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英検準1級writingを添削してください。 問題: Should businesses provide more online services?

英検準1級writingを添削してください。 問題: Should businesses provide more online services? ポイント(使用したふたつ): Convenience, Jobs 回答: I think that businesses should provide more online services.I have two reasons for this opinion. The first reason is that it is convenience because we need not go out to do something. On the other hand, some people argue that elder people cannot use internet,So they should not use online service. But I do not think so. It is because, it is convenient for elder people to use internet. It may be difficult for them, but they need not use car, go out, walk for do something. Another reason is that it is increase jobs for young people, therefore we can earn money and many people can get chance to do business. In conclusion, It is so convenient for everything to use internet. So businesses should donate online service.

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2025/1/10 16:57

I think businesses should provide more online services. I have two reasons for this opinion. The first reason is that it is convenient because we do not need to go out to accomplish tasks. On the other hand, some people argue that older people cannot use the internet, so they should not rely on online services. However, I disagree. This is because online services are convenient for older people as well. It may be challenging for them at first, but they do not need to drive, go out, or walk long distances to complete tasks. Another reason is that increasing online services can create more jobs for young people. This allows them to earn money and provides opportunities for many people to start their own businesses. In conclusion, using the internet is very convenient for almost everything. Therefore, businesses should offer more online services.

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