英語
英作文の添削をお願いします。 題は「A job with more vacation time is better than a job with high salary but less vacation time.」です。 A job with more vacation time is not better than a job with high salary but less vacation time for the following reasons. First, if workers had much vacation time but had little money, they could not enjoy their vacation time fully. In contrast, if workers had a lot of money to enjoy their vacation time, they could spend fulfilling time. Second, some dislike their jobs, but others like. The former have both advantages and disadvantages to a job with more vacation time but low salary, but the latter have only disadvantages. For these reasons, it would be good that a job with high salary but less vacation time rather than a job with more vacation time.