThinkSystems" to the first sentence
- Adding a redirect from ThinkServer to ThinkSystems
Thank you in advance to anyone that considers my requested changes. StuartGill (talk) 16:55, 21 June 2023 (UTC)