手慣れた感じで、よくできてますよ。 I agree with this opinion. Firstly, it is (X convenience→convenient) for person who vote in elections. This is because (X what we vote→voting) on the Internet is so easy. As a result, we’re able to save time and use (X different→ that time for other) things. Secondly, we can reduce (X cost→costs). (X When→During） elections, we have to (X lend facility→rent facilities) and hire people(X. And we must pay too many→, and this costs too much money). If we vote in elections on the Internet, we can save money (X for various things→in various ways). Therefore, I’m convinced that Japan should use the (X Internet→internet for voting) in elections. 英作文チェック事項 作文が終わったら、まず、SVOC がしっかりしているか、誤字、冠詞、単複、可算・不可算、三単現のｓ、自動詞・他動詞（目的語の有無）、時制の一致、などを「必ず」チェックしましょう 。