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Draft at: https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Karim_ghaly
Hey Simon😁
First of all sorry for bothering and I hope your are safe in these days...
Thank you for your time reviewing my article☺️
I wanted to ask you what is the problem in The references: I submitted some parts of some of his tv interviews, some sprotdata pages which os reliable because it is the main website to see a player’s ranking or results in competitions, some articles from the WKF official website which is the world Karate federation official website... I wanted to know how come that this is not reliable and what can I put in references to get my article published.
And concerning the COI I don’t have a COi with him I am a fan of sports and karate and when I heard about him I searched on the internet I saw his performance he was amazing so I listened to all his tv interviews and wanted to make an article about him.
And about the COI I don’t have a COI with him I am just a sports fan I Love karate and I heard about him and when I searched for his name and saw his performance which was amazing I became a fan and wanted to do this article
Thank you so much☺️
Take care and stay safe
<nowiki>karim</nowiki>
[[Special:Contributions/45.246.223.3|45.246.223.3]] ([[User talk:45.246.223.3|talk]]) 16:59, 16 June 2020 (UTC)
== [[Draft:Anil Baddevithana]] ==
Hi Simon,
(Adding link)
RE: Bio draft at: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Anil_Baddevithana
Thanks again for the review of the draft ''bio/''profile. I'm not sure if I missed any messages, however, would it be possible to know the specific items that need to ''be'' addressed in the ''bio/''profile? Thanks in advance. [[User:Adpb|Adpb]] ([[User talk:Adpb|talk]]) 10:58, 6 June 2020 (UTC)
: Hi Adpb. The issues found with the draft are listed in the pink box at the top. For #2 and #3, please follow the links for further details. Cheers, [[User:1292simon|1292simon]] ([[User talk:1292simon#top|talk]]) 10:03, 7 June 2020 (UTC)
::Thanks Simon for taking time to get back to me. The biography has now been revised and the verion submitted (via Published changes). Would it be possible to know the next steps in the process? Thanks! [[User:Adpb|Adpb]] ([[User talk:Adpb|talk]]) 13:59, 8 June 2020 (UTC)
::: You're welcome. The next step in the process is for another reviewer to look at the draft, hopefully someone will get to it soon. Cheers, [[User:1292simon|1292simon]] ([[User talk:1292simon#top|talk]]) 07:37, 9 June 2020 (UTC)
== [[Draft:Mischa Willett]] ==
Hi Simon,
Thanks for taking the time to look at my first article for wikipedia. Your decline comments made a suggestion about the tone, which I have sought to amend, but also stated that some sources were not independent. Can you help me understand? I reviewed the page about independent sources and each of the ones I list are independently edited, non-affiliated, and not self-published. The exception might be the SPU faculty page, but that is only used as a second source. What am I not seeing?
You also asked about a COI re: SPU. I used to be a student there, but since I don't make any claims about SPU I didn't disclose the connection.
Can you help me clear these things up? I really appreciate your time in any case.
[[User:AlvinKnight|AlvinKnight]] ([[User talk:AlvinKnight|talk]]) 02:41, 8 June 2020 (UTC)
:Hi AlvinKnight. You're welcome, and thanks for your polite message. Just to clarify, you had no association with Mischa at the university? Cheers, [[User:1292simon|1292simon]] ([[User talk:1292simon#top|talk]]) 07:34, 9 June 2020 (UTC)
Actually, I took a class from him when I was an undergrad. When his books started popping up in magazines/websites I follow, I thought I'd try to make a page. I guess I'm not sure if "former student" counts as an association, since we're not really in touch anymore. Should I give it up? I'm not very good with tech, generally, but I have enjoyed learning how this all works. Many thanks, AK
[[User:AlvinKnight|AlvinKnight]] ([[User talk:AlvinKnight|talk]]) 04:47, 10 June 2020 (UTC)
== [[Draft:Dr Yugal K. Mishra]] ==
Hello 1292somin! Nice to meet you. Please advise what change do we need to make so that this article can be published. Dr Yugal K Mishra is an eminent figure and known worldwide. It might be I am new so I might have made mistakes.Please help <!-- Template:Unsigned --><small class="autosigned">— Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Udaisingh01|Udaisingh01]] ([[User talk:Udaisingh01#top|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Udaisingh01|contribs]]) 07:21, 8 June 2020 (UTC)</small> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->
: Hi. Please see the links in the grey box of the review comments. Just below it, there are also links for where you can get help. [[User:1292simon|1292simon]] ([[User talk:1292simon#top|talk]]) 11:07, 12 June 2020 (UTC)
== [[Draft:Victoria_Dayneko]] ==
Hi, Simon! Thank you very much for reviewing! I appreciated.
Article
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Victoria_Dayneko
1.Regarding the WP:PROMO. Can you specify for me which items need work to meeting encyclopedic standards? I can fix or remove this items.
2.Regarding COI. No, I don't have any COI. I watched Victoria Dayneko career. She is definitely successful and famous artist! I listened to her albums. I think she must be on Wikipedia in English language. So I decided to contribute.
Thank you!!
[[User:Ma888w|Ma888w]] ([[User talk:Ma888w|talk]]) 01:33, 9 June 2020 (UTC)
: Hi Ma888w. Thanks for your message, and it's great to hear that there are no COI issues here. Regarding the PROMO issue, please see these instructions about the writing style used by Wikipedia: [[WP:PEACOCK]], [[WP:TONE]]. Cheers, [[User:1292simon|1292simon]] ([[User talk:1292simon#top|talk]]) 07:30, 9 June 2020 (UTC)
:: Thank you, Simon! [[User:Ma888w|Ma888w]] ([[User talk:Ma888w|talk]]) 04:20, 10 June 2020 (UTC)
== [[Draft: L'Aupaire]] ==
Dear Simon,
thank you for reviewing my page on the german singer L'aupaire. Unfortunely you declined, saying "Added citations do not establish notability, several translation errors. Does the WP:SPA author have a COI that should be disclosed?".
I am working for L'aupairs record label Universal Music Germany and we would really love to have an english Wikipedia, next to the already existing German one. Since L'aupair is a German singer, most of our citations are in German. But his music is in english & starting to become internationally relevant, which is why we need him to also have an English Wikipedia. I am in close contact with the singer himself and we really hope, that we can make this wikipedia go online, even if we only have German sources. Thanks again for reconcidering and feel free to contact me for any further informations. [[User:ElenaVertigo|ElenaVertigo]] ([[User talk:ElenaVertigo|talk]]) 12:46, 9 June 2020 (UTC)
: Hi {{u|ElenaVertigo}}. Please see [[WP:SIMPLECOI]] for instructions about what to do in this situation. Cheers, [[User:1292simon|1292simon]] ([[User talk:1292simon#top|talk]]) 07:51, 11 June 2020 (UTC)
== [[Draft:UArchitects]] ==
Hello 1292simon,
This is an answer on your question on May 22:
I am an architecture student and I am not affiliated to UArchitects,there is no COI to be disclosed.
I would like to get approval to publish this page.
Kind regards,
Moeed<!-- Template:Unsigned --><small class="autosigned">— Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Meimaar.93|Meimaar.93]] ([[User talk:Meimaar.93#top|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Meimaar.93|contribs]]) 08:50, 11 June 2020 (UTC)</small> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->
: Hi Moeed. Great to hear that there is no COI issue here. All the best for your Wiki endeavours. Cheers, [[User:1292simon|1292simon]] ([[User talk:1292simon#top|talk]]) 11:09, 12 June 2020 (UTC)
== [[Draft:The Nosferatu]] ==
Hi Simon,
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:The_Nosferatu
I have made an edit to the only slightly unobjective statment. All the other content has sources, I urge you to be reasonable and reassess this page as it it is in my opinion better than many wiki pages out there.
: Hi Sir/Madam. Please see [[WP:OTHERSTUFF]]. Hopefully another reviewer can get to your draft soon. Cheers, [[User:1292simon|1292simon]] ([[User talk:1292simon#top|talk]]) 11:10, 12 June 2020 (UTC)
== [[Draft:Isabelle Schad]] ==
Hallo Simon,
thank you for reviewing the article of Isabelle Schad.
You reject the article for two reasons.
1. Reads like a biography rather than an encyclopedia article.
The article is mainly a translation of the German Wikipedia article about Isabelle Schad, which has been published for several years.
2.Regarding COI. No, I don't have any COI.
I've been watching Isabelle Schad's development for years. She is an internationally recognized artist with regular worldwide appearances. I think a post about Isabelle Schad belongs in english Wikipedia. So I decided to make a contribution.
If I can do anything let me know.
Thank you
[[User:Wolkengold|Wolkengold]] ([[User talk:Wolkengold|talk]]) 09:19, 12 June 2020 (UTC)
: Hi Wolkengold. Great to hear that there is no COI issue here, and thanks for your work to expand the English Wikipedia. Cheers, [[User:1292simon|1292simon]] ([[User talk:1292simon#top|talk]]) 11:12, 12 June 2020 (UTC)
== June 2020 ==
Please stop your disruptive editing like you did at the [[BMW 5 Series (F10)]] page. You were previously warned to obtain a consensus about your editing style and you haven't done that yet. If you continue with this edit pattern, I would be inclined to bring this matter to the administration attention. Thank you.[[User:U1Quattro|<span style="color:darkgreen;font-family:Verdana;text-shadow:2px 2px 2px #a6a6a6">U<sup>1</sup> <sub>q</sub>uattro</span>]] [[User talk:U1Quattro|<span style="color:green;text-shadow:2px 2px 2px #"><small>''TALK''</small></span>]] 02:22, 13 June 2020 (UTC)
== Glauco Benigni’s new page ==
Hello, can you suggest where the corrections are needed? I just got a notice that you rejected the entire article. Several references were added. Please advise. Thank you Singingmaya [[User:Singingmaya|Singingmaya]] ([[User talk:Singingmaya|talk]]) 12:54, 13 June 2020 (UTC)
== [[Draft:Krav Boca]] ==
Hello Simon, thank you for having checked my article's draft : https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Krav_Boca
Could you please explain me what modifications should i do because i don't have any suggestions.. Thank you for your time and your help.
[[User:Jérôme Eymard1|Jérôme Eymard1]] ([[User talk:Jérôme Eymard1|talk]]) 14:49, 13 June 2020 (UTC)
: Hi Jérôme Eymard1. Please see the question about a possible COI as a starting point. Cheers, [[User:1292simon|1292simon]] ([[User talk:1292simon#top|talk]]) 09:48, 14 June 2020 (UTC)
:: Hey [[User:1292simon|1292simon]], thank you for your answer but what do you mean by "COI"? [[User:Jérôme Eymard1|Jérôme Eymard1]] ([[User talk:Jérôme Eymard1|talk]])
::: I hope this guideline helps explain it: [[WP:SIMPLECOI]]. Cheers, [[User:1292simon|1292simon]] ([[User talk:1292simon#top|talk]]) 11:47, 15 June 2020 (UTC)
== Throwing stones in glasshouses ==
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