英作文の添削とどれくらい減点されそうかの予想をしていただけませんか(；；) 大学の二次試験の問題です 問題文→私の回答の順に載せています。よろしくお願いします Read the topic carefully. Write at least two clear reasons for your opinion. Answer in English in 120-150 words. Doctors say stress is the most common cause of serious illness. How do you think we can reduce stress, so that we can live long, healthy lives? ー I think that there are two ways of reducing stress. One way is spending enough time sleeping. There are two reasons why I think so. First, a lack of sleep causes excessive appetite or reduced appetite. Without healthy diet, we can't live healthy lives. In addition, the quality of sleep affects whether we concentrate on anything or not. It is important for our effective work to get good sleep. Another way is doing moderate exercise. Exercise have an effect which makes our feelings refreshed, and refreshed feelings may make us more active. Besides, fatigue by moderate exercise leads to good sleep. These two factors are related to each other. Therefore, I think that practicing both of ways is necessary for our happier and longer lives. また、以下はchat GPTに頼んで添削してもらった文です。間違いやまたこれに関しても採点予想をしていただけると非常に嬉しいですт т I think there are two ways to reduce stress. One way is spending enough time sleeping. There are two reasons why I think so. First, a lack of sleep causes excessive appetite or reduced appetite. Without a healthy diet, we can't live healthy lives. In addition, the quality of sleep affects whether we can concentrate on anything. It is important for our effective work to get good sleep. Another way is doing moderate exercise. Exercise has an effect that refreshes our feelings, and refreshed feelings may make us more active. Besides, fatigue from moderate exercise leads to good sleep. These two factors are related to each other. Therefore, I think practicing both ways is necessary for our happier and longer lives.
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