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英検準一級のライティング採点をお願いしたいです。 文法点を上げたいので、文法的に間違ってる部分だけ指摘してもらいたいです。 chat gpt などによる採点はいりません。 質問 Do you agree Japan should become completely cashless society? These days it is becoming a public concern Japan should become completely cashless society . Although there are both arguments for and against that subject. I agree with that opinion . I will explain main two reasons . First of all , from perspective of crime . theft crime is often happen in city . To prevent such as crime , government should profit using cash . For one thing , Credit card is required typing password when using this . For this reason , If people are stoled by someone , they don’t lose money . It’s advantageous for people. Second of all , in term of effect on businesses. By taking completely such as society, credit card companies will more thrive than now . In addition to , companies like PayPay will increase more . It lead to thrive economic. There are both merit . As I have stated above , taking into consideration crime and effect on business, I think completely cashless society should be built by government. よろしくお願いします。